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NariomixxxxxxSenju
xxxxxxxxxxxx Rank :: Chuunin
xxxxxxxxxxxx Classes :: [Ninjutsu][Bloodline]



░▒▓█♠Personal Information♠█▓▒░
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Full Name: Nariomi Senju
Nickname: None

Age:22
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 190 lbs

Hair Color: Slate
Eye Color: Blue

Build: Athletic
Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks: He has several dozen minor scars all across his torso and legs due to the violent nature of his past.
Character Description: (See Picture)
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Personality: Nari is very protective, not just of the village and its shinobi but almost everyone. He will not hesitate to put himself at risk to save the life of someone he cares for regardless of the danger. He has a kind, nurturing nature and tries to see the best of those around him despite any flaws they may have. Despite the violent nature of his past he actually tries to avoid confrontation, however if he believes either himself or someone he cares for is at risk he will not hesitate to end that threat with extreme prejudice.

Personal Goals: To become the strongest senju in history.
Relationship Status: Looking
Personal Skills: He is exceptionally good at making wooden carvings and various other carpentry works.

╞═♣Shinobi Information♣═╡
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Bloodline: Senju
Chakra Pool: 845
Chakra Element: Doton, Suiton
Chakra Color: Emerald
Chakra Materialization: Flickers like an aura.
Primary class: Elemental Ninjutsu
Secondary class: Bloodline
Rank: Chuunin

Strengths:
• Deep Chakra Pool
• Melee combat.
Weaknesses:
• Super long range combat.
• Not very flexible
Fears:
• Failing as a shinobi
• Letting his subordinates die.

Class Attributes:
• Path of the Elemental Combo The Duality of elements fascinates the user to the point where they use them regularly in every combat situation. This allows the user to gain their number of Ninjutsu limitations to be multiplied by the two chosen elements. Elemental Combo receive another +10 Chakra per rank, +5 Chakra control with the two chosen elements and +1 post reduction to both element Ninjutsu.

• Path of the Ancestors The user follows the spirit of the ancient ancestors of their clan, understanding what it's like to create the techniques that exist today. This gives them an extra 6 custom Jutsu slots to be used exclusively for bloodline techniques.


Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu two [2] posts faster.
• All Mokuton users are able to learn Doton [ Earth ] ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• All Jutsu require 1 less post to learn.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Front line fighter: Nari can learn an additional Bukijutsu style.
• True Heir: Due to the incredibly strong connection Nariomi has to his heritage, he can perform mokuton jutsu a single seal.

Stats:
Speed: 4.0
Strength: 3.0
Reflex: 1.5
Flexibility: 0.5
Agility: 5.5
Stealth: 2.5



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Weapon Type: Steel Ninjato
Weapon Range: Arm reach plus one foot
Weapon Weight: One and a half pounds
Weapon Location: In a holster across his lower back.
Weapon properties None


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• 4 Kunai
• 10 Shuriken
• 3 Small Scrolls
• 3 Flash Bombs

Village: Kumogakure
Headband Location: Around his left bicep
Headband Color: Black

Goals as a Shinobi: To become the greatest senju in history
Current Title: None
Great Title: None

▌▬♦Speciality Information♦▬▐
Demons: N/A
Cursed Mark: N/A
Summon: Canines
Implants: N/A
Custom Weapons: N/A

■►Missions◄■

Ryo: 4100
AC: 24,750
SS- Ranked:0
S- Ranked: 0
A- Ranked: 3
B- Ranked: 5
C- Ranked: 9
D- Ranked: 37

Training Missions:

• Basic Chakra Training: Meditate
• Basic Chakra Training: Meditate
• Basic Chakra Training: Performance
• Basic Chakra Training: Performance
• Basic Chakra Training: Spar
• Basic Chakra Training: Spar
• Basic Chakra Training: Combat

• Chakra Training: Meditate
• Chakra Training: Meditate
• Chakra Training: Performance
• Chakra Training: Performance
• Chakra Training: Discipline
• Chakra Training: Spar
• Chakra Training: Spar
• Chakra Training: Combat
• Chakra Training: Combat



Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 38 / 38
• Suiton : : 19 / 19
• Doton : : 19 / 19
• Genjutsu : : 05 / 05
• Taijutsu Styles: : 01 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 02 / 02

○◙♥Background♥◙○

Family Members
• Mother: Asumi Senju
• Father: Hakamani Senju
• Siblings: None
History: Nari grew up oddly enough in the minor village outside of Kumogakure. It was here that he learned how to move and fight and live in the close confines of the cityscape. This brought out a natural sense of agility and stamina to match it. During times of war he would act as a forward assault combatant. During times of peace he was fighting in the arenas in the cities underground. It is here that he actually awakened his bloodline during a particularly fierce fight. After finding out everything his parents knew about the bloodline he began to push himself harder than ever before. However his time in the big city as he liked to call it, would not last. It was during one of the many many skirmishes that took place in his homeland that he found the people he would be serving under for the rest of his life. Working closely with the Kumogakure ninja he eventually decided to join the village as he had no official training. Over time he graduated from the Kirigakure academy was promoted to genin. After years of loyal service and excellence in combat he was promoted to the rank of Chunin outside of the exams.

Traumas: Nari's child hood having been bathed in combat and bloodshed, has lefts its marks on him. Hes a bit to comfortable shedding blood and enjoys fights a little more than he should.
Theme Song: Theme


▼→Jutsu List←▼

Ninjutsu
E-Rank
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
• Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation) [x]
• Sand Creation [x]
• Sand Manipulation [x]
• Shunshin No Jutsu [x]





D- Rank
• Suiton: Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shuriken Technique) [x]
• Mizu Tate no Jutsu (Water Shield Technique) [x]
• Suimenka no Kisoku (Breathing Underwater Technique) [x]
• Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu (Water Release: Hidden Mist Technique) [x]
• Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu [ Mist Vision Technique ] [x]
• Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) [x]








C- Rank
• Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique) [x]
• Sabaku Kyuu (Desert Coffin) [x]
• Sabaku Sousou (Desert Funeral) [x]
• Mizurappa (Violent Water Wave) [x]
• Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique) [x]
• Suiton: Fuuma Mizu Shuriken (Water Release: Evil Windmill Water Shuriken) [x]
• Suiton: Shunshin no Jutsu (Suiton: Instantaneous Body Skill) [x]
• Water Release: Tentacle Barrage Fury (Suiton: Shokushu Rendan Kyouran) [x]
• Doton: Doryuusou (Earth Release: Earthen Rising Spears) [x]
• Sabaku Fuyuu (Desert Sand Floating) [x]
• Suna Bunshin no Jutsu (Sand Clone Technique) [x]
• Suna Raishin (Sand Lightning Needles) [x]
• Suna Shigure (Sand Shower) [x]
• Suna Shuriken (Sand Shuriken) [x]





B- Rank
• Suijinheki (Water Encampment Wall) [x]
• Gokusamaisou (Sand Prison Burial) [x]
• Suijinheki (Water Encampment Wall) [x]
• Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Dragon Projectile Technique) [x]
• Suishouha (Water Collision Destruction) [x]
• Goshokuzame (Five Sharks Eating) [x]
• Daibakuryuu no Jutsu (Great Exploding Current) [x]
• Doton: Doryuu Heki (Earth Release: Earth Style Wall)
• Suna no Yoroi (Armor of Sand) [x]
• Sekkai Saka [ Rock Hill Creation ] [x]




A- Rank
• Ryuusa Bakuryuu (Quicksand Waterfall Current) [x]
• Takitsubo no Jutsu (Waterfall Basin Technique) [x]
• Sabaku Rou (Desert Prison) [x]
• Sabaku Taisou (Desert Imperial Funeral) [x]
• Tsuchi Shikyo no Jutsu (Earth Death Technique) [x]





S- Rank

SS- Rank


Taijutsu


Konohagakure no Taijutsu
• Stage One
• Dainamikku-Entori [ Dynamic Entry ] [x]
• Dainamikku-Akushon [ Dynamic Action ] [x]
• Youjitsuba [ Spitting Toothpick ] [x]

