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Name: Aloysius Sharp

Nickname: Maestro, Al

Age: 19

Birthday: October 4th

Sign: Libra

Gemstone: Tourmaline

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Lasagna and Canoli

Hated Food: Liver of any sort because ew it's gross.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies: What does your character do outside of school during their civilian life? Note that this is an activity that they do on a regular basis, and reflects their personality. How often do they do this activity? Why? Note that if it's a once-in-a-blue-moon activity, then it's most likely not a hobby. List at least two, just try not to go overboard.

Playing Viola - Aloysius spends a lot of time practicing his viola, it's his number one way to relax and just zone out into the music. He focuses on older pieces but that doesn't mean he won't pick up a few contemporary pieces from time to time. He has been playing Viola since he was 7 so he rarely finds a piece he has trouble with but, when he does he takes it apart and works it out until it all flows smoothly. He always strives for perfection as he practices and even more so when he goes on stage during recitals.

Teaching - Aloysius occasionally teaches others how to play Viola and a bit of Piano. While he isn't a bad teacher, a lot of his narcissistic comments bleed through since he usually isn't in the presence of friends or people who would like to keep around for awhile. He gets mixed reviews from his students, some thrive and grow underneath his wing while others rage quit and often try to talk him down to others who may want to take any lessons with him.

Reading - Aloysius loves to read and spends a few hours every night pouring through the latest mystery novel or biography. He'll spend entire afternoons in the library if he has nothing else going on or if he's finished his practice session. Sometimes he zones out while reading which can be a bit bothersome to those trying to talk to him or ask him questions while he has his nose in a book.


Virtues:

Steadfast -- Aloysius stands by his values and remains loyal to those who call him a friend. He sometimes butts head with people who try to persuade him to go against his morals or his ideas and tries to make them understand he won't change. He does respect those who stand by their own morals as well and won't talk down their ideals.

Curious -- Aloysius is always looking for new things to do and often tries to understand things he doesn't know yet. He also loves finding new ways to do things or figuring out whats going on. Whether it's directions after getting lost or trying out a new fighting style, he looks for new ways to improve.

Flaws:

Manipulative -- Aloysius is very particular with certain things and will silver tongue people to fit into the ideas he has set up for things. He won't go as far as to put someone in extreme danger but he will talk someone into doing something he doesn't feel like doing. He has been caught a few times but usually tries to pin the blame on situation and other people. It's has lead to a few trust issues between newer acquaintances but not as many to those who have known him and have grown up with him.

Narcissistic -- Aloysius is not a full blow narcissist but he hides his mistakes and does what he can to cover up his blunders. He gets flustered when people criticize him or his actions but he tries not to snap back or talk down to the person who criticized him unless he knows them very well or just really doesn't like them. More of his demeaning comments come out when he is talking to students or those who he doesn't deal with on a daily basis although if they last long enough through what he says, he lightens up on them a little bit.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Ice Blue

Hair: Dark brown, tied back in a pony tail that reaches to his mid back. Colour, style, accessories. Some artists prefer references, others prefer being given style words - you might want to keep this in mind

Face: He has a slightly pointed nose and small ears. Heart shaped face. He also has glasses that are rectangular and frame-less lenses.

Clothes: He usually wears button up long sleeve white dress shirts and black slacks. He's very professional and clean with his clothing.

Hi there! Let's go forth and get Aloysius all stamped~

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:

Aloysius's hobbies aren't super social, and since hobbies are usually a jumping-off point for RP, I'd love to see a more social aspect to them. For instance, does he teach or study viola? Is he in a group? Does he perform on the streets?

His virtues look fine.

Flaws, however - I would love to see a little more of how they make people dislike him. Do his manipualtions blow up in his face? Does he get found out, and people then distrust him? For Narcissistic, does he often talk himself up too much? Also, that he doesn't snap at or talk down to people who criticize him sort of cuts this out as a flaw since it removes a major expression of it.

Really I'd just love more details in his personality~

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

Powered side looks great! Nothing to change here~

Quote me once you've made changes or with any questions~

Okay, looks good to me!

Hey, Ninjagami!

Congratulations on the win! I love his uniform design!

This profile looks mostly good to go; the only thing currently preventing a stamp is a few concerns about his weapon!

Unfortunately, for his first stage I think that a viola might be a bit too powerful (most lieutenant weapons are usually flimsy or toy like, and depending on the construct or build, a viola can be pretty sturdy!) however the viola bow would work and would be totally appropriate if you would be willing to separate the two! (It could be sturdy enough to whack people or poke them with and still do a small bit of damage!)

For his Captain stage, that looks fine to me, though can I have a little more information about his General weapon? A crossbow and darts are fine, however I'm just curious about the sleeping and stun darts; how much power do either of these have? For most magic, there is a restriction that prevents magic from making a character helpless for an extensive period of time to prevent them from being totally helpless, and having an unlimited amount of sleep or stun darts that could put someone out of commission might be a little too powerful! So, please let me clarify a few things so I can get onto stamping for you!

1) How much damage can these darts do? Are they based on modern day hunting darts or have some handicap (such as, he only has x amount of darts to use at one time? Or that he has to reload between darts, which would buy his opponent enough time to find a hiding place or attack?)
2) Since forcing someone to fall asleep or be stunned for a long period of time could be their death (considering quick reload for lethal darts), would you consider combining the two into one dart with sort of limited effects? (Such as, if shot then the target might feel a bit drowsy and find it difficult to move quickly for a few seconds? It probably shouldn't be for longer than 5-10 seconds depending on how quickly he can reload.

If you have any questions, clarifications or make any changes, quote me and I'll be back as soon as possible!

That looks great to me, thanks so much! Enjoy playing him!