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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:42 pm

Name: Snow Sauki Nickname: Snowflake Rank: -- Race: Shinigami
Name: Suno-Akki Spirit Appearance: http://i750.photobucket.com/albums/xx148/kitsumi-fox/Story/QueenofOwls.jpg Suno-Akki is dressed in black and white dress with a white butterfly mask that has gold etchings on it. Her black flows past her waist in soft, layered waves with black and white feathers. She has large black and white butterfly wings that stretch a foot above her head to just a few inches below her waist. The wings edges are edged with black. Personality wise Suno-Akki is actually mothering towards her holder. She doesn't agree with Snow being so young and holding her, but finds battle amusing. She speaks in slur of Old and Modern English. Her mannerism is of a woman in the late 17 century, early 18th century. She is polite to others but doesn't make friends with anyone.
Inner World: Suno-Akki’s world is a large woodland where the only thing found on the trees is a thick layer of snow. The ground and everything around is cover in snow. Only parts of the trees are shown. The snow on the ground can range from a few inches to half a foot. White owls with black feathers under their wings are often seen with Suno-Akki in this world.
Sealed Form: http://i750.photobucket.com/albums/xx148/kitsumi-fox/Bleach Rp/white_dragon_katana_sword-1.jpg In her sealed form, Suno-Akki is in the form of a katana with a white hilt and black sheath that has a bleach white tie so it can be worn on her hip. The metal that makes up the blade of the katana is light silver that is almost white. The hilt is white has small black diamonds going from the base to the the butt of the sword.
Shikai Powers: Undiscovered
Release Phrase: Shed your frozen tears, Suno-Akki! Shikai Descripiton: http://i998.photobucket.com/albums/af109/Bia-chan92/WhiteKatana.jpg When releasing her shikai, Snow’s reaitsu grows even colder than it is normally. White reaitsu begins to wrap around the blade in a swirling pattern as it changes into a two foot dagger. The blade turns white as the sheath and hilt also turn white with gold lining. The sheath has a small handle so that it may be used in the defense position during combat. After the change is complete pure white reaitsu continues to flow from Snow’s body causing the air around her to have a unnatural chill to it.
Bankai Name: Suno-Akki-Ary Bankai Description: ~~~ Bankai Powers:~~~
Skills/Abilities: Snow currently has no abilities as far as shikai, bakai, and anything else goes. She is a student and has just been brought to the Soul Society to begin her training as Shinigami. The only fighting experience she has is with her fist.
Biography/History: Snow was born in the Soul Society in the late winter. She was given her name because of both her birth and her physical appearance. She never knew either of her birth parent, only the foster mom she had for the first five years of her life. She grew up living off the streets with no one and has become cold to other people, only seeing them as means to get what she wants.
As she grew older, her differences became more obvious. Her skin paled to a ghostly cooler, her blond hair lighting from a light blonde to white. Her brown eyes turned white around the pupil, the edges of the irises are the only thing that remains brown. Appearances weren't all that changed. Her body temperature dropped slowly several degrees below normal level. When she grew mad or was depressed the air around her became frigid and many feared her for it. One unfortunate day, she teamed up with some of the kids to take some food from one of the local venders. She was only phyically 14 and could moved faster then the others, but she needed the smaller kids to be unnoticable. Things didn't go as planned and when the vender lashed out to hit a kid that was half of Snow's size, she snatched his arm. This had unseen consequences. Her anger and the parentage that she is clueless about worked against her. Soft white reaistu covered her skin and she froze the mans arm. As soon as the Soul Society was made aware of this she was taken from the streets and forced into training.
~~~ What is unknown to her is her parents are Wolf (Selena) Shyin and Aros Ryouga. Her extremely cold reaitsu comes from both her parents being elementalist. Wolf was aware when she had Snow that Aros and her would become outcast from the Soul Society so she didn't give the child either of their names, choosing the last name Sauki. She left her with a woman to raise her outside of the Soul Society, unknown to Wolf, the woman passed away five years later. Aros is dead and Wolf is assumed to also be.
Appearance: Snow appears 14 for being around 140 years old, her body aging tenth of a humans. Her name is given to her by her physical appearances. Her hair falls just a few millimeters above her collar bone. It’s naturally pure white but she has added thick black streaks to it. Her eyes are an ice blue around the pupil and on the very edges of her irises is a dark brown encircling the blue. She stands only five feet and two inches from the ground and weighs 125 pounds.
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:45 pm
You need to expand this more. Like a lot more.
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:47 pm
Its in the process of being fixed..
I haven't even read most of it since I wrote it.... In like January....
EDIT:
Her profile is bare because of the fact she is a complete noob. Certain things will be added as she is trained.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:22 pm
Before I start to review this profile you will need to add in a fully fleshed out description of her personality, fill out her shikai completely, insert a list of any special accessories she carries with her, and make a list of her abilities (including kidou). Until those demands are met, this won't get a proper review. Just saying.
