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Eighth Diviner Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 5:31 pm
Don't like the Kekkei Genkai's we offer? Make your own.
1. Must have a weakness.
2. Detailed descriptions
3. Actually read your post and tell me its not OP
4. No more than 15 custom kekkei genkai jutsus
5. YOU MUST pick a name, it doesn't have to be creative, but please do it and try to make it different from previous names, we need to keep the kekkei genkai threads updated and it's hard to do if some have no name
6. All customs made may be subject to change at a later date. This is to safeguard against people managing to slip overpowered things past us and then insisting that it stays because it's already been accepted. By creating a custom bloodline/clan, you agree to and accept that parts of your customs may be changed or removed entirely at a later date.
[align=center][b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Name:[/b]
[b][u][size=20]Write Here, Include if Clan or Kekkei Genkai[/size][/u][/b]
[b]Three Words Describing the Clan/Kekkei Genkai:[/b]
[i][size=9]Three, Words, Here[/size][/i]
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Picture[/b]
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Description, History:[/b]
[/align][b] Strengths[/b]:
• < Gifted areas? >
•< Stat advantages? >
• < etc >
[b]Weaknesses[/b]:
• < What they're bad against >
• < Vulnerabilities >
• < etc >
[b]Rules and Requirements[/b]: •
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Stages:[/b]
[b]Clan/Kekkei Genkai Jutsus:[/b]
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:27 pm
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Name: Shinton Mind Release Three Words Describing the Clan/Kekkei Genkai: Three, Words, Here Clan/Kekkei Genkai Picture  Clan/Kekkei Genkai Description, History: Mind Release (心遁, Shinton) is a rare Kekkei Tōta that occurs rarely in members of the past Hakyoku Clan of Otogakure, with its only current wielder being Shinzō Hakyoku. Shinzō explains that the mind release is created by utilizing Lightning, Yin and Yang natures to influence a persons cognitive processes for various additional effects. The lightning release is used because of electrical impulses in the nervous system, focused mainly on the central nervous system, in particular the brain, to effect cognitive functions, such as memory and thought. Yin, being spiritual, is often associated with Genjutsu, while the Yang principle is used to breathe life into the illusions formed by the Yin Release, making them quite potent. The Mind Release is used predominately for infiltration and subtle mind control, as well as suggestive thought, making it ideal for those wishing to direct events unseen. Strengths: • Expert Genjutsu •
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Rules and Requirements: • Raiton | Yin-Yang
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Stages: None
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Eighth Diviner Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:58 pm
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Name: Iron-Water Write Here, Include if Clan or Kekkei Genkai Three Words Describing the Clan/Kekkei Genkai: Armory, puppetry, Iron Clan/Kekkei Genkai PictureClan/Kekkei Genkai Description, History: The Iron-Water Stlye Jutsu Is a clan mark trait to the Kerasoki clan, it fuses Iron from the ground with water from around them to make weapons out of them or puppets. The Jutsu it's Self Is like a mix between Chiyo's Puppetry, The third Kagekazage Iron Sand Style, and Tenten's Weaponry. most Clan members learn Genjutsu to help themselves out with a lot of people. usually traps the person in a dark void with nothing but water under their feet, and from there weapons come flying at them traping them against a wall {but that's only a basic Genjutsu for them.} but the Iron Water Jutsu can very from making a shuriken, to a sword, to a axe and so on, anything the user can think of weapon wise they can make {except guns or anything along those lines.} even though the style is used to make weapons they can make puppets out of the Iron and their Chakra so each puppet can copy one Jutsu the user knows other then the Iron Water Style. The Iron Water Style Jutsu can also be used to change basic Jutsu like the Water Dragon Jutsu into the Iron Water Dragon Jutsu making it more deadly because the Iron in it hit the opponent like Kunai slicing them a part most of the time, but can also turn the Water Clone Jutsu into Iron water Clone Jutsu making them stronger and take more hits as if you were hitting an actually person, but they usually have their weapons appear out of their body. But because of how limited they are when using the Iron-Water each Clan member usually carries a large canteen on their back filled with Iron and Water, so no matter where they are they have what they need to use there Clan's kekkei Genkai. Strengths: • < Gifted areas?> •
