Sapphire Waltz
Hello, there are just a few issues about your character!
First off, she/he is definitely a Wyvern to me!
I would like you to restrict her/his shape shifting ability to only two copies. That being said, you will be able to post as Faith in 2 different threads at the same time if and only if you clearly mark in your layout which Faith you are. In other words, put a '1' and '2' for each copy just so that others who will be roleplaying with you won't be confused.
Also, her/his ability of shape shifting as different people will have to add a condition/clarification: if Faith shape shifts into let's say character Bob, Faith will have none of Bob's knowledge. So she will not be able to spew out his entire biography and secrets.
On a side note, could you not abuse ellipses (the ...)? It made Faith seem like a very meek character whereas the actual content of her/his profile suggests otherwise.
Please quote me when you are done editing so I can fully approve Faith!
Ummm, sorry, but I think I failed at expressing how my characters abilities worked. I meant that Faith could make various; more than two, forms of herself, and could also make those forms turn to different people. So when I meant she could make herself look like them, it meant that she only looks like them. Obviously she won't know their personal life because all she did was change her appearance. I wasn't planning on posting in more than one forum at a time, because I don't have enough time on my hands to post in more than one. But I'll still restrict her to two if you want. And finally, the ellipsis, I just put ellipsis so it would match the headings, I'll take them out, I just thought it would look nicer because all of the headings have them.
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