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 Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 9:23 am
xx A D V E N T ҉ C H R O N I C L E S __________________________________________________________ .. " One will never know their true self until they first face their own fears" ╔═══════ x ═══════╗ -- Raiku Oshiro -- ╚═══════ x ═══════╝ 
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Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:37 pm
xx Raiku Oshiro
The only Injustice i see in the world is equality and respect for others, it was because of that very same problem I left the 14 court guard squads
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Basic Criteria
Name | Raiku Oshiro
Alias| none
Gender | Male
Race | Shinigami
Affiliations | 14 Court Guard squads, Rogues
Rank Held | Former Lieutenant of squad 3
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Numerical Files
Birth Date | 12/07/1425
Astronomical Sign | Cancer
Age | Shinigami Age Here 884
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Physical Attributes
Blood Type |
Height| 6 feet
Weight | 10 stone 3 pounds
Ethnicity | white
Eye Color | blue
Physical Description| He has a black spiral tattoo on his right forearm and a small scar on his right bicep
Wardrobe |
A black torn cloak with a hood, the inside is lined with purple
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Personal Attributes
Quirks
Raiku likes to treat everyone as equals as best he can. He likes to keep the peace and hated arguments. He will greet strangers in the streets as if they were good friends and will always help out. Because of this trait, he will fight fairly until the end and will never kill an enemy without a good reason.
He still respects the thirteen court guards enough that he will kill anyone who will bad-mouth it's name or even mock any member.
Favors |
He likes to read love novels in his spare time and when he is looking for inspiration
Communication with his Zanpakuto as much as he can, it was because of this that he has mastered his Shikai and bankai so well.
Spring time
Partying with friends
Sleeping in his own bed
Speed training
Chilling out when possible
Talking to subordinates as equals
Peace
Disdains |
Bullies
Dying
Being slower than his opponent
Winter
An early morning start
Preference of Food |
Green curry
Freshly baked bread
Fruit in general
Beef Ramen
Rice balls
Disliked Foods |
Sea food
Broccoli
Processed foods
Tofu
Preference of Drink |
Literally any liquid, he is not fussy when it comes to drinks and will not mind an alcoholic beverage
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Something Unknown
Fears |
Spiders
The downfall of the soul society
Old age
Death
Unknown danger
The head captains powers
Aspirations |
To marry a lovely woman who knows how to cook and who can look after herself
To have a child he can be proud of
To be admired by others and to be respected
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Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:56 pm
xxTo climb the mountain of dreams
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I knew I would have to become a soul reaper to find out who or what he truly was, It was my first step in awakening Chapter One The first step of awakening
Time Frame? 750 years ago
Back then, things were much more simple and we cared not for things like hollows. As you know, in reality it is never the case to which I found out the hard way
Have you ever had a dream that seemed almost impossible to attain? I have and this is my story, no I was not an orphan with conflicting emotions and I never had an eventful childhood. However there was one time I think you may find interesting to hear about. Take a seat, eat a cookie, snuggle up and hear about the time I was awakened.
I was merely a child with a loving mother and a supportive farther who both cared for me. I was the kid who liked to include others in my own adventures and games. We would go on adventures to the (pretend) seireite and fight the captains we all heard about. Back then, things were much more simple and we cared not for things like hollows. As you know, in reality it is never the case to which I found out the hard way. It was a sunny morning and spring had just arrived when I was on an adventure with some kids I met the other day. We had wandered into the wooded area which was the furthest I had ever gone. It was not long till a scum bag hollow had appeared while we were about to enter the palace of souls. Before I knew it, the snake-like hollow had ate 3 kids already and the others had run away, leaving me behind with a broken leg and bruised body. I knew it was the end for me, it had to since I was not powerful enough to kill the f$*ker and I was all alone.
At the last minute before it had struck did a black wave of energy hit it, it was shot from a hooded figure holding a pure black long sword with a purple fire coming of it. I never knew the man but I could tell what he was, a soul reaper with no uniform had come to save me and he was here to show me what I too could become. It did not take long for him to turn the hollow to ash, I watched in awe as he vanished into thin air multiple times while slashing at the beast. I was hurting all over and the pain was sharp like a dagger. He sheathed his blade after the massacre and slowly he walked up to me. I never saw his face,he said some words but they were muffled out. I only remember waking up in my bed a week later and a scar on my arm to remind me of reality and how cruel it could be. I knew I would have to become a soul reaper to find out who or what he truly was, It was my first step in awakening.
