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intune-elemental-familiar
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 Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 11:18 pm
 ғeel free to call me. . .
Iru Kyota (Iru)
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
Male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
17
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
December 16
α lot of people say I'm. . .
pretty spontaneous, Energetic, and Mischievous (i prank people alot but can be really creepy cause i pop up behind people alot and scare them easily twisted ) But when im sad im usually quiet and ignore everything, Just please don't get me angry because i don't manage it that well (half my last school is missing because of it)
care to hear my story?
Well, it all started when i was born, my parents didn't care about me so they abandoned me when i was 5 and i lived on the streets till i was about 14 it was hard to survive and find food (i had to steal alot of the time so im pretty good at pick pocketing) but, then i started going to school and when i turned 16 i moved on to highschool but due to some school damages i was expelled (this kid tried to pick a fight by calling me a filthy street rat who didn't deserve to live on the face of this planet...so i got angry and tried to punch him but i missed and hit the wall instead and to my surprise it cracked all the way up to the ceiling and came crashing down) but, that's how i discovered my abilities and decided to transfer to Fuyu Academy.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
the ability to conjure certain creatures like fairies, elementals...ect (i can only hold it for a bit and the bigger the creature is the more it takes to control it... they can rampage easily sweatdrop ) and i can control ice/freeze things (but only by contact although when i do freeze the object i can telepathically control the object)
I aםore. . .
○ Manga!
○Pocky (lucky sticks)
○Reading
○Drawing
... yes i know... im a nerd emo
єveryone of these drive me mad. . .
○ small non symmetrical things... i.e. a circle being lopsided.
○people eavesdropping
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Eirannes
Dorm: Olivine dorm
Homeroom: Magics and Weaponry
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . Intune-elemental-familiar
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:42 pm
Hello, thank you for the wait.
There are just a few issues about your character before you may proceed posting.
I will request that you expand on the personality. It seems rather choppy and I don't fully grasp what Iru's personality is.
•What makes him happy/sad/angry?
•Why do you associate his mischievous side with the fact that he tends to space out a lot, is there a relationship between the two?
•How exactly is he mischievous, what acts will he do in order to be considered so? Pranks and/or teasing others?
Could you also elaborate in the biography? Here are a few pointers:
•How was his life on the streets? How did he survive to find food and shelter for those 11 years of his life?
•Did he just skip Elementary School and part of High School altogether since he only started at the age of 14?
•How exactly did he come to busting the cafeteria wall?
The ability section will require some more details for precision. When adding more details, please recall that people attending Fuyu Academy are those who are not fully capable of using their abilities.
•Is there a limit to the size of the creatures he can summon?
•Is he able to dismiss the creature once it has been summoned? Or is there a time limit?
•Are the creatures under total control by Iru?
•What kind of creatures can he conjure? Animals that can be found in real life and/or Magical Creatures from Fantasy?
•How does he freeze things? By direct contact, a look of the eye or any other methods?
•How strong are both his powers? Are there any drawbacks/limits to his abilities?
Please quote me when you are done editing so I can fully approve Iru!
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Sapphire Waltz Vice Captain
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intune-elemental-familiar
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:59 pm
Sapphire Waltz
Hello, thank you for the wait.
There are just a few issues about your character before you may proceed posting.
I will request that you expand on the personality. It seems rather choppy and I don't fully grasp what Iru's personality is.
•What makes him happy/sad/angry?
•Why do you associate his mischievous side with the fact that he tends to space out a lot, is there a relationship between the two?
•How exactly is he mischievous, what acts will he do in order to be considered so? Pranks and/or teasing others?
Could you also elaborate in the biography? Here are a few pointers:
•How was his life on the streets? How did he survive to find food and shelter for those 11 years of his life?
•Did he just skip Elementary School and part of High School altogether since he only started at the age of 14?
•How exactly did he come to busting the cafeteria wall?
The ability section will require some more details for precision. When adding more details, please recall that people attending Fuyu Academy are those who are not fully capable of using their abilities.
•Is there a limit to the size of the creatures he can summon?
•Is he able to dismiss the creature once it has been summoned? Or is there a time limit?
•Are the creatures under total control by Iru?
•What kind of creatures can he conjure? Animals that can be found in real life and/or Magical Creatures from Fantasy?
•How does he freeze things? By direct contact, a look of the eye or any other methods?
•How strong are both his powers? Are there any drawbacks/limits to his abilities?
Please quote me when you are done editing so I can fully approve Iru!
:3 thanks smile
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Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:10 pm
Thank you for editing the profile and adding more details!
It looks much better : )
Iru Kyota is approved and sorted to Eirannes!
Please wait for a dorm. Meanwhile you may begin posting.
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Sapphire Waltz Vice Captain
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intune-elemental-familiar
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Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:43 pm
THANK YOU!!!!!!!! blaugh 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:48 pm
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- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
cяєω Iru now has a dorm!
Eirannes House, Olivine Dorm
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