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Valhalla Knight of Jupiter

Current Weapon: Gyrocompass
New Weapon: N/A

Current Magic: Magic pool is upped by 30 seconds and shared between two attack options.
Attack One: Reversal — Same as his Squire.
Attack Two: Vertigo — Valhalla’s magic causes his opponent to temporarily lose their internal sense of direction. There is no up or down, no left or right. The effect would cause one to feel as though everything around them was spinning, even if they stood stationary. Or even the sensation of falling, despite being on solid ground. Imagine sticking your head at the end of a baseball bat and spinning around several times, and then having to run across a field.
After being released from the attack, an opponent may still feel dizzy, or even nauseous, but like his other attack, the reaction and effect is pretty open to player interpretation.

New Magic: Magic pool is upped by 30 seconds.
No longer does his magic just cause a reversal in movement, but contact with his magic causes vertigo, in which his opponent temporarily loses their internal sense of direction, as well. There is no up or down, no left or right. The effect would cause one to feel as though everything around them was spinning, even if they stood stationary. Or even the sensation of falling, despite being on solid ground. Imagine sticking your head at the end of a baseball bat and spinning around several times, and then having to run across a field. Now, even if someone is able to figure out how to best the reversal magic, they would still be under the effect of the sensation of vertigo.
After being released from the attack, an opponent may still feel dizzy, or even nauseous, but the reaction and effect is pretty open to player interpretation.

(Just combining the two.)

Summons Creature: An eagle, a cross between a harpy and a golden. Variation of a Lightning Bird and/or Zapdos.
Summons Ability: Able to conduct electric current, on her master’s order she is capable of releasing bolts of lightning (a magical form and not real, potentially fatal kind) from just flying overhead, close by, or making physical contact, leaving her victims with mild to moderate electric burns, seeing stars, and their hair probably on end.

Concordia Page of Chronos

Current Weapon: An hourglass
New Weapon: A simple sling (seems homemade in construction, can shoot no further than 5 feet on a good day). Projectile tends to be medium sized nuts like acorns.

Squire Weapon: A prettier hourglass with the beginnings of buds or vines around or inside it
New Weapon: A sturdier sling (no more than 8 foot range). Projectile tends to be large nuts like Hickory nuts.

Squire Magic: When Concordia turns her hourglass the target (an ally) receives a small boost of energy towards their physical attack power. While she is channeling her magic said ally can punch, kick, swing harder than usual. The hourglass must remain in her hands while channeling and if dropped/knocked away she must pick it up again before being able to channel again. The total channeling time she is capable of at this stage is 30 seconds.
New Magic: Concordia can choose to target an ally instead of an enemy. When she does so she channels her powers into the projectile and upon it hitting the target they receive a small boost of energy towards their physical attack power. The power remains as long as she stays focused on the ally and while she is channeling her magic said ally can punch, kick, swing harder than usual. Power can be disrupted if someone distracts Concordia or hits her in any way. The total channeling time she is capable of at this stage is 30 seconds.

Knight Weapon: An elaborate and delicate looking hourglass with flowers having sprung from the bugs/vines
New Weapon: A strong sling with good range and durability. Projectile tends to be large, very hard nuts like Black Walnuts.
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Knight Magic: When Concordia turns her hourglass the target (an ally) receives a larger boost of energy towards their physical attack power. While she is channeling her magic said ally can punch, kick, swing harder than usual. The hourglass must remain in her hands while channeling and if dropped/knocked away she must pick it up again before being able to channel again. The total channeling time she is capable of at this stage is 45 seconds.
New Magic: Concordia can choose to target an ally instead of an enemy. When she does so she channels her powers into the projectile and upon it hitting the target they receive a larger boost of energy towards their physical attack power. The power remains as long as she stays focused on the ally and while she is channeling her magic said ally can punch, kick, swing harder than usual. Power can be disrupted if someone distracts Concordia or hits her in any way. The total channeling time she is capable of at this stage is 45 seconds.

Summons Creature: A sheep-sized porcupine. Visually speaking looks a little bit like a Shaymin. White fur with green spines, has a few small flowers mixed in among the quills.
Summons Ability: When the porcupine curls up in a defensive ball Concordia is temporarily covered in an ethereal prickly shield of her own. While in the sheild she cannot attack or even move. This works only on her.

Dallol, Page of Uranus

Current Weapon: A ladle
New Weapon: NA, keeping what she has at the moment =3

EDIT (for clarification): There will be no change to her weapons for all 3 stages. ^^

Current Magic:
Squire - ally gains a boost in speed, total channeling time = 30 seconds
Knight - ally gains both a boost in speed and attack power, total channeling time = 1 minute
New Magic: (combining both effects together, increasing the effect at Knight stage, and adding the option that she can channel the ability on herself so long as she is proficient with her magic)
Squire - target gains both a boost in speed and attack power, total channeling time = 30 seconds
Knight - target gains a greater boost in speed and attack power, total channeling time = 1 minute

Summons Creature: The Sandwalker (looks like a really big scorpion, around the size of a horse, with the beak of an eagle, crab-like claws and a stinging tail)
Summons Ability: Able to call upon a barrier made of red sand around it and anyone adjacent to it to deflect physical and magical attacks. Anyone caught within the barrier is unable to attack so long as it is up.

