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Name: Cambria Dempsey

Nickname: Cammy, Bri

Age: 18

Birthday: December 17th.

Sign: Sagittarius

Gemstone: Blue topaz

Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Jellybeans

Hated Food: Mashed Potatoes

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:
Teasing: In being an only Child, Cambria was the one who was fortunate enough to be the teaser, not the teased. From growing up, picking on her cousins, to being the class clown and making jokes about her nearest and dearest friends, Cambria is never without someone to make fun of, be it in an un-hurtful way, or a hurtful way.

Soccer: After spending lots of time indoors as a child due to her minor health problems, Cambria was overjoyed when she was able to go out and play sports, and soccer was the one that really spoke to her. She loves being outside and running through the freshly mowed grass, kicking the checkered soccer ball as hard as she can, and (Hopefully), winning the game for her team. She always keeps a soccer ball in her room and normally kicks it around under her desk while she’s doing homework.

Watching Movies: Why would anyone want to read a book when you can get just as much information from a movie, and get it in WAY less then half the time? She can never understand why some of her friends and father love to read so much. The whole idea of reading just seems so absolutely boring. Movies have action, and they TALK. With movies, it’s a way of really escaping from her reality and getting sucked into a really cool world with tons of awesome people who do really cool things…unlike the boring people of real life. Movies are the kinds of things that Cammy wishes were real.


Virtues:
Protective: Living for fourteen years with a whole clan of younger cousins and parents who have insisted that since she’s the older one and that she is in charge of protecting them, has turned Cammy into some sort of hero. Yes, she enjoys teasing people and her cousins most out of anyone else, but she makes a habit of not picking on people who are weaker then she is, and always makes sure to stand up for them. Sometimes she acts like this is far too much work for one fourteen year old to do all by herself, but, she would never let anyone in her family get hurt, it just wouldn’t happen.

Thorough: Cambria likes to finish things. She likes to finish them to the point that they can never be unfinished. If she is cleaning her room, she’ll take the greatest care to dust each and every surface, and vacuum each and every corner, and get up each and every SPEC of dirt from her floor. She figures if she does something right the first time, then she won’t have to waste time doing it a second, third or fourth time. Due to this nature, projects in school are always top priority, and it seems as though people just love working with her because the job always does get done!

Sociable: Cambria enjoys being surrounded by people who aren’t her family, and as such, loves to go to school each day and see her friends. Cammy is almost always smiling and loves gossiping and just plain hanging out. She will never turn down a chance to hang out, and seems to thrive when she’s in the company of more than four people.

Flaws:
Easily Jealous: In being sick as a young child, Cambria has grown to expect a level of pampering that most children don’t ever hope to see, and therefore makes her a terribly jealous person when others around her are getting more than she is. She wants to be the center of attention all the time, and if your attention goes to something else for even a moment, well, you’re going to find yourself at the receiving end of one heck of a tantrum. Even at fourteen, Cambria can’t seem to figure out that the moon and the stars don’t revolve around her, and that they never did.

Overly Competitive: Ever since she was able to go outside and play, something changed within Cambria, making her a person completely bent on being the very best. (Like no one ever was.) This has caused her to be quite the ball hog in her soccer games, and to go out of her way, and do quite literally anything in order to win. She isn’t above pushing someone over in order to get the ball past them, and will argue any sort of red card that the ref wants to give her. She wants to be a winner, and she’ll do what she has to in order to make it to that point. She will be overly competitive in school as well, focusing on how high her grades are, not just what letter they are. Numbers matter. You can’t succeed without being better than the others. Sometimes, this overly competitive nature will cause her to dip into some rule breaking, she has been known to write some answers on her arm before a test. She hasn't yet been caught, but some of the other teens at school are starting to dislike her attitude of self proclaimed superiority.

Speaks without thinking: Cambria wasn’t born with any sort of word filter and quite often says things that others find very insensitive. She doesn’t mean to say such awful things, she just says what comes to her mind without stopping to thing if it would potentially lose her this friend, or make her someone cry, or make her father wash her mouth out with soap! She didn’t MEAN to call her teacher that word last week, it just slipped out!

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Dark blue

Hair: Hair Ref

Face: A round face, no freckles or anything.

