a poem about the avatar in the gaian world, it isn't really finished yet but...
just sharing and hoping on good comments biggrin (not only postive) i'm here to learn wink

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there's more to loom
then only groom
it's the look the like
even the doom

how to strike
wich way to hike
to get wat i want
to much i dislike

i am to pale
to flat
just a ordinairy male
always lone on bed

is it?

lifting hiking
shifting liking
dreams became true