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Name: Kyle Cooke

Nickname: Nope

Age: 21

Birthday: 9th September

Sign: Virgo

Gemstone: Sapphire

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Tiramisu

Hated Food: Peas

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:
Baking - A strong believer of delicious food being the source of all happiness, Kyle aspires to be a confectioner with his own patisserie some day. He is good at cooking in general but enjoys baking cakes and pastries the most, usually bringing his creations to school to share with his circle of friends and gather feedback at the same time as to whether anything about the recipe will require more work on.

Playing MMORPGS - Kyle enjoys playing fantasy-based 2D MMORPGS with different job classes along the likes of Ragnarok Online, usually during the weekends. He has a main warrior-type character that he will use to accomplish tasks together with his guild mates and friends but will happily use his mage, cleric and merchant characters to craft items and provide support if the situation calls for it.


Virtues:
Analytical - Kyle has always had a knack of being able to figure things out within a short span of time whenever he was given a problem. He would always be among the first to finish his assignments and he has no qualms about using his ability to help others with their problems whenever they come to him for help.

Helpful - Kyle was the type of guy who would drop everything to help someone out if he could. Especially if the person concerned was his friend or family. Even the random little old lady whom he just ran into on the street. If it was something that was beyond his ability however, he would try as far as possible to redirect the person to someone else he knew would be able to assist them with their problem.

Flaws:
Skeptical - If it involves something that Kyle already had a fixated idea on or had a prior bad experience with, he is less liable to give things the benefit of the doubt and a second chance. The only time when he will consider doing otherwise is when a close friend or family member gives him a differing opinion and asks him to consider giving things another chance.

Interfering - Kyle doesn’t get it sometimes when people just do not want him meddling in their affairs. He is the type who will step up to offer his help whenever he sees someone who needs it and won’t take no for an answer even if he was already given just cause by the other person time and again.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION (Reference Picture - x, x)

Eyes: Blue grey - see ref

Hair: Light brown - see ref

Face: Semi-tanned skin, has goatee like in the ref

Clothes: CC ^^

Hi gwing! Here to drop in some crit!

The only thing I have any concerns about is his Eternal magic. The effect itself is fine, but the duration is a little on the long side. No attack should really be lasting up to a minute at a time! I'd suggest bumping it down to 45 seconds and then everything here should be good to go!

Yup! Everything looks good now! Thank you! I'm dropping a trial stamp now! A GM should be around soon to take another look!

Hey, Gwing!

The civilian looks good to me, but I have a few questions about the powered!

For the basic and super, five/ten seconds is a short time for an attack and I want to make sure you are getting the most out of his magic! If you wanted to raise the basic attack to twenty seconds and the super attack to thirty, I think that would be fair! (But only if you want to!) I did want to ask; since most senshi magic is supposed to be temporary, would the swarm just feel like stinging for the duration of the magic—and then afterwards all of the stinging sensation would disappear? (For example, no residual welts or itching?) If the stinging sensation is only lasting for the duration of the magic, then you are definitely fine to have that! I just want to be sure!

For the eternal attack, how much would the swarm heal for the course of 45 seconds? Most healing magic can range from superficial injuries to healing somewhat moderate injuries; I am just curious how much you imagine this attack can heal if it can be used twice per battle! (Sorry to bombard you with questions! I think it is a cute profile so I am excited to get it stamped quickly!)

Please quote me if you have any questions, concerns or make any changes to the profile; I'll be back as soon as possible!

Those would be reasonable changes to the duration! The only thing is that the welts shouldn’t remain as long as if they were natural stings; they can definitely hang around for the duration of the fight and for a while afterwards (but having a bunch of welts on your face while powered down might be a giveaway for who you've been fighting if you aren't too careful!) Either way though, this sounds fine—as does what you mentioned for the eternal attack!

Looks great, thanks for working with me! Have a stamp!