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The Savior of Misbehavior
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 Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 11:00 pm
X/DANILO THE HARDCORE PENA X/
Character's Name: Danilo Pena
Nicknames: Devil | Psycho
Height: 5'9
Weight: 161 lbs
Alignment: Face
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Weight Classification: Lightweight
Race: Brazilian
Nationality: Brazilian-American
Classification: Entertainer, Brawler, Hardcore
Hometown: Honolulu, Hawaii
PIC BASE:
ENTRANCE// [X]
RING// [X]
CINEMATIC// [X]
Entrance Music: Run With The Wolves By The Prodigy
Entrance Description:
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After 5 minutes of silence, the crowd was quiet and ready to begin bursting out cheering.
RUN WITH THE WOLVES BY THE PRODIGY HITS THE SPEAKERS
The camera was focused on the stage, no one came out, but Danilo Pena was shown rising up from the stage sitting on a torture chamber smoking a cigarette. Danilo Pena looked like one of those bad luchador guys because he was wearing a luchador mask, he was smoking a cigarette, sitting on a torture chamber chair, had a bullet belt, and his tights/boots were incredible to look at. Danilo had a cigarette on his right hand, but on the other hand Danilo was holding a microphone. Danilo Pena threw his cigarette on the floor and stepped on it. He got up from the torture chamber chair and began walking down the ramp. Danilo was very pumped for his match, but when walking down the ramp Danilo kept a neutral face, and switched the microphone to his right hand and introduced himself into the ring
[[X/ FROM HONOLULU, HAWAII.. WEIGHING IN 161 POUNDS... DANILO PEEEEEEEEENAAAAAAAAA!!!! X/]]
Danilo made a dirty smirk and than tossed the microphone on the floor like it was a piece of s**t. When Danilo reached the end of the ramp he went on the apron and went inside of the ring, ducking the mid-section rope, Danilo than went into the middle of the ring and sat down criss-cross applesauce waiting for the opponent to come out.
Alternate: Danilo made a dirty smirk and than tossed the microphone on the phone like it was a piece of s**t. When Danilo reached the end of the ramp he went on the apron and went inside of the ring, ducking the mid-section rope, Danilo than went into the middle of the ring and glared at his opponent. Danilo had several things in his mind of what he was going to do to his opponent, Danilo taunted and than backed away from the opponent and went to his corner and waited for the bell to ring.
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Tag Teams and Stables:
None
Guilds:
TNWE - Total Nonstop Wrestling Entertainment
GWE - Gaian Wrestling Entertainment (Guild was sold to another person, so.. yeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah)
Championships Held:
#6 time TNWE Champion
#8 time Execution Champion
#3 time Unified Champion
#2 time Undisputed Champion
#4 time GWE Champion
#2 time Extreme Champion
#1 time 50 states Champion
Other Awards and Achievements:
#Inducted into TNWE: Hall of Fame
#Inducted into CWE: Hall of Fame
#Rivalry with CM Punk
#Rivalry with Nine
#Rivalry with Edge
#Rivalry with Triple H
#Became 8 time Execution Champion
#Became 6 time World Champion
#One of my matches are in the top 5 matches of TNWE
And there is many more...
Commonly Used Moves:
Clothesline | Palm Strike | Enzuigiri | Dropkick | Punt | Heart Punch | Spear | Elbow smash | Backhand chop | Crossbody
Finishers & Signature Moves:
[F] Shiranui
The shiranui is a backflip three-quarter facelock falling inverted DDT. This move has a wrestler put the opponent in a three-quarter facelock and run up the corner turnbuckles or ring ropes and jump backwards, performing a backflip in the air, and landing face down to the mat, driving the opponent back-first down to the mat. Sometimes a standing variant is performed by wrestlers with adequate leaping ability, or when assisted by a tag team partner. The move is popularly known, especially in North America. In a slight variation the wrestler lands instead to a seated position, driving the opponent's head between his legs.
[S] Shining Wizard
A strike delivered to an opponent down on one knee. After stepping off the opponent's raised knee with one foot, the wrestler swings his other leg and strikes the opponent's head with either the side of his knee or his shin. A slight variation, which sees the wrestler use a running enzuigiri to the kneeling opponent's head without the use of the opponent's knee for leverage, is known as a Shining Apprentice. Many other "shining" attacks exist, including big boots and dropkicks. The shining wizard can be applied to a standing opponent as well; this would be likely applied by stepping off the opponent's chest and then delivering a knee smash to the opponent's face.
Signature Quotes: [Someone please tell me what the hell I should put here, I have no idea.]
