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 Posted: Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:31 pm
I'm in need serious help with title of the roleplay and story big time. It's a vampire, werewolf, and human roleplay, For the genre, it is romance, drama, comedy, mystery, and maybe angst. later on, there will be another race added, but I can't reveal of the race just yet. All, I can tell you, is that it's also important for part of story which will happen later on. I already gotten name for the title story, and names for the two main characters.
I only put down notes for the story, but will take me a while to finish the story. I just hope that, I don't end up with bad writeblock.
The only hard time that am having, is trying not to reveal to much of the girl in the story. I want to keep it a mystery.
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Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 6:45 am
So you need help with what exactly? A title right?
A non--revealing semi-cryptic title with a tie to the story but still vague enough not to spoil anything?
Hmm...
Werewolves, vampires, humans, a third mystery race, and genre coverage.
What would be the main focus of the roleplay genre-wise? And what race gets the most attention?
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Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:33 pm
Jikial So you need help with what exactly? A title right? A non--revealing semi-cryptic title with a tie to the story but still vague enough not to spoil anything? Hmm... Werewolves, vampires, humans, a third mystery race, and genre coverage. What would be the main focus of the roleplay genre-wise? And what race gets the most attention? I already gotten a name for the title story and everything. Just need some help with the story. I can show you the notes that I already put down on the list. The race that will get the most attention would be the fourth race that won't be revealed later on in the roleplay.
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Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:06 pm
I'll be happy to help then, I can help with stories and whatnot. Though remember, most times a group of RPers will start going wherever they want to go with it all.
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2013 1:15 am
Here are the notes that I put down. I will be happy to explain about the details if you have any questions.
Start off in medieval era.
A castle, that lays in the center of a majestic forest.
There lived two powerful vampires (cousins).
Both have different personality and share different goals/ideas.
Lucian is wise, corrected, and calm. He believes that their kind should remain in the shallows from outside world.
Cornelius is charismatic, neutral, and selfish. He follows his own rules and believes that their kind should be superior to the humans race.
One day, Lucian find a woman injured and unconscious.
Lucian decide to take the woman back to the castle and nursed back to heath.
Lucian started falling for the lovely human girl.
Cornelius also grew fond of the human girl as well.
Cornelius decide confess his feelings to the human girl.
The human girl was pleased to hear of his love for her, but she turn him down.
Cornelius was not happy and did everything in his power to make her his.
Than something tragic happened to the girl which leaves a mystery. (only Cornelisu know of how she died)
Lucian heard what happen and wanted answers.
Cornelius vanished without a trance.
Cornelius swore that he would make Lucian life unhappy and take everything from his cousin.
As time passes, he had build his own coven.
Cornelius has decide to rage a war against his cousin.
Both Lucian and Cornelius had became swore enemies.
Many years has passed and is now the modern time.
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Posted: Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:59 am
Sondra Starfire Here are the notes that I put down. I will be happy to explain about the details if you have any questions.
Start off in medieval era.
A castle, that lays in the center of a majestic forest.
There lived two powerful vampires (cousins).
Both have different personality and share different goals/ideas.
Lucian is wise, corrected, and calm. He believes that their kind should remain in the shallows from outside world.
Cornelius is charismatic, neutral, and selfish. He follows his own rules and believes that their kind should be superior to the humans race.
One day, Lucian find a woman injured and unconscious.
Lucian decide to take the woman back to the castle and nursed back to heath.
Lucian started falling for the lovely human girl.
Cornelius also grew fond of the human girl as well.
Cornelius decide confess his feelings to the human girl.
The human girl was pleased to hear of his love for her, but she turn him down.
Cornelius was not happy and did everything in his power to make her his.
Than something tragic happened to the girl which leaves a mystery. (only Cornelisu know of how she died)
Lucian heard what happen and wanted answers.
Cornelius vanished without a trace.
Cornelius swore that he would make Lucian life unhappy and take everything from his cousin.
As time passes, he had build his own coven.
Cornelius has decide to rage a war against his cousin.
Both Lucian and Cornelius had became sworn enemies.
Many years has passed and is now the modern time now.
