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PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:10 pm


Name: Artoria Elizabeth Pendleton

Nickname:

Age: 8

Birthday: August 8th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Periodot

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: ice cream and filet mignon

Hated Food: spinach

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:
Mythology/Arthurian lore -- Because her mother is a mythology professor Artoria has had a fascination with mythology since she was little. She has a special love Arthurian lore since her mother used to read her the stories at bed time. She loves the princesses and knights in the stories but more than anything she loves all the magic in the stories namely Excalibur. She doesn't fully understand all of the dark parts of the stories but she does know that it doesn't have a happy ending.

Gymnastics -- Artoria started doing gymnastic when she was six. She like to practice in her back yard whenever she can. She loves the exercise and her dream is to one day compete in the Olympics. She loves all parts of gymnastics but her favorite is the balance beam. She is best at doing flips and balancing.

Magical Girls -- Artoria loves magical girl animes. She's got a ton of magical girl animes and mangas such as Pretty Cure or Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. She loves pretending to be a magical girl with her friends.

Virtues:
A wave of sunshine -- Artoria is almost always positive, there's very little she can't find a bright side to. Even if something does manage to get her spirits down she will usually bounce back very quickly. She is always happy to flash someone a sunny smile to try and brighten their day.

Never say never -- Artoria doesn't believe in quieting just because something is hard. She doesn't believe anything is impossible and will work to prove it. She thinks that with a bit of effort anything can be accomplished.

Has no fear at heart -- Artoria is very courageous. She'll gladly charge into danger even knowing she could get hurt or worse. She fears very little and even if she is afraid she won't let it show.

Flaws:
Naive -- Artoria believes there is good in everyone and unfortunately that means she can be quiet bad at recognizing when someone is using her. She wants to believe that everyone is good and kind, and because of that she is bad at recognizing when someone has ill intentions.

Mouthy -- Artoria has a bad habit of mouthing off. She doesn't filter well and if she's speaking to someone she doesn't like (as rarely as her disliking someone is) she tends to be very flippant. She also uses back talk if she's scared of something to hide her fear.

No boundaries -- Artoria tends to be rather nosy when it comes to people. She doesn't really understand that some people don't like to talk about all their feelings and thoughts. She can be rather pushy trying to get someone to open up to her.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Golden, Round.

Hair: Golden Blond, Something like this.

Face: Round Shape w/ soft features.

Clothes: Knightside uniform with a white scarf
PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:11 pm


Senshi: Chibi-Sailor Arthur, Senshi of Kingship

Challenge: "Some kingdoms can last forever!"

Fuku Colour: White
Main Color: Royal blue
Secondary Color: Gold

Fuku: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR SENSHI, FEMALE AND MALE -- YOU DON'T HAVE TO HAVE THESE, JUST THINK ABOUT THEM

Collar -- A blue sailor collar
Bow -- A royal blue sash
Bodice -- White plastic armor like this only without a shoulder pad and with a blue gem instead of red
Sleeves -- no sleeves
Brooch -- Winged crown & sword
Bottoms -- Royal blue skirt
Tiara -- like this only gold
Choker -- Royal blue scarf
Shoes -- See armor pic
Gloves -- White glove with a sapphire on the cuff
Accessories -- CC

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: King's Saber Strike
Arthur holds her hand up and calls out the name of her attack, light and heat coalesce into a symbol of kingship, in this case a blue sword floating next to her hand. When she swings her hand the sword flys at her opponent. (As a chibi her sword is completely blunted, so it's basically like having a hot rock thrown at you, it could stagger an opponent) uses: 3 range: up to 5 ft (chibi)

Super Sailor Scout Attack: King's Saber Riposte
Arthur holds her hands up and calls out the name of her attack, light and heat coalesce into a symbol of kingship, in this case a blue and red sword floating next to her hands. When she swings her hands the swords fly at her opponent. (As a chibi her swords are completely blunted, so it's basically like having a hot rock thrown at you, it will likely leave a large bruise and stagger someone if she uses it as a single target attack) (She can chose between attacking two targets or one, if she chooses one opponent it's a stronger attack.) uses: 3 range: up to 6 feet (chibi)

Eternal Sailor Attack: King's Saber Barrage
Arthur does a back flip into the air and holds her arms out stretched, she calls out the name of her attack. A multitude (as a chibi 10 swords) of multi-colored swords appear behind her as though she were a king leading an army into battle during the middle ages (minus the actual soldiers). When she swings her arms down all the swords fly at her opponent. (As a chibi her swords are completely blunted, so it's basically like having a hot rock thrown at you, it could likely knock someone out (at the other player's discretion) or even injure them if she uses it as a single target attack) (She can chose between having this be a weak attack that hits multiple enemies or a very strong attack that hits one enemy) uses: 2 range: up to 10 feet (chibi)

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 10:31 am


Hi Aure! I came into to give you a an official crit :'D

Civilian: I'd like to see a little more elaboration on why she does like Arthurian lore? Does she like it for the princesses? Or does she like it for the knights? Does she comprehend just how dark the lore is, at her age? or is she just caught by the stories of magic and such?

The same for Gymnastics as well! Does she specilize in a certain move? Does she prefer a certain part of gymnastics or is it everything? At what age did she start?

Magical girls is okay though! Man it brings me back..../STARES OFF INTO THE DISTANCE

Her virtues and flaws are okay with me too! Based on her age, she'll still have a lot of room to grow too!


Powered side: Can you please link her Celestial body into her name? I have looked into google but can't seem to find a star or moon named Arthur.

Your attacks look good though, If you could please include in all of them that the sword is blunted and how much damage this attack does? Also is there a range to the attack? How far can she throw the swords?

For her eternal attack: How many swords is she summoning? How many people is she hitting? Is this one giant attack on one target or is a smaller less painful attack spread out to multiple targets? How large is her range?

That's it for the moment! If you could quote me with changes! Thanks!


Aurelius Ambrosius
Sorry had to edit something haha
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 8:49 pm


Pixie Nyxie

Ok I think I fixed the things you mentioned let me know if I need to change anything else

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 9:01 pm


Aurelius Ambrosius



I think knocking out is very powerful for her super attack, perhaps if it's hit, it can leave a large bruise or sore on the area. for her Eternal it's okay if its hinted at almost knocking out, but it should really be up to player discretion because knocking out is really bad for powered units. Once they are, they are powered down and it leaves them open to attacks.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 7:58 am


Pixie Nyxie

ok, I fixed that. let me know if I need to change anything else

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 11:48 am


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Looks good to me!

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 11:58 am


Hey there Ambrosius! This isn't your official GM crit, but I just wanted to let you know that two powered individuals can't share the same name, and we already have a Guardian cat named Arthur, so you will have to change the name of your quest! I am sorry for any issues this may cause!
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 12:04 pm


Orangeish Sherbert

Is it possible to delete this quest because it was built around the name Arthur and I have no desire to pursue it under a different name.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 12:17 pm


It is possible, you can just edit the title. Again, I am sorry about this =<
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 12:28 pm


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It's alright, I understand
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