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Name: Luca Krantz

Nickname: Lu, sometimes Lulu.

Age: 16

Birthday: April 15th

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Diamond

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: Anything spicy! Or chocolate.

Hated Food: Vegetables other than carrots. They're bitter.

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:

Singing/Music- Luca loves to sing and listen to music, to the point that she will often sing to calm herself down... or just for no reason at all. Songs are a sort of basic emanation from her. She is part of Meadowview's choir, and her voice is good enough to get her a solo every now and then.

Plushie Collecting- Luca looooooooves soft, cute, fuzzy things. Always has and probably always will. The edge of her bed and the numerous shelves in her room are loaded with plushies of all sorts, and in pictures of her as a child, she is always carrying some sort of stuffed animal. She also likes to commission custom plushies based on characters from shows or games she likes.

Physical Activity- Luca enjoys her physical activities. She regularly attends kickboxing classes and goes for runs. She says she thinks best when running. Her kickboxing classes involve groups, and she enjoys the company of her fellow kickboxing students. However, she prefers to run alone to clear her mind and think in peace. (It also prevents her from accidentally running into someone should she get really wrapped up in her thoughts.)

Creative Endeavors/Brainstorming- Luca knows she's not the best writer or artist, but when she gets concepts in her head, she gets very excited about them and will rattle them off to anyone willing to listen. Of course, not being the best writer or artist doesn't stop her from trying to do those activities anyway; she's steadily trying to improve her writing, but she generally leaves finished art to other people after she does the concept sketches.

Virtues:

Passionate- When Luca gets into something, she gets really into it. She'll devote herself to whatever her new passion is as much as she can, and she'll try to get others into it as well. She may sometimes get so wrapped up in something that she'll alter her priorities or overcommit to it, but generally, if she can't do it at the time, she'll settle for babbling about it to others.

Energetic- Luca is just about tireless. She is always bustling from activity to activity and rarely feels exhausted. It could be said that sometimes, she runs off pure vigor. (Of course, sleep deprivation will hit her like it will hit anyone else, but other than that it seems like she can keep going and going.)

Confident- Luca does not often second-guess herself. She makes her declarations firmly and proudly (and sometimes, without her realizing it, in error) and will saunter right ahead into challenges. She's not quite arrogant, as she does have a decent appraisal of her limits, but Luca does carry a lot of confidence around with her.

Flaws:

Rash- Sometimes, Luca just doesn't think before she acts. She'll dash into action before whatever has happened (be it a physical or emotional event) has had time to sink in and be processed. This tendency results in Luca doing a lot of things she later regrets. She's gotten in trouble on multiple occasions for just smacking people who are misbehaving.

Resentful- Luca would be lying if she said she didn't hold grudges. She remembers what people have done to her for a very, very long time. She might act as though she has forgiven you... but she remembers, and she probably is still bitter over whatever happened. When alone with a friend, she may still talk about bygone wrongs and how mad she still is about the person who did them to her, and sometimes her bitterness slips out in the form of bluntness or coldness. Generally, however, she strives to hide it (not always effectively).

Ruminating- If something troubles Luca or she's made a critical error, she will dwell on it for a long, long time and refuse to let it go. She's the kind of person to stay depressed over a mistake for a long period of time, even after she has been forgiven, because "it was so stupid."

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Luca's eyes are somewhat narrow and dark blue.

Hair:

Luca's hair is long and ginger orange, and she typically keeps it up in a ponytail. She just uses plain rubber bands- no fancy bows or anything like that.

Face:

Her face is (probably?) heart-shaped, starting wide and than narrowing down towards the chin. She has a scar running diagonally across her nose from a mysterious accident; it's angled so that the right (that is, the left when she's facing us) end is slightly more elevated than the left end, but the angle isn't very steep. (As a side note, she has other scars from this accident on her body, but that's probably not relevant right now.) Her skin is rather fair, but not... like... WHITE pale. Fair but averagely so, you could say.

Clothes: N/A, since she's not an adult/DCU student.

Hey Sami! Congrats on your contest win! Just a few things and then Luca will be all ready to go~

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:

For her "Physical Activity" hobby, does Luca generally run alone or with others? You mention kickboxing classes which I'm assuming are a group setting -- is that the case?

For her "Brainstorming" hobby, does she just come up with things and share them, or does she do anything with them herself? You say she's not the best at writing and drawing, but she could still scribble down her ideas somewhere!

Right now her "Resentful" flaw seems primarily internalized - are there any ways it does bubble out? Flaws are generally things people dislike her for, so there sohuld be some way it shows so they can dislike it!

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

First, Megrez should not be summoning up actual eggs - instead they would be magical ones whose residue lingers for a set amount of time. Also, five uses of an attack is excessive - I'd cap it at three, maximum, for both Regular and Super.

Thereby, there needs to be a time limit for how long the egg goop and residue hangs around for each attack, and there should be a set time delay (so not ten to fifteen, either ten or fifteen seconds or somewhere in between) and radius for her Eternal attack!

Quote me if you have any questions or once you've made changes, and I'll be back to give her another look!

You won't need to repost, I am your official critter until I trial stamp you and boot you to the GMs |D

Just a few more tweaks to her attacks! First, the times are really, really short - like, below even a chibi |D I'd say you could easily do 25 for Basic, 30 for super, and 40 for Eternla? However, her Eternal radius should be more like 8-ish feet, especially since it does damage to a degree.

Just small stuff and I'll be ready to give it a stamp<3

Looks good to me~



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