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Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi

PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 9:09 am


Name: Satine de LaSalle

Nickname: Goose (by her Step Mother)

Age: 17

Birthday: December 21st

Sign: Sagittarius

Gemstone: Turquoise

Blood Type: AB+

Fav. Food: Fruit Crepes

Hated Food: Duck

School: Crystal Academy for Girls

Hobbies:
~ Gymnastics: Since she was just at four years old, Satine has been in the gym. What started as a means to keep a high energy child out of trouble became a passion. Floor, Beam, and uneven bars have always been her best events with the beam being her personal favorite. Some time ago there was talk of her going out for the Olympics. Training had even started. But all was cut short by her father’s remarriage. Now, she is on the Crystal Team and does small year round teams to keep in top form.

~ Flower Arranging: Every proper lady should be able to do something artistic. When piano, voice, and art all escaped Satine as a child, her step mother gave up. That was until she caught the girl re-arranging the flowers her husband had just sent her. It took on an entirely new life at the hands of the child. As time passed, Satine has studied different forms of flower arrangement from Ikebana to traditional to modern styles. Her favorite? The modern style of clean lines and simplicity. Satine is in charge of seeing to the flowers of the de LaSalle household as well. Each morning, before school, she oversees the arrangements around the house and personally makes the one for her stepmother’s bedroom.

~Wind Surfing: Yes it seems a bit odd at first but every person needs to have their random escape. Wind Surfing is Satine’s. Though she has only been doing it for a few years now, Satine likes to believe she’s gotten pretty good at it. She spends more time surfing and less time trying to get the sail back up. But being out on the water, mist and wind in her hair, is a great escape from daily grind of being a perfect lady. Heaven help her if her step-mother ever found out.

Virtues:
~Giving: Ask and you shall receive. Satine would give someone the shirt off her back or her lunch if they asked. She has been granted the lifestyle of never having to want for anything so why should she not help out those who are in need. It is the proper and lady like thing to do after all. Even if it is someone she does not like, if they came to her in a crisis, Satine would do her best to help them. Her friends even more so. Random gifts come often.

~Level Headed:Don’t ever expect Satine to lose her cool under stress her pressure. Down to Earth, she thinks logically about all situations and puts her own emotions and feelings dead last. It is always the best possible outcome that she tries to come up with. She is the go to woman under pressure to get people through things. While classmates are freaking out, she sometimes is ‘scary relaxed’.

~Humble: Never one to boast, brag, or put herself in the spotlight, Satine keeps to the shadows and out of the way of the movers and shakers. She does not need to be thanked for the hours she puts in or the days of hard work. Knowing that it was useful is reward enough. After all, as a young woman, she has not yet earned her time in the sun.


Flaws:
~Judgmental: Though she may not voice it, Satine is quick to judge someone based on their appearance alone. The second means is when they open their mouth. Once a first impression has been formed, it is next to impossible to get her to change her mind about someone. Appearance is her big thing though. Dress like a bum one day and she has labeled you as lazy for good.

~Undeceive: As a means not to upset anyone, or force her will onto them, Satine stopped being the one to voice her thoughts and opinions on matters. She instead goes with the flow and the overall choice of whoever she is with. At least then they are happy and she doesn’t worry about them just ‘putting up’ with her.

~Pessimistic: Some people walk around thinking the best or at least hoping the best. Satine is the opposite. To her, nothing is coming up roses but instead, everything is thorns. This is a large mental thing for her but it voiced whenever someone very ‘peppy’ comes around.


*It shall be strongly noted that the above description of her personality is the one she lives on a day to day. She has masked her true self for acceptance by her family. However, as a Dark Mirror Senshi, her true personality will shine and slowly start to break into her human life.*

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes:

Hair:Hair like this where the blonde is colored #e0cc97 and the streaks are #EC799A (Yes, horrible photo)

Face:.Thin with high cheek bones

Clothes:Something like this

*random – she’s left handed (as the left hand rules all things sinister)
PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 2:01 pm


Senshi: Sailor Laverna, Dark Mirror Senshi of Thieves
Minor Planet

Challenge: What’s yours will soon be mine!

Fuku Colour: Black
Main Color: Hot Pink
Secondary Color: Turquoise

Fuku: (Below are guides. I would love input from the artist as well)

Collar – Reference: Collar and Hood – The color is a hood on the back that she lifts and drops as she pleases.
Bow – The center of her bodice is the symbol this know ; her back ‘bow’ is something I’m open for ideas on….
Bodice – Reference: Top – It has the armor layered like appearance but where the bird is a symbol on the chest, it is changed to the above symbol. Also, the black under layer shirt is a more of a thin ---color--- instead of the solid black
Sleeves – Tight fitted like above
BroochSymbol
Bottoms – Mix Reference: Tight Shorts that are one with the bodice overlaid with a Skirt like such.
Tiara – Reference: Tiara -
Choker – a black band around her neck
Shoes – The need to be boots, they should be heeled, they should come up past her knees, and they should be amazing!
Gloves – Fingerless, black
Accessories --

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Divest Some

Only after seeing an opponent's attack (senshi) or seeing their weapon( knight/negaverse) Sailor Laverna calls the name of her attack. What appears to be something akin to a bag of holding / pick pocketing pouch appears in her hands. Pointing it at an opponent standing at about 6’ from her, Laverna steals 1 unused magic attack, up to her current level, draining the energy it would have required to cast it from the enemy. In the case of a knight or negaverse Laverna steals their weapon making it so they cannot resummon it from her pick pocket pouch for the next 20 seconds; this only works on characters her level or lower. She can use her attack three times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Divest All

Only after seeing an opponent's attack (senshi) or seeing their weapon( knight/negaverse) Sailor Laverna calls the name of her attack. What appears to be something akin to a bag of holding / pick pocketing pouch appears in her hands. Pointing it at up to two opponents standing at about 8’ from her, Laverna steals 1 unused magic attack, up to her current level, draining the energy it would have required to cast it from the enemy. In the case of a knight or negaverse Laverna steals their weapon making it so they cannot resummon it from her pick pocket pouch for the next 20 seconds; this only works on characters her level or lower.

