Welcome to Gaia! ::

In the Name of the Moon!

Back to Guilds

A Sailor Moon based B/C shop! Come join us! 

Tags: Sailor, Moon, Scouts, Breedables, Senshi 

Reply Accepted Quests
[Q] Darren Waughner | Corinth Page

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Torvil

Noble Explorer

11,875 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Survivor 150
  • Team Jacob 100
PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 12:45 pm


The Civ!


Name: Darren Waughner

Nickname: None Yet

Age: 16

Birthday: July 31th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Double Meat Cheeseburger with Extra Cheese.

Hated Food: Hasenpfeffer
School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:

Drumming: Darren plays as a Drummer in a metal cover band called Bloody Dragon Sons. During the school year he also is part of the school’s drum line. Drumming is one of his passions, he takes it very seriously and he always is seeking to improve.

Sewing: Band outfits got to come from somewhere – though truthfully this is one of those hobbies he tries to hide. He knows the other guys in the band would give him hell for it as well as anyone else who knows him.

Larping: This hobby is another closely guarded secret. There is a reason Bloody Dragon Sons only plays gigs every other week – because every other week their drummer is out “visiting his grandma.” Really, he’s attending a local LARP event held by his league. It’s a nice escape from reality for him.

Virtues:

Empathetic: Darren is usually a good listener – especially with girls. Having grown up in a girl heavy household, he’s learned a thing or two about how girls think and act when they’re upset and what works and doesn’t work to calm them down. He’s no expert – and his empathy isn’t just limited to girls, but he tends to more easily relate to girls and their problems than other guys. He can be very sensitive to people’s feelings in general – but he is much keener to act on it with girls.

Dependable: When Darren says he’s going to be somewhere he tries his best to be there. That’s not to say he isn’t sometimes late for things – unforeseen things happen and they can cause delays. But he does try his best to make sure if he is running late – or if someone is expecting him that he gets in touch with them so they know he’s running behind. He isn’t one to turn down a chance to help someone out – especially if he knows they need it. He is a favorite amongst his bandmates because they know that if they need a hand – he’ll be there to help them out – be it at a gig or with their homework or even chores at home. This extends to all his friends – just not his bandmates. This isn’t without its problems though – he has a hard time knowing when he should say no, and sometimes he bites off more than he can chew. He’s not afraid to admit if he screwed up – but all the same he’s not about to take heat for something he didn’t do.

Open: Darren isn’t afraid to get to know new people – in fact – that’s how he makes the majority of his friends. He’s also not one to hide things about himself – he’s a pretty open book, unless he’s trying to hide something embarassing. It’s a rare day when Darren doesn’t want to talk about what’s going on in his life – and he’s pretty open to doing pretty much anything anyone else wants to do. He’s also quite interested in hearing people’s ideas – even if they differ from his own.

Flaws:

Over Protective: Darren gets a bit overzealous protecting his family and friends. He’s actually gotten in a lot of trouble at school backing his sisters up. He has gotten several suspensions for fighting because some boy or girl said the wrong thing about his sisters or one of his friends. He doesn’t care though – he’ll punch you out if you bad talk his family and friends – or if you hurt them.

Doesn’t know when to quit: Darren lacks that important little mental warning that tells you to quit when you’re ahead. He is apt to digging himself deeper and deeper into trouble, even if someone is trying to cover for him. It’s not that he can’t shut up – he can – he just isn’t one to let something go unresolved or allow others to accept punishments that are not theirs. If he is innocent though – he will fight to the death to prove it. You could call him stubborn – but that’d be an understatement. He’s actually gotten into a lot of trouble in class when he doesn’t agree with a teacher’s assessment of something – or if they’re just plain wrong. It’s reached the point where he was almost suspended for being insubordinate before his parents stepped in and made him apologize. His bandmates put up with his pushiness because he’s a good drummer and he goes out of his way for them – but there are times where they put him in check at band meetings. If people can get past his pushiness – they’ll come to find he’s actually not half bad.

Dirty Little Secrets: While Darren for the most part is an open book – he is apt to hide anything that he feels is embarrassing. He doesn’t handle embarrassment well, often getting really flustered and having to leave the situation in order to calm down. He finds it easier just to hide the embarrassing things from other people who don’t understand them than try and make them understand why he enjoys them. His biggest fear is that people will view him differently if these secrets get out – that they’ll think he’s a sissy or a nerd. He hasn’t quite come to grips with the fact that what others thing of him isn’t the be all end all. If people start digging, he starts to become more withdrawn and quiet – which of course wave a red flag that something is up and tends to make people dig more. It’s a horrible cycle – he’s actually lost friends over not telling them his secrets. He hates that he is so shy about it – but at the same time, he’s afraid word will get around and people will just point and laugh at him.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: A dark chocolate brown, round.

Hair: Shaggy black with dark and neon green highlights. Bangs come down to cover his right eye.

Face: Oval face, no freckles, small ears.

Clothes: Meadowview High Uniform.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 1:05 pm


The Knight!

Knight Title: Corinth Page

Challenge: I will drum you out!

