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Melancholies

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 5:27 pm


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The Quetzal The Cardinal The Canary

(Quetzal is on male forest, Cardinal on male mountain, and Canary on forest female

Sorry guys, I like diversity, but because of what I've got done so far for these guys, Quetzal and Cardinal are males, and Canary is female.)

Heavens? Where did these three come from! These little birdies seemed to of come out of nowhere.

RULES:

1. This is no limit or minimum to text! Just... Don't go too crazy!
2. You can try for all three, but you can only win one!
3. If you've already won a baby this breeding/have a fawn, you cannot try! Don't be greedy, spread the love! emotion_yatta

The contest starts now and ends on the Sunday the 19th! They will emerge on the 21st c:

Anyway onto the prompts!

Each thicket has it's own prompt, or you can just write out a character concept~

PROMPTS:

1. (Quetzal) You like to think you're the most beautiful hart ever! Golden and great; but one day you meet someone who thinks they're better then you! How do you deal?

2. (Cardinal) What a smoky thicket... And a fire recently broke out- and you're being blamed for it! How do react?... Or were you the one to start it?

3. (Canary) That piano scarf...! You have a passion for music and a lovely voice, or at least you like to think. Singing alone one day- Someone insults you! How do you take it?

4. (Any) Just give me a general concept characterization of the above thickets!

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:53 am


Name: Alanna the Pirate Queen
Thicket Trying for: The Canary
Prompt:

"Mama, mama, mama! Someone was mean to me... about my singing! Mama, am I a good singer?" a young, canary yellow fawn whimpered to her adoptive mother.

Sara looked down at her daughter with a gentle smile, some how always feeling braver when it came to protecting the ones she loved, "Oh little Aria, you have a beautiful voice.... but here, tell me what happened."

With a sigh, Aria nodded and settled to tell her story, "Well, it all started this morning when I heard a really pretty bird singing, so I decided to sing counterpoint like you taught me! I followed the bird and then lost it so I just started singing to myself... I got a little bored of the classical stuff you teach me, so I tried something new...! It had a really cool beat, mama! Like something you've never taught me... it just came up from inside... I don't know how, but I think I know what it is called... Jazz! Do you know what Jazz is mama?"

Sara chuckled and shook her head, replying softly, "No darling... I don't think I know what Jazz is, but you can tell me all about it la---"

But Aria could not wait till later and just started singing the only jazz song her guardian had taught her so far, "Birds flying high, you know how I feel, sun in the sky, you know how I feel..." She belted out those last few notes, however, and her voice cracked. Falling into a depressed silence Aria sighed, "Well, I'm still PRACTICING... and these two big bully fawns came up to me and told me I sounded like a... a... FROG!"

Sara listened to the music with patience, actually kind of liking it. Not as much as the classical folk stuff she and her mother sang, but it was quite good! Until... her voice cracked. Sara could barely hold back a giggle and then gasped in indignation for her daughter, "A frog? How terrible... did you cry?" the blue-winged singer asked, since this is what she would have done when she was little...

With a bark of laughter, Aria shook her head comically, "What... me? Cry? Over that? Now way! I'm not a cry baby! But... they wouldn't leave me alone, even when I asked them too, because I wanted to go back to practicing... so... I kicked one in the face and then..."

"You... WHAT?!" Sara gasped in surprise, "Aria, when did I ever tell you it was okay to hit others? Even when they are being mean... only if they hurt you or someone you love physically can you hit someone..."

Aria shook her head rebelliously and whined in reply, "But mama! They wouldn't leave! And you didn't let me finish! The moment I hit that one in the nose, they left really quickly... I think they were afraid of me, isn't that silly mama?"

Sara just sighed and shook her head, "You should not have hit them... but alas, what is done is done... now... why don't you sing me some more of this... "Jazz"..."

Alanna the Pirate Queen

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:34 am


Name: Chibi_Kokoro143
Thicket Trying for: Canary
Prompt:

Little canary fled to the deepest part of the thicket. How? How can someone insult me, how can someone be so mean?

Canary stopped as she came across a clearing with a small clearing with a little brook running through. She stopped at the edged and started to cry.

It all happened suddenly. She was singing a merry little tune when out of no where, someone said that she couldn't sing very well.

It hurts so much. Canary never believe that she was a bad singer in the first place and she didn't flaunt her, what she believe good, talent. And on that note, she wasn't mean either. She was shy and unassuming, she can barely make any friends.

The Canary looked up through the trees as small tears still pour from her eyes.

That's when...she saw it.

How the light filtered through the dense leaves, giving the place a warm bright feeling to it. It even made the place even a bit secluded.

So the Canary did what she believe was the best way to lift her spirits.

She sang.

No words, just using her light soft voice to give the clearing a song that well suits it.

And soon, the ache in her heart has lifted. The secluded clearing gave her joy and helped her sing once again, feeling comfort from her own song.

She smiled. She would sing to the clearing every day and she knows that it would love to her voice.

But the clearing wasn't the only one listening.

"I think your voice is very beautiful."

The canary turned slightly, shock upon her face as she saw a hart step out into view.

But she didn't give him enough time to talk to her or for her to see his face clearly.

Just like any startled bird flew, she ran.

Her heart pounding in her chest.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 10:09 am


Name: MargeXX
Thicket Trying for: Cardinal
Prompt: What a smoky thicket... And a fire recently broke out- and you're being blamed for it! How do react?... Or were you the one to start it?
Response:

There was that smell again. That harsh, heavy smell that burned the nose and stung the eyes. Smoke. There was always a smell of smoke.

