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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:24 pm
Alexander Faust Meister Full name Alexander Berlaz Faust Nickname Alex Birthday July 9th Age 20 Gender Male Sexuality Straight Height 6'0 Weight 185 lbs. Nationality European Homeland Doesn't exactly know his family constantly moved around but majority of his life was spent in the northern european area. Accent English american mixed. His accent shifted from when he spent two and a half years in america. Personality A bit laid back, a bit perverted, but respects woman and there privacy and happy a simply put gentleman pervert. He's usually in a good mood but is very protective when it come to girls or friends being in danger. Personal Skill He has intermediate training in hand to hand and sword tech. He's a good artist only when he focuses and seem has great skill at cooking eastern style cuisine. Occupation Traveling chef. At the age of 10 he started monitoring his father cook and learned, he then began cooking for his family and they realized that he had a natural talent within the culinary arts they then let him cook once during one of there stops within a small town and everyone seemed to enjoy his cooking, at the age of 14 he went on cooking for those that lived within the areas he visited as a business instead of his father. Rank Student. Star gaia_star Family Members He only has his mother, Sonja and father, Jace. He once had a brother but along his travels through the northern African regions he became strangely ill possibly from the natives or the food and water, after a time of two weeks he had passed away, the disease that took his life was believed to be pneumonia. Other family such as Grand parents, he doesn't know. Friends None at the moment. Enemies Kishin, witches and men that tend to hit women. History/Background Alexander's family were a group of travelers, as his mother had even given birth to him on there travels. His life had taken him to many places, and he had enjoyed every single bit of it. From learning all the things he had, to all the strange and curious people he met. To him, he had seen it all until he had heard about DWMA, and that place sparked his curiosity and as his travels brought him closer to this place. After leaving his family, he began noticing changes in himself and it made him even more curious than he already was. He wanted to know what this place was very badly, but at the same time, he had no idea what he was going to get into.
Family life before birth: His family in the beginning was quite average. They had a decent home, with his father, Jace, with a job as a waiter and Sonja, his mother, at home taking of what would be Alexander's older brother, Syrus. It was all average until Jace's boss caught him cooking. His boss had told him to only wait on customers and not to cook, but a meal had already gone out. After the night was done, Jace was commented greatly on his cooking skill. So he then thought to himself if others would like it, so he had others try and they enjoyed it, He proposed a thought to Sonja to begin traveling around to see if others would love his cooking, and she responded with a yes. From this, they sold there house and bought a RV styled vehicle to sell there food from and sleep in. Where ever they went more and more people began to love there food so from that they were payed or tipped, and able to continue moving around.
Partner Need one.
Soul Color Orange
Abilities Barrier control:Tough skin A simple a ability used for coating ones skin in soul energy to lessen damage taken from certain blows such as punches, kicks or other blunt attacks but doesn't on blade or piercing attacks nor does it block energy based attacks and the barrier can only be sustained for a maximum time of 30 min. Force control: Comet Blow This ability is similar to Barrier control but the soul energy is not coating the body but just the forearm or lower leg areas and the energy is discharged upon contact of the blow dealing extra damage. If user is not focused enough the energy can backfire damaging user. Force control: Phoenix Wing This ability is a bit more advanced than the others. This ability is used to channel soul energy through an object like a pole, sword, or other melee based weapons to give it a fiery aura. The aura can reach high temperature but can also cause damage to the user if not careful. The energy cannot not be sustained very long when using averagely made weapons, there might be a great chance of the weapon breaking down or crack. This ability works better on magic weapons, Example: the Meisters weapon. but also has a chance of damaging his partner if not focused. Hobbies Cooking and sketching Flaws Soft-hearted Klutz Habit-whistles-
Weaknesses When angered he becomes reckless and exhausts himself quickly, and loses focus quickly as well. Likes Women, Good cooking, and nice scenery Dislikes Seriousness, people who hurt women and fast food Theme Song Fiesta by +Plus(day off music) Mahou Taisen(fighting) PAPER MOON(fighting)
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 6:18 pm
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A bit confuse here, doesn't everyone have a homeland? Unless he moves a lot and can't remember what's his homeland..
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 6:21 pm
Many Problems with this profile:
Height: 6' ? 6 foot what? 6"1? 6"5? Please edit and clarify.
Weight: Do you know how much 164 lbs. weigh? Edit the weight according to his height.
Nationality: YES! We ALL know his skin color is white. By Nationality, we mean what kind of state/country, city/village/town he is from. Is he Canadian? Is he German? Is he British. Edit AND clarify.
Homeland: Same thing applies with nationality. Everyone has a Homeland! They are obviously born somewhere, then moved somewhere else. That is what homeland means. Was Alex born in Germany? Canada? United Kingdom? Edit and clarify.
Accent: If he has an American accent, but mixed with an English one, then that means he was obviously born from United Kingdom, or England. Edit this, and make the homeland and nationality match with it.
