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PostPosted: Thu Nov 20, 2014 5:05 am


Approved by Tawny

                                          N A M E . Gundahar
                                          XXA G E . Thirteen Turns
                                          XXS E X . Male
                                          XXXXXXsexuality » heterosexual [ straight ]
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                                          C R A F T . candidate
                                          R A N K . weyrbrat

                                          D E S C R I P T I O N . »
                                          xxxxGundahar has the appearance of someone who has not quite grown up yet, with a feminine edge to his features. His legs and arms are long and lanky, that of a younger boy; despite his abnormally tall height at five foot eleven, he is pretty girlish. Though, don't say that to his face. His dark brown eyes are mesmerizing if one gets too close, and if he were a little older he'd probably be a real dream boat. Shaggy brown hair falls just passed his thin eyebrows, gently brushing against his curved cheeks. His nose is slightly crooked from an accident when he was younger.
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                                          xxxxGundahar likes to dress for success at all times; and now that he is capable of being a candidate, he refuses to take the uniform off. His breeches are worn, but suitable to his little bad-boy facade, and his loose shirt exposes his collar bone just slightly. Freckles dapple along his neck and shoulders, but appear to stay in that one area; not merging along the rest of his pale skin. All and all he is a lanky child who when older could prove quite good looking.

                                          P E R S O N A L I T Y . »
                                          xxxxGundahar's personality is as raw as he is. He's reaching the apex in his life where he has to make a decision on exactly what it is he wants to do with his life. He wants to be a good dragon rider and he feels the flow of that blood through his veins. At the same time however, he wants to be a good healer as well and share his compassion and dedication to those who need him the most. His whole life he thought he had it figured out but now he's beginning to experience that feeling that comes with his youth, to take wing against thread or to heal those who need him. Such difficult decisions to make.
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                                          xxxxHe is a very soft-spoken child and doesn't speak out unless directly spoken to. He has a tendency to avoid confrontation, preferring to accept people as they are rather than how they behave. When faced with another candidate or peer who is more outspoken and shares opposite attributes from himself he tends to try to understand them more and allow his anger to settle down. He does not get angry very easily, unless faced with someone who is cruel to others. Gundahar does not approve of needless cruelty in the hearts of others around him, he believes everything should be at peace, there are more important things to fight than each other.
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                                          xxxxGundahar would make a good leader on the inside, if he opened up his mouth more and stopped over thinking things. He is a very honest soul, not liking to hide things and lie to others; especially those he loves. He is a wonderful ear to talk to, silently listening and not voicing much in that regard. However, this gives him a chance to listen to both sides of a situation and make comments based on those two sides. It creates a good delegate in the way of verbal demands. If he wasn't so soft-spoken, people would learn that his communication skills are quite adept. He has a wonderful sense of humor, though little pranks and the like are above him. He doesn't enjoy the uselessness of little things like pranks, even if they're in good humor. He is more interested in jokes and songs that have a sense of comedy to them. The only thing he lacks is confidence to show what he believes in. He would rather let others speak out than for him to speak out for fear he'll look like a fool. But commitment is one thing that he cannot help but feel through all things he does. He has a strong sense of the word and what it implies.
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                                          xxxxGundahar is a by the book kind of guy, everything must follow the set rules and guidelines of the weyr and life itself. You'll never find him skipping a chore or causing trouble for anyone. This can cause some to dislike him, to think of him as too uptight, and he takes those comments by turning the other cheek, not letting them get to him and make him angry; this only furthers the accusations of course. But he cannot help but be a by the book guy, after all, when you're uptight and follow the rules, good things come your way.

