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 Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 5:36 pm
 Nana Ugiu Light Witch Full name Nana May Ugiu
Nickname I have no nickname.
Birthday I was born August 27.
Age I am sixteen years old.
Gender If you haven’t noticed I am a Female.
Sexuality I am attracted to both genders, Therefore I am Bisexual.
Height I am 5’7, don’t judge my height.
Weight I weigh 130 pounds.
Nationality I am a proud Irish women.
Homeland I was born in Berlin Ireland.
Accent I have a Irish/Gaelic accent.
Personality/Mannerism I am a girl who likes to flirt with everyone. I don’t care who you are, if you’re cute then I’m coming after you. People have said that I am a bit hyper and don’t take things seriously. I am polity if you are older then me or I have known for some time. I am protective to the ones I love.. I can be a bit evil at times but only when someone starts something.
So i guess you can say I am Hyper, a Flirt. Protective, Polite, and a we bit evil.
Personal Skill I am amazing at cooking. I am also very flexible which
comes in handy in battles.
Occupation I do not have a job, but I am looking to work.
Family Members The only family I have is my younger sister Kiki. My mother is dead and my father well...I don't really know I never met my father.
Friends Anybody who is nice to us.
Enemies Anyone who tries to kill us.
History/Background When I was younger ,about ten years old, my mother was killed by meisters.My father I never knew who he was. when i was younger my mother told me he just left. I don't really know what happened to him. Anyways, Kiki was just born so I took her and myself out of Berlin. I knew my mother was evil and she would train me to be evil as well. Just because we are witches doesn’t mean we have to be evil right? So I took Kiki and myself and moved to death city. For six years I have been protecting my younger sister and making new friends. I have killed people but only because they knew the power my sister has. Kiki is a dark/shadow witch and very powerful for her young age. Anyone would want her soul just to get power. She is too young to know or control this power but I still protect her. She stays by my side and never leaves it. I only trust a few people alone with her. I am her protector and I will die protecting her.
Appearance Silver hair that hits her lower back. Milky white skin the glows in the moon light. pale pink lips soft to the touch. long black eyes lashes that make her her silver/blue eyes seem brighter. She wears half heart necklace that is gold.
Other Forms Does 
Soul Color Spirit White
Flaws I have a hard time paying attention. I also don’t battle well in the dark…I just don’t like the dark. I can get a bit to hyper and hurt someone pretty bad.
Weaknesses I am powerless in complete dark, I need some kind of light. I have weak attacks toward dark creatures. I must have my spell book with me or I can’t use my magic.
Abilities (What are the abilities of your Witches??)
Reflecting Shield, A shield made from pure light, ( can only hold back one strong attack, 4 weaker ones)
Blinding light, A ball of light that blinds enemies, ( time limit: 2 minutes)
Light wings, Angel like wings made from light, ( time limit: 30 minutes, is weak against attacks)
Light sword, A sword made from sunlight to hold off an attacks enemies, ( can only use once a day, must be day)
Hobbies I love to sing for my friends having small parties so my friends may enjoy themselves
Likes I like roses and cherry blossoms. I also like to ball room dance and pull pranks on people.
Dislikes I do not like the dark at all but I must put up with it. I hate evil beings like my mother was. I don’t like jerks at all.
Theme Song Dance with the Devil
Interesting Facts/Trivia My eyes change two different colors Silver and blue.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:16 pm
 Kiki Ugiu Dark/shadow witch Full name I am Kiki Ann Ugiu
Nickname My nickname is Ki
Birthday I was born December 8.
Age Six
Gender I am a girl.
Sexuality I am too young to know but I guess straight?
Height 3’5
Weight 59
Nationality I am Irish
Homeland Nana said we were born in Berlin, Ireland
Accent I have an Irish accent
Personality/Mannerism I get shy around new people. I try to be nice to everyone I meet. I don’t like seeing people get hurt. I am very polite and kind. I’m caring toward others. I am loving to people I have known for a little while.
