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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:28 pm


The Storycoat herd

Tales from the Asgina Kanehelvsgi

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Legends speak of a vast herd outside of the kawani lands. They call this herd the "Storycoat Herd", each members coats telling a new story. Over time, different clans or "sub-herds" formed within the grander one, following a certain genre of story, certain traits gifted to them from the spirits representing them in some way.

While it is a distant herd, two members of the Asgina Kanehelvsgi (Ghost story) Subherd, gifted with eerie translucent hair and spooky coats have found their way to the Kawani lands and the storytellers Circle, with their own stories to tell....
PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:45 pm


What you are trying to do

Have the Soquili tell the story that is in their coat as if it was their turn in an RP. Soquili have gathered around to hear their tale, now is the time for them to shine..



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1. Please keep your stories Short and sweet -- Approximately 1000 words is the MAXIMUM amount. You can go over the word cap by about 100 words if necessary to close it off.
2. Work must be 100% yours
3. No proxies
4. No Mules
5. You are welcome to try for both, but you can only win one.
6. You CAN edit your entries until closing time
7. The Two are NOT related, they just come from the same herd.
8. The story must be a "Ghost/Campfire/scary" Story.
9. USE THE FORMS BELOW FOR THEM
10. Put your username in the slot provided for you to put it in.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:23 pm


For the Stallion

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For the Female

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:56 am



Entering for the Spooky Stallion


username: Zephira738
Stallions name: Felunar
Temper: Enigmatic

His story:

The young stallion looked about his audience as they waited for him to begin. A smile spread across his features as he let the silence grow until it felt thick enough to touch with a lifted hoof. It was then, and only then, that he began, for this was his story and it would not be rushed...

Did you ever look up at the moon? Truly look at it? There are many things that reside in the moon, in legends. Some claim to see a man, perhaps like those of the Kawani tribe you have here. Others talk about a hare in the moon, or a rabbit. Perhaps there are those things. Perhaps there are others. But what I see in the moon, is the cat. Yes, a cat. She sits there, her head turned just so, and her tail arched in a flash of white around the rim as she stares down at the world she once belonged to. Does she miss it? Or does she think herself above us all?

She was not always a cat, you see, oh no. But you all know of those who walk in the skins of others, do you not? Yes, some are pure evil, and others are cursed with evil. Some even seek it out, though perhaps not knowing what it is that they have found. Evil wears many faces, many disguises, and may even seem to be the most fascinating of things, for it is its lure that brings others to it.

Once, long ago, this moon-cat was like many of us. A bit vain, perhaps, a bit arrogant, and maybe petty and cruel as well, but no more so than any other mare may have been. She was a beautiful creature, to be sure, but on some beauty is little more than pelt-deep. She liked being beautiful, oh how she liked it! Her fur was the softest white, and shone in the sunlight. Many admired her, but though she enjoyed their attentions she scorned them, thinking that none of them were as handsome as she was beautiful and could not possibly deserve her. Her arrogance did not make her any less envious, and while she claimed no interest in her suitors, she seethed with fury whenever one left for another mare. How could anyone want one of those lesser creatures while she was here, ripe for admiring?

It was only a matter of time before, tiring of the vain mare, all those who had once admired her were gone. Beauty is no cure for loneliness, though the feeling was not one she could truly identify. She slandered the ‘ugly’ mares, she scorned and scoffed at the ‘foolish’ stallions, and not a thing she did could make her happy. No, the problem was that they could not appreciate the beauty of her pure white coat, all they wanted was the silly, patchy things that were full of color. Ah, if only the poor mare knew where true beauty lies she might not have wandered into the insidious trap!

Obsessed with once again possessing the hearts of many, never giving of her own, the white mare began to seek out others to entice, but they had all heard of her and none would give her their admiration. Her frustration grew and grew, and when she was truly riled did he appear to her. He listened to her woes, assuring her they were not selfish but utterly justified. What the mare needed, he said, was a new pelt to catch their undeserving eyes and a better way to take and keep their undeserving hearts.

