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[Dovaa] Kanza Ezriel U/C

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Dis arcanae

Devoted Loiterer

PostPosted: Wed Dec 03, 2014 4:57 pm


Custom: Full



Name: Kanza Ezriel
Race: Dovaa
Gender: female
Age: 13
Clan: Aiskala
Statistics: INT 4, ATK 2, DEF 4.



Appearance:

Dark, dark brown skin;
the color of cacao beans.

Amber-colored scales;
beneath her eyes,
on her shoulders,
hips, and knuckles.

Hair inspiration;
http://tinyurl.com/od48vpt,
http://tinyurl.com/pu5uq2g,
http://tinyurl.com/or3qvwn,
or
http://tinyurl.com/n6guhcu,
also a dark, dark brown.

Clothing inspiration;
http://tinyurl.com/mx4xq2g,
http://tinyurl.com/o4m2ub9,
http://tinyurl.com/kqmwupb,
http://tinyurl.com/o548gol,
http://tinyurl.com/nyskgex,
dark & earthy colors.

Horns' inspiration;
http://tinyurl.com/oymhfbc,
protrudes from her forehead,
same color as pictured.

Wings will be brown and leather/bat-like.



Personality:

Raised by a warrior and a peacemaker, the two clashing personality types reflect near perfectly within Kanza. She is patient and kind, obedient and overwhelmingly loyal. She will go out of her way to help another person in need- regardless of their relationship- and has a heart of gold. Her temperament, however, is one that roars like wildfire. Fueled by passion and her own beliefs, she fights for equality and peace; unwilling to allow anything other than such. She speaks her mind, regardless of her company, and will inevitably refuse to give up on a task once she's begun. She is harsh when she needs to be, her words bordering on lethal when she's not focused on softening them (a focus that she does, often, forget) but whatever she says is usually quite well-meaning in her own mind.



Biography:

Eori Li'Fae, mother.
Dorne Ezriel, father.

Kanza was both born and raised only a couple nights travel from the Weeping Mountains, within a small community known to its inhabitants as Elmyn. Kanza's parents themselves were Gruq farmers.

The couple met, however, long before either one had even a single inkling of an interest in agriculture. Kanza's father, Dorne, was a warrior. A soldier that had pledged himself fully to the Dovaa cause. He believed in peace brought about by force and fought in quite a few battles to prove this belief further. He met Kanza's mother, Eori Li'Fae, while traveling through Serenia. She herself was a Guardian; uninterested in the war that waged around her and instead intent on helping the people of Magesc however she could, in whatever non-violent means she was able. They fell in love within months of their by-chance meeting, and Kanza's conception brought about a whirlwind of change for the both of them. During Eori's pregnancy, the couple moved to Aisko (Dorne's homelands); where they settled themselves on land bought with savings they'd each accumulated over the years. Using the village's knowledge, their combined strength, and the vast population of unclaimed and especially stubborn Gruq to their advantage, the pair began their farm only a few years after Kanza's birth.

They raised their child with love, giving her as much of the world as they could possibly provide. They taught her the many ways of the world- intent on giving her as much information on each of the Maegescan races and their differing cultures as they possibly could.


Thoughts on the Great Engagement:

"I wish only for the war to end peacefully, and with as little Magescian blood spilled as possible. It is my hope that the races will reach a point where they view each other as equals and not enemies. Until then, I will fight for my fellow Dovaa, and never give up on the peace that we were created to uphold."

Thoughts on the Magescian Races:

"I do not judge by looks alone, but instead view each being as an individual. Though, of course, I will always feel most at home surrounded by other Dovaa, I hope to some day see the races brought together in harmony and not in bloodshed."

"Both Orderites and Oblivionites have reason to hold their grudges. A countless number of them have seen their allies killed by the hands of their enemy. They each go forward, serving their gods and fighting for freedom. Freedom that can only be acquired by peace. Magescans need to learn forgiveness to replace the hate that has boiled so viciously in their hearts. They need to accept their past tragedies and go forward. If equality is reached, there will be no more murder; no more revenge. I wish for a world of happiness, and will fight until my very last breath to attain it."

"Hybrids, if anything, should be treated with just as much respect as their pureblood brethren- if not even more than that, considering the lives that have been thrust upon them. I can feel nothing but compassion for the wayfaring hybrid."