Clothes: School Uniform, or the pajamas show in the ref

Hiiiii, Orange.

I think your hobbies, virtues and flaws tie together really well, though I notice that you put a lot of focus on mentioning Anastasia's twin. [I know that Diotoma's name is also Anastasia, though your last names are very different and really can't see that this will be too big of a problem—though just in case something should arise or her player is uncomfortable with the idea, a backup name might help].

I'm gonna run down and give commentary on things one at a time, so if this is a huge wall of text, don't fret! It's not bad!

Hobbies:

I think these look good for a fourteen year old girl! Soccer and movies especially. Teasing I questioned for a short while, but after consideration, I realized that it is fully possible to make a hobby out of teasing other people. One thing I might like to see mentioned is the consequences of this as a hobby—does she know when to quit or does she keep pushing?

Virtues:

Protective—I think this fits well and you have a good backstory as to why she would be protective. Knowing you have to look out for a sibling/having your parents depend on you to watch out for them can instill that sort of hero-complex, so this fits well for me. The pros of this are good for me, but are there any downsides to her protectiveness? Is she overprotective? Does she over extend herself? What happens when someone she is trying to protect does get hurt?

Thorough: Looks good! (But if you wanted to tack something on, maybe add a sentence about how this helps her in life? Certainly not having to do the same job over again is useful, but do people ever take advantage of her? Is she THE person everyone wants to work with in class? How far does she go before there's a point where she gives up?)

People Person: I think this is a fine trait (maybe 'social' would work as a better label?) that will make it easy to roleplay with her. Playing off one of her flaws, I would think that being surrounded by people might give her a lot of things to be jealous with. Does her jealousy inspire her to be the center of attention—and what happens if she isn't the center of attention in a group?

Flaws:

Easily Jealous: When you say 'act out' what sorts of things is she capable of? Does she get loud and boisterous, break things, tease people to the point of outright picking on them? (and does her jealousy affect her relationship with her twin?)

Overly Competitive: I like this, but I also question how this works with her protective virtue. She is protective, but also willing to hurt people to win—does this affect her protective virtue? Does she feel bad about it afterwards, or does she see all opponents/people in her way as fair game?

Speaks without thinking: This seems very plausible for a fourteen year old girl, so I can't offer any sort of criticism on it; it sounds good to me! (Maybe…how does she make it up to people if she says something harsh? Does she feel obligated to make it up to them later or does she just put what she said into the past/accept it as the truth?)

POWERED:

Sailor Scout Attack: I like this; the only thing I might think to add is that the horn disappears as the scrapes and cuts fade? (And maybe include that it can't be used as a weapon? IE, what would happen if she tried to stab someone with the energy horn. Would it simply disappear? Maybe I am thinking too much about it, but I just want to have the bases covered!)

Super Sailor Scout Attack: This seems like a growth of her first attack; I like the idea that a larger energy horn=more energy to heal with. When you say she can heal 'up to broken bones', however, does this mean she can heal anything but a broken bone or is that including a broken bone?

Eternal Sailor Attack: I confess, because you started with healing attacks, I was thinking that it would end with one. Not that there's anything wrong with this (and I've yet to find somewhere that says you can't start out with a buffer for attack your first two attacks and then change to offensive for eternal). While you do say that the attack feels as though a unicorn is slamming into them—could you expand on this? Like, it puts them off balance, catches their breath? (Is there a percentage chance that they will fall down after the blow?) And if they don't fall down, what sort of effects would last for 25 seconds? —And continuing off of that, if they are knocked down and getting walked over, does it feel like they are being trampled/clopped all over for 25 seconds? (Or maybe the first few steps would be like pressure weighing them down, like the unicorn was 'standing' on them to hold them in place? —In which case the time would have to be reduced to roughly fifteen seconds since the attack would render the opponent immobile to the point of not being able to defend themselves)

I'm sorry for shooting you this huge wall of text! I think Anastasia is already built to be a very interesting character that will provide plenty of opportunities for interaction! When you make any changes and want me to look over her again (or if you have any questions) you can quote me and I'll be back to help as soon as possible!

Thank you for the clarification! The changes look good to me! I think her civilian all checks out and nothing stands out as inappropriate for her powered!

I'm going to drop this off and have a GM with you as soon as possible!