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 Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 10:05 pm
 Name: Tomoko Yukimura Jaeger Nicknames: Tomo Age: 18 Birthday: February 21st Sign: Pisces Gemstone: Amethyst Blood Type: A+ Fav. Food: Fish, Shrimp and Exotic Fishes are amazing. Hated Food: Mushrooms, she just doesn't like them. School: N/A Hobbies:Gathering Facts
"Just the Facts" Tomoko loves to know facts, anything and everything she can find, which happen to be factual, are filed away into some unknown region of her brain. Tomoko digs up anything and everything she can on something she deems important. However, most of those facts while helpful on a game show may have little to no importance to the problem at hand.
Collecting Collars and Chokers
Just a little odd ball, Tomoko collects collars and chokers. Some of her collection looks to be rather old. Her stash seems to be endless and she has one for every occasion. However, where her stash is located is still a mystery in itself. The collars are seemingly squirreled away haphazardly in her house and sometimes it’s questionable if Tomoko knows where they are.
Experimenting with People
Tomoko loves to experiment with people, it doesn't matter the type of experiment or what the subject is, even if it's her. She absolutely loves things that seem to be science based in nature. One of her favorite people to work with is her sister because she feels her sister knows her best and understands what the goal is. However, she also loves working with other people because she feels she gets to know them through their experiments. Virtues: Eccentric
Tomoko is very eccentric and her actions show it. Everything from her movements to her questions are odd. Three steps to the left one to the right. Her plans tend to be made up on the spot and as she works things out they may sound weird or odd but it gets results. Occasionally while doing as Tomoko usually does, she can be an extremely funny event to witness. Especially for the person she happens to be talking to Tomoko comes off as a wonderful amusement factor, and Tomoko doesn't mind getting laughed at or with as long as it means the person is happy or amused! This helps her because Tomoko feels like she can get people to talk to her and open up more easily when they feel she's not a complete psycho.
Spunky
Tomoko is extremely active and when she's around someone that's down a bit she's right there trying to cheer them up. This includes weird little tricks that she's managed to dig up. In her facts research Tomoko found how magic tricks are done and attempts to recreate them. Being spunk and upbeat helps Tomoko focus on the positive nature and outcomes, and it also seems to help bring people's moods up from dour to upbeat, or at least Tomoko thinks it does.
Knowledgeable
Despite Tomoko's odd ways and flaws she's actually fairly knowledgeable on topics given that she's actually paying attention and can focus long enough to explain what she actually knows. Usually she's often displaying a working explanation which keeps her from floating off towards another train of thought. She loves to help people understand what they may struggle with and she knows the concept better. This doesn't mean Tomoko thinks she knows everything she's just knowledgeable and can help on things she understands and works with most which ends in positive results even if the process is wonky. Flaws: Talkative
She will not shut up. You get this woman talking you're stuck there listening to her. Until you walk away and even then she's STILL talking, sometimes even following you. Tomoko often talks about things that have no rhyme or meaning and she'll side track and get off onto tangents that are unrelated to what she's working on or doing. Sometimes this distracts Tomoko from her work as well, it's also almost fact that no one will sleep a wink with her around unless she happens to fall asleep or talks one into sleep by stupor.
Cocky
Paired with Spunky, Tomoko usually ends up in some sort of weird parallel where she'll 'fight' anyone and boast she'll win it as she use to be the best fighter. The problem this brings is knowing what her time is - considering Tomoko seems to live in a past that isn't hers, or better yet, in what world that seems to exist in her head these fights occurred. For all anyone knows, Tomoko is talking about some dream, which may or may not have had fish swimming in air. This cockyness though leads to a problem of her not paying attention, normally to what she's doing. In addition, her chest is normally puffed out and she’s strutting around like a peacock. However, Strick's fights are usually meant to be verbal but it can be mistaken for physical fighting. All in all the Cocky nature and spunky attitude Tomoko is usually getting hurt or blowing something up because she didn't pay attention to what she was doing and walking around in a boastful daze while experimenting.
Easily Distracted
Tomoko is almost always down to business and eager to explain things but then something happ- OH SHINY! Something constantly manages to distract and sidetrack Tomoko and once that happens occasionally it's difficult to get her back on task or paying attention to such a task. She might be successful at what she was doing but if asked she can't tell you how she did something because she's likely divulged on to another path in an alternate parallel where she's the most exciting person in the world. Not only can she not usually explain her findings to a T - and her partner (assuming she had one) has to do it. She can also occasionally cause some real damage to herself or to property around her. PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION Eyes: Green-Blue (fade), round
Hair: Short, like dis pastel rainbowed
Face: Round, lightly tanned
Clothes:
Shirt - Here - black
Bottoms- This skirt in yellow and lavender and white lacy shorts (her shirt covers like the one in this pic does)
Shoes - These The shoes in black, chunky heels, The leggings in black and sky blue, and the leg warmers in White.