The redden fawn coughed, blinking the tears away from his eyes. He lifted his tiny head, looking up through the foliage that made up his thicket. A few branches were charred and smoke drifted from them up into the air. The fire seemed to have already died out so there was no panic in the fawn as he stood and raised his nose toward the burned leaves. Where had it come from? He had heard no one come near so it was doubtful that someone else had set it. Maybe the fire had travelled on its own? He peeked through his thicket, staring out into darkness. There was no moon that night and the blackness of the evening was absolute. The fawn gulped, dredging up his courage, and took a nervous step out into the open. It didn’t look like the fire had touched anything except for his thicket, although in the darkness it could be possible that he missed it. He circled his thicket, staring up at the faintly glowing embers at the top. It made no sense. Had… Had he caused the flames? The fawn let out a tiny gasp of horror. Of course! It had to be him! The fawn looked terrified. He hadn’t meant to do it! He didn’t even know how he had! His ears flattened against his temples and his jaw dropped. Oh goodness, oh goodness! He was a monster! The fawn panicked, rushing around his thicket. What if he burned the forest?! The fawn whimpered softly and flopped on to his stomach, wiggling and wedging his way under a prickle bush. He would have to leave. Yes. That’s what he would have to do.

”Hey. What the hell are you doing down there?”

The fawn squeaked, jumping at the harsh voice, and then immediately yelped in pain as he unwittingly scraped his back along the prickles he was hiding under. His eyes filled with tears and he slowly crawled out from under the bush, looking as guilty and downtrodden as a young fawn could. His ears were completely down and a few tears ran down his cheek. ”I was jus’ hidin’ ‘cause I’m a m-monsteeerrr.” His words had turned into a wail and the tiny fawn wandered forward, burying his face in the leg of the black doe that had appeared before him. The fawn sobbed, shaking like a leaf against the female’s leg.

”…… A monster? Really? You don’t look like you could even kill a bug.” The nearly invisible herla stared down at the fawn, her green-gray eyes narrowing. The crying was irritating. She allowed the young fawn to continue for a few minutes more before she growled, snapping angrily. ”Would you shut up already? The fawn jumped. Good. The doe snorted, shaking her head before looking to the charred thicket. ”I smelt smoke so I came to investigate. You’re the one that started it, right?” Hm…. A fire starter. That could be useful. Yes. Very useful indeed. ……………… She’d just have to keep him.

The fawn stared up at the doe, his eyes wide and mouth hanging open. Tears still clung to his fur and at her question they began to once again fall. ”Y-yes! Buh I ‘idn’t mean tah start it! I d-don’t even know how I didddd! I was sleepin’ and then there was smoke and I didn’t do itttt!” The fawn was trembling, sure that this huge, mean herla was going to step on him or something. He normally wasn’t this timid but the sudden shock of realizing that he was a monster and the total darkness of the night had him terrified. He once again buried his face in the dark fur of the other herla, sniffling and sobbing. His crying might have lasted a great deal of time had he not received a sudden whack to his side that had him toddling sideways before losing his balance and collapsing to the ground. In shock, he blinked away his tears, staring up at the now glaring female. She scowled down at him and for the first time, the fawn noticed her sharply pointed antlers. He gulped nervously.

”Stop it. There is no need to cry.” Her blow had caught the youngling off guard, and it showed in the shock on his face. She had merely nudged him a bit roughly and hadn’t meant to knock him to the ground. Still… At least it had stopped the crying once again. ”You don’t know how you started it and you didn’t mean to? Who’s to say you actually started it and it wasn’t coincidence? What a waste. She could have used a fire starter. She frowned, staring down at the fawn before she suddenly sighed, rolling her eyes. ”Come now. Stop crying. You’re okay.” She leaned down to lightly nuzzle the fawn’s head. He was only a baby and she felt a bit bad for upsetting him so much. The darkly colored mountain herla lightly nudged the fawn back toward his thicket.

The fawn sniffled, letting himself be pushed back into his thicket. He was suddenly exhausted and yet at the same time he was relieved. He couldn’t have caused it! The mystery hind was right! It… It had to be a coincidence. He gave her a weak smile, wiping lightly at his tears. ”Th-thank you, Miss.” She might be a bit mean but at the same time she was so nice. He slipped into his thicket, walking a circle a few times before he laid down. The smoke had since cleared and the world was again peaceful. He wasn’t a monster. He wasn’t a monster. He wasn’t a monster. The fawn smiled lightly and drifted off to sleep. His dreams were full of bright flowers and colorful birds and he slept peacefully. However, above him, the charred plants once again to smoke as a small flame appeared, started once again by the sleeping young fawn.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 4:27 pm


Name: Fea Line
Thicket Trying for: Cardinal
Prompt:

Eyes alight with reds, oranges and yellows flickered with the last of the dying flames. As the smoke billowed and rolled lazily into the sky, a small smirk spread across the muzzle of a red fawn, his visage hidden by the leaves of his thicket. Gently, the fawn poked his nose through the foliage, and one hoof after the other, appeared from the shrubbery as he cast his gaze about at the charred desolate patches of earth that laid scarred by the fire. His ears flickered to nearby sounds, shouts from angry herla, frightened young hinds, harts attempting to be brave among the commotion. One voice rang out in particular.

"You! It was you wasn't it! I can see it written all over your face!" the voice cried out in accusation against the fawn.