After stealing from her opponents, Laverna can reach into her bag and use what she has taken to benefit those around her. Like a thief trading, selling or using her goods, she can use the energy stole to grant someone or herself enough energy to use their magic, teleport, or use their weapons ability more than the normal times. The energy is equal to that of the attack she 'stole'. (Aka...she steals a base attack, only able to give enough energy for another base attack).

Eternal Sailor Attack: Game of Chance
Calling out her attack, a black orb forms in Laverna's had. She quickly slams it down into the ground in front of her forming a black vortex around herself and anyone within a 20ft radius. Inside, the glow is faint enough for all trapped within to realize something is appearing around them. Her magic materializes in the form of eight ethereal crystals that appear sharp enough to hurt but not long enough to kill. No, they will play a game! A test of agility.

The eight crystals begin to zoom around the darkness disappearing only once they taste flesh/blood. Once all eight disappear or the 40 second time is up, the veil is lifted.

Laverna is in just as much danger as her target(s) but that's half the fun.

This attack lasts for 40 seconds and can be cast once.

Note:
*Blade Lengths are 1/2" thus deemed non-lethal. Players determine how badly and where the blades strike them. This could range from paper cut damage to removing an eye if the player wants, but damage level is entirely up to how the player wants to have the magic affect their character. You are welcome to use the ethereal crystals as you wish to cause pain and suffering. Laverna has no control over them.
*The distance is a 40' diameter due to allowing characters the ability to move and dodge. Ethereal crystals do not gain up on someone. Anyone within the range 'plays'

Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi


Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 6:26 pm


Sirene Naiads


Hey Sirene! Congrats and above all HAPPY BIRTHDAY! belatedly.

Looking forward to seeing her in play, just have a couple things to plod through before we can drop that stamp!

It looks right now like the sphere of Theft might be in fact closer to how the attacks mechanic work, though Theives should be fine here - I simply thought knowing might help!

For Super and Eternal I do have concerns that need addressing before I can stamp her, as well as overall range notes.

10 feet is a bit too large for a basic or Super. Basics usually cap at 6 feet while Supers cap at 8 feet. Eternals can go to 10 fine, depending on the spell. With her sphere I'd err on the side of caution but 10' would be fine at Eternal.

However the mechanics of her Super, first, are a bit too close to Corrupt Ochre, whom can use his magic to use a Senshi's attack. While I understand the intent, in this instance, it would be too close to Ochre to use stolen Magic/weapons.

At Eternal as well, a perfect copy is impossible. Again, use of another's magic is far too close to Ochre, while she could not be capable of masking her aura signature - she would retain her chaos aura.

Stealing the APPEARANCE is fine, however the attacks/abilities/weapons could not be used.

As for her Fuku, I do recommend discussion with your artist to ensure she fits within faction rules since loose/flowing is the preferred style with transparent overlays.

Just drop a note when you're ready for a second look, so we can plug on towards her stamp! C:
PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:19 pm


NovaCracker




Nova, thank you so much for the very quick crit! And for the birthday wishes. It is truly on Friday but it seems everyone wants to gift me today (including my boyfriend...silly man)

I was worried they would be close but figured see what you all said and go from there! You can see what I was trying to do. heart But if you don't mind, I do have a quick question just to try and make the edits work:
-stealing everything is fine. Using it makes it no no? correct?
Please see above and let me know if that change is possible then.

The fuku ideas are for a guide. Elements I like. But I love working with artist and always happy to find more references to make sure they fit requirements

Let me know what edits to make!


EDIT:
Nova, check the super. I'm making some changes to eternal. Will let you know

Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi


Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi

PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:09 pm


NovaCracker


Okay. Edited eternal. This plays off a thief's desire for a game of chance/betting, proving they are skilled, and the fact one should never corner a 'mouse'
PostPosted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:06 am


Sirene Naiads


Well then early Happy Birthday. XD I r early and proud I was for once. as opposed to being clueless.

Super looks fine to me - reminds me of D&D even, which works. Theif is, after all, a rogue class.

The length for a non lethal blade is on average about half an inch or quarter of an inch - since measurement is v. important with sharp attacks. I do suggest dropping the time to 40 seconds, but aside the drop and noting the length for non-lethal blades (not everyone knows how long a lethal blade is) she's almost ready to me!

Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant


Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi

PostPosted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:11 am


NovaCracker


Thank you! heart heart heart

I made those two mentioned changes. Let me know what else!

Hope you have a good day.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:20 am


Sirene Naiads


Looks great to me! A GM will be by soon for another check in case I missed anything! Congratulations again! c:

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Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant



Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 8:24 am


Sirene Naiads


This looks good to me! Usually senshi cannot summon pure weapons, but I think the distinction that these are not real weapons and are instead ethereal magic manifestations that are taking on the form of them makes this okay. The player choice you provide makes me comfortable stamping this, so have fun! <3

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