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[ENROLLMENT] Aiden L. Harrison ~ Hunter - accepted

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Natsuko-neko

Unstoppable OTP

PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:43 pm


Welcome
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:46 pm


DEUS EX MACHINA PERSONNEL FORM

The Hunter
Name: Aiden L. Harrison
Nicknames: Ai, Den
Gender: Male
Age: 18


Category: Sun



The Weapon
Name: Souji
Nicknames: Sou
Type of Weapon: Spetum
Former species of weapon: Byakko
Gender: Male


Personalities: Let us know a little about both Hunter and weapon -remember, the weapon is sentient and can talk telepathically to their Hunter.)

Aiden:
Inquisitive What does this button do?
He's curious about the world around him and collects knowledge like a sponge. If you notice him carrying a note book around then it happens to be the one he writes questions in as they come to him so he can ask someone for the answer later. It's not hard to get him to share answers that he's collected with you if you know the right way to ask him. Though, if something really catches his attention, watch out if your his target for answers. He will not stop pestering you until he gets what he wants to know out of you, that is if you know. Warning! Don't let him near unlabeled buttons or buttons that say any of the following: danger, warning, do not touch or in case of emergency. He WILL push them.

Cheerful Good morning~ It's 6am and time to get up! 8D
There is almost always a smile on his face, in almost any situation. It's very hard to get rid of it and some times when you try it just makes that smile turn into a Cheshire grin. His voice seems to always have an upbeat tone to it, and usually an amused tone is mixed with it. a** crack of dawn? He's smiling and telling you it's a beautiful day. Rain storm on the horizon? Perfect surfing weather. Fell down four flights of stairs before landing on broken glass? It's only a flesh wound. What most don't know is that his cheerfulness is a very well constructed mask most of the time and very few people can see when he is truly happy. Half the time HE believes it's real even when it's not. It started when he was eight soon after his parents died and he was sent into foster care.

Sadistic Are u mad bro? *Poke poke poke* 8D
He plays with people for his own amusement. Mentally, physically or spiritually, it doesn't matter to him. He enjoys seeing how different people react to the same situation, or the same people react to different situations. He writes down the more notable in his question/answers notebook to go over later as well. This was one of the main reasons why he used to bounce from foster house to foster house.


Souji:
Quiet "..."
Souji has never been one for talking a lot, even before he was turned into a weapon. He likes to sit back and listen to others more then talk his self, easier to learn that way.

Sarcastic "Are you sure you want to go that way?"
His idea of helping, when he deems to talk, tends to end up on the snarky side eight times out of ten. This can lead to playful snark matches between the two, even at opportune moments.

Loyal "I have your back!"
He's dedicated to a person once they have his loyalty, something you have to work for and show that you deserve it.


Together they try to balance each other but it doesn't always work.


Why did your human character choose to become a Hunter?
Aiden's parents had married young, weren't out of college, didn't have steady enough jobs to support more then two people, and he hadn't been planned, which lead to him being given up for adoption when he was born. He was fostered in his early years then bounced around while trying to track down his birth parents. There was plenty of good years, and he did make some good friends, he just didn't stay in one place for more then a few years if he could help it so he could continue his search. He eventually found them when he was 17 but by then they had already had a second son and he wouldn't fit in now was he willing to try. He jumped at the change to be a hunter to feel like he belonged somewhere when the chance came.


Weapon Ability
The Eye - Boosts accuracy AND damage.
Aiden points the Spetum at the ground at an angle in front of him, blade first then Souji starts to glow. In return Aiden's opponent seems to 'glow' to him so he can target easier.


Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Dark red
Hair Colour/Style: Short and shaggy in a dark green, almost black (It's dyed, originally black)
Skin Colour: Tan
Clothing Style/Colours: He wears a dark green tank top, black pants with a dark diamond pattern on the right leg around the knee, black combat boots and a dark red sash around his hips like a belt. The uniform coat is over the tank top and has short sleeves.
Extra: n/a
References: n/a

Natsuko-neko

Unstoppable OTP


Carhop Cavalier

Familiar Teenager

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:32 pm


Hey, firt off I'd like to say congrats and welcome to the community!

Now, on to crit:

Age - Minimum age for Hunters is 18, unless you have a Damn Good Reason, and that'll be decided by the GM's.