Chapter Two The good old days
Time Frame 221 years approx
It was the only injustice he saw, and he would put an end to it all.
Looking back on my time in the seireite, I consider myself to be lucky enough to have at least one good friend and partner, plus I liked to treat everyone as equals. It was something I kind of picked up over the years. When I first joined the squad, I was lonely and did not know anyone. It took a while but one member seemed to take a liking to me. That member is now the squad 3's captain, Yeon Gae. Me and him were really good friends, not only did he have a certain humble approach to life but our abilities worked in harmony. He would usually take the front with his shikai "Taika" and Raiku would always take the back with his own shikai. Wind compliments fire so it was natural that the two would team up and fly through the ranks together. Raiku knew the guy the most out of everyone and vice versa for Yeon. It was no until Raiku became a third seat and Yeon a lieutenant, did Raiku start to feel un-easy about the organisation. He noticed that while some smaller and more poor villages would come under attack by hollows with no help from the 14 court guard squads, and the richer villages would always receive help. It was not fair and Raiku started to plan a small campaign that would help the rest of the soul society. As you know, plans never go as one would expect them to. Central 46 caught on to Raiku's campaign shortly after he met with some of the other captains and banned him from continuing. Naturally this enraged Raiku, he swore that he would help those who were weak and weary. It was the only injustice he saw, and he would put an end to it all.
Chapter Three Good bye my friend
Time Frame 115 years
"Good bye my friend, may you excel as a soul reaper and your dreams come true,"
As the years went by, comrades started to either die or become promoted and they would ignore Raiku altogether. It pained Raiku that Yeon seemed sad yet he would never tell Raiku why, he would not tell anyone. For ten years, Raiku was reduced to training by himself and taking on missions without his partner. It was during those ten years that Raiku had managed to master his shikai, this was an amazing feat because he could even consider training to become a captain. Yeon did not tell Raiku that he had also been training by himself and he had gained the ability to perform Bankai. Soon after that, Yeon and Raiku became the captain and lieutenant of squad 3 and the duo were back together. The happiness was short lived however, the whole of squad 3 were sent on a mission to take on a notorious gang who were terrorizing villages. The order that made Raiku angry was to wait until the gang had finished with a village and to ambush them on the roads. Raiku begged Yeon to take the gang on in the village but the captains hands were tied and Raiku knew this. On the day of the mission, Lieutenant Raiku Oshiro enetered the captains office with a letter of termination. Few words were said, the only thing Raiku had to say was: "I know we spent years together, taking over squad 3. However the 14 court guard squads have been dismissing those who are weak and vunerable to hollows for far too long. I have a new mission to save them myself and you can not change my mind. I will miss you Yeon as you have been like a brother to me ever since I started here. Good bye my friend, may you excel as a soul reaper and your dreams come true,".
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Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 5:26 am
Kaze no karitori
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The scary thing about it is no one can see it coming...until it is too late
Zanpakutō Name | Kaze no karitori
English Translation | Wind reaper
Zanpakutō Element | air/wind
Zanpakutō Spirit |
Zanpakutō Inner World |
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Spirit Files
Zanpakutō Blade Type | Two short swords (like shinso) the short reach allows Raiku to perform high speed attacks.
Zanpakutō Accessories | A transparent crystal hanging from a short piece of string on both blades, these do nothing.
Zanpakutō Sealed Appearance |
Blade Color » Silver
Sheath Color » grey
Hilt Color » white
Tsuba Shape »
Length » 95cm
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Shikai Files
Zanpakutō Activation Statement | Tear through the sky
Zanpakutō Blade Changes |
Two metallic gauntlets with 3 claws (30 Cm each) attached to each glove. exactly like the picture above just without the skeletons.
Shikai Abilities
Ability One Moeru kattā
Description: Surrounding air will curl around both gauntlets at high speeds and pressure. This amplifies Raiku's melee attacks as the winds rip apart anything it comes in contact with. This ability can cut through boulders, buildings (punching a hole through one) and other similar objects.The ability is used the most as it amplifies melee capabilities, it can also link into Suraisufu~yūrīwhen the ability power is concentrated and re-directed into the claws. This can last for a few minutes but can be activated again during combat (two posts).