I suppose I should ask if Lucien has his own coven? What happened in the time between that the war between these brothers is finally starting to come to a climax? And why is Cornelius such a d**k? You get bonus points if the setting is Romania (or any of east Europe, where vampire's originally stomped around), and if it turns out that Lucian is actually the Big Bad and not Cornelius. The woman needs to be mighty important to drive a man insane, and if only one of the cousins (not brothers, sorry) knows, and he's the one who swears vengeance, it leads one to wonder what the other did. Then again, some family rivalries start off such small things. What exactly do you want to refine in this story?
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Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2013 4:55 pm
Yes, Lucien does has his own coven.
Lucien and Cornelius were close when they were children, but over the years Cornelius changed and kept himself distance from him. Actually, in truth he really hated his cousin. Reason? Well, he has always tried to push himself to the limit to please the elders, but everyone looked up to Lucien instead, and Cornelius was just treated like an outcast.
As for what started this war? Well, I forgot to mention this, but it has something to do of one of the cousins being chosen as head leader position of the clan which I totally forgotten to mention.
For the woman in the story. She is important, but it has something to do of what race she is, once the race mystery is revealed in the roleplay.
I can tell you of what race it is, but would feel better in sending you pm instead. ninja
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Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:57 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 12:02 am
The two cousin is kind of similar to the manga called 'Black Bird'. Though the the two characters are brothers, but became rivalries to get position as head leader of the clan.
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Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:25 pm
Anyway, I'm still trying to figure things out for the story. Hopefully, maybe something will give me an idea. I'm just having trouble of where to start off in the beginning of the story.
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Posted: Tue Jun 25, 2013 5:15 pm
After reading everything (I'm a big fan of Black Bird as well), Here's my idea--take it or leave it, i don't mind.. n//n;; Maybe because its in modern times now, Lucien's cousin finds himself fond of a girl in the modern times. And he'll do anything once again to make her his. Lucien catches wind and captures the human girl before his cousin can get a chance to do anything. Lucien may not know what happened to the last human girl, but I doubt he isn't smart and wise enough to suspect his cousin--otherwise he probably wouldn't have lived for so long. His cousin finds out what Lucien did and now not only is a war of fantasy with other races but business as well.. (I'm sure the vampires need to have a good way to pay for their comfortable life style...) That's all I got.. Hope it helps..
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 12:04 am
MiLynn Aiko After reading everything (I'm a big fan of Black Bird as well), Here's my idea--take it or leave it, i don't mind.. n//n;; Maybe because its in modern times now, Lucien's cousin finds himself fond of a girl in the modern times. And he'll do anything once again to make her his. Lucien catches wind and captures the human girl before his cousin can get a chance to do anything. Lucien may not know what happened to the last human girl, but I doubt he isn't smart and wise enough to suspect his cousin--otherwise he probably wouldn't have lived for so long. His cousin finds out what Lucien did and now not only is a war of fantasy with other races but business as well.. (I'm sure the vampires need to have a good way to pay for their comfortable life style...) That's all I got.. Hope it helps.. Hmmm...I do like your idea. Oh, and I've been reading another manga based from an Otome game called Nise no chigiri.
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 3:10 am
Sondra Starfire Hmmm...I do like your idea. Oh, and I've been reading another manga based from an Otome game called Nise no chigiri. Thanks for pointing that one out--i'm now quite interested in reading it.. n////n;; If you do make an rp with the storyline you were talking about, please let me know, I'm quite interested. As for manga, aside from blackbird, I've been reading one called Skip Beat. And if you wanna talk manga or anime, feel free to friend or pm me.. HUGE FAN.. have been since I was about 12.. I'm now 26. I feel old.. n////n;;;;;;;
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Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:14 am
MiLynn Aiko Sondra Starfire Hmmm...I do like your idea. Oh, and I've been reading another manga based from an Otome game called Nise no chigiri. Thanks for pointing that one out--i'm now quite interested in reading it.. n////n;; If you do make an rp with the storyline you were talking about, please let me know, I'm quite interested. As for manga, aside from blackbird, I've been reading one called Skip Beat. And if you wanna talk manga or anime, feel free to friend or pm me.. HUGE FAN.. have been since I was about 12.. I'm now 26. I feel old.. n////n;;;;;;; I will once I have the story figured out, and to improve my rp skills. Also, am a huge fan of romance and smut mangas.
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Posted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 3:11 pm
Sondra Starfire I will once I have the story figured out, and to improve my rp skills. Also, am a huge fan of romance and smut mangas. You'd probably like Josei mangas then.. They are directed at ladies.. not girls... lol If you don't mind me asking.. How old are you irl?
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