There is such a thing as ‘too easy’ and tricking the mare was just that.

When they did not look upon her with love and hopeless adoration, well, it was a simple matter to take their eyes for herself. If their hearts they withheld, well, those she could take as well. It was much easier to tear them free with her beautiful, wicked claws than it was to wait and earn them. A feline’s form was so very lithe and graceful, a perfect counterpoint to her poised and elegant shape. And both were beautiful, oh yes, so very beautiful… She took offense at the slightest hint that there was another beautiful mare and always ensured that the rumors were proven wrong… by showing off her lovely fangs and claws.

Her own greed was her undoing, for she took the life of an powerful stallion’s love, and in doing so drew his attention to her. Vain and selfish creature that she was, he decided to rid the world of her. And unto her the heartbroken stallion bestowed, perhaps, the cruelest evil of all in the name of ‘good’ and ‘justice’. He made the one who had been beautiful remember. She remembered being one of us, remembered being like us, remembered her admirers scorned and her rivals belittled. She remembered her life before she herself destroyed it. And it was at that moment, in that sudden and overwhelming flash of insight, that she was vanished.

Never again would she walk this world, as monster or as mare. Instead, she must watch us always from above, and what her desires may be, well, only the stars could know. And maybe we don’t want to, for there is nothing that will stop her from watching us. Perhaps it would be wise to turn our eyes towards her, and to say how beautiful the moon is, for that is a little price to pay to be sure our eyes and hearts remain a part of us if she should ever escape the confines of the sky. After all, I have seen stars fall from the heavens in streaks of light, it is only a matter of time before the mare returns in a streak of white.

The stallion paused, his gaze drifting around his audience, before he chuckled low and added, “I rather like my eyes where they are. Don’t you?”

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:10 am



Entering for the Frightening Female


Username: Syaoran-Puu
Mares name: Lavernia
Temper: Ominous

Her story:
Eerie golden eyes shone out from the dark red of her pelt, two twinkling eyes that shone like earthbound stars in the night. Many had gathered to hear her story, it was not an unusual thing but tonight felt different, as if the ghost world was closer to reality... all hallows eve often had that effect on the painted mare. Still, that did not change her mission. Upon her pelt was a story, one that was designed to be shared with the world.

A slight smile lifted her lips. It was time.

"A long time ago, when the world was still new,
There was a young mare by the name of Bonesoo,
Bonesoo was adventurous, and travelled the world,
No deed was ever too small, for her heart was so large.

Bonesoo met a stallion, who whipped her away,
Showing her more things than she could imagine,
With each day that passed, her heart shared more,
Until she was his through and through.

As the sun slowly set, and with courage called forth,
She planned to share what her heart really thought,
But before she could say it the stallion did change,
A roar and a scream did follow.

Poor little Bonesoo, left broken and alone,
The stallion had gone and left her,
But rather than whole, he had broken her bones,
So she could never follow after.

The tears they did rain, like a river of shame,
Mixing with the blood of her injuries,
Giving up hope, she looked to the sky,
Just as a flash scurried past her.

Something did tickle, and she felt really strange,
Her flesh being stitched back together,
Except on the front where her bones were left bare,
And suddenly the tickling did end.

Eyes of bright blue, flickered around,
Until they lay sights on a spider,
Glancing at her wounds she instantly knew,
It was soft web that had stitched her together.

And so this once happy mare, by the name of Bonesoo,
Had forever been changed by a stallion,
The cruel actions of one would have left her broken and cold,
If not for the help of a spider."
PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:15 am


Entering for the Spooky Stallion


Username: Syaoran-Puu
Stallions name: Black Wrath
Temper: Melancholy
His story:
Black Wrath knew that the eyes were the key to the soul, and his spoke of hardships and experiences no stallion should ever have to bare. His family had been strict, forcing him to recall the story of his pelt in every way and language imaginable... the scars shone brightly on his heart.

