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 Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:35 pm
Character's Name: Lady X
Nicknames: X, Warrior Queen, The Straight Edge Superstar, Exxy (like The Rock has Rocky (Also, Exxy is really only used in crowd chants. The others are used everywhere from commentary to the website to interviews to fan posters and more)).
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 225
Alignment: Face (for now)
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Weight Classification: Cruiser
Race: Caucasian
Nationality: USA
Classification: High Flyer (like CM Punk and Lita), with a tad of Hardcore (like Mickie James).
Hometown: Los Angeles, California
Pic Bas: See Avatar
Appearance Description: Her skin tone is probably as pale porcelain as you'll ever see with a fine dusting of tan freckles over her face arms and randomly elsewhere.
While her natural hair color is unknown to most, X has an almost sickening love for dying her curly hair (along with tattoos, but more on that later). So far both before wrestling and throughout her career thus far she's dyed her hair: pink streaks, pink purple and blue streaks, brunette full head, brunette with blue streaks, brunette mixed with raspberry/burgundy full head (to hide her roots when they started coming back) and her current color is a rich beautiful sun- kissed honey blonde. She plans to redye for her debut with a funky mix of blue and turquoise full head. After that...who knows?!
Her eyes are hazel, her face is round but not plump, just cute, and her long muscular legs are defiantly her best athletic feature, though she has a sharp left hook; oh, yes, she's a lefty.
Moving on to tattoos... (pics to come) Like one of her wrestling idols, CM Punk, she has tattoos almost everywhere yet still insists she's got plenty of room for more. A few of her top favourite tatts consists of a broken charm bracelet on her right wrist (her 1st tattoo) dedicated to all the family she's lost already (every charm a different member), a heart filled with multi- colored starbursts over her own heart (the shape, not the candy), and her Fight Like A Girl lyrics tattoo on her right inner forearm quoting: "Hold your head high, don't ever let them define the light in your eyes, love yourself, give them hell, you can take on this world, you just stand and be strong, and then fight like a girl."
Entrance Music: Hell Yeah by Rev Theory (skip first fourty seconds.)
Entrance Description: Stops on top of stage and stands in 'X' position with spread legs and raised arms, hands do the rock on sign. From there she struts down to the ring, climbs the steel steps, enters between the top and second rope and flips her hair back when she stands up straight again. Walking straight across the ring to the front-right turnbuckle (where Randy Orton does his pose thing) she copies Mickie James' bow- flip up-'x' crossed hands- spread to outstretched arms with the rock on sign, before repeating it on front- left turnbuckle. Only then is she done and her opponent can come out or the match can begin.
Tag Teams and Stables:
She has only been in one tag team called The Fire&Ice Queens in the Indies with her good friend, the WWE NXT Anti Diva, Paige.
Championships Held:
CWF WOMEN'S CHAMPION x5
OVW WOMEN'S REGIONAL CHAMPION x2
TNA KO CHAMPION x2
Other Awards and Achievements:
Most Improvement and best of her class at Santino Bros Wrestling Academy in Bell Gardens, CA
2-Time Chilli Cook Off Winner in 6th grade - 1st Place (2categories)
Commonly Used Moves:
Clothesline, Running Drop Elbow, Suplex.
Finishers & Signature Moves:
"X-ecutioner's Kick" --> High Kick to the side of skull.
"Triple X" or "XXX" ---> Lady X version of GTS.
"Rated X Elbow" ---> drop elbow from the top rope.
"Lady Like" ---> A "Kiss My A**" gesture (two fingers are kissed then placed almost seductively on her rear end) before she ascends to the top rope and lands a Lita worthy Moonsault.
Signature Quotes sad You mean a catchphrase?)
"You do not interrupt a lady when she is talking! And you don't talk to a lady like that!"
"Let me hear you say it!" (Used in addressing the crowd to say her catchphrases with her.)
"If you don't shut up, RIGHT NOW, I will go down to that ring and kick your a**!"
"You wanna fight then will do it my way. Bring It on..."
"Oh, hell, yeah!!"
"Oh for Heaven's sake, shut the frick up already!"
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:52 pm
As a crew member there are a few things I'd just like to point out concerning your profile.
Your race would be: Caucasian, White isn't a race it is a color. No one cares about your freckles.
Your classification is three things that don't mesh well together. Brawlers don't normally high fly.
Tag Team/Stables: I don't think anyone cares who was who.
Championships held: Do you have links to your wins? Or at least the guilds you came from, it helps with your booking.
Entrance theme: Does a Cheetah Girl theme really work for your gimmick? It's not exactly 'Punk' like not Punk at all..
Other Awards:
Pretty sure that Jeff Hardy won best wrestler in TNA in 2012
I don't recall seeing your character in Santino Bros Wrestling Academy..
Unless you repeated the 6th grade you can't be a 2x Winner for chili in the 6th grade..
No one really cares which ones do more damage, no need to include that bit.
Based on your weight/height, you'd be a crusierweight.
Also, you call yourself the Warrior Queen, but then call yourself the Straight edge princess/Punk princess. Best to drop the Warrior Queen
Let's hope you at least consider what I've said, and good luck!
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 6:01 pm
I can tell you have put plenty of effort and can be a very fun addition, but first your profile needs polishing. Some good polishing.
first note: the freckles would go under appearance, not race. Also get to work on that tektek please. Also Disney channel singers hardly fit a punk girl I could give you some suggestions..maybe P!nk?
To add onto what's already been said your styles and classifications are, without any other way to state it really without losing the point, a mess. You're trying to have too much. If you're a powerhouse, be a powerhouse, don't try and add high flying. Pick one style and roll with it, you'll be better off for it. If you have too much it makes it very hard for anyone to work a match with you. 1-2 classifications is all you need and don't make them..well..virtual opposites..
