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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:45 pm


User ImageName: Lily-Rose Epilor

Nickname: Please call her Lily - anything else seems a little over-formal, and she's never liked roses much, anyways.

Age: 16

Birthday: January 2nd

Sign: Capricorn

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: A-

Fav. Food: Lily has a regrettable sweet tooth, best experienced when she's presented with anything peppermint-flavored. She likes to carry around a purse filled with breath mints and those resturant peppermints.

Hated Food: Anything messy. Eating should usually be fast and clean. Also, since her father went vegan, she's developed a strange fury towards vegan cheese; it's not real cheese and needs to stop pretending and it TASTES GROSS eugh she feels unclean.

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:
Piano: Lily has been playing the piano since she was six. Is she terrifyingly good at it? Well, if you played an instrument for ten years, you'd be pretty good at it too, probably. She's a wonderful sightreader and tries very hard, but her technique and her fingering is always a bit sloppy, and...it takes her a very long time to memorize a piece! It's distressing. To combat this, Lily tends to use smaller pieces, merging them into one larger musical piece.
Don't ask her to play by ear, though. It's very distressing for her.
Keeping Notes: Lily's memory is...not the greatest. To combat this, she likes to take notes on people and things she encounters, so she can have a primer: nobody else gets to see them, but she regularly rereads her own notes. Lily is that girl who keeps a planner for school and uses it like a madwoman: every page is filled with detailed notes about her homework, because otherwise she might just forget. Don't be worried when she starts writing down things during any meeting: it's just her way to take inventory and table it all out in her head, so Lily can understand it easily and quickly; and she can reread it on the fly if her memory taps out.

Virtues:
Unerring Focus: Lily focuses on things like a bullet. Or a hawk? Whatever your focus metaphor of choice is, Lily focuses like that. She notes little details, sure; but her true strength is in the fact she will zero in on something and KNOW it. She won't be tempted away from her given path, and she will not be distracted. When Lily is focused on something, you can't distract her; it's impossible to try.
Optimist: Everything will be okay in the end, right? Lily genuinely, 100% believes this. There's a silver lining in every cloud, and something good comes out of everything bad. People are never completely bad, and everyone has a little bit of good in them, and total evil isn't true: this is not the end, and the sun will come out tomorrow. It's for the greater good, and maybe it's childish to say so, but Lily wants to - and does- believe that the world is good.
Helpful: Lily wants people to be happy! She'll assist in any way possible to make you happy and cheerful and content...if you want her to. If you don't want, she's ok with that, she doesn't want to pry. But what she does want to do is be useful, and be helpful, and she'll do whatever she needs if you ask. There's the saying 'I live to serve', and although Lily might never say it, she knows she feels happier making other people happy than trying to make herself happy.


Flaws:
Doormat: Lily never stands up for herself, ever: she desperately wants other people to be happy, and if they can make themselves so by hurting her, she's okay with that. She just wants people to be happy. Is there anything wrong with that? Well, when she'll let the people who she's focused on get their kicks at the expense of other people, there very definitely is. It's incredibly easy to assert yourself at Lily's expense, and if she sees anything wrong with this, she ain't saying.
Secretive: Lily keeps secrets. A lot of them. Is she trustworthy? Certainly! But if there's anything that bothers her or anything that she doesn't want other people to know for any reason, she'll keep it to herself all the time; keep it close to her chest and never let anyone be hurt with it. Nobody can get hurt if nobody knows, and she'll take the blame, it's ok, she doesn't really mind. It's the one exception to the fact she has no will of her own: Lily will never tell a secret.
Somewhere Far Away: Lily goes far away from here, sometimes; she retreats into her own little space in her mind and lets her body go on autopilot and feels like she's floating. Lily doesn't think of herself as a real person, essentially: and she doesn't feel like one, either. So what does it matter if people walk over her? She's not here. Her body is here, but Lily-the-semiperson is somewhere floating in space, and she's safe there and it's quiet and nothing will hurt her soul.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: See image.

Hair: See image.

Face: Lily has one of those 'traditionally beautiful' faces: high cheekbones, small dainty nose, soft lips. But there's a certain sadness and hollowness to her face, so her eyes are dull and her lips are chapped from biting.