Occupation: Do you know what occupation means? It states the first position your character has when out of school. Is Alex a waiter? A carpenter? A builder? An author? Clarify and explain!
Rank: This means what position he has in school. Is he the vice-principal? Is he a teacher? A student? A chef? Please clarify.
Star: This means the Meister and his/her partner has a ranking the in DWMA school system. READ: One Star Meisters and Weapons: Meisters and Weapons who have collected less than 50 souls; Can only borrow level one and two books; Can only take level one or two missions. Two Star Meisters and Weapons: Meisters and Weapons who promote to 2-star rank are automatically members of Spartoi; Meisters and Weapons who have collected more than 50 souls; Can only borrow level one or two books; Can only take level one, two and some level three missions; Can come into the Death Room without permission. Three Star Meisters and Weapons: Meisters and Weapons who have collected 99 souls; Can borrow level one, two, and three books; Can take missions up to level 3 and some level 4 missions; You're allowed to enter the underground (The jails, the secret vault, etc.). Four Star Meisters and Weapons: This is the highest rank that you can obtain. It means that the Meister has successfully given his/her weapon partner a witch soul to devour, and become a death scythe. By doing this, both Meister and Weapon are highly honoured and respected all around DWMA. They have permission to go anywhere and everywhere in the school building; Can take all kinds of missions; May take all kinds of books. Even the weapon who is a death scythe can be used by Shinigami himself. They can even enter the entire underground.
Family Members: Hello? Really? "Not many, but is glad to have them." Oh really? WHICH family members then? Mother? Father? Brother? Sister? Uncle? Aunt? Nephew? Niece? Grandmother? Grandmother? Etc. Please clarify who Alex has in his family tree. Also say who is who, and who is still alive, who is currently deceased, etc. Also explain your relationship with them.
Enemies: The typical enemies of Meisters are witches and Kishins, even other Meisters and Weapons! EDIT THAT! No matter what, everybody will have a friend, an enemy, etc.
Partner: If you're a Meister, please clarify which at the top.
Abilities: Problems with these too... Barrier Control: Tough Skin: This ability is considered god-modding. Bricks are..obviously brick hard. Nobody can leave a hole into a brick wall unless they're crazy strong, in which you're character is not. Edit this ability, add a flaw. Comet Blow: Another God-modding ability. Edit it, add a flaw. Phoenix Wing: Well there is a flaw, but it's still a little god-modding. Edit it a bit more. You should know very well that nobody in life is perfect, not even religion or races.
Other than that, I will not accept this profile unless everything is edited.
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 11:36 am
Sorry for the confusion I hope its better now and also i apologize on the abilities i've never had issues before but i hope they seem more balanced.
And yes he does tend to move around alot. I kinda typed this on the brink of passing out so i didn't have much focus and once again i am sorry. Also reiko were you the one that said you could make posts look better.
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:36 pm
Fenrir Wolsenbein Sorry for the confusion I hope its better now and also i apologize on the abilities i've never had issues before but i hope they seem more balanced. And yes he does tend to move around alot. I kinda typed this on the brink of passing out so i didn't have much focus and once again i am sorry. Also reiko were you the one that said you could make posts look better. O.o You typed this profile out while on the brink of passing out? Oh my god...Are you doing okay now? Oh, and it's alright. And....I did? o-o When? Where? I don't remember saying something like that....Did you read it from somewhere else in the guild?
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:37 am
Reiko Iwamaru Four Star Meisters and Weapons: This is the highest rank that you can obtain. It means that the Meister has successfully given his/her weapon partner a witch soul to devour, and become a death scythe. By doing this, both Meister and Weapon are highly honoured and respected all around DWMA. They have permission to go anywhere and everywhere in the school building; Can take all kinds of missions; May take all kinds of books. Even the weapon who is a death scythe can be used by Shinigami himself. They can even enter the entire underground. I've never know there's such thing as Four Star... I thought the maximum is Three
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:44 am
Hey_Julian15 Reiko Iwamaru Four Star Meisters and Weapons: This is the highest rank that you can obtain. It means that the Meister has successfully given his/her weapon partner a witch soul to devour, and become a death scythe. By doing this, both Meister and Weapon are highly honoured and respected all around DWMA. They have permission to go anywhere and everywhere in the school building; Can take all kinds of missions; May take all kinds of books. Even the weapon who is a death scythe can be used by Shinigami himself. They can even enter the entire underground. I've never know there's such thing as Four Star... I thought the maximum is Three You never knew? o-o
Well yeah, there's a four star ranking, which is also the Death Scythe ranking. The third star happens when you get your weapon to eat 99 souls, and a witch soul, but haven't upgraded to a death scythe yet. Once the weapon gets upgraded, THEN it's Four Star Ranking (Or Death Scythe)
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:50 am
Reiko Iwamaru You never knew? o-o
