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PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 12:54 am


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Demon Jiang-Shi Claws


Full Name Makeen Takeshi Zian

Nickname Mak

Birthday October 31st

Age 17

Gender Male

Sexuality Homosexual

Height 5' 4"

Weight
Without Arm's weight- 110 lbs
With Arm's weight- /about/ 400 lbs

Nationality
Chinese-Indian with some Japanese roots

Homeland China

Accent English

Personality/Mannerism
A very diligent student, and an extremely loyal friend. He's kind-hearted and caring, always there for others when they need him. Though because his arm is very off putting, he only has one friend and the lack of any more has put him in a very depressive mood at times, which he tries to hide. This has also made him rather sensitive to insults. Makeen is a bit of a glutton, having a love for mainly spicy foods and sometimes will prefer to eat over getting work done. Can be very polite and a true gentleman despite being gay. Mak is extremely friendly and loves telling jokes, but to only those who are willing to listen long enough. He's chivalrous and always puts the well-being of others before himself. Though he endangers himself in the process of protecting others. He suffers a bit from multiple personality disorder, but his other personality is in fact his infected-self, which only comes out when he is deeply depressed, greatly angered or becomes unconscious while being tormented. Makeen is unaware of this other personality.
The other personality comes off as being insane and very mentally disturbed. A grin is always on his face, and he is a bit of a masochist. In battle, he becomes unpredictable and concern for others is no longer there. He will kill any in the way just to get to his target. Because of Makeen's paranoia, this personality becomes very spiteful towards others and doesn't hesitate to point out flaws.

Appearance
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Infected Self
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Partner N/A

Personal Skill
Cooking and Painting

Occupation N/A

Rank Student

Classification
Autonomous Infected Demon Weapon

Family Members All deceased

Friends Nikolas Spiridon

Enemies Any kishin

History/Background
Comes from a long line of Jiang-Shi Demon Weapons, all capable of taking on multiple forms. Though the preferred was always the claws. He was a child prodigy at one point, and was in the process of choosing his meister when on a fateful night, he was attacked by a black-blooded weapon. He had become infected by the blood and lost control one day. Though he awoke with no recollection of what happened, and found his family dead, with seals on his body and his left arm trapped in weapon form. The boy is under the impression that kishin have taken out his family, but does not understand what has caused his disfigurement. He did in fact consume his family's souls while under possession, and put him in the process of becoming a dark weapon. Makeen has difficulties turning into his full weapon form, for fear he may become trapped much like his arm, and has lost the ability to use his saw blade. He now attends DWMA in hopes of regaining control, and to learn how to find and destroy kishin. Mak refuses to take on a meister or to even attempt to take on his full weapon form, and prefers to use his own skills to fight, not wanting to depend on others.
During the time on his own, he met a blonde boy who wields a black-blooded weapon. Though he learned of DWMA from him, and the boy's intentions on joining in order to learn more about kishin. Since then, this boy has been his closest friend, and he hopes to see him at DWMA someday.

Weapon Form User Image

Soul Resonance Form N/A

Soul Color Lime Green

Clan The only remaining member of an ancient clan.

Weapon Type Jiang-Shi

Abilities
☼ Has a massive amount of strength, but the seal on his forehead keeps this back.
☼ Can replicate and create his own ticket seals to use on others.
☼ Claw is extremely sharp, and when it's weight is released from the seal on it, it can rip through even diamond.
☼ Chain that makes up his arm can be extended to reach long distances.


Main Attacks
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Hobbies
• Painting
• Cooking
• Collecting rings

Flaws
+ Suffers from Multiple Personality Disorder but it comes off as him being disturbed.
+Envious of others who don't suffer his disfigurement.
+Gluttonous
+Is always paranoid that people think he's a monster because of his arm.


Weaknesses
◦ Being tormented because of his arm pains him and can cause him to have a mental breakdown.
◦ The chains that make up in arm can get tangled.
◦ His arm can melt under extreme heat.
◦ When the weight from his arm is released, it actually slows him down a little bit.
◦ The seals on his forehead and arm keep back his strength and can only be burned off.
◦ The seal ticket on his forehead blocks his vision a lot.


Likes
+ Spicy foods
+ Sketching or Painting
+ Libraries
+ Cooking


Dislikes
+ Being left alone
+ His arm
+ The seal on his forehead
+ People calling him a freak or monster
+ Being weak or unable to fight
+ Bullies



Theme Song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0vY6O8J518 (Subarashiki Shin Sekai [Wonderful New World] by Flair)

Interesting Facts/TriviaUser Image
-Despite how his claw looks, he is actually very gentle with it.
-Has tried numerous times to cut his own arm off.
-The only pure souls he has consumed while under his infection was his own family's.
-Despite his ethnicity, he does not understand Chinese and can only read Japanese.
-His jokes are really lame







[The person mentioned in his bio and listed as his friend is my friend's OC, and he might join later. BTW, everything was drawn by me. And I got lazy with drawing the claws for the infected picture. Supposed to be 4 "fingers"]
PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:52 am


Okay, first off with the weight, 200k lbs. is A LOT! That is enough to put a large hole in the ground. Nobody in this world has the strength to carry something that is 200,000 pounds. And if they did, that'd be godly...so this is kind of god-modding right here. Tone down the arm weight down to 190 lbs. Plus smacking someone with 200k pound claws...that's enough to kill a person...

