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Name: Kakure Mae

Nickname: 'Cleopatra', 'Cleo', 'Pharoah'

Age: 17

Birthday: June 18, 1998

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Alexanderite

Blood Type: AB

Fav. Food: Quail seasoned with Salt and Cumin

Hated Food: Pizza

School: St. Magsdelena

Hobbies:

Egyptian Excavations: As a teenage civilian, Kakure is NOT allowed to go to excavations because she is too young, no matter how much she desires to, and as a Lieutenent, it would frowned upon to use energy in such a way, so no matter which you put it, she is NOT allowed at Excavations. However, she loves to watch any documentaries, read and books about, or watch the news about these excavations from Egypt, no matter how old or new. In fact, she loves Egypt so much that her Negaverse name comes from it, Croconite or Crocodiles. However, her ancestry did very much centerize in Egypt, and her first name was a gift handed down from the ages, from Egyptian Royalty, or so her late mother once said.

Solving Riddles: Kakure loves any kind of logic, be it riddles, be it puzzles, be it philosophy. Kakure is not one to turn down a challenge, especially if it is logical to continue it, or it is a challenge having to do with logic. She has been seen doing the hardest word searchs, crosswords, and codebreakers, and has lately picked up the latest trend of logical puzzles, suduku; in her windowseat for hours at a time.

Virtues:

Always Looking For Friends: She's always looking for someone to hang out with, whether it's study with, go to a movie with, take over the world with, or just hang out with. Usually it's a two-way friendship that she is looking for, and usually it's the bad end of a one-way friendship she ends up with. She wonders if it is that, which will one day turn her truely down the path of evil. Her one true friend is her foster sister, Dria, however, she doesn't even know if she can trust her- being that Dria doesn't even know who she herself is.

Empathy: Kakure might be on the Negaverse side, but she does see the pain of others, as well as the pain that the Negaverse causes. Kakure knows that pain all too well. She used to be homeless, and starving.The Negaverse lifted her out of that. Gave her a choice. Return to the streets, or join the Negaverse . Kakure was not truely evil when she joined, she was just desperate. She truely hopes that before she is fully corrupted, that she can return to the side good, and do good three hundred times the evil she will do as a Nega.

Flaws:

Desperate Kakure's desperation to keep the people close to her safe drives her to extreme ends--even to do things she morally disagrees with because the people close to her are so important. People view her negatively because it means that she winds up walking over her friends or others, and she is generally unpredictable because when she is desperate she focuses only on what she wants and not who she hurts to reach it. She also feels terrible about this.

Gluttony: Having known the depths of starvation, Kakure has since subconsiciously placed a psychological trigger in her mind. She has gained a good bit of weight. That might not be so good. It has also sent her to the hospital a few times for overeating, as well as eating things she has gotten used to eatting yet. Food is comfort. Food is safety. Food is life. Need we go on?

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Round, Large, Chocolate Mousse colored eyes

Hair: Big Poof of dark brown spirals to neck

Face: Oval, Small ears, Flat but big nose, a small mouth,
Clothes: St. Magsdalena
Skin: Medium brown (soft tone) (very pretty)

Plot Idea
Just 2 weeks ago Kakure was on the streets of NY; stealing to just to survive. Kakure was approached by an agent of the Negaverse who offered a position to her, in return for all the food she could eat, friends, a roof over head, and of course, money. She was desperate, so she accepted. Within days, she was moved to the foster home of Laurie Bonds, in Destiny City. Now, at 17, Kakure, aka Lieutenant Limestone, is recieving her first training, and as of a week ago, she has a new best friend (a civilian) Dria Johnson. Poor girl, 14 years old and her only memories were of the last 3 years. Someone for Kakure to look after, and a shared interest in Egypt!

hmm I meant that she couldn't join them though she would like to. As a Lieutenant it would be frowned upon to waste the energy so she won't. As civilian - she is too young. But it's obviously not clear so I will change it. Yep the flaws.

Hey, Hawk!

Most of this profile is looking great, so I only have a few things I'd like to discuss before I can drop a stamp!

Firstly are her flaws; both of these are very heavily related to food so seem a little bit restricting. Flaws are supposed to be traits that are applicable to a wide variety of situations, so I'd like to ask a few questions to help flesh them out! Mostly I would just like to see a slight expansion on how these traits negatively affect her life; in her Desperation, what other things might this relate to than just food? Does this trait mean if she wants something, she will immediately jump into 'desperate' and try to get it? How much does it take to get her to the point of desperation for things other than food?

For Gluttony, how does this negatively affect others or their opinion of her? I can see how this might be unhealthy for her—if she is eating so much that she is making herself sick! While Gluttony traditionally extends to food, it can also be related to general greed; for this to be a well-adjusted flaw, I would love to hear if these habits extend to things other than just food!

Finally, I just have a small bit of critique for the plot idea you had; while it would definitely be fine for a Nega to pick her up in New York and then ship her down to Destiny City, if they are planning to introduce her to the Negaverse or try to corrupt her/invite her into it, you would only be able to backdate this up to two weeks prior to when you win the character and awaken her ICly. This means, at most, that she could have met the Negaverse in New York two weeks ago rather than three months, sorry!

If you have any questions, concerns or make any changes, please quote me and I will be back as soon as possible!

Looks good! Thanks for those changes!