With a bewildered look upon his face, the red fawn reared his neck and head back, his poise held as high as a fawn could. "Me? You think I did this?" he snorted in retort. How stupid. What a foolish thing to think of a fawn. "Well I never..." he said again as he turned his nose up, gently lifting one hoof and ever so dainty setting it back down so as to not get it dirty or stained by ash. "Why would you even think such a thing!" the fawn threw his neck forward, his eyes wide in sudden fear. "I'm just a fawn, I don't even know where my mother is!" he began to 'sob', tears streaming down his face.

In a shocked state, the accusing hart stood there, staring down at the little fawn, his mouth twisted into confusion. Maybe he was wrong to accuse this little fawn after all? "I.... I'm sorry.... I just thought....with the smoke....and the thicket sizzling......." the bigger creature tried to apologize.

"Thats right!" the fawn blurted out. "You didn't think!" he sobbed again and lightly stamped his hoof, now making quite the scene. One eye slide open, and gazing out through his tears at the many eyes of the on lookers, he did his best to hide the smirk that threatened to curl up from the edge of his lips at any moment. Suddenly more voices rang out in accusation, but this time not at him, at the hart that had dared to blame such a sweet, innocent little fawn.

"How dare you, he's just a child!" one shouted!

"You should be ashamed of yourself!" declared another.

"Oh the poor dear, all alone in such a dangerous area without a mother!" another chimed in.

"Someone should find his mother!" a female blared out as she stepped forward to lean down and gently nuzzle the fawn's tears away. She turned her head to glare at the hoof pointing hart. "You should do it, since you managed to accuse and frighten the poor dear all at once!"

The fawn watched through his dried tears, the smirk now creeping about his muzzle. Yes, that hart should go find his mother. The fiend, blaming this poor innocent creature. A few more fake sobs echoed in the fawn's throat as he played up to the act, throwing his head into the leg of the female. "I want my mommy!" he whined, using the hind's fur to hide his smile and to stifle his laughter. Good luck finding his mother, that hart would be looking for a loooooooooong time. And as the crowd slowly began to disperse, a few more affectionate licks from the stunning hind, the red fawn curled back up into his smoking thicket, a grin spread from ear to ear, his head held high in a pompous manner as he daintily nosed a broken branch from its place as it created an absolute eye sore inside his thicket.

Once the others were out of ear shot, a chuckle tickled the throat of the fawn as he reveled in his game. "Fools." he chuckled again as he focused upon a twig laying helplessly before him, watching as fire sparked at the tips and quickly burned its way down the middle. A proud huff of air left his puffed out chest. "That was my best one yet."
PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:04 pm


Name: Reina Brujita
Thicket Trying for: Canary
Prompt:
Gypsy shimmied her rump to the left, and then to the right. She wriggled with glee, shaking her limbs all about her. She could feel the music swelling inside of her, trying to escape. She got control of herself and stamped her hoof in time with the music in her head.
1.... 2.... 3... 4...
She opened her mouth and warbled a note that shook her soul. The trees rustled with the local fauna, but she didn't notice. She just kept on a'singing and a'strutting through the little clearing she had found.
"A little birdy once told me the boop boo-doodle day
The spirits took my soul away-
and I dumble-doh doodle-ee-da sangggg
In the raaaaaiiiiiiiinnnn-"
She looked up to smile at the sun to find an older youth staring down at her, one eyebrow raised in contempt.
"I hate your singing," he snorted, staring down at her.
For the first time in her life, she found herself without a voice. Well, not exactly. She could tell it was there, but it was a tiny voice, stuck in her throat, choking her. She 'meeped' and lowered her head.
"Why?" was the only squeak she could muster. She looked up at him from heavily lidded eyes, hugging herself tightly with her canary yellow wings.
"I don't know," he said, shoving past her. "And I just don't care," he called over his shoulder.
Gypsy shook a little, the tremors of embarrassment and humiliation rolling through her. She didn't turn to look at him as he left her. She just shuffled to the pond that waited for her in the middle of the clearing, her hooves digging through the dirt and crumpling the grass. She dragged herself to a rock by the water and hummed a somber tune into the waters. She wouldn't tell anybody. It was her secret to the pond.
She stared a the ripples she made with her wings and saw nothing but the face of the male fawn, thinking of maybe what she would say if he ever decided to come back.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:05 pm


Name: Fea Line
Thicket Trying for: Quetzal
Prompt:

Ah how the fawn loved life. As young as he was, he already knew the concept of beauty. And how Beautiful he was indeed. Such illustrious feathers. Every day how he would preen them till they sparkled and shined in the glittering morning light. How his fur was pristine, rarely did it have a fleck of dirt or particle of dust. Even his hooves he kept spotless. He had to look brilliant wherever he went. It was a crime otherwise. How dare he face the world at anything less than his best!

One particular evening, as he wandered out of his thicket with astounding confidence, His feathers prim and proper to the point of utter perfection, his tiny eyes beheld the sight of another. One of the first herla he had ever seen....since he spent all his time gazing upon himself in the reflection of his beads or marveling over his wings and tail. This herla was quite the sight. Bouncing locks of hair, glowing green markings, not at all bad if the vain little fawn did say so himself.... but that leg....and that ear.... it didn't match. How odd. He dared not say anything, lest he fear the bad reputation of bragging, but she noticed him before he could escape down to the lake to admire his reflection.

"EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!" the hind screeched as she bounded over to the fawn in a most ungraceful manner. "Look how cute you are! Baby fawn oh baby fawn!" she squealed louder and louder, her tone hurting the fawn's perfect ears. "Oh oh oh I want to keep you forever and eevveerr and eevevveeeerrrrrrrrrrrrr." she giggled and blinked down at him with a smile. "Your so cute. So pretty! Well, not as pretty as me. No one is as pretty as me." she beamed proudly with an awkward chuckle as she posed her blue colored leg in pride.

