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PostPosted: Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:51 pm


Name: Maxine Rutger

Nickname: Maxie, sometimes Max

Age: 15

Birthday: November 7th

Sign: Scorpio

Gemstone: Topaz

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Anything quick and crunchy. Dry cereal is a favorite, as is trail mix.

Hated Food: Soup. It's just so boring...

School: St. Magdalena's Seminary

Hobbies:

Menial Tasks - Curiously, for all her issues with authority and control, Maxine doesn't mind doing busy work so much. While she's not always neat, she is quite thorough when she does clean up and doesn't even complain about the work, a phenomenon that bewilders just about everyone at St. Mags. Though she's not quite as strong as she thinks she is, she's more than happy to help move things from place to place. The little tasks keep her occupied and help her take her mind off anything troubling that might have slipped past her thick mental barriers.

Cooking - It may seem like an oddly domestic hobby for a rough girl like Maxine, but she is enjoying learning how to cook and is extremely exacting when it comes to following recipes. She won't even leave the kitchen while the timer is running in order to ensure that everything comes out absolutely perfect. Distract her when the egg timer is running at your own risk.

Thrill-seeking: Maxine loves anything that will get her blood pumping. Roller coasters, loud concerts, flirtations with danger... if it results in an adrenaline rush, she's going to seek it out. She wants to go bungee jumping someday.

Virtues:

Comedic - When Maxine manages to not offend everyone in the room, she can actually be remarkably funny. She has an excellent sense of comedic timing and a working knowledge of how to build a refreshing punchline. It's entirely possible that she's a budding satirist under all the crudity and button-pushing.

Zealous - When Maxine finds a cause she agrees with, she will rally behind it 100%. She'll devote as much energy as she can to supporting it in whatever ways she can think of. Once she gets started on something, it is very, very hard to shake her off. She'll throw herself at a task over and over until it gets done and until she gets the results she wants. She'll attend meetings, prepare advertisements, even preach the tenets of the cause to anyone who'll listen (but you can bet she'll have choice words for those who won't). If she likes you, she will stand by you through thick and thin... or at least, till you do something unforgivable that makes her want to ditch your cause and you.

Brave - Sometimes it seems that Maxine knows no fear, and in most cases that's true. She seems to possess a special type of courage (or, depending on how you look at it, recklessness) that allows her to plunge forward with no restraints. What may give others pause is an invitation to charge straight ahead for her.

Flaws:

Angry - Maxine is angry. So, so, SO angry. She has a hair-trigger temper and jumps into fight-or-flight mode at the drop of a hat. The chip on her shoulder is massive and ancient, and every grudge she finds to hold just adds to it like a horrible ball of bitterness. It's very easy to get her mad at you, even over trivial things. Even if she likes you she'll abuse you every once in a while.

Vulgar - Decorum? Manners? Polite language? Who needs those? Maxine is brutally crude, letting the f- and s-bombs fly left and right. Her sense of humor is also kind of gross (a certain joke about the unfortunate fate of a promiscuous amputee girl is a favorite of hers- if you don't know the full text, good). It doesn't help that if she thinks it, she's gonna say it. It doesn't matter how inappropriate the joke is or how many people she's going to offend. Heck, she takes a certain delight in offending entire groups of people. While sometimes she'll hit upon a sentiment that everyone agrees with but never voiced for courtesy reasons, most of the time what she has to say is just a salvo of bitter nastiness or is horribly unfitting for the situation.

Violent - Maxine has been socking people for perceived slights as long as she can remember. She has zero qualms about slapping people for acting in ways she disapproves, or even for the sake of what she thinks would be a slapstick comedy-style situation. Smacking sense into someone is always the way to go for her. Always. If her fists or a solid bout of hollering doesn't fix the situation, she'll get stuck.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Red, childishly big.

Hair: Dark reddish brown- a red-red, not ginger/orange red. It's in a shortish bob with bangs.

Face: Heart-shaped face; her face in general seems kind of bright-eyed and expressive. Her smile is a bit diabolical, though...

