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USERNAME: Haunting Lights
CHARACTERS INVOLVED: Molan Miasama, Popo
SUMMARY: A fearful tale about some of the coldest meanest halloweeners around and their fight with a fiery queen.
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Once there was a fox demon named Molan. He was Cold and terrible and picked on small fire imps for pleasure. One day he wrapped a fire imp in a cold blanket of ice. But this was not just any fire imp, was friends with the beautiful and powerful queen of imps named Popo. She was strong and powerful and full of flame and rightful furry. She found her friend in the cold unnatural blanket of frost and nursed the poor imp back into good health. The imp, though tiny, was a favorite because it could dance and sing and cast all manner of small illusions to entertain her. The imp told the queen about the Fox demon’s misdoings and she locked him into a tower. With Boling lava. And an angry dragon monster to guard him. This dragon was full of terrible acid that every time Molan tried to escape his cloths would all be ruined and he was half to go running inside the tower half naked.

One day an annoying ghoul rode along and heard a desperate plea for help. Her servant flew up to the tower and found Molan the terrible there. Sobbing, Molan told the small servant about the strong and powerful queen and the dragon that guarded the gate. He offered the butterfly’s master Jewelry and cloths a plenty if she would only help him escape the queen’s clutches.

The servant flew back and told the ghoul, who’s name might have been Crimson or Miasma, or something like that, and the ghoul thought over the offer. You see she was not just any ghoul, she was the most wretched of ghouls, who’s very voice could break a hundred glasses. Her image would immediately crack any mirror. But she liked pretty things, like jewelry and cloths and she thought they would make her look nice or some such.

So She marched up to the tower, only to come face to face with the monstrous dragon. The dragon reared up and spit there terrible acid on her cloths.

“Hey! I just bought that!” she gave a terrible screeching yell and the monster flew away with a cry. Her voice had shattered its eardrums and once the veil that had covered her face had been removed it caught sight of her and was blinded instantly. The Dragon did not get far and flew into the tower knocking a big hole into it. Blind and deaf it cried out and buried itself into the lava.

Molan seeing his chance escaped with a blanket covering the tatters that were his cloths. He lead his savior back to his palace in the deepest, darkest, coldest part of the frozen lands one could find, where they later got married and had a dozen scarlings. Be warned if you wander far into the frozen lands at night, they will be there and they will find you. Keep your lights low for if you see their childen’s faces, you will be forever frozen in their territory.

The end.

USERNAME: flappybird333
REVIEW HERE: Oh no that poor dragon!! o n o

USERNAME: ForDaLoveOfFluff4
REVIEW HERE: This leaves me feeling ...ttly confused. ; ~ ; I feel sorry for the fox demon, but how did he run out naked and then was locked in the tower? Or is it like he only didn't escape cos he was afraid people would see him naked!? WAS he ttly ugly, like is that why his kids faces freeze people, cos that'd be really cool to add!

But. Um. Yay...happy ending?

USERNAME: AllHelBrokeLoose
REVIEW HERE: This is one of the best stories ever because the ghoul was the hero and victor AND she got married!

Also some details about Molan's abs would have been good. Hopefully Crimson / Miasma can wash laundry off of them.