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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:06 pm


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Two families, the Sun herd live by day and sleep by night, they rule the plains. The Moon herd lives by night and sleeps by day, they rule the forest. The two are feuding over something... (It could be over territory, annual games inspired by the pokemon world, spiritual beliefs???? or it could ancestral thing and as the reasons to despise each other fade, it just sticks for the sake of history.)

The newer generations of both herds are growing ever more curious of one another, especially the children of the leaders.

Memory, the daughter of the Sun herd leaders, spots shadows dancing behind the trees one night. She becomes fascinated by them, staying awake until the moon is high in the sky to watch them. Their glowing eyes and markings mesmerising and beautiful. She watches from where her family sleeps for some time, until finally one night she finds the courage to approach the border but she never passes. One of the shadows seems to linger by her. When it moves, she chases it and when she moves, it chases back. The shadow is Sin, the son of the Moon Herd leaders. The two form a forbidden, yet strange friendship, even though they have never met face to face, or likely ever will (So they thought).

Memory expresses her fascination of these shadow creatures to her parents, it doesn't go well. Receiving an unexpected scolding and being warned of ever approaching them. She refrains from telling them of the new friend she has been playing with and sulks the rest of the day.

When that night came, she gathered the courage to break the border and finally meet her new friend face to face. No more chasing shadows... However when she beaks the tree line and starts wandering deeper, she hears the enchanting song of the carousel. Distracted by the melody, she follows it's call and stumbles upon the mystical members of the carousel. Completely mesmerised by these as well, she follows them and minutes turn in to hours and hours become days and when she finally realises that she is far from home, with no way of knowing how to get back, she decides to stay in their company and join them. Hoping one day they will return to the forest and she can return home.

Sin has witnessed this but because of the old tales and his families teachings, dares not stop or approach her. He returns home, saying nothing.

When her family realises she has gone, they immediately storm the forest and accuse the Moon Herd of taking her. They argue and squabble and that is when Sin admits what he has saw. The Sun herd leaders, infuriated that the Moon herd leaders son didn't do anything to stop her, demand that they send only their best to find and retrieve her. (Either they do or they refuse.) Sin offers to go however still being too young, his family denies him this task.

Never forgetting, Sin waits until he has come of an age where he can fend for himself and sets off to find the lost princess. (This is where the inspiration of Andrew Lang's tale 'Minnikin' comes in to play. Having to undergo a series of trials to gain information of her whereabouts. Minnikin continued to meet the old hag in his story, stealing her false eye and when she asks for it back, he asks what she would give him in return for it. These would be things that would benefit and help him in the future.)

Everyone he comes across gives him very little, telling him that he can't just find the carousel, as everyone has heard stories but has never actually seen them, that you just 'happen' upon it. Though one day he comes across someone who has seen the princess, assuming it is her from the description he gives at least, performing her stories. One story being of the tale of two herds at war and two children, friends, caught in the middle of it. They also tell him that if you listen closely enough, you can hear her singing to the moon just before the dawn.

Knowing this is her, he asks to be pointed in the direction they had last seen her in and off he goes again. While on his travels, he could hear her song, a mournful tune. When they finally meet again, it could be while she is performing. During it, she spots him but waits until after the show to approach. She would know those glowing eyes and markings anywhere. Overwhelmed with joy, nerves and fear, the happy reunion falls in to sorrow when he offers to show her the way home. She explains that she is unsure whether you can ever leave the carousel and that if they were to return, they would never be allowed to see each other again and instead, offers him a place in the carousel so that they can be together. (As friends, or as lovers, depending. xD )
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:07 pm


me - I very much like this idea! And it gives me ideas for RP so he can go seeking information for her haha. And I kind of like the idea of it being a love story, if you're game XD That's a lot of effort and a lot to give up for a platonic friend lol

So the feud... hmmm maybe it is a matter of disputed territory? Let's say there are a pair of parallel rivers with a fertile field between them that the two herds constantly fight over? It can be the disputed land, where no one ends up going for fear of being attacked by the other herd. Due to this constant fear of bodily harm both herds preach how dangerous the other one is, hence the strict rules never to go near them. Lets say the adults in the herd still carry the scars and wounds from the horrible battles fought but since the young have no battles to recall they have no real fear of the other herd. The war could have lasted for generations, falling into an uneasy truce when the current leaders' generation finally decided they were tired of bloodshed. The only terms they could agree on was that no one could go to the disputed land.