One eye on the fawn's gorgeous visage twitched. Did she just say she was more prettier than him? His voice trembled as he tried to remain calm. A slight stutter tickled his words as he did his best to stay level headed. "E-e-excuse me... what did you say?" he tilted his head in question, hoping he had simply heard wrong.

The hind, Brandy, flitted about in an odd circle as she flicked her blue ear and continued to pose her matching blue leg. "Oh I said your cute, but not as pretty as me. I'm a Sweet!" she giggled and stomped all four hooves in place from sheer insane excitement.

The fawn's eyes twitched again, as did his smile. She said it again. She said she was prettier than him. Oh no no no no. This can't be. This wasn't happening right now. He wasn't talking to this deranged hind who thought she was better than him. He was the most brilliant, the most great, the most beautiful, the most.... perfect. A staggering chuckle escaped his lips. "I'm afraid your quite mistaken.... but its alright. I do forgive you. You see, no one is more beautiful than I." he said in such confidence, his eyes shut in such a way to show how highly he thought of himself, his head turned slightly to the side as if to say she wasn't fit enough to gaze upon his features.

His last words had hardly even ended before the deranged hind screeched her obvious disagreement. "WHAAAAAA??~ How DARE you say that about a Sweet! We are perfection! We are the definition of beauty!" she spat, literally. Her hair seemed to frizzle from the sheer volume and power of her voice. Her own eyes twitched.

The fawn shook his head, giving her a soft patronizing smile, though on the inside he was bubbling with furry. "No...no...I'm most beautiful...." he said, and as he struggled to do so, his smile began to twist into a look of distraught. "Your legs.... t-t-t-they don't even match!" he shouted, his tiny body almost lifting from the ground in his anger as he huffed and puffed like a rabid beast, his neck extended as far and as up as it could to be in her face. "I'M THE BEST. NO ONE is more perfect than me. Not you, Not anyone. Not even all the "SWEETS" in the world!" he mocked her, his chest heaving and huffing. His tiny heart racing as his fur stood on end, his feathers splayed in every direction as his tiny wings extended trembling and ridged upon his back.

Brandy wasn't having any of this. Furiously she shook her head at the vile little fawn, her voice that of pure panic and hysteria. "NOO! NOOOOOOOOOHHHH! My leg is perfection! Its my SISTERS." she paused and let lose a mad cackle, several birds taking off into the sky. "Perfect... perfect! I'm A Sweeet. I'm a Sweeeeeeeeeeeeet. lalalaa. SWEET!" she giggled as she pranced about in a mad circle before shoving her face into the fawns. "I'M BEAUTIFUL. YOUR NOT. NEVER! EVER! AHA! PITY PITY~" she blurted out, throwing her head about in every which direction as tears streamed down her face. Without even a second thought, she bolted off into the distance, looping around trees, trotting in circles, all the while screaming about her beauty.

The fawn, frazzled and distraught, watched her gallop away, her fleeting figure getting smaller and smaller. Before she was out of ear shot, he puffed himself up as much as he could, letting out a scream as loud as his little lungs would let him. "I'M THE MOST BEAUTIFUL. MEEEEH!" he blinked in stupor when her figure had vanished. As his heart began to settle, he raced down to the waters edge and peered at his reflection, his muzzle instantly going to work smoothing down his fur, neatly adjusting feathers, and polishing up his hooves. When he was all done, he took one last look at his sparkling reflection with a pleased grin. "I really am the most beautiful."
PostPosted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:37 pm


Name: shortcutt
Thicket Trying for: Quetzal
Prompt:
'You are beautiful and full of splendour,'

Yes, yes, that's it. Just keep smiling. Perhaps you heard them wrong?

'No other may come close to mirroring your enviable gaze,'


Long ears flicked with irritation as a bright gaze turned a bit sour with shock, a rather graceful hart turned rigid with fury. This femme fatale standing proud in front of him was claiming to be the most gorgeous of them all? Surely the ruby-chested hart's ears were mistaken. They had to be.

'Nor your emerald coat to be worn proudly with grace,'

"What, are you deaf? All I said was that while you're certainly attractive, there's just... Qualities that set me on levels far beyond your reach. It's nothing to be upset about. I mean, you can't help your... Interesting looks."

'Let your elegance shine so you may take what is yours!'

And I will take what's mine.


A mantra repeated itself in the hart's mind like the song of the quetzals he often heard in his dreams as his cool gaze narrowed into a fierce glare, taking step after step toward that doe, his voice dripping with venom.

"I'm not so sure what qualities you could be talking about, but all I see is some snot-nosed little brat whom was fed lies by mommy and daddy all her life. You? Gorgeous? Hardly. Unless you find beauty in the still water that mosquito larvae squirm and feed in, then I'm not so sure how you came about with this blasphemy. You smell of disgusting voodoo lilies and you are quite possibly just as garish. And you have the gall to tell me that my coat, dyed at birth with the blood of emeralds and rubies, is 'interesting'. You had better watch your tongue, love, for if you stick it out too far, I might just bite it off."

The doe had shrunk a little from the fear of getting too close to the buck that had gone off on her, and his words, for once in her life, made her quiver with uncertainty. Without another word, the female bolted off away from the quetzal, leaving him to cool off on his own.