Uniform:

Color: #12416d
Top: A V-neck sailor’s tunic with long sleeves with a light over vest and jacket. Shirt and Vest Ref! Jacket Ref! Jacket has the Neptune symbol on the right breast panel.
Bottoms: Sail Pants. Ref!
Gloves: No gloves
Belt: Sash belt with the symbol of Neptune all over it. Ref!
Shoes: Men’s Ballroom Shoes. Ref!
Shoulders: – Epaulettes with the symbol of Neptune. Ref!
Accessories: None.
Weapon:

Page: Just a simple hip snare like this, would have the planet sigil on the drum: Drum!

Squire: More ornate filigree on the drum. Summoning ethereal drumsticks and playing his snare, Corinth can impart a slight boost of speed to allies within a ten foot radius of him. The boost of speed lasts only as long as Corinth plays his drum, as soon as he stops – so too does the boost. He can only channel the magic for 30 seconds before it is fully used up.

Knight: Drum upgrades to a slightly larger snare, keeping the filigree from last stage. Summoning ethereal drumsticks and playing his snare, Corinth can impart a large boost of speed within fifteen feet. The boost of speed lasts only as long as Corinth plays his drum, as soon as he stops – so too does the boost. He can only channel the magic for 60 seconds before it is fully used up.

Torvil

Noble Explorer

11,875 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Survivor 150
  • Team Jacob 100

Sylent Nyte
Crew

Obsessive Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:14 pm


Torvil


Civilian side~

Hobbies all look good!

Virtues


Dependable: When I read this I understand him as being dependable with something very specific- being somewhere when he says he will be. How else does this show in his life? If someone asks him to do something, is he that guy that always says yes? That friend that you can call at 3am to get you out of a bind? I'd just like to know how else this applies in his day-to-day life other than just being punctual.

Flaws

Doesn't know when to quit: Out of curiosity, how far does he go? Is it to the point where he gets in a lot of trouble with people because he just keeps pushing? Does this drive people away from him or make relationships difficult?

Dirty Little Secrets: How does this affect him on a daily basis? How do others view him when his embarassing secrets get out, or when they realize he's hiding something and doesn't want to spill the beans?

Basically with the two above flaws, I really want to know what makes them flaws? Great, he's stubborn- but I want to know to what extent and how it affects him. Everyone has dirty secrets they don't want people to know about or that they get embarassed about, so I really want to know how it's so bad that it affects him negatively on a daily basis.

Powered side~

Looks good! I just need to know his magic casting pools (timing) for both the Squire and Knight attacks please :3

If you have any questions/concerns or want me to take another look after changes are made, go ahead and quote me! heart
PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:42 pm


Sylent Nyte


Went ahead and made some changes! Hopefully this clears up what you were wondering! Also added the magic pool to his Knight abilities - hopefully that works too!

Torvil

Noble Explorer

11,875 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Survivor 150
  • Team Jacob 100

Sylent Nyte
Crew

Obsessive Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:14 pm


Looks good! Thank you for the clarification! heart

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 04, 2013 9:17 am


Torvil


Hey, Torvil! Congratulations on winning a slot for Corinth; I can't wait to see him!

This is going to be quick; his civilian side looks great! I have two things to look at for powered side!

1) His squire magic lasts for as long as most knight magic lasts, so I think it might be more appropriate to settle it closer to 30-45 seconds for this stage (the radius looks good, and the duration and radius for his knight stage are just fine!)

2) His third stage weapon evolves a drum, to a better drum, to two drumsticks and a drum; knight magic is typically only summoned from one item, so this makes it a little more complicated when it comes to figuring out what exactly is channeling the magic. To clear this up, I think only the drum should be the source of his magic, however! He could also get drumsticks at this stage if they were attached to the drum with a string or something (this would effectively make it one item he was channeling his magic through); it would prevent him from throwing the drumsticks, however he could still play the drums. An alternative to that he has only the drum as his weapon however upon casting he can summon a set of ethereal drumsticks to play the drum with (these wouldn’t be able to do any damage to anyone and would only exist so he could beat on the drum while summoning his magic).

Other than that though, he looks perfect! Quote me if you have any questions or make any changes and I'll be back asap!


Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon


Torvil

Noble Explorer

11,875 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Survivor 150
  • Team Jacob 100
PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 9:28 am


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Went ahead and made the suggested edits! Hope that works better <3
PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 5:40 pm


Torvil

The changes look good to me, so just one more small thing! For his knight stage you have the magic and everything but no mention on what specifically his weapon upgrades to! If you could just add even just a small note on that (such as 'an even larger/more ornate drum' or whatever description you'd like!) I'll be able to drop the stamp!


Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon


Torvil

Noble Explorer

11,875 Points
  • Dressed Up 200
  • Survivor 150
  • Team Jacob 100
PostPosted: Fri Jul 05, 2013 5:46 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Went ahead and added in an upgrade to the drum!
PostPosted: Sat Jul 06, 2013 1:29 pm


Torvil


Perfect, thanks so much! Enjoy playing him!

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.


Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon

Reply
Accepted Quests

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum