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Name: Elspeth Armstrong

Nickname:

Age: 7

Birthday: August 1st

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Periodot

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Pudding

Hated Food: Egg Plants

School:Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:
Magical Girls - Elspeth loves magical girls. She is always begging her brother to buy her dvds of magical girl animes or toys based off of them. She loves to pretend she's a magical girl when she's playing.

Dance - Elspeth loves to dance, any type of dance really. She doesn't take any classes but she does like to copy ballerinas or other professional dancers she sees on TV.

Virtues:
Friendly -Elspeth see's everyone as a potential friend. She will often go up to new people and ask them to play with her. To her everyone is good and friendly, until proven otherwise. She sees the best in everyone and she will always try to bring out the good she sees in them in her own way.

Adventurous -Because her brother often has to work late Elspeth is pretty independent in her play time. She often loves to go out on her own and explore new places, sometimes even places her brother tells her not to go to. She isn't afraid of being somewhere new and strange to her. Because of her adventurous nature she tends to learn alot of things most kids her age don't. She finds new interesting places and gets to see different people more.

Flaws:
Thinks She's Invincible -Like many little kids Elspeth doesn't really know her limits. She believes she is invincible and nothing bad will happen to her since she's little. Because of this Elspeth will sometimes do really dangerous and risky things. She doesn't really understand that their are people in the world who might hurt her and so she isn't wary of suspicious people. She tends to explore places she really should not be like construction sites or the more wooded areas of the park

Disrespectful -Elspeth has a bad habit of not being respectful towards people or things she doesn't like, partly because as long as she doesn't swear her brother doesn't mind it at their home. Alot of her mouthy nature she picked up from her brother who rarely speaks respectfully to anyone. Although she's usually good in class she has sassed off to her teachers more than once and it's earned her timeout and her brother being told about it, which usually meant no magical girl shows for that night. Sometimes if she's in a fight with another kid she'll say something mean without thinking about it and then feel bad that she hurt their feelings, especially if she also gets in trouble for it.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Gold, Round.

Hair: Golden Blond, this

Face: Round

Clothes: Knightside uniform holding a toy magical wand

Hey Aure!

Lets see if we can get Tachibana ready for a stamp shall we?

First, I want to tackle her attacks, there's some critical information missing here. We need to know how long each attack lasts; and how large of a distance she can target away from her. Keep in mind that chibi senshi attacks are typically weaker than a normal senshi!

Now then for her virtues and flaws, I need a little more information and elaboration on them. They are almost there, but they need that little extra push to make them Vitures and Flaws.

How does being friendly help Elspeth? The way it reads she kind of could get in trouble with this, so the virtue waffles a little on being a flaw too. If you can flesh out more of the virtue side of this trait to make it stronger; I think you could leave the downfall with it.

Also, how does being Adventurous help Elspeth? Does she learn new things from it, what about doing more mundane things like trying new foods? What sorts of things does she gain from being Adventurous?

Same verses just in reverses with the flaws.

Think about how her believing she's invincible hurts her, you've got a great start here, again it just needs that little extra push.

As far as disrespectful - think about how she is disrespectful? How does this hurt her, what sorts of things could happen because of this? Obviously she's not punished for it by her brother, but does she do this to her friends? Has she hurt their feelings/could she alienate her friends by doing this? Does she miss out on things because she gets put in time out because of her disrespectful nature?

If you have any questions, need help or just want me to take another look; quote me back and I'll be here!

Awesome she looks a lot better! A mod'll be by soon Aure! Good luck!