Personality - Checks out pretty well! I wouldn't necessarily call him a troll, however. Playing with people for one's own amusement is typically labeled as sadism. Just a note!

Reason for joining - His backstory seems a bit...much? Members of Halloween actually try not to kill humans more often than not. They think of humans as cows for FEAR - if you keep the human alive for a long period you get more FEAR over a long span of time, but if you kill the human there and then you get a big dose of FEAR, but it won't last more than a few minutes.

So maybe consider reworking it? Perhaps his parents didn't exactly want a child, and gave him up for adoption? Having a tragic element is fine, but no one's life is pure tragedy.

Weapon Ability - Just make sure you list the FEAR Mechanic from this guide!

Again, welcome to the TiH community! Have fun!
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2013 8:43 pm


Thank you, I have been stalking the shop off an on for a while now so I'm excited to finally join with more then a quest character in some metas/orps ^u^

Thanks, I must have missed that bit, I'll bump his age up to 18, there wasn't really any reason in particular other then Aiden is usually 16 when I play him.

Mkay thanks <3

Thank you, I was not sure if the back story was work able or not. I just kind of ran with it and waited to see if anyone would give some pointers. I will definitely rework it.

Thanks for the link!

Thanks for the crit, it helped <3 And I will ^u^

Natsuko-neko

Unstoppable OTP



iStoleYurVamps

iStoleYurVamps

Crew

Trash Husband

PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 12:48 pm


Overall looks good~! I can't see anything that breaks rules but I'll try to crit best I can~


Personality-Hunter:
Inquisitive- Nothing to comment on only that he should be careful about pushing buttons :'D Could get him into trouble~

Cheerful -"Half the time HE believes it's real even when it's not. It started when he was eight soon after his parents died and he was sent into foster care." contridicts with current history so I assume it's lingering~ lol Nothing else~ It might be good to give examples of how this trait might be negative. I have a girl, (Solia) with much the same view in the sense of forced reality. It's a thing that often is detrimental in the face of hunter missions and the reality that well.. hunters die. So adding a layer of how this trait might be negative can help fit him into the setting/canon 'reality'

Sadistic- I don't think Sadistic is the right word to use in this case. It's the deriving of pleasure from acts of cruelty. Playing with people... Since there are no specific examples the description doesn't match with word. The trait seems more like manipulative or something that is in addition to inquisitive. Provide some examples to put the trait into context if it really is sadism.

Personality: Weapon: Fine as is~ While I love seeing stuff fleshed out, it's good~


History/Reason-
Only thing that strikes me as odd is the idea he was fostered... then was looking for his birth parents. From what I know you don't always need to move around, and a child/youth wouldn't exactly be allowed to travel around. He'd be placed where ever foster care put him. If he ran away to go looking for them, there would be some substantial impact on things like education, social views, etc. You can have the history, but I needs a bit more fleshing out to make sense to me.

Wording has me a bit confused at the end: "they had already had a second son and he wouldn't fit in now was he willing to try. He jumped at the change to be a hunter to feel like he belonged somewhere when the chance came" Just word jumble. I think I know what you mean but not sure~

Only final thing is that it might be good to give an age to when he could see the shadowlings. Most start around 5-10. I THINK, 5 is the youngest. Some see them after event, others grow up with it, (if it's inherited). For him if he did run away to look for parents it could be he saw them on road. Or, could be he started seeing them as a kid and it made him a problem child, hence, why never adopted.

Appearance:
I'm not quite sure he can have 'red' eyes lol. They are normal humans under it all, so unless he wears colored contacts all the time or is albino.
Just the same, dark green hair, might be better just put as black? Even hunters with colored hair-> all hair dye.

ANd only because it's not a huge known thing, a red spiral is the symbol of the Horsemen, the faction hunters hate with burning passion... So idk if you want that on his pant leg. XD

This may seem like a lot but Im wordy u-u Overall you have a good quest, just minor things here and there~
PostPosted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 10:07 pm


//Deus Ex Machina Entry Form 02. 02 .13

//Name: Aiden L. Harrison
//Gender: Male
// Entry level: Trainee
//Status: Sleeping Beauty
//Clearance: Approved for entry


Quote:
You may now contact your artist to begin making his official art~ In addition, you can make his journal and wake him up in The Dark Cove.

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