It was starting to make sense why that buck had no friends.

But who needs friends? He thought to himself, allowing his features to once again become soft, a gentle smile pulling at his lips again.

"'You are beautiful and full of splendour...'"

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:02 am


Name: Quiftan
Thicket Trying for: Cardinal
Prompt: What a smoky thicket... And a fire recently broke out- and you're being blamed for it! How do react?... Or were you the one to start it?

The red hart's nose twitched furiously as the distinct scent of smoke caught his attention. Fire. Karac knew all too well what was in store for him if it spread. He bolted towards the source of the flame at a speed that impressed even himself. Once he arrived, Karac didn't hesitate to throw himself on the flame, smothering it until it suffocated and all that was left was a steaming pile of ash and charred vegetation. The hart panted as relief swept over him in his victory. That could have turned out nasty...

"Did you start a fire again?"

Karac whirled around in surprise at his company. He hadn't realized the fire attracted other herla as well. The young hart met the eyes of several glaring, furious neighbors.

"I-I-I..." Karac took a nervous step back from the mob, a feeling of fear and sadness swelling in his chest. It took a lot of energy to keep tears from pouring down his face. "You don't understand..."

"Oh no, you're the one who doesn't understand." A doe responded, stomping a hoof at the youngling. "There are others in the forest who actually burn, don't you know? We have fawns, and we don't want to see any of them get hurt because of your ignorance." She sneered at Karac, viewing him as a monstrous nuisance more than the troubled young hart that he was. She turned to usher her fawns to safety, and the rest of her angry family followed her lead.

Karac's ears drooped as he took on the weight of guilt he didn't deserve. He knew there were a handful of other fire-starters living in the Hartlands... But he seemed to be the one who swallowed all of the blame like an endless black hole. It wasn't just the fires, either. He couldn't even play with his peers without getting a tongue lashing from the parents for an unexplained scrape or a bruise on their offspring. The thoughts caused his legs to quiver, and his teeth clenched as the fear and guilt turned to rage. His blood boiled and the leaves beneath his hooves released airborne ropes of fresh smoke.

"Careful, Karac... Remember what I told you about controlling your temper." The face of a golden doe appeared. One that wore the expression of forgiveness and understanding, rather than judgement and hate. Chalice was the only herla he trusted with every one of the secrets and flaws that haunted him. She was the only one who never turned away to flee when his temper took control and released an unpredictable blaze.

"Mom..." Karac didn't even realize his temper was flaring again. He struggled to tame it, but several deep breaths managed to stow it away. Once he reached a normal temperature, he rushed to embrace his adoptive mother. "They thought it was me, mom. It wasn't me, though..."

"I know it wasn't, sweetie." Chalice nuzzled Karac, ignoring the intense heat that still radiated from the child. "They will come to understand you, one day..."
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:18 pm


Name: musicaloner7
Thicket Trying for: Cardinal {calling him Anton for now}
Prompt:

Of course they would blame me! Tch! Figures.. , the little fawn grumbled to himself. Ever since he'd found himself the thicket he was born into, things just didn't seem to be turning up all flowers and butterflies for him. The young buck had been gifted, or cursed if you prefer, with the ability to weild and expel fire! But unfortunately, being so young, and inexperienced with such an endowment, Anton was causing quite the stir. His thicket was nestled deep within a very populated and thriving forest, almost camoflauged with the rest of the shrubbery and tree's that towered around it. There hadn't been a sign of a single parent figure in his short life. To most of his neigbors, the little fawn had just sprouted up out of the very earth! Or perhaps was dropped down like a falling star! either way, no one else had seen another Herla come in or out of their forest in quite sometime. It was a sad sight, really, the poor fawn remaining hidden most times than not in the little shrub of a home, wriggling about to peek out onto the dense woods beyond... attempts of pathetic bleating sounding from a shakey voice. They were short, or prolonged, always changing, rarely ever the same. Some held distress, others were weak, most were just mostly curious. Wondering if there was maybe someone who might reply to him... at least once...

The woodlands creatures would only pass by, perhaps pause for a peek into the odd coloured shrubs, but go on their way. His charcol cologne was not one that most revered as pleasant. Many would comment on it's punget aroma, and many would simply avoid the mass entirely as if it were a bad omen. To the majority of those who did... it was! The grass below and surrounding the fawn were completely charred, black with hardly any blades still intact. It was a wonder the fawns entire thicket hadn't gone up in flames yet! Soon enough, with the spits of fire that would light up at random from the bundle of vegetation, a great many began to despise the combustible youngster. But how could they get rid of him? There was a good chance he'd torch their fur, feathers, or scales clear off! And that certainly would not do! A few gave shameful attempts to throw or drop rocks and acorns onto the youngling inside, while a few others would kick in items to try and ward the gangly stag away. Maybe if they just pestered him enough, he'd leave! But Anton would just bleat with surprise which morphed to anger, causing a sudden surge of heat to emit from the tiny red fawn. The convicts would swiftly dart away, twittering, squealing, growling in disgust and mild fear. But the damage was always carried out one way or another... whether physically, or mentally, the small fawn grew hostile as they continued, en guarde, and angry. But who could blame him? No one ever stuck up for him. No one was on his side. The world was his enemy. With hatred that plagues, it grows into resentment, and can gain a partner in it's contamination; fear. With everyone against him, the fawn's heart grew cold. Even his radiant body could touch it, his body always tensely curled within the safety of his damaged thicket. He hardly ever ventured from it anymore... or even moved, for that matter. Slender wings remained firmly pressed to the streamline back, head resting on the burnt grass, sharp eyes closed and even sometimes lined with a film of salty tears. Even as it would rain, and douse his petite body, Anton would not budge. What was the point? he had no where to hide. Thankfully the higher branches of his thicket kept him safe, and dry for the most part. Being so young, and alone, he couldn't understand the strong loathing that was aimed towards him for actions he couldn't control! they were accident's after all!