•Stage Two
• Asshou [ Pressure Palm ] [x]
• Fuuma Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [ Wind Shuriken Shadow Windmill ] [x]
• Haridoku [ Poison Needles ] [x]
• Harisuzu [ Bell Needles ] [x]
• Hayabusa Otoshi [ Peregrine Falcon Drop ] [x]
• Houshou [ Crushing Fist ] [x]
• Kage Buyou [ Leaf Shadow Dance ] [x]
• Konoha Senpuu [ Leaf Spinning Wind ] [x]
• Konoha Daisenpuu [ Leaf Great Whirlwind ] [x]
• Konoha Reppuu [ Leaf Violent Wind ] [x]
• Shoushitsu [ Knee Strike ] [x]
• Tokken [ Tackle Charge ] [x]
• Tsutenkyaku [ Painful Sky Leg ] [x]

•Stage Three
• Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi [ Clone Spinning Heel Drop ] [x]
• Bunshin Taiatari [ Clone Body Blow ] [x]
• Hien [ Flying Swallow ] [x]
• Konoha Gouriki Senpuu [ Leaf Herculean Whirlwind ] [x]
• Konoha Shofu [ Leaf Rising Wind ] [x]
• Midare Senbu [ Chaos Fan Dance ] [x]
• Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu [ Cherry Blossom Blizzard Technique ] [x]
• Shishi Rendan [ Lion Combo ] [x]
• Shou-Geki-Shou [ Rising Impact Palm ] [x]

• Stage Four
• Konoha Raiken [ Leaf Thunder Fist ] [x]
• Isshi Resshin [ One-fingered Earthquake ] [x]

• Stage Five
• Oukashou [x]
• Tsuuten Kyaku [x]
• Kujiku Hajiku [ To Break and Snap ] [x]

Kenjutsu
Kohanagakure Style - Death By Stealth And Silence
• Stage One
• Shikaku Kataki [ Assassins Revenge ] [x]
• Shikaku Naibun [ Assassins Secret ] [x]
• Bikou Tokkan [ Shadows Rush ] [x]
• Suterusu Hiretsukan [ Stealth Sneak ] [x]

• Stage Two
• Akki Bachi [ Cretin's Curse ] [x]
• Akki Gikai [ Cretin's Parliament ] [x]
• Tenrai Shioki [ Divine Punishment ] [x]
• Ryuuki Narabi [ Rising Aliment ] [x]

• Stage Three
• Suterusu Hokou [ Stealth Walk ] [x]
• Kuikku Satsu [ Quick Kill ] [x]

• Stage Four
• Kire Kamakiri [ Severing Mantis ] [x]
• Teikiatsu Kakou Ashige [ Cyclone Drop Kick ] [x]
• Bunri Inochi [ Detachment Of Life ] [x]

Sobagai Deba Sentou
• Stage One
• Countering Technique: Upward Repel [x]
• Offensive Technique: Assisted Jab [x]
• Offensive Style: Knife Stances [x]
• Offensive Style: Simple Play [x]

•Stage Two
• Countering Technique: Back Repels [x]
• Trick Technique: Change of Hands [x]
• Trick Technique: Kneecap Surprise [x]
• Offensive Technique: Swift Dart [x]
• Trick Style: Knife Toss [x]
• Offensive Style: Artless Draw [x]

• Stage Three
• Trick Technique: Knife Punt [x]
• Trick Technique: Dirty Reflection [x]
• Offensive Technique: Vital Poke [x]
• Offensive Style: Two-fer-One [x]

• Stage Four
• Piercing Technique: What Defense? [x]
• Disrupting Technique: Tingling Elbow [x]
• Trick Style: Retreating Feet [x]
• Trick Style: Blade's Edge [x]

• Stage Five
• Countering Technique: Oopsie and Over [x]
• Disrupting Technique: Severe Acupuncture [x]
• Offensive Style: Stepless [x]

Genjutsu
E-Rank
• Okuyuki Katawa (Depth Distortion) [x]

D- Rank
• Suna Arashi no Shinto (Deadly Sand Storm) [x]

C- Rank
• Jouho no Koe (Voice of Compromise) [x]

B- Rank
• Tokitsukeru no Koe (Voice of Persuasion) [x]

A- Rank
• Eikyou no Koe (Voice of Influence) [x]

S- Rank





SS- Rank


Senju

D- Rank
• Moku Bunshin no Jutsu [ Wood Clone Technique ] [x]

C- Rank
• Ki Eda no Jutsu [ Tree Limb Technique ] [x]
• Jukai Heki [ Dense Woodland Wall ] [x]
• Moku Shouheki no Jutsu [ Wood Barrier Technique ] [x]
• Mokuton: Henge [ Wood Release: Transformation ] [x]

