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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 2:45 pm
░▒▓█♠Personal Information♠█▓▒░
Full Name: Ayame Mori Nickname: Mama Tiger
Age: 16 Height: 4'10 Weight: 103 Ilb
Hair Color: Red Eye Color: Blue
Build: Lean Tattoos/Scars/Birthmarks: Character Description: Sexual Orientation: Hetero-Sexual
Personality: she was raised to be very kind,friendly and caring. she's quick to look after others. though that doesn't stop her from being very active. having a hard time standing still. she at times to be blunt about her thoughts on a person. Personal Goals: her goal is to become a decent Kunuchi to support her countrymen. soon after which she want to get married and start a family. Relationship Status: Looking for the right one. Personal Skills: She can cook and clean very well.
╞═♣Shinobi Information♣═╡▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan (applying)
Chakra Pool: 345 [325 + 20=345] Chakra Element:Water, Lightning Chakra Color: Sky blue Chakra Materialization: Flicker like fire Primary class: Genjutsu Class Secondary class: Tamer Class Rank: Genin
Strengths: • Genjutsu's • Speed Weaknesses: • Weaken physical strikes • Elemental weakness Fears: • Watching the people she cares about dying • Dying alone.
Class Attributes: • Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu slightly increased. • Runt's Instincts: Senses slightly increased. • Close Knit: Able to understand and give signals to partner. Reductions: • Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster • Personal Attributes: • Pet Channel- Jutsu's cast by Ayame can originate from her pets.-this will split the chakra cost between you and your pets pool and it will take an activation from you both. Keep in mind the limits allow your pet 2 activation's whether offensive or defensive and yourself having 2 offensive actions and a defensive. • Never Breaking Spirit: Ayame's spirit to protect will keep her in the fight long before after others tire. chakra regeneration is increased by 5
Stats: Speed: {Add up your cumulative speed from stats. Starts at 0} Strength: {Add up your cumulative strength from stats. Starts at 0} Reflex: {Add up your cumulative reflex from stats. Starts at 0} Flexibility: {Add up your cumulative flexibility from stats. Starts at 0} Agility:{Add up your cumulative agility from stats. Starts at 0}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: open finger- steel knuckle gloves Weapon Range: over users Fist Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please} Weapon Location: wearing at all times except when sleeping at home. Weapon properties (If custom, needs approval, also need to find in random encounter) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 15 x tack packs • 15 x Kunia's
Village: Kohona Headband Location: right arm Headband Color: Red
Goals as a Shinobi: To become a master genjutsu user. Current Title: Kunuchi Great Title: Mother of God
▌▬♦Specialty Information♦▬▐Demons: Cursed Mark: Summon: Implants: Custom Weapons:
■►Missions◄■ ((Empty when first made)) Ryo: 500 AC: SS- Ranked: S- Ranked: 0 A- Ranked: 0 B- Ranked: 0 C- Ranked: 0 D- Ranked: 0
○◙♥Background♥◙○ Family Members <(NPC/PC/Deceased/NonNPC [link any profiles])> • Mother: Still living at home - in konoha • Father: Still living at home -in Konoha • Siblings: Little brother - Rekkimaru Mori, older brother - KIA in a ninja Mission trying to protect the village from a tailed demon. History: Ayame was raised fairly normally in the Lead village.until her older brother died. after grieving for awhile, Ayame just became a protector. fending off bully's from her friends and watching over others. along the way Ayame has met a cat. her and the cat has become very close, naming it TJ. since then Ayame and TJ have never left each others side. (I'll probably put more detail into here history later.) Traumas: The loss of her older brother Theme Song: ▼→Jutsu List←▼ Ninjutsu ((Starting Ninjutsu do not count towards Cap)) E-Rank • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Taijutsu Styles E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Kenjutsu Styles E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Genjutsu E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Medical Jutsu E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Bloodline E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Barriers and Seals E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Custom Jutsu E-Rank • D- Rank • C- Rank • B- Rank • A- Rank • S- Rank • SS- Rank •
Physical training style(s) you have:
Speed: Strength: Agility: Reflexes: Flexibility:
Recruited by Hiro Really Hates PMs
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 3:53 pm
I'm not in the aprooval team, but i can give couple of pointers. Blackscar_swiss Fast hands: start with .5 agility & Gain's an extra .5 stat increase each rank up. I'd get a second opinion, but if you look , it gives up to 2.5 stat points at Saanin, doesn't sound much, concidering you start weaker. But you already break even at Chuunin; so prepare a second atribute just in case. And secondly, add a second weakness, it's minor, but it's a needed detail. Other than that and a few minor spelling mistakes, it's a easy aprooval.
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 3:59 pm
First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on.
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:02 pm
Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered.
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:04 pm
notingles-do-po Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered. It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that.
