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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2014 1:13 am


User ImageName: Callum Aherne

Nickname: Cal, Callie(his sister, whyyyy), Spagetti legs(WHYYYY)

Age: 19.

Birthday: January 17th.

Sign: Capricorn.

Gemstone: Garnet.

Blood Type: B.

Fav. Food: Mostly natural food, like fruits and vegetables.

Hated Food: Processed food makes him gag. It just tastes like plastic to him.

School: Sovereign Heights Prep School.

Hobbies: Gardening and Flower Arrangement: Living around plants and flowers for most of his life affected him greatly, giving him a deep appreciation for flowers— mainly the types of flowers he grew when he still lived on the farm: Lilies, tulips, violets... He loves to arrange flowers, and now that he lives in a city, it's harder for him to find the time to spend time on his ideas. His apartment is covered in flowers, and he wakes up early to water them all and pluck out any weeds that may grow. He sometimes misses the first period of class because he gets too carried away arranging and fixing his flowers to perfection.

Acting: Callum loves to act. To stand on stage and slip into someone else's shoes for a period of time— now that is true bliss. In his old school, he would spend most of his time in the drama club, however small it was. Acting was his passion, and reciting scripts was what he lived for. He was still average at it, as the program in the more rural parts of the country wasn't amazing, but he is trying his best at it and is getting better and better by the day.

Spoken-word poetry: Over the years, this green-haired perfectionist felt as if his world was caving in. After moving in and stumbling accidentally into a poetry club in Destiny City, he felt as if his world was opened up-- as if he could finally breathe. His passion, his feelings... Maybe it was just spur of the moment, but when he heard others recite spoken-word poetry, it gave him shivers. He tried once himself, and felt a large load slide off his shoulders... He feels as if the only way he can express himself truely-- the only way he felt like he had a voice in the world was by creating poems and putting his heart and soul into them. His family would ridicule him, yes, but Callum didn't mind.

Virtues:

hardworking: When Callum works on something, he has to make it so that it reaches its full potential, the best it can ever be. Be it homework, project, or even person— it doesn't matter. He presses himself to do it and constantly reminds himself that if he worked a little bit harder on it, it'd be even better. For a project, any project, he is diligent and straightforward, trying to give it his best as well and pours over the information or acting as much as he can. The harder it is, the more passion and he puts into it, which is often the reason why he, as his classmates have said, becomes the characters. It's something he's quite proud of. He pours over details in his work, and catches mistakes quite easily by reading it aloud and trying to make it sound better. He is the type of person to make someone wait for a better idea than give them the average one he had. People constantly ask him for help and/or try to copy his homework, to which he feels flattered-- albeit used. He enjoys working with others who are willing to help.

Good leader: Callum believes in teamwork. If he gets paired with another person, you better believe he will give it his all. If you need his help with something, he will immediately help and try his hardest to make this a joint effort, without him doing all the work or his partners doing more work than he. He spends time organizing all the information and gives himself and the others each an equal piece. He hates getting paired up with people who do no work, though, and will do none if his partner isn't willing to help out. If you don't understand something, he will take a moment and explain it to you in detail, explaining the steps over and over again, willing to go over it again if you didn't understand the first time. Although he detests when people speak out of turn, he likes hearing the opinion of others and tries to find a balance between the team. When another person has an idea that requires their being in charge, Callum will step down, albeit reluctantly.

Outgoing doesn't really read like outgoing. An outgoing person is usually very bubbly and friendly all the time, usually the first person in the room to speak, easy going, fun loving, very socially confident and extroverted.

pragmatic: When it comes to meeting people and talking to them, he always takes the initiative and pushes himself out there to interact with others. Sure, he's stuck up to those he doesn't know and clingy to those he's friends with, but when he's confronted with a situation where he needs to work together with another, Callum will swallow his pride and look for the best and easiest route to get there when can be found. While the greenhaired drama queen is normally permanently cranky, he will occasionally make interjections to stay friendly with his drama club "siblings". He is willing to cooperate enough to keep everything friendly between them. He doesn't like tension, and ironically enough, doesn't like drama between a group. He tends to over-hype the drama if it does come between a group, and takes these types of situations fairly seriously.

