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 Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:37 pm
Name: Theo Bentsen
Nickname: n/a
Age: 19
Birthday: August 25th
Sign: Virgo
Gemstone: Agate
Blood Type: O
Fav. Food: Almonds
Hated Food: Cherry tomatoes
School: DCU
Hobbies: Kickboxing As someone who accumulates a significant amount of stress and bottled emotions, he decided it was best to pick up hobbies that would allow him to vent his frustrations in a productive manner. He picked it up in late middle school and managed to convince his mother to sign him up for lessons by insisting it was beneficial to learn a form of self-defense. Theo attends the gym multiple times a week and does morning training as well.
Parkour Another hobby that Theo picked up due to his stifling family environment. Unlike kickboxing, Theo practices parkour because he appreciates the sense of freedom he gains. He likes being able to navigate through loud spaces at high speeds. The feel of the wind on his face, the sound of his heart beating fast. It feels refreshing. However, it is also something he tries to hide from his overprotective mother, which can stress him out.
Chemistry Something he does more out of parental obligation than genuine enjoyment, but he doesn’t particularly hate it either. There is something calming about solving chemistry problems. Perhaps it’s the logic involved. Previously a study-holic, Theo furiously studied chemistry in high school, even going so far as to participate in competitions and placing well.
Virtues: Dutiful Being raised to place strong emphasis on filial piety, Theo is extremely dutiful, especially to his parents. Responsibilities such as getting good grades, chores, helping his parents, are his top priorities and he would never dare to abandon them. Any other duties placed upon him receive similar treatment. If he is placed in charge of something, Theo will without fail make sure to complete the project that also meet his high standards. He would never abandon a responsibility unless it was an emergency.
Well-mannered Unsurprisingly, he is well-mannered and polite. He holds doors open for others and considers talking behind other’s backs to be dishonest and beneath him. While he knows kickboxing, he intends to mostly use it for self-defense when outside of the gym and would prefer not to use it to do any roughhousing. If it can be considered rude, it’s unlikely Theo would do it.
Organized After being pestered by his mother for so long, Theo has developed a habit of keeping everything organized. He has a planner with his schedule (admittedly he doesn’t refer to it much, as he memorizes it anyways, but is there as backup) and his workspaces are always impeccably clean and dusted. It’s also a habit for him to start rearranging or cleaning things when he enters a room unless it’s a personal space.
Flaws: Irritated Being someone who always obeys authority even if he doesn’t agree, Theo can become quite irritated and angry. While he knows he should refuse things he doesn’t agree, he feels compelled to do them anyways and becomes annoyed as a result. As he does this often, he is almost always angry, but has learned to bottle it up. Consequently, he acts with a blunted affect and can come across as cold, and at the same time if he bottles his emotions up too much his temper can suddenly flare up and he’ll act out.
Righteous Theo follows a particular set of rules that combine both typical human law and his own morals. For the most part he attempts to follow government rules, but he also won’t hesitate to break those laws in order to carry out his own justice. He believes in an eye for an eye, and so if he has been wronged he does not see why he cannot wrong others in a similar way as punishment.
Hypocrite Theo is the type of person who does not hesitate to place himself (or others, at times) to different standards. He’ll tell people that it’s not good to bottle up emotions and to try to handle everyone on your own, and then turn around to do those same exact things without batting an eyelash because for him, it’s unacceptable to appear weak. Conversely, he doesn’t mind loosening standards toward his friends. Theo will say that people should quite awful habits such as smoking, but if he has a close friend who can’t quit, he won’t say a thing.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Pale, icy blue. Narrowed.
Hair: Dark brown. Slicked back, but slightly messy.
Face: Slight tan. Somewhat angular jaw.
Clothes: Very proper and semi-formal. Lots of button shirts paired with vests or jackets. Dark pants or jeans.
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:37 pm
Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Keyite
Challenge: “I’ll bring you down” ”You’re down for the count”
Uniform: Top -- see below
Gloves -- see below
Belt -- see below
Shoes -- see below
Shoulders -- see below
Accessories -- something like this (sleeves rolled up?) + cloak [ for future stages anyways lol o(--< ]and trimming color should match keyite mineral lies down cause I'm anime trash
Weapon –
boxing gloves A worn out pair of red boxing gloves. The hits are blunt, but can still pack quite a punch in the right hands.
simple gauntlets Simplistic in design, these gauntlets only go a bit past the wrist. However, since these are now made of metal they can now pack more of a punch to enemies.
upgraded gauntlets Like the previous gauntlets, but longer and with a more elaborate design.
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:40 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:34 pm
Hey Syusaki! I have one small request and some small critiques on his powered side, but on the whole Theo looks pretty good! The request -- could you please add an extra line break between your traits? It's a bit hard to read with them all blocked up, and they run together a bit ;; Sorry! The actual bits of crit -- a cloak isn't going to be allowable for a first-stage officer, as cloaks/capes are reserved for third-stage Knights and Generals! Also, gauntlets are, I think, a bit underpowered as a Negaverse weapon, when most other officers have something that's very deadly -- if you want a similar theme, I'd suggest giving him blades, claws, or spikes at General? Other than that I think he's pretty good :3 Quote me once you've made changes or if you have any other questions and I'll be happy to answer them!
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