The fire he and his companions sat around flickered with menacing intent, the perfect setting for a good session of spooky tales, and the one printed upon his pelt was the spookiest of all.

"It is believed that cats are the connection between our world and that of the ghosts, one eye able to see the here and now while the other see's what lies beyond this world. But this was not always the case.

A long time ago, before the Moon guarded the night skies, it is believed a single cat roamed the Earth, getting into mischief. It would chase the two-leggers, scratch the ankles of soquili and familiar alike, and generally make a nuisance of itself. The cat didn't care who it's target was, and with each new attack it gold bolder and bolder.

One day, what appeared to be a hunter got lost in the woods. The man circled the trees over and over again in search of the exit, but always ended up back in the same spot. The cat watched and waited, and when the perfect opportunity arose it pounced, scratching deep gorges into the hunters back. Blood dripped in a steady stream down the man's back before falling to the ground. The man's scream bellowed through the trees. The birds fled, all forest creatures hid, even the Kalona's cowered from the sound.

The blood dripped. Pooling on the ground in a bloody mess.

The man turned, eyes glowing red with anger as it looked down at the grinning cat. "That was foolish!" The man exclaimed in anger, and in an instant the figure changed, shifting from a corporal form to that of a ghost. The reason the man couldn't escape... was because he had died in this very spot, and would be trapped here forever. The spirit raised it's arms before muttering words over and over again, "Tuhbdojj jihheidtj mo, rceet A xoho evvoh. Fidajx kxaj shoukiho veh mubadw mo jivvoh. Vehso ak ke hid, ke vcoo udt ke xato, ke kujko nxuk ak'j tedo kxheiwx ak eik tuhb o0oj. Ted'k cok ak jkef, eh kubo u jkout0 rhoukx. Suijo ak whouk udwiajx je ak doloh vehwokj. Rik ke walo ak u sxudso cok ak joo nxuk aj semadw, whudk ak kxo jawxk ev kxo jfahak nehct ximmadw." -- Darkness surrounds me, blood I here offer. Punish this creature for making me suffer. Force it to run, to flee and to hide, to taste what it's done through it's own dark eyes. Don't let it stop, or take a steady breath. Cause it great anguish so it never forgets. But to give it a chance let it see what is coming, grant it the sight of the spirit world humming.

And soon it was so, the Moon did appear to summon forth the creatures the cat would soon fear. Each and every night as the Moon rises high the spirits haunt the world and follow the cat, in the hopes that one day they will catch it and complete their dark summons.

It is because of this that all cats to this day, enjoy being lazy and sleep through the day. But as soon as the Moon rises, and the sun has gone to bed... they must fight for their lives, or end up dead."

Sad eyes looked out upon the group, in many ways.... he felt like the cat.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:42 pm



Entering for the Spooky Stallion


username: Jynk

Stallions name: Revenant
(a person who returns as a spirit after death; ghost)

Temper: Spooky

His story:
The stallion took a deep breath, coming closer to the bonfire the others had gathered around. It was his turn to tell a story, his first time to stand before the storyteller's circle and show off his craft. Patiently, he waited for the din to die down and he held the gathered Soquili's attention before clearing his throat. In the quiet of night, with only the crackling of the fire for company, his voice resonated clearly as he spoke, gesturing to the pictographs painted along his body as he wove his tale.

"Dark. Darker than any night that had come before it was the night the traveler had set out on his journey. He had walked for some way before he heard a voice calling softly. 'Don't look behind you. Don't look behind you.'

"The traveler noticed the voice was very close and the hairs of his mane stood up with a prickly feeling of fear. He walked a little further and still the voice called to him. 'Don't look behind you. Don't look behind you.'

"Soon he came across a small black cat and asked it 'What is it that asks me not to look behind me?' The cat merely shrugged and wandered away for it could not tell him. Again the voice called. 'Don't look behind you. Don't look behind you.'