Clothes: N/A
PostPosted: Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:54 pm


Senshi: Sailor Kajam, Senshi of Rage

Challenge: [This challenge has been deemed inappropriate for pretty much everyone. Please stand by.] / Savage? I think you mean senshi. [I'd really like the first one but if it doesn't fit I'll use the second one]

Fuku Colour: ONLY IF SENSHI OR KNIGHT. Main and secondary. Give us a hex if you'd like. The bodices of senshi will always be white, except for in the case of Dark Mirror or Corrupted Senshi-- those will be black.
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: Orange
Bodice is white.

Fuku: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR SENSHI, FEMALE AND MALE -- YOU DON'T HAVE TO HAVE THESE, JUST THINK ABOUT THEM

Collar -- A sailor-style collar with some sharp-looking edges on it.
Bow -- A simple, small chest bow. The butt bow is larger and has similar sharp edges to the collar.
Bodice -- A standard bodice that's torn-up looking and a bit low-cut (not too much so- not like she really has much going on up there, though).
Sleeves -- No sleeves.
Brooch -- Shaped like a cross- like, the anime anger vein-pop cross.
Bottoms -- A suspiciously short, torn-up-looking skirt that, to the relief of everyone involved, comes with what appear to be bike shorts.
Tiara -- A jagged tiara with the cross-shape from the brooch in the center.
Choker -- A jagged-looking choker.
Shoes -- Boots with very sharp-looking heels. Bonus points if something like reinforcing on the toes is allowed.
Gloves -- Simple red gloves.
Accessories -- No clue.

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Seeing Red!
Clenching one fist, Kajam calls out the name of her attack. Her fist glows red, and she can choose to either use the attack's effect on herself or one other person. The target will receive a small boost to their physical attack strength, at the cost of a distinct irritable feeling. The buff lasts for 30 seconds and can be used 3 times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Blinding Rage!
Raising one open hand, Kajam calls out the name of the attack. There is a bright red flash, and all allies in a 6-foot area around her receive a decent boost to physical attack strength, along with a potent feeling of irritation or anger. The buff only applies to allies that were in the range when the attack was activated, not anyone who enters the area later. The buff lasts for 30 seconds and can be used twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Infernal Wrath!
Clenching both fists, Kajam calls out the attack name. A powerful sensation of rage fills her, and she will charge straight forward and attack anything that gets in her way with powerfully enhanced punches and kicks. While she won't be breaking any bones, she will most likely inflict some nasty bruises. She will not be able to discriminate between enemy and ally in this state. Touching her will automatically result in drawing her aggro. The berserker state lasts for 35 seconds and can only be used once per battle.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 3:29 pm


Sami-Fire


Hey Sami! Just a few things --

I feel like "Vulgar" and "No Filter" kind of run together, for me, since they're both all about Maxine being horribly socially inappropriate? Similarly "Zealous" and "Determined" -- while they focus on different things, I feel like in both cases it's two traits saying, in essence, the same stuff about Maxine. By wrapping them together, you'd still have three of each, and you'd avoid the redundancy issue!

For her powered side, to clarify, when you say "attack strength", you mean a physical boost, yes? (Since "attacks" can also be magical!)

Also, I think a ten-foot radius and 40 seconds for an attack that makes people angry and boosts their physical strength is a bit much at Super, so perhaps 6 feet and 30 seconds instead?

For her Eternal, I think 45 seconds is quite a long duration for a powerful violent berserker state and 35 or so might be better (think of the damage she could inflict!); also, how powerful are these enhancements? She shouldn't be capable of breaking bones with a single hit, for instance (particularly since a broken bone in the right place can be very rapidly deadly!)

You know how the dance goes QUOTE ME WHEN YOU'VE MADE CHANGES AND STUFF~~
PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2015 11:05 pm


500 years later, I made fixes. =w= Collapsed the redundant traits for her civ side. Also made power adjustments and clarifications to the powered attacks. How does it look now?

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 1:30 pm


Sami-Fire


Much better! /slaps a stamp on it

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 9:27 pm


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Looks good!

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