In your request you shared your love of CM Punk, and if you didn't it shows as way too obvious with this profile. Maybe this makes you feel closer to him or is your way of having an homage to him not my place to judge you for that but Anaconda Vise and GTS in movesets, the Vise being a common? As someone who has seen virtual carbon copies of real wrestlers before in gfed let me tell you breaking away from that and making someone even more original you'll be seen all the better for it.
A for effort, but your profile needs polishing and knocking out the dents before I feel very comfortable booking her at this time.
Let's see um...think that's all there is to say. Look forward to seeing this rough draft become a nice final product.
- Tim Edgren, GM of Evolution
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 6:37 pm
It's a great first start, listen to the advice above; they are both trying to help you maximize your potential, follow it and you'll be main event-ing before you know it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 9:57 pm
Alright let's take these one at a time before I change anything. Firstly, thank you for your feedback, it means a lot from all of you. Now, Clepsydra: Most of your advice I will take and listen to like the professional I am. However, the dropping of "Warrior Queen" is out of the question. I'd rather drop the Punk Princess thing. While this may just be a role play on here and awesome sport to watch for some people, in real life it is actually my chosen career and I do go to school for it and Lady X as a warrior queen is my identity and I wear it with pride. The TNA thing I'll easily change; I assumed because it's not real that we added "whatever" facts, that's why it's there. I'm aware of Jeff Hardy being the real winner, I voted for him. If you are actually referring to the real Santinos Bros Wrestling Academy and that you went on the website, you should know that the info hasn't been updated in a long time. You should also know that if we're bringing my personal info into this, that the class of 2013 was already filled when I signed up and I won't be able to join the full classes until 2014. Again however, this is a role play. The 2x chili cook off winner is actually possibly because it did happen when I was 12. The first award was best in taste. The second award was best name. But it's not like anyone cares, right? GM of Evolution: Yours was less harsh but none the wiser, and I am listening to you as well. Now that I think about it, I'll rid the TCG song completely and just leave it as one of those upbeat playlist workout songs for now. I love P!nk but that Rev Theory song is exactly how I want to come across as a face and heel; "She's a 10, hell-bent, I'm in heaven tonight. 6 speeds, sex scene, playing out in my mind. One look I'm hooked for the running, one touch (one hit) she screams 'keep it comin!' Are you ready for the best damn ride of your life?!" I'm a tough as nails chick, I'm not going to lie, I've been through some real hard sh*t and I've come through the other side stronger, wiser and tougher than ever before. I don't know any other song I could possibly relate to more when I'm in Lady X mode. Goodbye, dear Anaconda Vise... I'm not too good at submissions yet anyway. But I want my version of the GTS to stay, Kaitlyn uses it too and most people don't notice because she has her own name for it as well; it's one of my favorites and one I've already mastered in real life. Thank you both for your input, it helps here and in my future real life endeavors as well. I'll update the profile now then make the tek tek directly after. XoXo, Lady X
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2013 6:08 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:06 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 9:37 am
Lady X, new account. River got hacked and banned.
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Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2013 4:12 am
Rule 63 is in full effect
(Rule 63 is a rule of the internet that reads as follows: "For any given male character, there is a female version of that character." This rule's exceptions are only in the instance that A: the male character is already so androgynous that a female version would be basically the same, or B: the female version hasn't been drawn yet.)
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 8:31 pm
Harli_Nightmare Rule 63 is in full effect (Rule 63 is a rule of the internet that reads as follows: "For any given male character, there is a female version of that character." This rule's exceptions are only in the instance that A: the male character is already so androgynous that a female version would be basically the same, or B: the female version hasn't been drawn yet.) I didn't know the internet had rules, I thought it was a free country. Tell me who am I copying? Because in my mind I'm being 100% me. stare
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 9:36 pm
MrsCMPunkBrooks Harli_Nightmare Rule 63 is in full effect (Rule 63 is a rule of the internet that reads as follows: "For any given male character, there is a female version of that character." This rule's exceptions are only in the instance that A: the male character is already so androgynous that a female version would be basically the same, or B: the female version hasn't been drawn yet.) I didn't know the internet had rules, I thought it was a free country. Tell me who am I copying? Because in my mind I'm being 100% me. stare My apologies, Salem explained this to me. Not an insult but a compliment. Thanks Harli.
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 12:50 am
MrsCMPunkBrooks MrsCMPunkBrooks Harli_Nightmare Rule 63 is in full effect (Rule 63 is a rule of the internet that reads as follows: "For any given male character, there is a female version of that character." This rule's exceptions are only in the instance that A: the male character is already so androgynous that a female version would be basically the same, or B: the female version hasn't been drawn yet.) I didn't know the internet had rules, I thought it was a free country. Tell me who am I copying? Because in my mind I'm being 100% me. stare My apologies, Salem explained this to me. Not an insult but a compliment. Thanks Harli. lol it's all good I thought it was quite awesome though
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 1:07 am
Harli_Nightmare MrsCMPunkBrooks MrsCMPunkBrooks Harli_Nightmare Rule 63 is in full effect (Rule 63 is a rule of the internet that reads as follows: "For any given male character, there is a female version of that character." This rule's exceptions are only in the instance that A: the male character is already so androgynous that a female version would be basically the same, or B: the female version hasn't been drawn yet.) I didn't know the internet had rules, I thought it was a free country. Tell me who am I copying? Because in my mind I'm being 100% me. stare My apologies, Salem explained this to me. Not an insult but a compliment. Thanks Harli. lol it's all good I thought it was quite awesome though What? My diss?
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