Ability Two Passive
Description: Raiku's core speed, kidou potency (for casting kidou spells), reaction time and endurance levels increase dramatically while Shikai is active however they can lower if spiritual pressure is lost during battle or is used up. This passive ability is always active but the perks will lessen as his energy levels deplete.
Ability Three Suraisufu~yūrī
Description: When Raiku focuses his spirit pressure into the claws and swipes in the direction of the target. 3 or 6 blades of air shoot forward at high speed and pressure.The blades can fly straight for 50-58 meters before dissolving back into the atmosphere. This can smash through rocks, buildings, boulders and can cause some/quite a bit of damage (depending on the amount of energy used to fire the attack. The less energy used to fire the attack, the slower and less potent it becomes
Shikai Control Level | not mastered
Shikai Duration | 15 posts
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Bankai Files
Bankai Name | Kuro zenchō
English Translation | Black Omen
Bankai Appearance |
An ebony black scythe with purple runes inscribed on the blade. The runes pulse at the same time as the wielders heart.
Achieved?: No
Bankai Limitations |
Like his Shikai, his bankai is almost useless with no air present.
Using his Bankai for a long period or multiple times can put a huge strain on his body and soul, it can also kill him (depending on the moves he performs while using Bankai)
His powers are like other elements suspect able to time abilities and people who have the ability to age objects
Like all zanpakuto, if his blade is broken then it will take weeks to fix it and he could lose the battle
Bankai Strengths |
He becomes one of the fastest fighters within the soul society and could hold his own against the captain of squad 2 but could potentially lose
His attacks are accurate and are controlled, he does not let them go wild and he will know the damage output accurately
The scythe itself is a formidable weapon and he does not have to rely on the black winds (even though they are deadly to enemies)
Bankai Abilities
Ability One Kokutan no arashi
Description: When Raiku concentrates his energy into the blade and then swing the scythe in the direction of the target. He can release a powerful gale storm that is made of black winds. The black wind is an extension of Raiku's blades and slices anything it touches. this is a mid/wide-range attack that is dependent on the power used to fire the attack. The blade attacks can only work inside the gale storm and the storm can last for 30-50 seconds. The ability can be used multiple times (depending on Raiku's energy levels) and each attack's potency is based off Raiku's energy output.
Ability Two Arashi no mēru no yoroi
Description: The air surrounding Raiku engulfs his body and becomes the black wind that Kuro zenchō manipulates. The wind cloaks Raiku in a wind-mail Armour that can repulse attacks. This Armour covers the whole body when first active but to save energy, Raiku can focus the ability to certain body parts. The Armour must be maintained by the user keeping focused. This is why surprise attacks might have a chance of hitting him but his reaction time is more acute than ordinary soul reapers (from the Shikai passive ability if it is still active). The ability can be used twice if Raiku uses the full Armour, or 6 times if he uses it to cover single parts of the body.
Ability Three
Description: Raiku focuses his energy into the blade and swings the sythe in the direction of the target while scattering the energy. This fires off small black bullets of the black wind
Ability Four Saishū-tekina uta
Description: When Raiku is pushed to his limit, he will use this ability when he knows his death could be probable or he vows to kill the enemy in the most painful of ways. When Raiku releases all of his Bankai's power, it forms a 100 meter diameter area and the scythe dissolves into the air. While i this area, Raiku can manipulate the black winds into either tendrils or he can use the winds like Moeru kattā and he can amplify his melee damage output. This however will put a strain on his body and it can kill him potentially of hospitalize him. He can only use this once and will stay active until Raiku runs out of energy, this is one of the reasons the ability can kill him as it affects his bodies regenerative processes dramatically.
Bankai Duration Until Raiku almost runs out of spiritual pressure like other soul reapers
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Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 10:59 am
xxARCANE REAPER TALENTS
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Kidou is not just a demon art to be used lightly, it should be treated with respect just like a Zanpakuto!
Kido Background Knowledge |
Kido Expertise | Raiku specialises in Bakudou and he can use Hadou in a combat situation
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Kido Known
Bakudō Known |
Spell Name: Shō (衝, Thrust)
Number: 01
Incantation: Unknown
Description: The practitioner points at his/her target with his/her index finger, a small amount of energy is dispelled from the tip of the index fighter with enough force to thrust a considerable amount of kinetic force at a target causing the target to be pushed back a few feet from the caster.