To make matters worse... one night, a night that was still, and very quiet, Anton only added more chaos and depression to his morose life. Unintentionally, of course. But on this fateful night, after finally managing to drift off into a semi peaceful slumber, a shady figure began to creep along the outskirts of the crispy thicket. It barely made a whisper of a sound, skating seamlessly with easy along the thinning grasses. The nocturnal creatures that thrived in the night knew of it's presence, but made not a peep of warning... well aware of its purpose, and... job. Anton had fallen into a deep sleep, one he hadn't had in awhile since his.. well since forever, it seemed. But he hadn't been pestered that much that day, and thus felt a little more comfortable going to rest without as many qualms and worries. It was all short-lived... as he was awoken by a sudden n** to his rump, causing him to squeak and bleat in shock as well as distress. A spurt of fire suddenly blazed from within him, followed by more as he was shoved and nudged out of his thicket quite forcefully. He couldn't even look back to see what was causing this, but didn't bother to much to as he was struggling enough to gain his footing. Fire was wildly flailed about around him, catching to various plants as he stumbled out of his thicket, wings fluttering madly in the same process. As soon as the fire caught to a rather dry bush, it spread without hesitation.. More pinches and bites were pinpointed on the ruby red body, spindly legs kicking frantically to try and hit one of the dreadful little things that were causing such pain! The fire started to crackle, and snap, popping loudly as it jumped onto fresher vegetation, the water evaporating in seconds, leaves curling and blackening, branches thinning and crumbling... Soon enough the entire fire was surrounding him, engulfing the forest with a tremendous roar of it's immense power. It lapped hungrily for more of the woods bounty, spreading it's cancer further and further into the forest. Other animals began to screech, and wail in despair, fleeing the scene with much gusto. Those with wings took to the sky like bats out of Hell, others abandoned the tree's that were getting overtaken. It was madness. And the fawn was in the center of it all. Many creatures spat hateful things to him on their way to evacuate, some even trampling over him without mercy, or care. Such crude words rapped in his mind like a gong, echoing, and repeating. It fueled the rage that was boiling in side of him, causing fire to flare out from him like the wings on his back, wildly, and unabashed. Restraint was no longer present by any means..

As the final flames took their last few breaths of freedom, Anton wept silently. His body didn't move from it's tangled position, tears budding heavily on his lids. He was so cold... the once grand forests towering canopy's shriveled, and pathetic examples of overgrown twigs. The air was laden with the perfume of ash, even some of it raining from the breeze that passed the frail tree's. Everything was destroyed...
But... but it wasn't my fault... he thought to himself... If those stupid.. what ever they were's hadn't pushed him and bit him and shoved him, this wouldn't have happened! But who else would see it that way...? the place was still. Not a single sound asides from the creak of burnt branches sounded, and the howl of diving wind. The dawn was breaking, but it brought no joy to the lonely fawn. What would he do now..? His thicket was hardly in tact now... But suddenly, there was a sound... stepping. Someone was coming! But Anton was too wiped out to do anything about it. Probably just someone else to come pester him.. The steps drew closer and closer until they stopped.
A voice started up, a deep baritone, rich, and young,

"Hey there, little guy.." it called to the fawn with surprising gentleness, enough to make him peel open those water-logged glowers to see who it might be. Before him stood a grand buck, all brown, with a white under belly, and teal markings. As well as.. paws? A single blue eye was trained on him, the other side of the mature face covered by heavy blonde bangs. Golden wings dawned on the back of the larger male... was... this an angel..? Was it his time..?
But the figure came closer, and lowered the long neck to tenderly nose along the fawn's head. Anton flinched at first, prepared for something far worse, but relaxed with confusion into the affection,

"Let's get you out of here.." Aervon murmured, a few comforting licks given to the slender ears of the little fawn, and along his snout, to the watery eyes. Anton really couldn't decline such an offer. He hated it here. He had no where else to be... but the small bit of kindness shown to him by the stranger greatly effected his wounded heart.
Carefully getting on to wobbly weak legs, the fawn leaned heavily into Aervon, just needing the comfort that'd been starved from him for so long... Even if this was false, or temporary, he'd hang onto it for as long as he could.

musicaloner7

Romantic Man-Lover


musicaloner7

Romantic Man-Lover

PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:15 am


Name: musicaloner7
Thicket Trying for: Quetzal {calling him Vikenti for now}
Prompt:

Yeah he's pretty... but Vikenti is clearly prettier. It was a mindset the fawn had instilled in his head. Oh not to be mistaken for audacity or being overly vain, it was a mostly modest confidence that had taken shape. It was hard to pinpoint just when such a development had occured, or... how it'd happened in general! Perhaps it was near his first few days when he started to become more aware of his surroundings. Birds were always twittering around him, making the most melodious of tunes. They must have been chiming to him, their muse, and showering him adoration for his mere presence! He couldn't see any other reason they would stick around all the time! His wings adorned on his back were matched to their's, just larger and glossier in appearance. Did they too wish for such lovely appendages? He couldn't blame them.
Not only the birds, but the plants seemed to revere him as some sort of superior beauty~ their fruits were always sweet, and succulent, and almost always lined on every branch! Perhaps they grew just for him! Now now, as outlandish as it may sound, it made complete sense to the young buck! Of course it wouldn't be classy to rub it in others faces, so he did not always mention such facts to them. The way the sunlight and reflecting moonlight would shine off his sleek wings was absolutely divine~ Such a sweet compliment for them to make him glow so brilliantly. They must be his biggest fan's!

