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PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 2:23 pm


DARK MIRROR SENSHI

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Name: Ophelia Báthory.

Nickname: N/A. She insists people call her Ophelia.

Age: Nineteen.

Birthday: 21st March.

Sign: Ares.

Gemstone: Diamond.

Blood Type: O.

Fav. Food: Pumpkin flavored ice-cream and mango smoothies.

Hated Food: Any meat that is not fish or chicken.

School: Graduated, currently unemployed.

Hobbies:

  • Violin / Music --- Like most teenagers, Ophelia has a strong emotional connection to music. This started when she was eight years old, her mother saw music as a tool used for encouraging gifted children, and insisted her daughter take up an interment. Ophelia picked out a violin at the music shop, and has been a passionate musician ever since. She was a part of the Crystal Academy Orchestra and attended violin lessons twice a week until recently hen she graduated. She likes to compose her own pieces, taking inspiration from both classical and modern renditions, but enjoys learning other peoples work too.

    Yet her love of music does not just stop there. Ophelia is rarely seen without earphones, it helps her block out unwanted distractions and focus at the task at hand. She listens to a range of music, from classical, to indie, to pop and heavy metal. Ophelia has had many hobbies and interests over the years, always moving on when she got bored of the subject at hand. Music however has stuck with her throughout her life and has been her soul constant, thus why she has such a strong emotional connection to it. It makes her feel better when she is sad, it is a soundtrack for her day when she is happy, and it lets out the aggression that she keeps bottled up inside. Despite this she hardly ever goes to live shows, as the crowd intimidates her.

    Now she has been forced to leave her old life behind and start a new identity she uses it as a way to reconnect with her mother, a coping mechanism if you will. It makes her feel, safe.

  • Colourful Things --- From her Gothic appearance some might expect Ophelia to sleep in a coffin, however this is far from the case. Instead she is a girl who likes to surround herself with colour. It stands as a reminder that, no matter how dark the world is, there is always something to smile about. Her notebooks are bright and covered in stickers, the desk in her room is cluttered with cuddly toys and her walls are hidden under a layer of posters. She has ton of phone accessories, and if something seems to be lacking sparkle she will have the sudden urge to glitz it up. She writes in brightly coloured pens and dots her 'i's with little hearts, she can often be found modifying her clothing and sticking rhinestones to otherwise dull objects. Her favorite colour is bright, vivid, cherry red and wears it constantly.

  • Vampires ---It is not a hobby, it is a way of life. Ophelia LOVES anything and everything vampire related (with the exception of Twilight and over dark fantasy romance drivel). She powders her skin so she looks deadly pale, she wears red on her lips to represent blood and even though he does not walk around in Victorian dress's, her fashion sense is very Gothic. This obsession started when she was younger, her mum used to read her Anne Rice novels before she went to bed, and still reads them to her to this very day. Now she hordes vampire fiction, accessories, bags, clothes and film. Her bag is covered in badges that say things like 'bite me' and 'love sucks'. In truth its also lead her to wearing too much make-up, which is another reason people mistake her for someone older than she actually is. She also tends to find vampire-esque men rather attractive, I do not mean emo boys, I mean long hair, bright eyes, waist coats....

  • Learning --- How can this possibly count as a hobby? Well, it just does. Ophelia loves to learn, she reads on average about two books a week, she used to attend a range of academic clubs inside her old school, and when she was finally forced to go home she spent her time studying instead of hanging around with kids her own age. She gets her highs off reading medieval poetry and researching serial killers. She likes to watch quiz shows and shout out the answers at the screen. If she feels like learning more about Shamanism or Voodoo she will go to the local library. If she feels like doing research into historical figures or ancient literature she will spend hours surfing the web - which is ironically the only modern piece of kit she approves of. She just loves to state her curiosities and tell others about her findings, if they want to hear about them or not.


Virtues:

  • Thick Skinned --- Being the only child of a paranoid schizophrenic means, that from a young age, Ophelia has had to come to terms with the fact that the world is not a nice place. Her childhood was hard, and this means that high-school problems and drama seem to bounce off of her, almost like she is wearing a suit of armor. She does not care if people do not like her, it is them that is missing out on the pleasure of her company and friendship. She does not care if boys do not take an interest in her, she is not that interested in relationships anyway, after all boys these days only want one thing. She never cared that she was not invited to the best parties, or that other girls were prettier than her.... There are bigger issues in the world, and she does not understand why little things like these bother people to such extremes. She rarely cries, rarely looses her temper and rarely opens up to others about her feelings. It takes a lot to get her down, and from an outsiders prospective she seems like a girl who has her s**t together, and for the most part she does.