Well yeah, there's a four star ranking, which is also the Death Scythe ranking. The third star happens when you get your weapon to eat 99 souls, and a witch soul, but haven't upgraded to a death scythe yet. Once the weapon gets upgraded, THEN it's Four Star Ranking (Or Death Scythe) Three-Star Meisters are the most powerful, and is a rank associated mostly with the teachers, such as Sid and Stein. It does not necessarily mean that a Meister can become a Three-Star Meister just by turning their Weapon into a Death Scythe. A Meister needs to have exceptional skill and power to have the title of a Three-Star Meister. There is also the rank of a Death Scythe Meister, a Meister who has made their partner a Death Scythe. Although they are of high rank, they do not necessarily have to be Three-Stars, as the protagonist Maka, has made her partner Soul into a Death Scythe and is still a Two-Star Meister. - Soul Eater Wikia
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 10:15 am
Hey_Julian15 Reiko Iwamaru You never knew? o-o
Well yeah, there's a four star ranking, which is also the Death Scythe ranking. The third star happens when you get your weapon to eat 99 souls, and a witch soul, but haven't upgraded to a death scythe yet. Once the weapon gets upgraded, THEN it's Four Star Ranking (Or Death Scythe) Three-Star Meisters are the most powerful, and is a rank associated mostly with the teachers, such as Sid and Stein. It does not necessarily mean that a Meister can become a Three-Star Meister just by turning their Weapon into a Death Scythe. A Meister needs to have exceptional skill and power to have the title of a Three-Star Meister. There is also the rank of a Death Scythe Meister, a Meister who has made their partner a Death Scythe. Although they are of high rank, they do not necessarily have to be Three-Stars, as the protagonist Maka, has made her partner Soul into a Death Scythe and is still a Two-Star Meister. - Soul Eater Wikia Oh..Whoa. Okay. Total mess up there. sweatdrop I haven't watched Soul Eater in awhile so I'm a tad rusty on the details. Thanks for the brush up though. ^ ^Please explain in the bio how and why Alex's father left, also explain in the bio how Alex's brother became ill, as well as adding a little more in-depth and information into the bio. Also explain how he got his current occupation as a traveling chef in the bio, and how his life used to be before his family started to constantly move around. Other than that, everything else looks good. Once all of that is edited, it'll be accepted. I, too, will help with a post layout. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:47 am
Wow i'm sorry i didn't put it i meant put that he was born while his family moved around and his father didn't leave his mother and father was all he had left. XD
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 2:04 pm
Fenrir Wolsenbein Wow i'm sorry i didn't put it i meant put that he was born while his family moved around and his father didn't leave his mother and father was all he had left. XD Oh okay then. XD Then explain how the mother "left" then. On top of that, explain in the bio how Alex's brother became ill and weak, his current occupation as a traveling chef, how his life used to be before his family started moving around. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 5:59 pm
Reiko Iwamaru Fenrir Wolsenbein Wow i'm sorry i didn't put it i meant put that he was born while his family moved around and his father didn't leave his mother and father was all he had left. XD Oh okay then. XD Then explain how the mother "left" then. On top of that, explain in the bio how Alex's brother became ill and weak, his current occupation as a traveling chef, how his life used to be before his family started moving around. 3nodding i fixed it earlier and neither of them left, he left them for DWMA. all that he has left or is still alive to his knowledge are his mother and father and i mentioned as well how his brother became ill and how he was born while they were travelling so his whole life he moved around even at birth. Not to offensive i believe you may have misread. If not i apologize for the accusation
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 9:52 pm
Fenrir Wolsenbein Reiko Iwamaru Fenrir Wolsenbein Wow i'm sorry i didn't put it i meant put that he was born while his family moved around and his father didn't leave his mother and father was all he had left. XD Oh okay then. XD Then explain how the mother "left" then. On top of that, explain in the bio how Alex's brother became ill and weak, his current occupation as a traveling chef, how his life used to be before his family started moving around. 3nodding i fixed it earlier and neither of them left, he left them for DWMA. all that he has left or is still alive to his knowledge are his mother and father and i mentioned as well how his brother became ill and how he was born while they were travelling so his whole life he moved around even at birth. Not to offensive i believe you may have misread. If not i apologize for the accusation It's alright, and I did read the bio. I guess in the bio, add in some things to Alex's life how it used to be before his family started moving around a lot. Also explain his brother's death. Yes, I know it was from an illness, but which illness caused his death? Cancer? Pneumonia? Or just some unknown disease? Also, is Alex's brother older or younger than him? I apologize for all of this unconvenience really, I'm really just trying to help you get through this so your profile can be approved.
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 9:00 am
Oh i see thank you then for the assistance when it came to havin a whole detailed back story isn't really one of my strong sides so thank you once more. smile
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Reiko Iwamaru Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 9:40 am
Fenrir Wolsenbein Oh i see thank you then for the assistance when it came to havin a whole detailed back story isn't really one of my strong sides so thank you once more. smile You're welcome. smile Once all of that good stuff in the bio is edited, I shall approve of the profile.
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