P.S. I'm going to edit my Commonly Used Moves and Entrance later >>>
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:58 am
You seem like a relatively smart kid with your detailed entrance and all that jazz, so lemme let you in on a few things:
Tweeners suck. You can't pull one off here. Choose heel or face, seeing as you have people cheering for you, id choose face.
Secondly, don't include real wrestlers in your history. No one here uses them, so no one cares about them. Its a pretty much CAW exclusive community here.
One more thing, you need to list the guilds you won all of your titles in, because otherwise people will just think you're bsing.
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The Savior of Misbehavior
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 12:07 pm
Neo_Hurricane You seem like a relatively smart kid with your detailed entrance and all that jazz, so lemme let you in on a few things: Tweeners suck. You can't pull one off here. Choose heel or face, seeing as you have people cheering for you, id choose face. Secondly, don't include real wrestlers in your history. No one here uses them, so no one cares about them. Its a pretty much CAW exclusive community here. One more thing, you need to list the guilds you won all of your titles in, because otherwise people will just think you're bsing. Thanks for the tip. I'll edit my profile.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 12:14 pm
FL00Dz Neo_Hurricane You seem like a relatively smart kid with your detailed entrance and all that jazz, so lemme let you in on a few things: Tweeners suck. You can't pull one off here. Choose heel or face, seeing as you have people cheering for you, id choose face. Secondly, don't include real wrestlers in your history. No one here uses them, so no one cares about them. Its a pretty much CAW exclusive community here. One more thing, you need to list the guilds you won all of your titles in, because otherwise people will just think you're bsing. Thanks for the tip. I'll edit my profile. And thank YOU for not being like the other noobies and instantly flipping out when dealt constructive criticism. Bonus points for you already.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 12:22 pm
Neo_Hurricane FL00Dz Neo_Hurricane You seem like a relatively smart kid with your detailed entrance and all that jazz, so lemme let you in on a few things: Tweeners suck. You can't pull one off here. Choose heel or face, seeing as you have people cheering for you, id choose face. Secondly, don't include real wrestlers in your history. No one here uses them, so no one cares about them. Its a pretty much CAW exclusive community here. One more thing, you need to list the guilds you won all of your titles in, because otherwise people will just think you're bsing. Thanks for the tip. I'll edit my profile. And thank YOU for not being like the other noobies and instantly flipping out when dealt constructive criticism. Bonus points for you already. Yaaaay! So anyways, is there any other thing I should change?
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 12:33 pm
FL00Dz Neo_Hurricane FL00Dz Neo_Hurricane You seem like a relatively smart kid with your detailed entrance and all that jazz, so lemme let you in on a few things: Tweeners suck. You can't pull one off here. Choose heel or face, seeing as you have people cheering for you, id choose face. Secondly, don't include real wrestlers in your history. No one here uses them, so no one cares about them. Its a pretty much CAW exclusive community here. One more thing, you need to list the guilds you won all of your titles in, because otherwise people will just think you're bsing. Thanks for the tip. I'll edit my profile. And thank YOU for not being like the other noobies and instantly flipping out when dealt constructive criticism. Bonus points for you already. Yaaaay! So anyways, is there any other thing I should change? I think most importantly would be to distance yourself from anything associated with real wrestlers, so get rid of those factions and tag teams with Cena and Edge, as well as the rivalries. Its a major sore spot with vets around here. Other than that, try and expand your common moves a tad more. Your signature and finisher are both great choices, if you weren't a heavyweight. Don't get me wrong, its nice to see less commonly used moves around here, but make sure you stay in your weight class. The "High Flying Heavyweight" idea has been tried around here, and it doesn't work. I'd suggest either making yourself smaller, or changing your moves.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 1:04 pm
Neo_Hurricane FL00Dz Neo_Hurricane FL00Dz Neo_Hurricane You seem like a relatively smart kid with your detailed entrance and all that jazz, so lemme let you in on a few things: Tweeners suck. You can't pull one off here. Choose heel or face, seeing as you have people cheering for you, id choose face. Secondly, don't include real wrestlers in your history. No one here uses them, so no one cares about them. Its a pretty much CAW exclusive community here. One more thing, you need to list the guilds you won all of your titles in, because otherwise people will just think you're bsing. Thanks for the tip. I'll edit my profile. And thank YOU for not being like the other noobies and instantly flipping out when dealt constructive criticism. Bonus points for you already. Yaaaay! So anyways, is there any other thing I should change? I think most importantly would be to distance yourself from anything associated with real wrestlers, so get rid of those factions and tag teams with Cena and Edge, as well as the rivalries. Its a major sore spot with vets around here. Other than that, try and expand your common moves a tad more. Your signature and finisher are both great choices, if you weren't a heavyweight. Don't get me wrong, its nice to see less commonly used moves around here, but make sure you stay in your weight class. The "High Flying Heavyweight" idea has been tried around here, and it doesn't work. I'd suggest either making yourself smaller, or changing your moves. Thanks again.