Accessories - Choker like dis in black with white cameo center
Arm warmers like dis
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 10:47 pm
Senshi: Salome, Corrupt Senshi of PenitentesSalome was named after this ladyChallenge: Pray for your Survi-- Oh Snow!? Fuku Colour:Main Color: Cyan Secondary Color: Silvery white Fuku: See Right Attacks:Sailor Scout Attack: Penitentes' Hymn Salome summons a pile of snow and a spike of hardened snow starts to form, while the snow looks fairly harmless it isn't. This attack causes the illusion of snow flakes causing the snow pile.
At first the spike rises slowly out of the ground but then as it grows the speed in which it grows out of the ground speeds up too, at about a foot high the spike quickly pops up with a force that is hard enough to injure a target at the worse cuts (players perf on how deep). This attack is easy to dodge as the target has a few seconds before the ice spike forces it's way out of the ground. This attack can also be attacked to stop the spike from fully forming.
This attack lasts a mere ten seconds because of the sheer speed and force, Salome can only use it three times a battle, the ice disappears after five seconds. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Penitentes' Lament Salome summons a cone shaped snow field with spikes of hardened snow that grow larger the further away from her they are, while the snow looks fairly harmless it isn't. This attack causes the illusion of snow flakes causing the snow pile.
Salome waves her hand in front of her in the shape of an arc which creates small spikes, as they ripple out away from her the spikes grow larger, stopping at four foot high. At about a foot tall the spikes pace quickens so that by the tallest, the spikes are growing at a rapid speed. Those in the area of effect can be cut or gain some form of broken bone(s), true severity is up to player preference.
The spikes are easy to see, as they grow, thus they can be dodge from sight. Or the spikes can be attacked as they grow to stop the attack. Stopping the attack before the spikes grow to a foot tall stops the entire attack, stopping them at two foot or taller only stops a row of spikes.
There are seven distinct rows total by the time the spikes reach two foot tall. The attack lasts fifteen seconds in all and can be used twice. When the wall is fully formed it's Seven foot across the arc. The Ice disappears after five seconds. Eternal Sailor Attack: Penitentes' Elegy Salome summons a snow field with spikes of hardened snow that grow larger the further away from her they are, while the snow looks fairly harmless it isn't. This attack causes the illusion of snow flakes causing the snow pile.
Salome waves her hand in front of her in the shape of an arc which creates small spikes, as they ripple out away from her the spikes grow larger, stopping at six foot high. At about a foot tall the spikes pace quickens so that by the tallest, the spikes are growing at a rapid speed. Those in the area of effect can be cut or gain some form of broken bone(s) though rarely death it could happen, true severity is up to player preference.
The spikes are easy to see, as they grow, thus they can be dodge from sight. Or the spikes can be attacked as they grow to stop the attack. Stopping the attack before the spikes grow to a foot tall stops the entire attack, stopping them at two foot or taller only stops a row of spikes.
There are ten distinct rows total by the time the spikes reach two foot tall. The attack lasts fifteen seconds in all and can be used twice. The wall is a diameter of ten foot across with Salome in the epicenter. The ice disappears after fifteen seconds
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 10:54 pm
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2015 10:02 am
Let me say first I LIKE THIS SPHERE YES.I only have minor notes for her civilian side - You forgot her birthday, sign, and gemstone hun! You need that! Otherwise I just feel her eccetric trait reads as a flaw is all. I see where it goes - se has her own way of doing things! I just feel it might go much more smoothly if you decided to apply a more positive interpretation on it is all. ON TO ANGELITE. Again, I love this sphere you have no idea how neat this looks. What degree of injuries is severe? Basic and Super attacks are not to be close to life threatening - basic usually is fine with scrapes, small cuts, and bruises, super might be just a little more severe (Ow, I need stitches! comes to mind), and Eternal is life threatening in the right circumstances, although, corrupted senshi are somewhat more aggressively handled (So small cuts are fine basic, Super maybe a broken bone, Etc.). Are there dispel conditions or can her basic and super and eternal be dodged? Does the target see the spikes forming below? For Super and Eternal, the same questions apply - the use times and amounts look good though - for the AoE stages, however, I'd knock Super back to 6 feet and Eternal back to 8, and note how many targets it impacts. That said she's got a REALLY AMAZING start! Quote me once you make changes/adjustments/ETC and I'll roll right back in! c:
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2015 7:20 pm
Thank you! =3 So I fixed the minors and reworded, reworked and tweaked the Eccentric trait, hopefully that's better because I wasn't sure how else to work it. For the attacks, I tweaked the basic and rewrote the other two. For Super I made it a cone AOE instead of a basic circular AOE. For the Eternal I made it a half diameter instead of a circular AOE. Also, since they're an AOE with diameters I'm not sure it's needed how many people/targets it effects as I haven't really ever seen that needed before in a clearly stated AOE. (It's usually whoever the unlucky people(s) are that are stuck in the area.) . Hopefully these work for you? =3 *edit* Sorry nova someone brought to my attention that they actually form out of snow so I wanted to add that there is snow on the ground - which could also be used as an aid for 'where' her area of attack is.
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2015 11:50 am
Looks great to me! I'll be dropping that stamp, and good luck getting her, she looks FUN and I really can't wait to see her! A GM wll be along to drop a full stamp soon!
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 4:41 pm
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