Thoughts on the Dragons and Khehora:

"I hold only a tentative curiosity within me, when asked of our draconic brethren. I've not had much chance to interact with them myself and know only what I am told. Should they cross my path during my travels, I should very much like to have a conversation and perhaps learn more about their culture."



Current Goal: Travel to Ashen City, in order to join the Guardians.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 03, 2014 6:19 pm


Gruq (gruhck)

Size: Large

Description:

Gruq are large, furry beasts similar to our Earth's Oxen; but much, much larger and with frightfully long horns. They are of mild temperament and the majority of those residing in Aisko are livestock. The females can be milked, and the fur and hide from both genders are commonly used in clothing and most leatherwork. Though they are generally peaceful, a Gruq's rage can be lethal; making them somewhat of a rare choice for most farmers. The ones that are willing to risk it, however, often make large amounts of profit due to their many beneficial qualities.

Location:

Can only be found in Aisko.

Element:

Earth, they pound their large hooves against the ground in order to create low-level earthquakes and- subsequently- avalanches; used mostly in order to intimidate possible predators.

Taming Info:

Unable to be tamed, due to their stubborn nature. Not to mention the fact that they're so slow, it's unlikely anyone would have the patience to travel with one.

Dis arcanae

Devoted Loiterer


Tangled Puppet
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Sarcastic Demigod

PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2014 6:43 pm


I've read both Kanza and Eru's quest threads and I've noticed that they are, essentially, the same character with a few changes here and there. I think the concept is strongest for Kanza and more thought out.

The one thing I'd like to see more detailed is Kanza's thoughts on the other races. Just...how she views each race as a whole. Doesn't have to be negative or judgmental in a bad way. Just something that explains her thoughts more.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2014 7:18 pm


Like I said in Eru's quest, I really am digging this girl. Though she could also benefit from just more info all around, I think what you have down for her fits well in the world and is neat and creative. If you thought you could flesh out her bio a bit more, I think I'd be ready to just stamp approval on her. You are free to chase either, though, obviously. :]

Miss Chief aka Uke
Crew

Rainbow Fairy


Dis arcanae

Devoted Loiterer

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 5:00 am


Well, due to recent feedback it looks like I'll be scrapping Eru and working on Kanza when I get home today.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 8:36 am


Tangled Puppet
I've read both Kanza and Eru's quest threads and I've noticed that they are, essentially, the same character with a few changes here and there. I think the concept is strongest for Kanza and more thought out.

The one thing I'd like to see more detailed is Kanza's thoughts on the other races. Just...how she views each race as a whole. Doesn't have to be negative or judgmental in a bad way. Just something that explains her thoughts more.


I added another paragraphs on her thoughts on Magescans, hopefully it'll give you a little bit more insight on how she feels. She mostly just recognizes the tension between the two enemies, and believes that the tension must be released through forgiveness/acceptance before the thread between them is snapped and the hope for peace is lost.

Dis arcanae

Devoted Loiterer


Tangled Puppet
Vice Captain

Sarcastic Demigod

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 3:05 pm


Dis arcanae
Sounds good. What about hybrids, though?

Also, I want to point out that you have the Gruq as being native to Aisko (in your second post) but in your biography about the family, you talk about them moving to Ayr and say..."and the vast population of unclaimed and especially stubborn Gruq to their advantage".
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 4:34 pm


Tangled Puppet
Sounds good. What about hybrids, though?

Also, I want to point out that you have the Gruq as being native to Aisko (in your second post) but in your biography about the family, you talk about them moving to Ayr and say..."and the vast population of unclaimed and especially stubborn Gruq to their advantage".

That's because she was originally going to be from Ayr, but I changed it to Aisko not too long ago, ha ha. This profile actually isn't ready for critique, yall just started postin' here. redface

BUT, you did it to tell me Kanza > Eru, so. emotion_bigheart

I was actually planning on switching back to her... just hadn't made the final decision yet. I'll quote you and Uke when this profile is done. So for now NO SPYING, YOU TWO.

Dis arcanae

Devoted Loiterer


Miss Chief aka Uke
Crew

Rainbow Fairy

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 4:37 pm


-covers eyes and promises not to peek-
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 4:43 pm


Haha. I just figured she was ready for crit. You should edit your title to say something like "[u/c]" so no one else makes the same mistake to us. =P

Tangled Puppet
Vice Captain

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