                                          S T R E N G T H S . »
                                          xxxxxxxxxxPatience. Although young, Gundahar has shown a natural patience that his mother has instilled within him. He knows his time will come and this lends a hand to his acceptance of things.
                                          xxxxxxxxxxCompassion. This young boy is compassionate about all sentient forms of life, especially dragons and their riders. He craves to be like them, though knows he needs to wait. He enjoys caring for these beautiful creatures and this has led his grandmother to show him her healer craft.
                                          xxxxxxxxxxRespectful. The boy knows his place, he will not speak out against someone who is superior to himself, nor to those inferior to him. He understands the necessity for silence and knows when it is time to speak. Being raised by his grandparents he has been taught that children are meant to be seen but not always heard, and he holds that to heart.

                                          W E A K N E S S E S . »
                                          xxxxxxxxxxNaive. He has some naive qualities to him, expecting the world to be a wonderful place when in reality is not. He appreciates life around him, but this does not always mean that he understands everything. There is still much to learn for this young boy.
                                          xxxxxxxxxxSoft-Spoken. Due to his upbringing, he has a tendency to bite his tongue, even when it is the perfect time to speak. He has his opinions like everyone else, but he doesn't know how to speak about them in the right way. But do not twist this, it is not out of meekness, just his over abundance of respect.
                                          xxxxxxxxxxGangly. His body type, being as gangly as it is now, is a bit hard. It does not allow him to do some of the things he wishes he could do, like climbing some of the trees around the holds. But he still refuses to give in.

                                          H I S T O R Y . »
                                          xxxxBefore the death of his father, Gundahar lived in Eron Hold with his father, his mother would visit in the evenings but return to Trine after this in order to be close at hand. After his death, the youngster moved to Trine and Ash'r requested her parents, both of whom were retired riders, to help care for Gundahar so she would not be worrying over him. During an episode of longing five turns ago, Gundahar's grandfather flew out on his dragon and wound up getting stuck in the thread that had fallen. Upon losing his dragon, his grandfather went temporarily unstable and lost control of himself, only thanks to Gundahar's grandmother's healing training, was his grandfather saved.
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                                          xxxxAfter her father's near fatal loss of control, Ash'r threw her son into every aspect of weyr life, trying to get him to spend less time with his grandparents then he had been. Although, due to her busy schedule she had a hard time keeping track of him when he wasn't at home, and this caused some unsettled feelings within their house. Deciding to re-create the peace, Gundahar's mother allowed Gundahar to spend more time with his grandmother, who became a role model to the young boy. Although weyr kids who wish to stand do not start an apprenticeship, his grandmother wanted to teach him her craft either way; and thus began to show him little tricks. He loved healing! But, the rider blood that flowed through his veins caused him to crave dragon riding that much more.
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                                          xxxxUpon turning twelve, the boy was overcome with happiness, he wanted more then anything to stand and attend a hatching. So when he requested to his mother to stand, she was overjoyed and agreed; ensuring he'd be able to stand when he desired. Now the only thing left for him to do was attend the classes. Growing up around dragons he found the classes to be repetitive, history lessons and the like began to bore him after spending countless time with his grandparents. But, like a good boy, he didn't skip out on his lessons or chores, taking them by stride. But there's always that part of him that would rather be up high.
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                                          xxxxWhen the revolution happened it brought many refugees to the Trine Weyr. Although it did not effect him quite the same as it effected others, Gundahar felt the agony of the refugees, he made it a point to try to talk to some, try to see what they were feeling, his empathetic nature succumbing him to want to listen to their story.

                                          A D D I T I O N A L . »
                                          xxxxDreams. to become a rider and get to a high rank, even.
                                          xxxxFears. failing his family and never impressing.

                                          P E R S O N A L . »
                                          Mother • Ash'r » a bonded dragon rider to blue Kronith. Both are fictional and made up NPC characters for Gundahar's past. Previously Ashaire, she is roughly forty turns, her weyrmate Danir was among the fisherman craft before he passed. Her mother Gra'di is a green rider, her father K'lin was once a blue rider, his dragon died during an accident during the last thread fall.
                                          Father • Danir » a member of the fisher craft, died at the age of thirty-two. Was the weyrmate of rider Ash'r. Father of Gundahar.
                                          Brothers • none.
                                          Sisters • none.


PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 6:06 pm


TawnyAngel


Mind taking a look and voicing comments on my newest character Idea?

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 10:04 am


Hi! You've got a great start here but there are a few point to address before I can approve him.

Personality: Could you highlight more of a character flaw in him? Not so much a weakness as a trait about him that other people could potentially dislike, nobody's perfect!

History: If Gundahar lived with his grandparents he would have lived at Trine Weyr, retired riders still remain there! It's very unusual for riders to live elsewhere simply due to the expense of keeping them for one and also as most miss the company of their own kind horribly.

Please note that the first threadfall was only five turns ago so depending on the age of his grandparents they might already have been retired from active service by then.

There aren't any lessons about dragons at Eron Hold, and again if his mother was a rider she would live at Trine Weyr; riders and their children always do unless there's a very good reason why not, for example a child with one rider parent and one holder parent could end up living in a hold.

If Gundahar was a Weyrbrat - living in Trine - he wouldn't have been able to enter a formal apprenticeship if he ever intended to Stand, the Masters wouldn't want to invest energy in teaching somebody who would just end up leaving the craft when they turned twelve. While the wherholds allow candidates to keep studying a craft Weyrs do not; they have to give themselves over to candidate classes and menial chores for the Weyr, this is intended to teach them humility and so on as well as swelling the Weyr's workforce.

The revolution had no effect on Trine's hatching of atypical eggs, they already did that along with Malvren. The revolution was about wherhandlers and other non riders taking power and breaking down the old system of 'golds and bronzes rule, the rest of you may wave and cheer' as it were XD It did lead to Trine's population swelling with refugees from Malvren and Benden though and to the deaths of many riders and other folk at Trine Weyr so if this would have effected him at all please note how so.

If Gundahar is a Trine candidate he wouldn't have been able to be anywhere near Banshidheth's clutch, Trine and the Wherholds are mortal enemies!


Thanks! I look forward to seeing Gundahar around =D
PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 5:59 pm


TawnyAngel


Okay, I added that he is uptight, follow the book sort of person. In my opinion that is the worst trait for anyone to have; it's annoying and makes me shudder, which is why I can play it well. Does that work as far as a highlight flaw?

And edited the complete history cause I wasn't sure how to work around it, so hopefully that works better. I know you said that children don't normally go into apprenticeships if they're going to stand, so I edited it slightly so that his grandmother didn't take him into an apprenticeship, but she did show him her craft. 'Cause that's what my grandmother is like.

As far as the craft and rank at the top; I do want him to one day go into healing so I will leave those as they are, he'll go from a weyrbrat candidate into a weyr healer at some point, is that okay?

Any other comments/concerns?

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 10:48 am


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Hey, thanks for that! Personality looks great now.

The only point left on the history is that riders really do have to live at the Weyr, not commute as they have to be on hand to scramble in a crisis. She could visit her family at the Hold every day after her work however and pretty much just return to the Weyr to sleep if that's any good to you!


The rest is fine, however as for the rank thing if he does Impress he will not be able to become a healer formally. He can learn some more tricks and first aid training and so on but during a Pass Trine - and most Weyrs - won't let their riders take the time off to study a craft, they want them focused on their duty to defend Pern. If he or his dragon were crippled he could go into healing instead, and if he Impressed a crimson who chose to breed then he could probably fight his way into it through an IC mini quest type thing, but those are the only exceptions I can think of off the top of my head I'm afraid. As I say however he can certainly pick up more skills and in time with IC effort he could become something of a first responder for his wing, keeping people alive until they can be got to an infirmary.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 04, 2014 3:15 pm


TawnyAngel


Let's try again <3

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 29, 2014 3:39 pm


TawnyAngel


Just a friendly reminder!
PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:49 pm


So sorry for the delay! Approved!

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