Clothes: Lily prefers dresses, highwaisted skirts, and the color blue. No jewelry, except maybe hairclips. She customizes her Meadowview uniform by wearing tights -- there's probably some kind of floral print on them. She likes patterns, monochromatic (black/white), and eyeliner.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:46 pm


User ImageSenshi: Dark Mirror Sailor Juliet, Senshi of Whiteouts

Challenge: "Disappear."
alt: "Fade to white."

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Icy pale blue
Secondary Color: Dark grey-purple

Fuku: Check the art!! It is by Silv because I love Silv. Admittedly the design is for when she was just a Corrupt instead of Dark Mirror, but shouldn't require too much fixing. smile

Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Ophelia Foggy Whiteout
Sailor Ophelia says the name of her attack and blows a puff of cold, snowy air; this surrounds Sailor Ophelia in a ten-by-ten-by-ten foot radius of a magical white haze, dropping visibility for 30 seconds. This does move with her, as it is more a collection of cold air than it is an actual solid form; however, it is magical, and cannot be blown away by wind. This 'haze' is fairly solid, and probably a bit uncomfortably nippy -- it is distinctly made out of snow, if one looks close enough -- but it's not gonna cause frostbite. Visibility will be reduced about 40%.
This attack may be used three times a battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Ophelia Windblown Whiteout
Sailor Ophelia says the name of her attack and blows a puff of cold, snowy air; this surrounds Sailor Ophelia in a ten-by-ten-by-ten foot radius of a snowy haze, heavily dropping visibility for 30 seconds. Visibility will be reduced about 70%, and it's a bit colder; you might go a little numb -- imagine snow static.
This attack may be used twice a battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Ophelia Sector Whiteout
Sailor Ophelia says the name of her attack, hands up to the sky. For 30 seconds, a thick snowy haze emerges from her hands, causing most surface definition of objects to be nigh-invisible except for vague dark shapes; this attack reduces visibility by 90%. It also causes any living being caught within the radius to feel extremely cold, like they are in the middle of a snowstorm.
This attack can be used twice a battle, and surrounds Sailor Ophelia in a ten-foot cube of magically-induced whiteout.

template: F23, F18, or F11?

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2015 4:43 pm


Daekie


Hey Daekie!

For the most part Lily looks great, and super love for Shakespearean Senshi names! I also think her "Keeping Notes" hobby is really adorable because I, too, have a memory like a plastic sieve and it sounds like something I should do (but continually resist doing because laziness, or something.)

I just have one question - how many uses does she have of each attack? She looks good other than that so just the one minor thing really!
PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2015 4:57 pm


Noir Songbird


Added in attack uses! Thanks, Song~ <3

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2015 5:03 pm


Daekie


Okay, just one thing - Senshi don't normally gain an extra use of their basic magic when they level up, but I think you'd be good for three uses either way!
PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2015 5:17 pm


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Daekie


Okay, just one thing - Senshi don't normally gain an extra use of their basic magic when they level up, but I think you'd be good for three uses either way!


Fixed that! As again, thank you, Song! <33

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2015 5:20 pm


Daekie


No problem, no problem~ Looks good!

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 8:48 pm


Daekie


Hey, Daekie!

I'm so sorry about the delay on this!

The civilian side of this profile looks great, but I have a few notes on the powered side. The sphere, Whiteout, is very close to a currently existing sphere—Fog. After reviewing the attacks, there is a bit of overlap, however I think with some tweaks (particularly to her basic attack), we can get this profile stamped!

My first request to avoid too much overlap is to remove references of fog; perhaps instead you could word it as a 'magical white haze'? The second request, because the first attack is so similar, to create a bit of difference it might help if instead of focusing on just the fog, but the cold/lack of vision? For example, instead of it being 'misty air', if you focused on the snow hindering vision, I think this might help hugely in differentiating the spheres?

I also had one question about her eternal attack--what is the radius on this?

If you are all right with that, I think we could stamp the powered side; for now, because you have the art, your civilian profile is stamped so you can play Lily! If you make any changes or have any questions about her powered side, please feel free to quote me and I will be back as soon as possible!


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 9:05 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


It's absolutely alright, I don't mind the delay! I've made some wording changes to her attacks, and Ophelia's eternal attack has been given a radius and a more clinical description of the cold; are those alright?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 9:14 pm


Daekie


Absolutely fabulous, thank you so much! Have fun playing!

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