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:30 pm
Mogaar notingles-do-po Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered. It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that. I edit the Attributes, but not sure are you okay with the one hand jutsu casting or no? (I'll be fine editing it as well if its not okay)
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Posted: Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:45 pm
Blackscar_swiss Mogaar notingles-do-po Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered. It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that. I edit the Attributes, but not sure are you okay with the one hand jutsu casting or no? (I'll be fine editing it as well if its not okay) You'll need to replace the one handed jutsu casting with something else. It's a no.
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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2013 2:37 pm
Mogaar Blackscar_swiss Mogaar notingles-do-po Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered. It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that. I edit the Attributes, but not sure are you okay with the one hand jutsu casting or no? (I'll be fine editing it as well if its not okay) You'll need to replace the one handed jutsu casting with something else. It's a no. Changed. is that better, I'm just testing the waters here with one attribute the other I kinda copied from another approved profile cause I couldn't come up with one at the time. (I did word it different) Edit: it seems that only the attribute is the only objective on my RPC so I'ma begin rping with her with out using the attributes until the profile is accepted. if it bothers you please lrt me know
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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 5:55 am
Blackscar_swiss Mogaar Blackscar_swiss Mogaar notingles-do-po Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered. It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that. I edit the Attributes, but not sure are you okay with the one hand jutsu casting or no? (I'll be fine editing it as well if its not okay) You'll need to replace the one handed jutsu casting with something else. It's a no. Changed. is that better, I'm just testing the waters here with one attribute the other I kinda copied from another approved profile cause I couldn't come up with one at the time. (I did word it different) Edit: it seems that only the attribute is the only objective on my RPC so I'ma begin rping with her with out using the attributes until the profile is accepted. if it bothers you please lrt me know Generally speaking we'd prefer it if you didn't until the profile was approved and good to go. There are a few small other issues with it too. I'm not actually a profiles mod which is why I've been trying to get someone on this but I'll get back to you myself in a few.
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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:29 am
Blackscar_swiss Mogaar Blackscar_swiss Mogaar notingles-do-po Mogaar First attribute's a no go. A flat +1 is the most we allow. The second I'll need to get a second opinion on. The second one, i'd say follow the Kugujutsu class' restraints (Genin D, Chuunin C...) It would be a relatively unique atribute without being overpowered. It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that. I edit the Attributes, but not sure are you okay with the one hand jutsu casting or no? (I'll be fine editing it as well if its not okay) You'll need to replace the one handed jutsu casting with something else. It's a no. Changed. is that better, I'm just testing the waters here with one attribute the other I kinda copied from another approved profile cause I couldn't come up with one at the time. (I did word it different) Edit: it seems that only the attribute is the only objective on my RPC so I'ma begin rping with her with out using the attributes until the profile is accepted. if it bothers you please lrt me know A note on your first attribute. I will allow your pet to have your jutsu channeled through them, however this will split the chakra cost between you and your pets pool and it will take an activation from you both. Keep in mind the limits allow your pet 2 activation's whether offensive or defensive and yourself having 2 offensive actions and a defensive. Chakra regeneration can be increased by a maximum of five, other than that I dont see an issue.
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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:43 am
Holy Rinaku Blackscar_swiss Mogaar Blackscar_swiss Mogaar It'd be close to giving them another class attribute also. Beyond that the only way to get it is from the Hyoton bloodline. Personal attributes are mild increases to things you're already good at. This'd go beyond that. I edit the Attributes, but not sure are you okay with the one hand jutsu casting or no? (I'll be fine editing it as well if its not okay) You'll need to replace the one handed jutsu casting with something else. It's a no. Changed. is that better, I'm just testing the waters here with one attribute the other I kinda copied from another approved profile cause I couldn't come up with one at the time. (I did word it different) Edit: it seems that only the attribute is the only objective on my RPC so I'ma begin rping with her with out using the attributes until the profile is accepted. if it bothers you please lrt me know A note on your first attribute. I will allow your pet to have your jutsu channeled through them, however this will split the chakra cost between you and your pets pool and it will take an activation from you both. Keep in mind the limits allow your pet 2 activation's whether offensive or defensive and yourself having 2 offensive actions and a defensive. Chakra regeneration can be increased by a maximum of five, other than that I dont see an issue. Done :3 approved now?
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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 10:10 am
I'm I good? (btw your listed in the Profile Mod in Crew Jobs) Also. I'm I suppose to get two free Jutsu's due to the Recruitment Event
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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 10:13 am
Blackscar_swiss I'm I good? (btw your listed in the Profile Mod in Crew Jobs) Also. I'm I suppose to get two free Jutsu's due to the Recruitment EventIf that's what the event says then yes. I'm listed under that section btw because I do a little of everything. I'm not a dedicated profile mod but I can deal with them if needed. You're good to go.
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