B- Rank
• Daijurin no Jutsu [ Great Forest Technique ] [x]
• Shichuuka no Jutsu [ Four Pillar Home Technique ] [x]
• Jubaku Eiso [ Binding Nest ] [x]

A- Rank
• Jukai Koutan [ Birth of a Sea of Trees ] [x]
• Mokusatsu Shibari no Jutsu [ Smothering Binding Technique ] [x]
• Shichuurou no Jutsu [ Four Pillar Prison Technique ] [x]
• Mokujoheki [ Wood Locking Wall ] [x]
• Kakuan Nitten Suishu [ Entering Society with Bliss Bringing Hands ] [x]

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Barriers and Seals
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Custom Jutsu
E-Rank

D- Rank

C- Rank

B- Rank

A- Rank

S- Rank

SS- Rank


Physical training style(s) you have:

Speed: Gennin-Chuunin. [x]
Strength: N/A
Agility: N/A
Reflexes: Gennin-Chuunin [x]
Flexibility:N/A

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Chakra : 845/845


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 2:54 pm


You have your profile listed as Duel Element and Brawler, yet are trying to take on Bloodline/Bloodline Paths. Either way your Jutsu limitations are wrong on both accounts. Your Chakra should also be higher than it is now. Keep in mind that when you have an auto rank ALL available Chakra trainings up to your Rank are considered wins (for spars and battles). Please fix these issues and I will check it out again.

Notes:
Fix your Paths or Classes to the correct ones.
Fix your Chakra
Fix your limitations
Please be sure to list neatly in your Taijutsu section exactly what Styles you have. At the moment it is a mess to understand and there are no indicators on what you have selected.


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 3:07 pm


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You have your profile listed as Duel Element and Brawler, yet are trying to take on Bloodline/Bloodline Paths. Either way your Jutsu limitations are wrong on both accounts. Your Chakra should also be higher than it is now. Keep in mind that when you have an auto rank ALL available Chakra trainings up to your Rank are considered wins (for spars and battles). Please fix these issues and I will check it out again.

Notes:
Fix your Paths or Classes to the correct ones.
Fix your Chakra
Fix your limitations
Please be sure to list neatly in your Taijutsu section exactly what Styles you have. At the moment it is a mess to understand and there are no indicators on what you have selected.


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 4:25 pm


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Should be good to go now.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 6:36 pm


Your stats are skewed just slightly. With everything added (including the fact Autorank Chuunin begin with a 1 for their stats - You should end up with:

Speed: 5.5
Strength: 3.5
Reflex: 2
Flexibility: 1
Agility: 6


As far as I am aware there is no 'stealth' stat and so no way for me to accurately tell if this is correct or not. Other than this - your reductions. Nothing in your Paths, Classes, Rank or Bloodline allow you to learn all jutsu 1 post faster and you only learn Bloodline Jutsu 1 post faster. It doesn't go up to 2 until Jounin. Please fix these and I will look it over once more.

Notes:
Fix your Abilities.
Fix your Reductions.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2015 1:15 pm


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The stealth stat is just something I stuck in there to remind myself of the stealth passives that he gets from his styles.

Your actually wrong on the stats. Chuunin rank attribute bonus is only .5 and i have already factored that into his stats.

The -1 to everything comes from the same place the rank bonus to stats comes from.

-_-_-_-[ C h u u n i n ]
-_-_-B e n e f i t s:
-_-_-_-• All Jutsu require 1 less post to learn.
-_-_-_-• Constant movement: Physical stats are slightly increased.
-_-_-_-• Prior knowledge on low ranking Jutsu (Rank E-C)

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2015 2:29 pm


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The stealth stat is just something I stuck in there to remind myself of the stealth passives that he gets from his styles.

Your actually wrong on the stats. Chuunin rank attribute bonus is only .5 and i have already factored that into his stats.

The -1 to everything comes from the same place the rank bonus to stats comes from.

-_-_-_-[ C h u u n i n ]
-_-_-B e n e f i t s:
-_-_-_-• All Jutsu require 1 less post to learn.
-_-_-_-• Constant movement: Physical stats are slightly increased.
-_-_-_-• Prior knowledge on low ranking Jutsu (Rank E-C)

Assuming everything else is correct you should be good to go.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:02 pm


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