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Rules and Requirements: • has to be born in clan and has to have a signature water Jutsu {animal}
Clan/Kekkei Genkai Stages: Curse Stage
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:40 pm
Okay here's the thing i see a few problematic with your kekkei genkai. 1. Its to close to the sharigan 2. The risks for it are way to high for anyone because if you push just enough You'd die before you got anywhere 3. The % of how often a member of the getaway it is too low maybe 1 out every 3 members but 1 out of 5 is saying that the kekkei genkai would die out at any time 4. It's WAY to over powered, how you have it your saying you can copy everything even other clan's kekkei genkai's just think about that You'd have the power to bring down a whole village with just this how would that be fair for anyone? 5. {this one was from a friend who looked at it} it isn't a kekkai genkai its like a body modification & as a modification its pretty cheap & shows no draw back which already disqualifies this Well that's how i look at right now personally
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:14 pm
Koneko Ayatsuri Overpowered- It doesn't permanantly copy jutsu until jonin, though it requires great risk still, and the required DNA. The idea is to basically be like Orochimaru and Kabuto, whereas it's POSSIBLE to use any jutsu, but improbable. The risks make sure I don't go around copying everything. Sharingan- The only resemblance is that it can copy stuff. The sharingan is actually much more easier and cheaper to use than this, making it more powerful in most cases. This is not an occular kekkei genkai, but is more of a memorization and body modification kekkei genkai that allows the user to withstand such surgery in most cases. Risks- This is set up so that I can't go around copying every jinchuriiki, kage, and S-Rank jutsu in such a cheap manner. This is the big weakness to a big kekkei genkai. Users- I guess 1 in 3 would work. That was jut my explanation to explain that it's less OP than it seems. What should I change to make it less OP or RISK-proned to you? Basically, I want what gives Kabuto and Orochimaru their ability to modify themselves to use any jutsu with DNA. Ex: Yamato was given Senju DNA. Thanks. A fifth one was added from a friend of mine you should read
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:39 pm
Koneko Ayatsuri Well, when I was putting it as a kekkei genkai, the parts that were actually in the kekkei genkai where basically the memorization jutsu, and the ability to mirror someones jutsu with the use of dna, but only once. Also the trait passed down that grants the family members strong resistance within their arteries and body despite poor health conditions, but I can understand how it doesn't seem like much of a Kekkei Genkai. So what do you suggest I do to have a similar ability? well here's someone elses opinion of your kekkei genkai, it obviously requires some outside source to be perfected. ruining the possibility of a bloodline trait between a clan. no, it's just terrible overall. but on changing it i'd have to get Eighth to look over it and tell you that my job was to just point out if it can be approved or not as a kekkei genaki and that's a no, why not just come up with something different that doesn't have any of these problems and don't try copying a character from the show where's the thought for it? P.S. on a side note, when quoting someone learn too set it up correctly please.. username here [/quote ] take out the space at the end
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 10:02 pm
Koneko Ayatsuri Well now I feel stupid and kind of like a jerk. sad It was supposed to be different than Orochimarus, and it was. A lot of nin in the series go through body modification, even ones that have nothing to do with orochimaru. Whatever. Tis fine. Koneko wasn't going to accomplish his goal anyways, but it would have been cool to try. Sorry if I am horrible at all of this, I am new to Gaia and extremely organized rp. your not stupid and not a jerk, it's just your kekkei genkai is just way to over the top and not really a clan bloodline more like a mix of other clan's bloodlines
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 10:09 pm
I deleted my other posts, so you should delete yours, but I could see what you were trying to say. We have different ways of viewing what it does. You view view it as body modification while I view it as the positive and negative blood system where as AB+ is compatible with any other. I think that's how it goes. Anyways. If I applied for sharingan, I would be able to do the same thing but without modification or having to wait very long. So that's what confused me. But I guess it doesn't matter that much. Everyone has a different way of seeing things.
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