However, with every beauty, there is a critic. One who just can't seem to see what everyone else can. Perhaps they're blind, or just immature~ But no matter. It is the life of every gorgeous creature to endure! And he was no different. This particular critic came upon the fawn during the afternoon, when he was daintily drinking from the slim stream just near his thicket. He found it must have been a gift to him, as it was placed strategically well for the area. No one else had a water source by their thicket, for sure! Enjoying it's cool offering, wings folded ever so neatly, he was distracted by the sound of stomping hooves. Cloven, to be exact, as they made more of a digging sound than a flat one. Looking up with a fluid motion of his lifted neck, Vikenti was met by a pair of glowing amber eyes. They were ablaze with... something near rage, and anger... but not quite to that extent or level. The other fawn held distaste on his face, geared straight at the pretty green quetzal.

The opposing fawn snorted, and lifted his chin higher, bright pink hair bouncing in the movement, "You're pretty plain looking, and you look like puke green!" he snipped, Vikenti raising a curious brow to the slightest degree. Plain? Puke green? It made the winged hart look around slowly. He couldn't be addressing him. Surely not! But the other fawn went on, spewing lots of insults, and scoffs, and.. just having quite a fussy tantrum, of sorts. Vikenti was perplexed. Had they met before? The fellow sure had a lot to say. But the lovely face of the verde buck was not contorted into any sign of ugliness. In fact, it remained quite placid throughout the entire rant. The other fawn looked quite pleased with himself when he finished. It gave time for Vikenti to look him over for himself. His pelt was painted a turquoise and white, and he wore rather gaudy accessories that were more eye searing than Christmas in Texas! That hair was just silly. This must have been a joke. Grinning faintly, Vikenti giggled softly, "Well. That was quite entertaining, and I thank you for the laugh. But.. you know jealousy never really gets you anywhere, darling~" flicking his tail up, he turned slightly, pausing with a lifted hoof to glance over his shoulder at the other buck, "Feel free to enjoy the water from my stream. It's very refreshing~" with that, and a flick of his tail, he pranced a little ways down to find another area to drink from. There wasn't much point to sticking around with such a bugaboo. After all...
Haters gonna hate~
PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 1:42 pm


Name: musicaloner7
Thicket Trying for: Canary {calling her Cadence}
Prompt:

"And now the sparrows come in with a trill~! cicada's follow at a lower octave! Squirrels, hit the effects! And the wind shall rattle the willow branches!" a lively, young doe directed with much gusto! Yes, that was it! If the frogs kept the bass going...! Perfection! It was a symphony for the ages! So alight, and pulsing! It would fill forests and meadows for years to come, giving life and energy to all whom were touched by it's fueling melody!
Of course... all of this was playing out in the little hind's head. Yes, there were sparrows and squirrel's about, even some frogs, but none were really following her bidding. But a girl could dream~! "It would be so lovelyy~" she sighed dreamily, wings fluttering briefly, before laying along her back once more. The various sounds of nature were the greatest of instruments to use! They gave inspiration, and thrill to the young fawn's virtuoso trait! Such beautiful music she could make out of it all! Dramatic battle music! A romantic ballad! Everything was at her disposal!

This play-pretend was common for the robust doe, as a tune was constantly streaming through her mind, which translated out through her mouth into song! She was almost always singing! Or whistling in a tone that matched any song bird effortlessly! she would join in their choir's as well, the morning and evening one's being her favorites. There was constantly music all around, you just had to listen for it! Her favorite places to sing were open fields, or sometimes caves! Though she was a little hesitant around them, since they were usually dark, and creepy... but my how grand her voice did sound in the echoing depths! It really brought out her rich vibrato, and it made it sound like there were more of her singing! oh to be in a herla choir~ How delightful that would beeee~<3

Upon one day of singing in her usual spot in the vast flower carpeted meadow, Cadence found herself inspired to try a new song she'd recently heard from other fellow bards that'd passed by her home. She picked it up easily, and was now transfixed by it's meaning, key, and octave,

Green finch and linnet bird,
Nightingale, blackbird,
How is it you sing?
How can you jubilate,
Sitting in cages,
Never taking wing?
Outside the sky waits,
Beckoning, beckoning,
Just beyond the bars.
How can you remain,
Staring at the rain,
Maddened by the stars?
How is it you sing
Anything?
How is it you sing?


She would have continued... if it weren't for the sudden appearance of a mion! One who was QUITE annoyed by the angry chatter it was giving! Where had it come from? blinking in surprise, Cadence looked down to the rodent with confusion etched all over her features. Did... she not like her song? It was all puffed up and rattled, that was for sure... Frowning Cadence continued on,

My cage has many rooms,
Damask and dark.
Nothing there sings,
Not even my lark.
Larks never will, you know,
When they're captive.
Teach me to be more adaptive.


The mion was all in a fuss again, fuming, spitting, and puffing with great distaste. But Cadence merely shot it a firm glance, and turned off to walk further into the meadow, away from the angry mion. It was slightly disheartening, but... she wouldn't let it hold her back!

