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 Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:52 am
Corrupt Sailor Nix, Senshi of Cerberus//Desiree Lavigne
Plot Thread: Here.
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:54 am
Desiree Lavigne
Name: Desiree Mari Lavigne.
Nickname: Desi.
Age: 17.
Birthday: October 30, 1996.
Astrological Sign: Scorpio.
Gemstone: Opal.
Blood Type: B positive.
Physical Description:
Eyes: Sexy █████ #F77703 - "Chilean Fire" eyes shaped like Cinnabar's and Sailor Richter's, heavily coated with dark mascara and eyeliner.
Hair: █████ #ED0A3F - "Red Ribbon" hair styled like the above image. (Hair by itself.)
Face: Oval shaped; lips always tinted red. Desiree's piercings include her bridge, snake bites, right industrial, and both standard lobes.
Body: 5 feet and 11 inches tall and 164 pounds; hourglass in shape; █████ #FFFDD0 - "Cream" skin tone. At this point, she hasn't gotten any tattoos.
Clothes: Desiree's style is punk, rainbow, and pop culture.
Family:
Mother: Adelaide Lavigne. 35.
Father: Dimitri Lavigne. 36.
Sibling(s):
Grandparents:
Aunt(s): Elsa Lavigne. 32. Desiree's father's single, younger sister and her guardian after her "stunt": she ran away from home after her parents told her they were getting a divorce. After a few weeks of hopping from her friends' couches to other couches, she broke down and used her last few cents to call her aunt to pick her up and soon after, Elsa became her legal guardian, enrolling her into St. Mag's Seminary and helping her to find a job.
Uncle(s):
Cousin(s):
Pet(s): Majora. 4. Domestic short-haired black cat with white chest
Favorite Food: Slim jims.
Least Favorite Food: Most sweets. Hard candies and gum are the exception.
Favorite Color: Rainbow!
Favorite Season: Winter.
School/Occupation: St. Magdalena's Seminary/Fast Food employee.
Hobbies:
Cinephile - Desiree loves movies. She loves tv shows. She loves recognizing characters from different roles. Desi loves to catch new movies as the come to the big screen or on the night they premiere. Her favorite genres range from sci-fi to comedies to action to romance and more and with that, she's a fan of most fandoms. She loves watching her favorite shows with others, but has no qualms about watching something by herself.
Gaming - Give this girl a controller and don't expect her to vacate the seat directly in front of the screen for a good period of time, although at least once every other week, she rage quits and those are terror-ific. This girl can get into most games. She's huge into Skyrim, Call of Duty, and DC Universe. She loves to play online, with a group, and even have LAN parties, FTW! Her favorite gaming systems are definitely her Playstation systems, second through the fourth, but she isn't too good for the classics, including SNES, Nintendo 64, and numerous Gameboys. Save the Xbox line.
Music - Music is a huge part of Desi's life. She's constantly listening to Pandora, checking out artists on Youtube, and even coming up with something of her own. She doesn't write her own music, but homemade ditties help her make it through the day if she can't have something playing. Desiree loves many kinds of music, but some genres she dislikes include Bluegrass and Country.
Socializing - Most specifically partying, although all sorts of social gatherings get Desi interested; the cheaper, the better! She loves most everything about getting out and interacting with others. It's rare that a weekend goes by without her having been to at least one function. She hates to turn down invites and tends to extend invites to whoever she runs into, even without the host's approval.
Virtues:
Ambitious - When Desi sets her mind to something, everyone around her is going to know it. She hates to be told that she can't do something and will go out of her way to prove that person wrong. She is one to reach for her goals no matter what obstacle she faces and constantly strives to be better at everything she does.
Communicative - No talking about issues is something Desiree has no clue to do. She's sure to let you know if there's something she needs to let you know about. Along with that, she is sure to share her thoughts on any and all subjects, with or without a prompt.