EDIT: This barrier will be 10 feet in width and height. ^^

Delphi Page of Polaris

Current Weapon: The scepter should have little to no design, but clearly be a scepter in shape. It would be hallow and thus light weight, easy to swing but not capable of much damage. For length I'd say for starting it should be the length of her lower arm.
New Weapon: No change.

Current Magic: Delphi can only poke or lightly hit people with her scepter, it really isn't all that weighty or solid. Don't expect much damage from her scepter.
New Magic: No change.


Squire Weapon: This is where it should start to gain some sort of raised design and start to reach past her elbow in length. The scepter would also start gaining some weight and solidness, become less likely to break when used to hit someone.
New Weapon: No change.

Squire Magic: At this point the shield she can cast will last 30 seconds. Her magic will hold back all agents of chaos that are at her level or lower. The shield itself, size wise, is five foot in radius. So it gives her the ability to protect more than two people, in case one needs treatment from someone else.
New Magic: No change.




Knight Weapon: At this point the scepter should reach to midway up her upper arm and be quite sturdy and solid, with some more weight to it. The design should now be wrapped about the scepter and the stone at the scepters top should have some fancy design around it, keeping it in place.
New Weapon: I'd like to go from a scepter to a small, mini, staff. From floor to hip in length. With some sorta big design at the top of it, and the crystal at the top as well..

Knight Magic: At this point in the game Delphi can actually repel an agent of chaos, rather than just keep them at bay, it still only works on those her rank or lower. The shield now will bounce an agent of chaos away, giving someone time to regroup and her to lower her shield so the other can attack the agent of chaos, since they are now not right on top of them. The duration of time is slightly more than the last attack, now 40 seconds, the radius however has remained the same five feet.
New Magic: For anyone who hits into her shield they get a slightly stronger than usual static shock before being bounced back from the shield. Other than that I wanna keep it the same as above.



Summons Creature: Cobra
Summons Ability: The cobra would be fifteen foot in length (a King cobra can be anywhere between 12 to 18.5 foot long at full length) and would rear up in sway back and forth in order to hypnotize people and will them to not approach Delphi.

Nysa, Squire of Neptune

Current SQUIRE Weapon: Swan feather quill pen still with a teal ribbon tied to the base, but now with a slight magical property. That property can only be channeled when he is writing with this pen (or going through the motions of writing), and only if it is beautiful/elegant/graceful writing.
New SQUIRE Weapon: A fencing sabre made of seashell with the swan feather/ribbon upon the hilt (to commemorate the previous weapon-form). The very tip of the sabre is the only sharp component, but it is more "pokey" than anything. Has the potential to make very shallow cuts upon a surface/skin, but cannot make a cut much beyond a millimeter in depth. Brittle like weaker seashell and requires much care to prevent it from snapping in combat.

Current KNIGHT Weapon: Swan feather quill pen with a small decorative section about the base (perhaps beads + tiny seashells + ribbons).
New KNIGHT Weapon: A fencing sabre made of much stronger seashell (similar in strength to metal). The swan feather/ribbon has changed to metal adornments about the hilt, still taking on a feather-like shape. Has potential to make slightly deeper cuts, but the cuts still are very superficial (maximum of 2 millimeters in depth).

Current SQUIRE Magic: While writing or going through the motions of writing, this magic boosts a single ally's movements to be more fluid/graceful for as long as Nysa is writing. Considering it would be a fight, he most likely would not be able to write for longer than 30 seconds uninterrupted (To clarify, the time limit would be 30 seconds maximum). He may not use the magic on himself.
New SQUIRE Magic: While concentrating upon his weapon, if he touches an opponent with the tip of the seashell Sabre, this magic takes away some of the opponent's grace. The opponent would be more prone to tripping up on their own feet and less likely to dodge attacks. The effect lasts for 30 seconds.

Current KNIGHT Magic: The magical property is stronger, but it still can only be channeled when going through the motions of graceful lettering. It now boosts his own movements as well as an ally's movements to be more fluid/graceful. Regardless of how long he goes through the motions, this boost lasts for 45 seconds flat. It is an ever so slightly more powerful boost, but it's not enough of a difference to be noted (the main difference is the number of people affected and the amount of time they are affected)
New KNIGHT Magic: While concentrating upon his weapon, if he touches an opponent with the tip of the seashell Sabre, this magic takes away some of the opponent's grace. The opponent would be more prone to tripping up on their own feet and less likely to dodge attacks. The effect now lasts for 45 seconds.

Summons Creature: A large swan-like bird with very minor differences in anatomy to a swan. (She takes up the full horse-size)
Summons Ability: The summon is a peaceful sort and will never outright attack. She herself can fly, but her body cannot support the weight of another individual, so she cannot be ridden.
Swan Song ~ The summon sings out a beautifully sad song, but it is meant as a last resort. Any who hear the summon's song (whether ally, enemy, or even Nysa himself) will be struck with incredible grief. Those who are closest (within 10 feet) will not be able to block out the sound very readily, but those who are further away can still potentially hear it, but it is more likely that they can block out the sound as well. All who hear the song will find themselves down on their knees. The summon dismisses herself after the song, essentially "killing" herself, but those affected by the song will still remain grief-stricken for 45 seconds (stage 1-3) or for 25 seconds (stage 4) after the summon dismisses herself. (OOC Note: think of this as Pokemon's "Perish Song" in a way)

Approved.

The creature is fine but can you please narrow down to one actual physical attack, either the burns or the flesh wounds? Please requote me with changes, thanks!