  • Intelligent --- Ophelia has always been an overachiever in academic study. She seems to soak up information like a sponge; however that does not mean she has not had to work her a** off too. She is a Mummy's girl and does everything in her power to make her mother proud. Instead of hanging around with people at school, she went back to her house to study. This put a gaping hole between her and her classmates, she often got picked on but never let it get to her, pleasing her mother was always more important than pleasing her peers. Her mother often read books to her that were too advanced for her age, instead of getting Jack and the Beanstalk, she was being read Hamlet and The Raven, and from this she flourished. At first she developed her first for knowledge as a way of bonding with her parent, however it has grown into a lifelong mission. She is a smart kid, she has always been the smart kid and is quite happy with the role. Though she is not only book smart, she is also very mature for her age, and often gets mistaken for one much older.

  • Confident --- Ophelia is comfortable in her own skin, and she does not mind standing out. She is used to all the comments people shout in the street and criticism and disapproval is something she has learned to live with, though admittedly now she is older the Goth-hate seems to have settled down among people her own age. She does not see why she needs to conform to modern day fashion and actually goes out of her way to be different, but not too different; she does not have the urge to dye her hair, or get tattooed or anything stupid like that... The way she sees it you do not get anything you want if you do not make your intentions clear from the start, so she is very vocal in that aspect and it scares people. She has been asked on dates before, and she makes her beliefs clear early on, thus why she has never had a lasting relationship. When she makes decisions she will generally stand by them, she is not ashamed of admitting she was wrong when she times comes, but at least she had the balls to make them in the first place. She is a girl who knows what she wants, says what she wants, and does what she wants without caring what other people think of her.

  • Eighteen going on Thirty --- Ophelia was born an old soul. She can not remember a time when she did not make her own meals, clean her own room and wash her own clothes. She always got herself out of bed and made her way to school in a timely manor. As a young woman she moves with the grace of a weather girl and often uses words like Miss, Ma'am and Sir when addressing people. She prefers to stay in, drink a glass of wine and read a good book over going out to bar's and parties. She has never touched a drug in her life, that was not prescribed, and has never been tempted by a handsome gentleman. She is human, she has urges and hormones... she just chooses to internalize them and beat them down as much as she can.


Flaws:

  • Apathetic --- Ophelia is one of the coldest people you will ever met. She seems to be uncaring and lacking in human emotion, it is her defense mechanism, but also a huge disadvantage when it comes to making friends. To put it bluntly, she makes people feel beneath her, she does not mean to do it, but she does. Ophelia had a rough childhood, and this has made her bitter. She does not want to hear about problems that she considers small or inadequate, even if they have really upset someone. Your daddy does not give you enough attention? Well boo-hoo, do you know how many people live out there without knowing who their dad is? Your mum will not let you go to that party? Well her mum did not let her outside the house on her own until she was fourteen. Your dog died? Live with it, things die all the time. She just can not grasp the fact that even though these problems do not effect her, they still hurt other people. Sympathy and Empathy are two foreign words to her, and she is much more likely politely dismiss your ramblings as nonsense than pat you on the back. Her voice is full of charming sarcasm, polished words said in a cruel manor.

  • Paranoid --- Ophelia thinks the world is out to get her. She will not go to the shops after dark incase she gets mugged, she will not talk to strangers in case they want to kidnap her and she will not be able to sleep unless every door in the house is locked and bolted; often staying up late at night in case someone tries to break in. She does not give her card details or phone number over the Internet, the government keep all that stuff on a database you know. She keeps her room clean and does everything she can to avoid illness, taking all the right vitamins and so on. Trust is not something that comes easy to her, and often prefers to keep people at arms length. She will not talk to stranger unless she has a good goddamn reason to do so. As you can imagine, this makes making friends hard. She is always ready to expect the worst in people, no matter how often they prove her wrong. She is a cynic, she world is an evil place and she is set in her ways about that.

  • Socially Inept --- Ophelia is a lot of work, and people can not cope with her for extended periods of time, she is just too exhausting. She is a girl who does not understand the concept of chilling out, like at all, and always has to be doing something she sees as productive. Even though she does not hang out, she often finds herself in situations where she is forced to socialize and in truth she does not handle it very well. It is almost like the filter between her brain and her mouth never fully formed. She likes to talk about interesting things, so if you are not as passionate about learning as she is, it is hard to understand what she is rambling on about. She likes to probe people, and is often asking questions, some of which are rather personal and inappropriate. Then when the topic turns to video games or relationships she looks on blankly, not knowing how to join in. She does not take part in such activities and her lack of experience makes her feel awkward. She says some strange things, especially when it comes down to her personal opinions, beliefs and views, it often wins her some odd looks. Not many are surprised when they find out insanity runs in the family, some joke about it, which she detests..