Frugal - Desiree has a particular vendetta against those who spend money they don't have on frivolous things and swears she will be different. After all, the massive debt her parents found themselves in spurned their split and ultimately their divorce. No more than a month later, she moved in with her aunt Elsa and found herself in a home where at least any money troubles were kept from the dependents' knowledge. Her experience instilled a deep sense of frugality in her life and vowed to work and save for things she may want (Even as much as she loves media, she only occasionally purchases anything.) or need instead of borrowing or taking charity.
Loyal - Desi isn't the easiest person to really get close to, but when she does start to view someone as a best friend, she will always do everything she can to have their back. She will always be looking out for possible threats to her friends' and loved ones' well beings. Sometimes that means having to bring someone back to reality to see something that may be a danger to them.
Flaws:
Aggressive - Not only does Desiree go after what she wants, but she will be vicious to anyone or thing that stands in her way. She knows what she wants and little to nothing will stand in her way or she'll do whatever she can to take whatever it is down.
Crude - Desi can be a downright b***h. She'll take measures many people wouldn't to obtain an outcome she'd want. If your interests don't match up with hers, you could be in for some serious attitude, fit throwing, and if she's fired up enough, physical retribution.
Perfectionist - An over-abundance of determination can lead to one-tracked thinking and Desiree has a habit of doing just that. She tends to get so caught up in whatever she focuses on that she can't seem to stop thinking about it, night or day. Everything has a place in Desiree's world and she has to have everything in it's place. She needs to be at the top of her class in every situation and strives to be better at what she succeeds at. She has trouble accepting things if there could have been a more perfect situation and will obsess over the "better" option. It can, has, and frequently does keep her from completing tasks quickly, as she's rarely pleased with the outcome first time around. This stresses her out a LOT. For instance, when IV breeding in her Pokemon game, she refused to accept the 5 IV Pokemon for her team because a 6 IV counterpart is possible, even though the perfect stats were spread among out as she needed.
Vulgar - Curse words are a large part of Desi's vocabulary, no matter the time, day, or place. She constantly receives mean glances from disapproving mothers, holding their child's ears so that they might not pick up on her verbal filth.
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Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:56 am
Corrupt Sailor Nix, Senshi of Cerberus
Senshi: Sailor Nix.
Power Sphere: Cerberus.
Faction: Corrupt Negaverse Senshi.
Preferred Templates: Female 2 > Female 11 > Female 18.
Symbol:
Challenge: "His bark is worse than his bite!"
Battle Theme: Soul Calibur V Original Sound Track - "Adorned with Evil".
Fuku Colour:
Bodice Color: █████ #0000000 - "Black".
Main Color: █████ #92000A - "Sangria".
Accent Colors: █████ #FFD700 - "Gold", and █████ #FFFFFF - "White.
Fuku:
Collar -
Bow -
Bodice -
Sleeves -
Brooch -
Bottoms -
Tiara -
Choker -
Shoes -
Gloves -
Accessories -
Notes - Figure-hugging; decorative; and steam-punk/ringmaster/animal tamer theme; Inspiration, more inspiration, and even more inspiration; Open to artist interpretation, but please send me a WIP.
Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack:
Name - Nix Growl!
Execution - Nix brings her fingers to her lips, releasing a loud whistle that summons a spectral Cerberus next to her that, with one head, bears its teeth and growls ferociously.
Effect - The Cerberus instills mass amounts of fear in enemies standing within the range. The fear is such where a person is faced with fight or flight, they choose flight and run away.
Use Limits - This attack may be used up to three times per battle and on enemies in the area of effect.
Power Limits - This attack affects those within seven feet of her.
Weaknesses - Fear effect is broken should the opponent take any damage or after fifteen seconds.
Super Sailor Scout Attack:
Name - Nix Howl!
Execution - Nix brings her fingers to her lips, releasing a loud whistle that summons a spectral Cerberus next to her that throws two of its heads back and howls loudly.
Effect - One Cerberus head instills mass amounts of fear in enemies standing within the range; the other grants an agility bonus to allies within range. The fear is such where a person is faced with fight or flight, they choose flight and run away.