Personal Skill I can dance pretty good and my sister is teaching my how to be flexible
Occupation I’m too young for a job
Family Members My big sissy Nana, Mother (deceased) , Father (unknown)
Friends people who don’t attack me or nana
Enemies people who want my soul
History/Background I have been training to be a strong witch since I was three. My sister protects me a lot since I can barley control my magic. Nana says I must learn to protect myself before learning to attack. I have been attack a lot but my sissy was always there to protect me. She says I have a strong soul and power that others want. I don’t understand why people want my soul. I’m only six and I didn’t do anything to them. I have to stay by my sister’s side or people that we trust. I can’t be alone or something bad might happen. I have this bunny my sister gave me when I was two. She made it herself so that I can protect myself. I don’t know who my mother it but I do know that she was evil. I asked Nana about our daddy but she said she didn't even know who he was. She said he might be dead but she doesn't really know.
Appearance Light blue hair that shines in light. Red eyes the glow in the darkness. Milky white skin like my sister, pink thin lips. Wears a half heart silver necklace. Think black eyelashes that show my eyes more.
Other Forms No I only have one.
Soul Color My soul is midnight blue.
Flaws Get scared easy, Gives up to easy, Sensitive skin easily hurt
Weaknesses cant fight when scared. Must have shadows or darkness.
Abilities (What are the abilities of your Witches??)
Bunny Hammer, the rabbit she carries around can turn into a giant hammer to protect herself (time limit: 5 minutes)
Shadow wall, A giant wall to protect her from attack (can only use when there are shadows and can only hold back 4 attacks)
Complete darkness, an attack that send hundreds of dark spikes into a person killing them, ( Can't control can only use once)
Dark wing, Large angel like wing so she can fly (can only carry her and aren’t good in strong winds)
Terror scream, a strong scream to send her enemies back so she can run ( only use once and uses a lot of strength )
Hobbies I garden with my sissy when I am not training.
Likes I like dancing, playing hide and seek and being with people I love.
Dislikes I don’t like spiders, or peoples dyeing, or being left alone.
Theme Song Angel of darkness
Interesting Facts/Trivia I carry around a stuff bunny with me at all times
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:54 pm
I'm confused with your post layout....Where is the history/background for the both of them? Please add the stuff you took out back to clear things up a bit so people won't get confused, kay?
Also, seeing as how this is a semi-literate to literate role-playing guild, work on your capitalization, spelling, and grammar. Also, please....being semi-literate also means no chat speak.
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:59 pm
I have fixed them. Are they alright now?
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:48 am
For their family members, include their parents, please. And if it says that they only have each other, then it means their parents are obviously deceased, so put that.
Also in the bio, you only stated how the mother died, but where the heck is the father in all of this? In the bio, please include that.
For Nana:
Not many people are going to know/understand what "bi" stands for, so just put bisexual, full word.
Their is no way she can be 5"7 and can only weigh 103 lbs. The height for people who are 5"6 is 130 lbs, so if you want, you can just switch the last two numbers around and make the weight 130.
You're switching back and forth from Nana to her sister in her personality. Please explain her personality completely, then go back to her sister later.
For Nana's abilities, please give her abilities a proper description, and include the flaws you put for them.
For Kiki: I LOVE HER PICTURE!!!! I had a squealing fit... emotion_bigheart XD Anyways...
Again, with the family members for Kiki, explain that they're deceased for her, too, and explain how they died the same way you did for Nana.
With the abilities for Kiki, please put spaces for them to make the reading easier.
Example: Bunny Hammer: The rabbit she carries around can turn into a giant hammer to protect herself. The time limit usage is....(You only put minutes, so how many minutes? Please put that in)
Shadow Wall: A giant wall to protect herself from attacks. She can only use this when there are shadows and can only hold back four attacks. (Good flaw! Keep this one)
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Yeah, spaces like that. Just do that to separate them a little to make the reading all the easier. 3nodding
Anyways....I want to cuddle Kiki so bad right now...she is so cute!!!! I can't stop squealing XDDD
Anywho, just do these edits, and then it's approval time. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:23 am
OK I think I finally fix those two biggrin
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:32 am
Yep, everything looks good to go!
Approved!
Just remember to work on your grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and literature. Semi-literate means no chat speak, remember that. ^ ^
Go on ahead to the sub-forum entitled "Book of Witches and Kishin". You can make your topic there, and it can hold your profiles for you, as well as your post layouts, extras, etc.
^ ^
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