His counter-argument to the "if we go back they won't let us be together" idea would be that as the future leaders of the two herds their union would strengthen the peace and possibly end the animosity between the two herds. (I expect it will be quite the discussion before he just gives up his home and family for her lol)

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:08 pm


That is very true. XD I am definitely up for it being a love story!~ <3

Sounds like a great idea for the feud. I especially love the idea of the adults wearing the scars from their battles. Very interesting as it will be a constant reminder of all that they have been through and fought for.

Oh no! She wouldn't expect him to just give them up that easy either or at all. She would be saying that out of fear of change. Since the carousel will be all that she has known for almost as long as she can remember, it would feel unnatural to take a change of lifestyle so suddenly. As well as what her family would say or do. She misses them, of course and does want to go back deep down, which is why after some persuasion, especially with his argument that they could bring peace and unity, she would agree to go back. So long as they stay strong together, of course! That support is needed but in truth, with him around, I am certain he will make it feel like they can achieve anything.

Where would you like to start the RP's from? Assuming that this will be rp'd? smilies/icon_smile.gif

Also, thank you for all the tickets, I wish you good luck in the raffle and hope you enjoy your holiday!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:09 pm


oh yeah also! I had all kinds of ideas. So I figured in the Moon herd (and possibly sun herd if you wanted) was broken into several areas which were ruled by several ruling families, all with glowing eyes. They consider the glowing eyes as a blessing of the Moon Goddess so those with glowing eyes are raised up above others. Above all of the ruling families is the Royal Family, of which Sin is their prince.

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I won her in the raffle and I had an idea - she is the eldest daughter of one of the ruling families, heiress in her own right. Close in age to Sin the two were raised together. I figure their families were raising them to eventually marry. They have a sort of arranged marriage pact. When Sin runs off after some other mare, Demeira takes it as a slight and runs off to track him down and drag him back to the herd. She's half shadow 'suti and has some shadow powers.

I figure she feels duty-bound to return with him, but in her heart she doesn't truly love him. It's all about honor and the family and in the end she will let him go.

But she can be a fun obstacle haha

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:10 pm


marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: Hey <3
fatalirony: hi!
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: So excited about the plots and the added drama with Demeira though I know I will end up feeling so heartbroken for her in the end XD
fatalirony: haha
fatalirony: well she'll eventually find her own love and then fully understand the reason he left her haha
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: I do hope she does, she is very pretty. Congrats on the win.
fatalirony: thanks!
fatalirony: I love her smile
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: She oddly suits the herd theme too with her dark and glowy features
I have been thinking of minor traditions to fix in to the Sun herd, like a rememberence ceremony which would happen once a month or something, offerings of their dead being left in a designated area to show their efforts will never be forgotten. Something to add, which keeps the fire between the two herds alive
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: would the moon having something similar?
fatalirony: Yeah and being shadow 'suti too she just fell into place perfectly.
fatalirony: I figure there will be some sort of ceremonies at certain phases of the moon
fatalirony: They worship the Moon Goddess also
fatalirony: (seeing as they view glowing eyes as a blessing of hers and all)
fatalirony: The New Moon might be a time of silent remembrance and caution, as without the moon's protection they are exposed and vulnerable so they typically gather together and remain until morning, fasting and praying for another cycle of peace
fatalirony: A Full moon would be a happy occasion, and one during which couples may wed, seeking blessing from the moon
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: thats too cute, can just imagine the bundles of fur xD
fatalirony: lol
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: how about games, something they could do together to honor their truce every so often
like the olympics, a set of obstacle courses they would overcome and the winner take some item back with them?
Or do you think it would defy the point
fatalirony: hmmm that depends on how deeply the hatred is?
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: how deep should it be?
It could be a time they all hate but behave for the sake of their futures
Some individuals showing signs of their hatred more than others, possibly the veterans
fatalirony: that could be good
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: also a time they could blow off steam haha
fatalirony: haha and be competitive and such
marisajacques@hotmail.co.uk: haha yess
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