Flaws: over-dramatic: Sometimes, Callum can be... A little over-dramatic. Okay, well, maybe a lot. He freaks out over the small things and screams in agony over a paper cut. People often get annoyed by this, but really, it's unintentional— he comes from a family that overreacts to many situations, such as what to eat for dinner or where to sit on the couch... It's just in his nature. When a sudden reveal is said in a movie, he will GAASSSSP and/or grab onto someone's hand excitedly. Horror films make him scream. Sad movies make him sob like crazy... These reactions often make people angry and often times, his reactions get him thrown out of the theater. If someone offended him, he would take it directly to heart, being a very sensitive person. If he made someone he cares about angry with him, he would beg for their forgiveness and cling to them like crazy. His only want would be to get his friend back. He isn't afraid to cause a scene for something trivial! Often times, these reactions make others think he's not being serious about it, but it's hard to get Callum to really be serious about something unless it has to do with acting.

dependent: When it comes to doing things, Callum has always had help from his family or friends. It's not surprising to see him clinging to another person (intentionally or not) when he needs help with something or just to guide him to the next path/part. He will constantly ask others opinions and want to build off of another persons work to make his own better. He feels that without the wise eye of another, he'd mess something up, do something wrong, end up destroying the whole piece. He's insecure about his work, and it's hard for him to work on something without asking for help or the opinion of another. This extends to any of his creations, including his outfits, his homework, his screenplays, the way he acts characters out, etc.

hard time prioritizing: He is very scatterbrained, sometimes having many ideas at once and unable to keep them organized. He takes it upon himself to do everything at once, which is a very big problem especially when paired with his perfectionism— he wants the things to turn out well, but doesn't know what to start with or even work on! There's too much to do. And did you see that card? Oh, it gave him another idea. He is imaginative but doesn't know how to organize his thoughts or to keep his attention on it. He jumps from idea to idea, and every time he wants to make time for one, another comes up, making time management hard. If it's not interesting or attention grabbing, he tends to forget about it— small details often get unintentionally overlooked.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Appearance: Forest green, lightly curled hair, with amber gold eyes and pale white skin. He is fairly tall, reaching the height of 6'1, inheriting his mother's height but his father's gangly body. Thankfully his upper torso was more filled out. He's trying to eat more, but eeeeeh...

Clothes: He wears lots of patterned, pleasant-to-the-eye clothes, things he feels comfortable in but still look nice on him. Things with collars, vests, different colored pants... Although, most of the time, he wears form fitting shirts and formal clothes. He enjoys to wear colors, but nothing too bright, maybe like dark purple shirts or etc.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:02 am


-reserving this for Callie's sailor slot for later in life-

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:04 am


annnnnddd open for crits!!! so far I'm only looking for civ. acceptance, as I'm looking for him to get into the powered forms later in life. aalllllso, kinda trying to fix some stuff up for him with that, heh....;;
PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 2:19 pm


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Hey Quite,

Kao here to do you crit and get you boy accepted. Let's jumps right into it.

His hobbies look fine to me.

For his virtues, you need to expand them a bit and basically give small explanation and/or examples to show how the virtue will make people like and wish to befriend him. Reliable is reading more like a flaw at the current moment, it talks to much about how he isnt timely with it. Stepping into another shoes doesnt seems like your trying to say he's compassionate. Does he try to give people the benefit of the doubt, help people when their in a bind or feeling down?

For his flaws, constricted is a little oddly worded, but I think your trying to say he's emotionally withdrawn. You need a little more expansion here to show how it affects him and why it would keep someone from liking him. Like, does it make it hard for him to make friends? Does it make him seem more unapproachable? Harder to read? For unpunctual how does that affect him because being a perfectionist who is okay with turning thing in late doesn't seem like a perfectionist and I imagine constantly being late for someone who wants everything to always be perfect is a big thing. A little expansion is needed on dependent, again some examples how it would make someone dislike him.