  • Old Fashioned --- Even though Ophelia's views on the world are dark, and she has no trouble accepting it as such, she likes to drift off to her own little personal paradise. Which to her looks a lot like Victorian England, which is were some people actually believe she came from given the way she talks and acts. She prefers to talk to people face to face instead of over emails. She does not like playing video games, and totally blanches when a controller is put in her hands. She has a phone, but its more of a fashion accessory and is almost always turned off, as she does not like the idea of people being able to get a hold of her all the time. She thinks girls should wear skirts, and does not understand why girls these days want to look like boys and vice versa. She does not like tattoo's, piercings, or hair dye... she will not call them outright ugly, but will ask why someone would want to hide their natural beauty. She thinks men should act and look like men (granted men to her look like Louis from Interview with a Vampire, but details, details.) They should hold doors for girls, buy them flowers and act like gentlemen, not hormonal teenage boys.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: A honey colour, more yellow than brown.

Hair: A warm chestnut colour, long. Close to this style/colour.

Face: Pale skin, large eyes, heart shaped face.

Clothes: This. With black ripped fishnets.




Senshi :

Senshi: Sailor Mjolnir, Dark Mirror Senshi of Beserkers.

Challenge: I will break you

Attacks:

  • Sailor Scout Attack: For Victory Or Death!
    Sailor Mjolnir let's out a loud battle cry, her eyes glowing a red colour as she works herself up into a rage. For the next 15 seconds she gains beast like strength, but also looses all self control. Which means she is just as likely to attack an ally as she is her enemy, at times she can even turn on civilians. She can use this up to twice per battle, but after the second time she will be pretty damn tired, both mentally and physically.

  • Super Sailor Scout Attack: Wrath Of The Norsemen!
    Mjolnir lets out another cry. For the next 15 seconds she gains beast like strength and reactions. She can hit harder, move faster and jump further. Though she still looses all sense of humanity, unable to distinguish between friend and foe. This time she gains a red aura, which is admittedly for ascetic affect - striking fear in the heart of her enemy? She hopes so.

  • Eternal Sailor Attack: Live For The Kill!
    Everyone in a 5 meter radius is send into Beserker mode. They for all intensive purposes turn feral, they loose all rational thinking and are likely to attack each other. This lasts for about 15 seconds. This is the only attack she has that does not affect her, as she is outwardly pushing her own rage onto other people. However other people on her team are affected, it is literally ANYONE in that space.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 2:31 pm


Hey there! Let's see if we can get this guy stamped up so that you can play her when her art arrives. :3

Powers: Her powers and her sphere are super fun and well put together. It should be fun to see them in play, especially when she hits her eternal stage. I don't see any changes needed at all, they look absolutely A-Okay.

Personality: I like her personality quite a bit as well. The virtues and flaws work well with each other and as a whole considering the back story and history you've given her. Nothing needs to be changed in her personality, I'm just going to toss out a couple questions/points as food for thought for you while you get into your character's head. :3 How do you think her paranoia is going to affect her when she becomes a senshi and has to go out at night and actually get into fights or drain energy from people? She also seems like a pretty solitary character between her personality and hobbies, have you thought about how you're going to get rps for her in her civilian form?

Hobbies: I'm a little concerned that she has so very many hobbies, mostly with the fact that most of them are solitary or could potentially clash with each other.

@ Solitary - Most of her hobbies (or character quirks) as awfully solitary. Hobbies tend to be the way people help to find ways for their characters to interact and rp together in civilian form. I could see being able to use learning, (maybe shopping based on the vampire/colorful things hobbies), and music maybe but I just wanted to warn you ahead of time that you might be making it difficult on yourself to get rp.

@ Clash - Though they don't necessarily have to I can see how Vampire and Colorful Things could clash quite a bit. If I'm reading it right though it's just basically going to make her room, backpack, locker, wardrobe super cluttered with all the collected things, correct? If so that's fine, I just wanted extra clarification.

@ Burlesque - Though I know it was different in the past, I'm having a really hard time finding any information on current day Burlesque that doesn't end up with some sort of stripping or at least purposefully erotic subtext behind it? All the schools, clubs, and shows that I can find information on are definately focused on eroticism so.. I'm not certain where you character would be able to perform it in a way that was non erotic and fully clothed? Unless she just does it all alone in her home or something? I know there are pole dancing classes that are fully clothed and focused on athletics instead of sexuality that she could take, but I don't think that's what you were going for, is it?

Senshi Fuku: Your example of the senshi fuku as it is probably isn't going to fly. The DMC have a pretty specific look going on with them, and while it can be played with to make it more unique they need to fit the basic guidelines.

As opposed to a regular senshi skin tight bodice the DMC females tend to have a baby doll style dress. That said, a bikini top and pair of shorts in the style of the Starlights isn't really going to work. Here are a few examples of what I mean - Lesath and Chariklo

There are still definately ways to sexy it up and go with a female Thor theme. For instance we have the very sexy valkyrie based senshi - Walkure. And of course I'm failing and can't find her corrupted form. But you get the point. heart

Making her cape the transparent part is a great way to incoorperate that in! I know you mentioned a lot of artist choice so I'm sure you two will come up with something great, I just wanted to warn you ahead of time about the bodice section because it's a pretty important part of what makes a DMC senshi.

All and all she's a great character (which is of course why she got chosen! XD heart ) but she needs a few tweeks or clarifications. If you have more questions let me know and feel free to quote me when you've made changes.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 6:10 pm


There is a hole world of burlesque out there! Admittedly the kind Ophelia takes part in is a lot more artistic than erotic. She does it mainly fully clothed, I mean she is not naked and the costumes are more fun and Victorian themed. She practises more of the 'dance' bits in private, however on stage the music takes center stage with hints of the topic. It is sexy in a certain way, but it is not the focus. Think of something more like this.
Every girl in her little class is different, some like the more erotic stuff, but to her its more of a creative release. She does do shows, every blue moon.

Correct, her room, locker, everything is full of colourful s**t. It is just her thing, stranger things have happened right? She is a goth! but she likes rainbows too. -shot-

How do you think her paranoia is going to affect her when she becomes a senshi and has to go out at night and actually get into fights or drain energy from people? She also seems like a pretty solitary character between her personality and hobbies, have you thought about how you're going to get rps for her in her civilian form?

Her paranoia is never going to really go away, however as a senshi she feels somewhat empowered. Most of her paranoia was down to her mother telling her tales about what the big bad world can do to her little girl, however now she is no longer a weak little girl. As Ophelia she will always be scared of the world, but as a senshi she will be okay to an extent, though admittedly she will always try and go out in pairs - with a agent she trusts. I guess its a battle she will try and fight, as a senshi she might be able to suppress it to an extent. Yet I want to make it clear that as Ophelia, she will ALWAYS be paranoid, ALWAYS.

I have and it will be a little bit of work, to start she will only really socialize with the Negaverse and DMC, however then she will start meeting their friends and her circle will expand. For example she is living with Jett, from that she is going to meet his family, his girlfriend, some of his friends. That is how it is going to grow. She will also meet people at museums, libraries and venues where she preforms. She is a seemingly solitary character, however that does not mean that it is impossible to get an audience with her, it just takes her time to feel safe around new people.

Ophelia, as much as she will hate to admit it, is rather delicate so yes, I will admit that socializing will be hard for her, but hey, that is all development, right? All her life her mother has told her how evil the world is, not the cage has been lifted and she slowly has to discover it for herself. She will start experimenting, saying hi to the waitress who makes her coffee every morning, being a plus one to events, ect.

The amazing person who is doing her art has fixed her look! So that is not a worry, I will just tweak that section when she gets here, since I have no idea what she is going to look like! So excited though! SO. SO. EXCITED. Anyway yea, I will take that out for now. -snips-
PostPosted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 6:13 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:54 am


That sounds very neat, the distinction between feeling more confident in her senshi form and still anxious/nervous in her civilian stage. I like it a lot. heart

Her art is very neat too, congratulations!


Really the only thing I'm having any issues with is her Burlesque hobby.

Can you link me to any schools or clubs or anything that teach it in a non-erotic way?

You linked to a star's performance, which is fine.. but kind of out of the ordinary for something a normal teenager would be doing (most people aren't just given a stage to do whatever they want). If she's going to be a STAR then her personality is probably going to need some tweeks and you're going to need a solid backstory. And if you're going for her being part of like.. a legit performing arts group that's something that could work, but takes a large time commitment. I just think if you're going that route she has too many hobbies that would take a lot of time between music, learning, and burlesque. Especially if she's probably going to have to be getting a job to afford to live once she's forced to leave her mom's house.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:24 am


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I have taken the Burlesque hobby out, I hope this fixes things. heart

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:34 am


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I have taken the Burlesque hobby out, I hope this fixes things. heart


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