Spell Name: Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare)
Number: 12
Incantation: Unknown
Description: The practitioner channels volatile reiryoku through an object that they touch, causing to to ignite along its surface and create a large explosion just after.
Spell Name: Gō Ken (鋼拳, Hard Fist)
Number: 15
Incantation: Unknown
Description: A relatively simple Hadō that covers the caster's fist in Reiryoku, allowing for added force behind a punch. Relatively speaking, it can allow a Shinigami with human-level strength to dent iron and makes their fist feel like an iron mass. Like other Hadō, it does not last long, only hardening the fist to give enough time to punch.
Spell Name: Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)
Number: 31
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
Description: The user, generating high-temperature flames, discharges it from both hands or the finger, in the form of an orb (small, medium, or large depending on the power used. The destructive power released by the blast can vary between a simple explosion to a pillar of energy. In both instances, the spell causes concussive as well as burn damage.
Spell Name: Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
Number: 32
Incantation: Unknown
Description: The practitioner, raising their Zanpakutō horizontally in front of them, generates a yellow orb which widens itself along the length of their sword. Once it is fully charged, it fires outward as a horizontal blast, in a wide arc of yellow energy, at the target. This technique can be launched from the hand instead of a Zanpakutō, albeit producing a shorter arc.
Spell Name: Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Number: 33
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."
Description: The practitioner, aiming the palm of their hand at the target, generates a torrent of blue spiritual energy and fires it at their target. The energy moves like a direct blast or a large wave of energy, depending on the amount of power placed into it.
Spell Name: Kongōbaku (金剛爆, Adamantine Blast)
Number: 37
Incantation: Unknown
Description: A blast of spherical red energy, similar in strength to a Sōkatsui blast.
Spell Name: Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky)
Number: 58
Incantation: Unknown
Description: The practitioner, levitating their Zanpakutō, lightly hits one end, causing it to spin like a fan. The practitioner, stopping it, creates a widening tornado-like blast, which is fired forward toward the target. A hand is usable as a catalyst of the spell if the Zanpakutō is not available.
Hadō Known |
Spell Name: Sai (塞, Restrain)
Number: 01
Incantation: Unknown
Description: The practitioner, pointing his/her index and middle fingers at the intended target(s), causes the target's arms to lock behind their back. The spell is usable on a single target or a significantly large group of people.
Spell Name: Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
Number: 04
Incantation: Unknown
Description: Binds enemies with a Reishi rope to stop their movement. The practitioner generates a crackling yellow energy rope within his/her hand(s) and throws it toward the opponent. The energy entangles itself around the opponent's arms and body, immobilizing them.
Spell Name: Seki (斥, Repulse)
Number: 08
Incantation: Unknown
Description: The practitioner generates an orb of light blue energy, which not only blocks attacks, but repels whatever strikes it.
Spell Name: Geki (撃, Strike)
Number: 09
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
Description: The practitioner, drawing the symbols of the spell in the air, causes his/her entire body to permeate a red energy. The same red energy, engulfing the body of the target, causes complete paralysis.
Spell Name: Kyokko (曲光, Bent Light)
Number: 26
Incantation: Unknown
Description: Hides the physical form and Reiatsu of the caster by bending light.
Spell Name: Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
Number: 37
Incantation: Unknown
Description: Tsuriboshi is primarily used to catch. The spell creates a ball of blue energy that fires out six "ropes" from its center. The "ropes" attach themselves to any sturdy nearby object and the energy in the center solidifies into a flat elastic-like cushion. The spell can stop falling objects similar to a safety net.
Spell Name: Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan)
Number: 39
Incantation: Unknown
Description: Enkōsen is primarily used for defense. The practitioner can use either both hands or his/her Zanpakutō in a blocking motion. The spell generates a dull yellow energy, which takes the form of a large spinning disk of condensed reiatsu, in front of the practitioner, blocking an opponent's attack.
Spell Name: Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows)
Number: 58
Incantation: "Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain."
Description: Kakushitsuijaku heightens the user's senses and awareness to seize a target. The practitioner draws a circle, with the appropriate symbols set apart in four quadrants upon the ground, using a black powder. When they place their hands palms down just under the circle to activate the spell, the circle glows with a blue light as the symbols within the circle are animated, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.
Spell Name: Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light
Number: 61
Incantation: "Carriage of thunder, bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!"