Your accent doesn't make sense with your character also. If he's Chinese-Indian with some Japanese roots, why does he speak English? If his homeland's China, he might as well have an accent from the place he was born from.

And his picture...HE IS SO CUTE! I JUST WANNA CUDDLE HIM! blaugh emotion_kirakira

Everything else looks pretty good though. Just fix the weight and the accent and you're good. smile

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:37 am


Reiko Iwamaru
Okay, first off with the weight, 200k lbs. is A LOT! That is enough to put a large hole in the ground. Nobody in this world has the strength to carry something that is 200,000 pounds. And if they did, that'd be godly...so this is kind of god-modding right here. Tone down the arm weight down to 190 lbs. Plus smacking someone with 200k pound claws...that's enough to kill a person...

Your accent doesn't make sense with your character also. If he's Chinese-Indian with some Japanese roots, why does he speak English? If his homeland's China, he might as well have an accent from the place he was born from.

And his picture...HE IS SO CUTE! I JUST WANNA CUDDLE HIM! blaugh emotion_kirakira

Everything else looks pretty good though. Just fix the weight and the accent and you're good. smile


Well that's what the seals are for. You act like I'm going to use that weight /all the time/. But nonetheless, I fixed it.
And I have a friend whose purely Norwegian but he has a Russian accent. Mind you he was raised in the U.S. So...what's wrong? neutral
I know where your coming from, but that's what I'm getting it all from.


(Again, read the info or else you would have noticed the fact about the seals regarding his strength and the weight of his arm...)
PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 12:46 pm


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Reiko Iwamaru
Okay, first off with the weight, 200k lbs. is A LOT! That is enough to put a large hole in the ground. Nobody in this world has the strength to carry something that is 200,000 pounds. And if they did, that'd be godly...so this is kind of god-modding right here. Tone down the arm weight down to 190 lbs. Plus smacking someone with 200k pound claws...that's enough to kill a person...

Your accent doesn't make sense with your character also. If he's Chinese-Indian with some Japanese roots, why does he speak English? If his homeland's China, he might as well have an accent from the place he was born from.

And his picture...HE IS SO CUTE! I JUST WANNA CUDDLE HIM! blaugh emotion_kirakira

Everything else looks pretty good though. Just fix the weight and the accent and you're good. smile


Well that's what the seals are for. You act like I'm going to use that weight /all the time/. But nonetheless, I fixed it.
And I have a friend whose purely Norwegian but he has a Russian accent. Mind you he was raised in the U.S. So...what's wrong? neutral
I know where your coming from, but that's what I'm getting it all from.


(Again, read the info or else you would have noticed the fact about the seals regarding his strength and the weight of his arm...)

Oh yeah, whoops. sweatdrop I forgot about those details. emotion_facepalm I did read his background story, word for word. It's just that my memory is crap, so I forgot a lot of stuff... emotion_sweatdrop

Just ignore my stupidity in the other post, I hate my memory... emotion_sweatdrop emotion_facepalm Sorry about that sweatdrop

But nonetheless, Approved. biggrin

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 6:44 pm


Reiko Iwamaru
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Reiko Iwamaru
Okay, first off with the weight, 200k lbs. is A LOT! That is enough to put a large hole in the ground. Nobody in this world has the strength to carry something that is 200,000 pounds. And if they did, that'd be godly...so this is kind of god-modding right here. Tone down the arm weight down to 190 lbs. Plus smacking someone with 200k pound claws...that's enough to kill a person...

Your accent doesn't make sense with your character also. If he's Chinese-Indian with some Japanese roots, why does he speak English? If his homeland's China, he might as well have an accent from the place he was born from.

And his picture...HE IS SO CUTE! I JUST WANNA CUDDLE HIM! blaugh emotion_kirakira

Everything else looks pretty good though. Just fix the weight and the accent and you're good. smile


Well that's what the seals are for. You act like I'm going to use that weight /all the time/. But nonetheless, I fixed it.
And I have a friend whose purely Norwegian but he has a Russian accent. Mind you he was raised in the U.S. So...what's wrong? neutral
I know where your coming from, but that's what I'm getting it all from.


(Again, read the info or else you would have noticed the fact about the seals regarding his strength and the weight of his arm...)

Oh yeah, whoops. sweatdrop I forgot about those details. emotion_facepalm I did read his background story, word for word. It's just that my memory is crap, so I forgot a lot of stuff... emotion_sweatdrop

Just ignore my stupidity in the other post, I hate my memory... emotion_sweatdrop emotion_facepalm Sorry about that sweatdrop

But nonetheless, Approved. biggrin


It's alright. I just find it well upsetting when people don't seem to read everything sweatdrop I made sure to put a lot of limits on him, and if you want, I can have it where someone else has to remove the seal (either ripping or burning. keep in mind his arm can melt under extreme heat and he has a seal attached to his face. pretty sure he would be scared of burning himself. lol)
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