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 11:34 am
I don't think you quite grasped what he's talking about, and your profile doesn't need to be extremely big with BOLD Large letters.
If your profile looks good, and less newbish more people would be akin to working with you. It'd be best if you dropped all of your feuds with 'real' characters, for the most part they do not exist in main stream guilds like this one, and probably drop the title history as well.
I personally find it hard to believe that you've held all of those titles with a profile like that, plus you know being a member of quite a few of those guilds you listed and I don't see your character's name in the roster, guild itself or in the title history. Just sayin..
TNWE especially since the lovely little banner they have? I made that for them.
Also for your entrance you noted that 'there's silence for five minutes and then music' no one's going to sit in silence for five minutes, especially in the dark just for someone to come out, especially for a guy no one knows about. I'd have either left the arena or turned the channel
Love the choice of finishers, I personally use the Shiranui, probably be best to list it as an 'Asai DDT' as that's what it is essentially, no need to give a description of it, same with the Shining Wizard.
If people don't know what a Shining Wizard is they shouldn't be roleplay wrestling in the first place.
One last thing, we reeeeeeeeeally do not need any more 'Devil/Psycho' characters, goodness knows we have so many currently and in the past and they all just don't work. I think really like out of the near 10 years of history on gaia of all the 'devil/psycho' gimmicks we've had only maybe five of them have actually had much success.
Good luck
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The Savior of Misbehavior
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 2:27 pm
Yukari Clepsydra I don't think you quite grasped what he's talking about, and your profile doesn't need to be extremely big with BOLD Large letters. If your profile looks good, and less newbish more people would be akin to working with you. It'd be best if you dropped all of your feuds with 'real' characters, for the most part they do not exist in main stream guilds like this one, and probably drop the title history as well. I personally find it hard to believe that you've held all of those titles with a profile like that, plus you know being a member of quite a few of those guilds you listed and I don't see your character's name in the roster, guild itself or in the title history. Just sayin.. TNWE especially since the lovely little banner they have? I made that for them. Also for your entrance you noted that 'there's silence for five minutes and then music' no one's going to sit in silence for five minutes, especially in the dark just for someone to come out, especially for a guy no one knows about. I'd have either left the arena or turned the channel Love the choice of finishers, I personally use the Shiranui, probably be best to list it as an 'Asai DDT' as that's what it is essentially, no need to give a description of it, same with the Shining Wizard. If people don't know what a Shining Wizard is they shouldn't be roleplay wrestling in the first place. One last thing, we reeeeeeeeeally do not need any more 'Devil/Psycho' characters, goodness knows we have so many currently and in the past and they all just don't work. I think really like out of the near 10 years of history on gaia of all the 'devil/psycho' gimmicks we've had only maybe five of them have actually had much success. Good luck Okay. I'll change my gimmick up a little.
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 3:37 pm
Yukari Clepsydra I don't think you quite grasped what he's talking about, and your profile doesn't need to be extremely big with BOLD Large letters. If your profile looks good, and less newbish more people would be akin to working with you. It'd be best if you dropped all of your feuds with 'real' characters, for the most part they do not exist in main stream guilds like this one, and probably drop the title history as well. I personally find it hard to believe that you've held all of those titles with a profile like that, plus you know being a member of quite a few of those guilds you listed and I don't see your character's name in the roster, guild itself or in the title history. Just sayin.. TNWE especially since the lovely little banner they have? I made that for them. Also for your entrance you noted that 'there's silence for five minutes and then music' no one's going to sit in silence for five minutes, especially in the dark just for someone to come out, especially for a guy no one knows about. I'd have either left the arena or turned the channel Love the choice of finishers, I personally use the Shiranui, probably be best to list it as an 'Asai DDT' as that's what it is essentially, no need to give a description of it, same with the Shining Wizard. If people don't know what a Shining Wizard is they shouldn't be roleplay wrestling in the first place. One last thing, we reeeeeeeeeally do not need any more 'Devil/Psycho' characters, goodness knows we have so many currently and in the past and they all just don't work. I think really like out of the near 10 years of history on gaia of all the 'devil/psycho' gimmicks we've had only maybe five of them have actually had much success. Good luck You made the TNWE Banner?
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