Description: The practitioner points his/her index finger at the target, generating a spark of yellow energy, which summons six thin, wide beams of light, which, slamming into a target's midsection, hold them in place. The target is unable to move any part of their body, including the parts which were not struck by the beams.
Kaidō Known | none
Forbidden Spells Known | none
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Shinigami Abilities
Zanjutsu | Master (dual wielding and one-handed, he is less experienced however in one handed)
Hakuda | Expert
Hohō | Expert
Durability | His durability is above average
Reiryoku | strong
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Posted: Thu Jan 09, 2014 7:13 pm
Well Hiya! My name is Kyousuke Riluka! I will be role playing as the Squadron Two Captain. I am also going to be your judge. So let's get this started and I wish the best of luck to you!
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First thing I noticed. I saw is the whole "[[ Picture to the Right]]". If you do not have one of those. Please get rid of this marking.
Your affiliations should be the Gotei 14 Court Guard Squads. As well as Rouge Society
At the bottom of your Aspirations and Fears, you have "List". Please remove that.
Other than that. This is very nicely put together! Great Job!
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**I'll be reviewing the Actual Details, Shikai, and Bankai separately
Actual Details
ok! A wind based Blade! I am intrigued on how you put this together! Your blade was nicely detailed, so I have no need to hold us longer on the details on how it looks. Let's get moving on!
SHIKAI
Shikai Ability 1: Ok...This sounds really close to Shunko. I am afraid if you want to keep this ability, you must change the wording. I could understand the wind but not the Kido part. Your blade is a Wind based. Therefor you should stick to wind abilities.
Shikai Ability Two: Ok. I get what your trying to get at. However, I would go more into detail about it. How long does this effect last. When does it stop. How long is your cool down, and etc...
Shikai Ability Three: This is good. However go into more detail. When you say metal, does this include blades? If so. I am going to have to say no. However, if you dull it down to bolder and rocks. As well as minimal cuts on humanoid bodies. Then I can allow it.
BANKAI
Ability One: I like it! However, how far can these blades go? Is there a range? Do you have a cool down? How many is your maximum amount you can unleash?
Ability Two: Good Concept. However, this wind can not sharpen your sensing abilities. Also how long can this last? Cool Down? How much does this armor cover?
Ability Three: Again good concept. However. Half a mile is 804.67200 meters. The most that is aloud for captain level shinigami is in fact 100 meters. Also how long can you keep this up? How bad does this drain you? Does it have a cool down?
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I see no problems with his combative information. There's a nice balance with his kido section along with the rest of his shinigami abilities.
I just need details to be filled out proportionally with your abilities. However, in short and sweet. I need a lot more details on your blade. I do like the concept! If you need any help or suggestion, don't be afraid to contacting me! I also look foreword from hearing from you again. Please quote me when you have made sufficient edits.
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Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2014 8:28 am
I think I am done... thanks for the compliments :3 I actually had to do this twice because it deleted itself -__- I am talking to the current squad 3 captain about raiku's and yeon's past and I will add that as a second chapter once we sort it out.
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Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 6:17 pm
heya, sorry to be a pest, but onin is asking for people to start posting is it ok to do so?
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Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2014 1:12 am
I need more description on Shikai One. Also a re-wording. I can not have it 'rip anything apart'. I need a post limit not an actual time limit.
The other Shikai abilities look okay.
Also You are currently not allowed to have Bankai. No Rogue is allowed such ability unless approved for a special predicament. However, you can earn it at a later time.
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Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 5:04 pm
Yes I did write down about his bankai but it says not achieved, I already talked to onin about that :3 and I have re-worded the ability one
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Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 5:35 pm
happywho06 Yes I did write down about his bankai but it says not achieved, I already talked to onin about that :3 and I have re-worded the ability one Alright last thing, I believe. You can only hold Shikai for 15 post.
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Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 5:46 pm
Kyousuke Riluka happywho06 Yes I did write down about his bankai but it says not achieved, I already talked to onin about that :3 and I have re-worded the ability one Alright last thing, I believe. You can only hold Shikai for 15 post. Even if he has mastered it?
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Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 5:51 pm
happywho06 Kyousuke Riluka happywho06 Yes I did write down about his bankai but it says not achieved, I already talked to onin about that :3 and I have re-worded the ability one Alright last thing, I believe. You can only hold Shikai for 15 post. Even if he has mastered it? Rogue's and Vice-Captains don't have a fully mastered Shikai.
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