I'm afraid, you will not be able to use OCD. Mental disorders are not allowed to be used as flaws. I can, however suggest, toning it down and making it a flipside to perfectionist.

Quote me back when you are ready for another look through! Aim (Shizu6616) or pm me if you have any question.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 9:12 am


Kaori_luv

heyo!! i am SO SORRY IT TOOK ME AGES TO GET BACK TO YOU. sweatdrop I've been working on him on and off and i only recently got some good inspiration for him! i remade him quite a bit! if that offer for quoting for another look-through still stands, i'd love for you to do so!
i am so sorry V__V callie is a bum to work on OTL ;;

edit: JUST IN CASE im gonna post him in the crit thread!! ^^!!
PostPosted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 1:37 pm


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Kaori_luv

heyo!! i am SO SORRY IT TOOK ME AGES TO GET BACK TO YOU. sweatdrop I've been working on him on and off and i only recently got some good inspiration for him! i remade him quite a bit! if that offer for quoting for another look-through still stands, i'd love for you to do so!
i am so sorry V__V callie is a bum to work on OTL ;;

edit: JUST IN CASE im gonna post him in the crit thread!! ^^!!


Do not repost him, i will look at him as along with the other's i have to look at later.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 23, 2014 1:40 pm


Kaori_luv

oh! okay, im sorry! take as long as you need, super huge sorries on my part ^^;;
PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2015 7:42 pm


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Hey, Kao here. Sorry this took a bit of time for me to get back to. Let's get started shall we.

Your boys hobbies look fine, I only have one this to say about his gardening and flower arrangement hobby and that is that Destiny City has lots of flower and he probably wouldn't have trouble finding rare colors at all.

Virtues:

Perfectionist is reading more like he is hardworking than a perfectionist, like he puts a lot a effort into the things he does, more so than works toward making it perfect. Does is pay extra attention to detail? Is he could at catching mistakes? Good at revisions? Willing to make last minute changes so things are just right? Do people always want to work with him on homework? Like to copy his notes? Want to be his study partner?

Cooperative is reading more like he is good a leader, so to speak, good at taking charge and making things happen as opposed to working well with other's or in a team. Does he take direction well? Is he willing to let other's lead and he follow? Take in all opinions and let everyone have an equal say?

Outgoing doesn't really read like outgoing. An outgoing person is usually very bubbly and friendly all the time, usually the first person in the room to speak, easy going, fun loving, very socially confident and extroverted.

Flaws:

For overdramatic, it looks good, but I would like to know how he is with emotional dramatics. Like if he were to get his feeling hurt by a friend, or if he hurt someone or made them angry with him. How would he handle it? Does he often cause a scene? I could see this, from what you have described in the flaw.

For dependent, it currently clashes with the way cooperative is written because it makes he seem like a very take charge individual and his perfectionist virtue. I think that it could tie into his perfectionist virtue if you swing it the write way. Like if he was constantly asking other's opinions, want to know how someone else did and trying to make his better and revising and fixing things to make sure he got everything he need and more. Does that make sense? The dependent thing could tie into cooperative virtue as well.

Unfocused as written clashes a bit with what you have written for perfectionist and cooperative. I'm not sure unfocused is exactly the right word at the moment. Its seems like your trying to say he has a hard time prioritizing, so he'll start many things at once, but can't focus on everything at once and is trying to make everything perfect? He misses things and then has to go back and fix things a lot, so it take him longer to get them done? He hops around and is constantly working on a million different things, making time management hard? Is that what you are going for?

Quote me back when you are ready for another look.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2016 7:19 pm


Kaori_luv


HI IM A TERRIBLE, SLOW PERSON AND I AM SORRY I TOOK ALMOST 2 YEARS FOR THIS A H A H A SWEATS HARD
i've!!! addressed your crits, i'm really sorry i disappeared for so long but yes!! i've also put the edits in red for easy findings
thank you so much for this!! and im once more very sorry for poofing for so long ;;
PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2016 10:43 am


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Hey, there!

This profile looks good to me; everything seems well thought out and ready to go! Have fun!


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