Green finch and linnet bird,
Nightingale, blackbird,
Teach me how to sing.
If I cannot fly,
Let me sing.



musicaloner7

Romantic Man-Lover


Frey Ghreyston

PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 1:47 pm


Name: Frey Ghreyston
Thicket Trying for: Quetzal
Prompt:

As the sun set in one world the moon rose in another. A misty valley stood still; lined with ominous trees that had been stripped bare by the waning grip of winter. The light of a low hanging crescent moon caught the gleaming green coat of a lone fawn. Small black wings fluttered nervously across his back as dainty limbs moved his body forward with both grace and caution. He was not sure of many things at that moment; where he was, how he got there, but he found himself propelled to the edge of a lake. It was as if the very sky had been swallowed up by the greedy pool and held captive until the morn.

Then, for a moment, he found his breath stolen caught within his chest as eyes gazed upon the undisturbed water; fear spiked through the fawn at the very thought. Lost and under this spell, would he fall victim to the same fate? Truthfully he had found himself more beautiful than the night and it often showed in his very stance and walk. Would this lake, these cursed waters, gobble up his beauty too? The fawn shivered in the cool air as he ducked his head to his chest, closing eyes so tight that spots danced before his vision and tears pricked at the corners. He would not look; nothing would make him not even the will that stole movement of his body from him! Surely if he did not gaze upon his reflection he would be safe from this nightmare.

Oh, how he wanted to look. Often times he would whittle away the day just staring at any reflective surface he could find. He was enamored with the hues of his coat and feathered wings that rested upon his back. Should he ever stare into his own eyes he would find himself lost within their very depths. This pool of still waters would give him the best reflection yet he felt. A peek would be alright, a glance and nothing more.

So as he felt his body come to a halt, ears canting at the unnatural silence that hung in the air, he opened one eye followed swiftly by the other. He leaned as close to the water as he dared, holding back a gasp. That was not a fawn in the water! That was a fully grown stag. The stag held a gentle smile on a slender snout, sleek ears were held forward as they matched the fawn’s own. Was this him? Wings spread upward as his eyes caught the movement on the other. Tears began to trail down into the water creating ripples that disturbed the image. His beauty would stay with him through the ages, not even time could take it from him.

The nightmare the fawn believed himself to be in had become a dream as he threw his fear to the wind. Nothing as gorgeous as this should be called something so ugly. A dream and truly the best sort for there was no curse here. He would not be gobbled or swallowed or stripped as bare as the trees that surrounded the valley. No, he would continue to bloom and blossom. This lake had shown him that.

Suddenly the reflection twisted, a disgusted grimace marring the stag’s snout. “What an ugly creature”, a voice echoed from the deeps. “How dare you show yourself before me? How pitiable you are with your dirty hide and dull feathers.” The reflection sneered.

The fawn started and jerked away from the water, heart racing. What was that? What was this? What… was this witchcraft? He snapped his jaw back, as it had fallen open in shock; he stared down at ‘himself’. This was far from normal, this water that talked. Maybe that was the true curse; not to be taken by the water but to be shattered by it? Would it attempt to destroy his spirit first? It would be sorely mistaken if it thought he would be so easy. His coat might’ve been covered with dirt here and there and his feathers in need of a good preening but he knew he could outshine this sorry excuse for a mud puddle.

“Who are you to accuse me, you unsightly beast”, the fawn all but whispered, his words laced with poisonous anger. “You there stuck in the mud and grim, where the others come to drink and bathe.” Feeling braver he dipped his head back toward the other, twisting his mouth into a scowl. “I can see naught but overgrown weeds between your ears and foul muck in your eyes.”

The reflection appeared to bristle with every word that fell from the fawn’s mouth. Emboldened the little one continued his onslaught. “Your snout is far too short and your coat is patchy at best.” That was the final blow, the fawn noted with satisfaction, as the other seemed to puff up with indignation.

“What do you know?” The lake sounded back. “You, a lost little fawn in the big wide world alone. There are those who outshine you in every way possible and you will crumble at their feet.” It assured as the reflection began to fade into black. “Alone you will grow old and withered until no one will be able to stand looking at you.”

At this the fawn scoffed with a roll of his eyes. “What do you know?” He mocked. He felt the grip that had been on his body fade he lifted a dainty hoof glaring at the water viciously. How did it know what the future held? “You’re just a bunch of bitter tasting rain water!” With that he drove his leg into the water, striking the fine silt that rested at the bottom. A snort of disdain pushed through his nose. He had gone and lost his temper before he could put this thing in its place. Laughter began to fill the air causing fear to gather in the little fawn’s stomach.

A tug at the leg in the lake caused him to squeal and he moved to yank it away only to find himself slipping into the inky black waters. It was happening! The lake was gobbling him whole! He had fallen for it’s treachery! “No!” He bellowed, trying in vain to free himself. “Let me go!”

The laughter grew louder as the fawn tilted forward, back legs kicking toward the sky. He was gone.

Sunlight trickled down through the treetops as birdsong lilted into the morning air. The fawn bolted to his hooves, sweet drenching his coat, eyes wide and ears forward and alert. His little chest heaved as it captured great gulps of air. Shakily he moved through the cheery dawn and came to a stop at the edge of a lake he had found just the day before. He looked upon his reflection and felt himself calm at the sight. He was still here, still the most beautiful even in his terrified state.

He shuddered at the nightmare that plagued as he bowed low to lap at the water. Perhaps he wouldn’t look upon himself as much as before. Being so beautiful was surely a curse.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:19 pm


CLOSED


Will post judging results soonish!

Melancholies

Springtime Teenager

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