And the whole 'It's empty because she's a noob.' excuse doesn't work. Your character would, after all, have graduated from the Shino Academy and would have been taught the basic kidou. You can play her as a noob all you'd like, but the profile should still be complete.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:31 pm
I am sorry, but until you, a NOOB compared to the years I've been Rping Bleach, can comprehend that my capability to Role Play should not be questioned I will not post a damn thing more in this guild.
Sorry, but you don't know me so I don't expect you to understand so let me tell you this:
I WAS SQUAD 11 CAPTAIN UNDER DAVEN, THE ORIGINAL OWNER OF THIS GUILD.
Until you understand me and my old fashion ways Noob,
Bye~
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:28 pm
Well if you feel that way then by all means feel free to wait to post because until you follow the things I've said, you profile will not be accepted by me, nor any other profile moderator. If you think I'm a noob, fine. Frankly, I couldn't care less what you think. Just because you once held a position, doesn't mean you have any more skill than the lowest ranked member here. It means that you once had a position. That's it.
Now I'm tired of your attitude. Either follow the rules like all people here, and respect your superiors (which incase you are unaware, I am your superior). You have two choices; either do what I said, or leave.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:32 pm
DGK, then I'll ask you as a person who was also here when the guild was founded. You need to expand on your profile just as Kyros has said. He might not have been here as long as you have, but he is a Guild Vice Captain and has the authority to tell people what they need to do since he was given such power by the Guild Captain. Not only is he trusted with such power by the Guild Captain, but we as a crew have given him such power. So you have to listen to said 'NOOB', even if you don't wish to.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:34 pm
That's nice to know.
However, regardless of comparative EXP, Kyros knows what he's talking about. You've had two people ask you to expand, that's not asking for a lot. I don't see the issue.
Taking out the bluntly placed image, your profile doesn't have much length.
To be specific, you could add content to your shikai, and sealed for, since you've had them crossed out. One HUGE problem I've had with profiles when people think "Unknown" is a legitimate excuse to leave something blank, or put in a pathetic sense of mystery.
Your Bio is fine, I don't find it necessary to add to it if you don't want to. But nearly everything else could use a few good lines.
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:52 am
Okay, the reason I'm not dealing with this is fact the idiot denied my way Role Playing.
Shikai, I understand. There is no chance in hell I'm going to Kidou add that hasn't been taught to her. Even the basic. I don't believe, and some others don't, that's proper. In fact, if you look at it closely it's godmod because the new generation is too lazy actually RP it out.
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 3:11 pm
Well if you want to see it like that, then your character won't have any combat prowess at all. You can RP all of your combat training too. The basic 1-10 kido is taught at the academy, which is implied that you graduated from.
In fact you can go ahead and RP out the whole 10 years at the academy first if you want to play it like that. But if you want to actually start in the Gotei 13, and get in your squad, you can go ahead and list the 1-10. You just make a PRP and have which ever grace-hearted crew member train you in all of this, which I can guarantee you, no one is going to waste time doing.
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 6:46 pm
Really? No would do it my way? I know a few that would do it for me.
Either way, I'm done.
This guild has been run over by a generation of stupidity (In my opinion). Y'all want all this information on a characters profile that isn't necessary to begin a RP.
I have been doing Bleach for 6 years and I've never seen so many people blinded but sun.
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:03 pm
Well, if you feel that way you are more than welcome to leave. If you think the guild has been over run with a generation of stupid people, then by all means you can go your own way. We really don't need people that have such horrid out of character conduct. As a previous member of crew one would have thought you had the common sense to speak in a more respectful tone. All you have shown the crew is that they were right in not accepting your profile.
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:15 pm
"Generation of Stupidity."
If you mean "Doesn't let people be snide, stuck-up fools with nothing to their credibility besides a few weeks of Captaincy, come in and completely bypass even the most basic and simple standards that a fourteen year old could fulfill."
No one wants you here because you've been a complete stubborn idiot about practically nothing. You don't have an argument. So please, do leave and stop wasting our time. And while you're at it, cut the mark at six years of Bleach RPing and stop wasting your own time because you clearly haven't developed at all. You are awful.
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:43 pm
Nice, bash on someone that can't read your insults because y'all got her banned.
I'm sorry but I actually know DGK in RL so my view may not be completely clear on things.
--- Yes, she is stubborn. It's a pain in the a** sometimes, but she hardly gives up. I don't think any of you were there to watched her fight for her captain ship of Squad 11 or 10 before Daven brought us here from BSS (no longer exist). And hell she fought Fefnir over her Captaincy of Squad 9 in another guild
--- Colm-kun, I'm going to put this as nicely as I can, you should hush because you don't know crap. I ADMIT HER ATTITUDE IS WRONG!! But she never served WEEKs. She served about two to four months at a time due to personal issues . I KNOW. I'M HER COUSIN.
---- You should show respect to her and me. We've both doing this s**t for a long time. Hell, my old character almost got killed by Daven.
--- No, I'm not quitting this guild, I'm actually trying to transfer everything into the format You people like and edit it some.
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