Use Limits - This attack may be used up to two times per battle and affects everyone in the area of effect.
Power Limits - This attack affects those within seven feet of her.
Weaknesses - Fear effect is broken should the opponent take any damage or after thirty seconds.
Eternal Sailor Attack:
Name - Nix Roar!
Execution - Nix brings her fingers to her lips, releasing a loud whistle that summons a spectral Cerberus next to her that roars loudly with all three heads and stomps on the ground.
Effect - The Cerberus causes an earthquake, which causes those who aren't paying enough attention to stumble/fall the ground crack, causing heat-radiating 'lava veins' in the ground and branching out in several directions within range.
Use Limits - This attack may be used one time per battle and affects everyone in the area of effect.
Power Limits - This attack affects those within twelve feet of her.
Weaknesses - The earthquake can cause people to fall over depending on terrain and if they're not paying attention; this does not discriminate between ally or enemy. This attack can be out ranged.
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Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 11:35 am
Hey darlin, I came by to give you a crit and I know you specifically mentioned that you wanted a crit only on the powered side.. But unfortunately, if you would like a crit on a powered profile there needs to be a civilian profile as well (I spoke with Kyu ahead of time!) as per the rules of the stamping thread:
5. Any quest that is posted here and is NOT complete will not receive a critique or a stamp. It will simply be skipped, and that person will have to repost their quest at the back of the line once it is completed.
If you get the rest filled out you can re-post in the crit/stamping thread and one of the RP mods will come back! heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 8:30 pm
So so sorry about that! I'd meant to have the civilian side done before she was looked at, but I failed at that. xP Will wait from now on until I'm actually finished to post in there. sweatdrop I did finish her profile and am resubmitting her to be looked at. Thank you for your help! :3
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Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 10:07 am
Hey Xev! Let's get Pyrrha all stamped up! (WOO CORRUPTS) ON THE CIVILIAN SIDEI think her hobbies look great, nothing to comment on here~ For her "Ambitious" virtue, I'd like a little more about how she's ambitious - right now it really reads as "dedicated" or "determined"; is she one to reach for her dreams no matter what? Is she always pushing herself to be better? "Content" and "Frugal" read very similarly right now; they're both primarily focused on monetary things. I think you can certainly differentiate these - is she content with other aspects of her life too? Also, how does her being generally content with things fit in with her being ambitious, which implies a certain lack of contentment/desire for something more? Right now her "Perfectionist" flaw is reading as a virtue since it focuses on how everything is in its place; is she obsessively perfectionist and thereby ends up holding herself up? Does she ever get frustrated if she can't make things perfect? Again, "Obsessive" is mostly reading as the actual-flaw portion of "Perfectionist"; it would be possible to combine these (as well as "Frugal" and "Content") and still end up with a matching number of flaws and virtues! ON THE POWERED SIDE:I do think you'd need a plot to have her gain a mineral name later; alternately you could have her Awakened outside the presence of a cat and simply be Pyrrhoite, with Pyrrha claimed as her past-life name? Her attacks look excellent to me, so nothing to say there! Quote me once you've made changes and I'll come back for a second look!
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Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 11:56 am
Hey, Song, and thank you so much for taking a look at Desiree's profile! biggrin I added more to Ambitious, changed Content to Communicative and combined the old Content information with Frugal. I combined Perfectionist and Obsessive and replaced Obsessive with Vulgar. I've got it set in my head that she's going to be a slacker about the senshi thing for a while and [insert large character instilling situation that will result in her eternal upgrade and solidify her view of herself in the Negaverse]? biggrin Will have to work that out, but that's the start of my thinking for that. Thank you again! <3
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Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 12:32 pm
Okay, changes look good to me~ A GM will be by soon!
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Posted: Fri Jan 31, 2014 1:43 pm
Hey, Xevra!
I love your girl's design! (such pretty colors! I love her hair and eyes xD)
It looks like Song's done a good job here, so I'm going to drop a stamp and wish you the best of luck in winning her!
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