"The traveler became more and more frightened at the voice. He changed his path to walk out more into the moonlight. Soon, he began to relax, the feeling of safety in the light over taking him. That is, until he heard the voice again. 'Don't look behind you. Don't look behind you.'

"By now he'd had enough of this. Who was this to follow him all this way and taunt him? He stopped where he was and snorted. The voice called again. 'Don't look behind you. Don't look behind you.' And then, for good measure, it added, 'You'll be sorry.'

"'I don't care. You can't taunt me no longer,' the traveler said and, in a fit of boldness, he turned to come face to face with a Soquili not unlike himself, at least in coloration, for the rest of it had been mostly skinned, it's ruined pelt dragging behind it and leaving a bloody trail.

"The ghost snapped it's strong deformed at the traveler. 'I told you that you'd be sorry.' The traveler's scream echoed across the forest as the ghost lunged for him.

"Days later, a new traveler was walking down the darkened path when behind her she heard a soft voice call out. 'Don't look behind you. You'll be sorry.'"

The young stallion snapped his teeth together, making some of the young foals in the crowd jump, before bowing and moving back to his place.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2011 8:46 pm



Entering for the Frightening Female


username: JadedTiger22
Mares name: Fauve
Temper: Uninhibited

His story: I'm sure you've all heard the saying, that beauty is only skin-deep? Well, I'm here the to clear the air, and let you know, that you couldn't be more wrong. There was once a gorgeous mare, scarlet hide and snowy mane, the apple of her daddy's eye. She was his only child as fate would have it, and a princess through and through. She couldn't be bothered to learn to scavenge or treat her own wounds, that's what daddies were for. But life is cruel and if something goes underappreciated, it disappears, and so did her father. He was her only family, leaving her to walk the lands in dismal fear, for she knew nothing of the world, except the unconditional love her father had showered upon her.

Wondering down the O-da-lv Pass, she thought she remembered her father once speaking of it and the sands that polluted it, but she couldn't quite remember just what he had been talking about. The grassy undertone was bare and scarce, embarassing would describe it best. Why would her father have visited this desert, forgotten by the Gods themselves? She slowed when she spotted a weeping vine and drew closer to inspect it once she saw it shimmer. Her eyes grew large and her heart stopped as her feet did; before her lay the most extravagant spider's web she'd ever seen. Truth be told, she despised insects, had always had her father stomp them to death, when in actuality he merely scooted them the opposite way. But this spider had created something beautiful in a place that lacked all chance at something splendid.

The spider she had been thinking of, was no where in sight, but within her trance, she couldn't feel that same bug crawling up her tail. It was effortless, a song in motion, and brought tears to the mare's eyes as it sunk it's teeth within her fleshy hide. The spider leapt off immediately, and the feme walked past the vine and up the path she followed here. Tears still streamed down her cheeks, but not in pain, no, from searing heat spreading over her entire form. Her skin blistered and oozed small droplets of blood, but she couldn't see it, so she paid it no mind. What bothered her was the slow burn consuming her, so she reached down and nibbled at her left shoulder, not even caring that she tore the flesh ever so slightly.

Eventually she set forth back to her place in the village, unaware of the fact that she continued to mutilate herself, as if, still in the spider's trance. Behind her lie a bloody bread-crumb trail. She bleed slowly and the heat waned only with the loss of each pound of flesh. Upon reaching the village, her neighbors cried out in disgust, but she took little notice of it. Like a zombie she trudged her way to the lake, perhaps to soak her wounds, or even to sooth the hot spell. Either way, she walked on, into the lake, but didn't stop, not until the water was over her head, and all that could be seen was a blood-stained mane.

You know, they say she still wanders these lands, as if in a dream. No longer does she pick at her flesh, but instead, licks the wounds and exposed sinew. Her daddy always told her, she was beautiful on the inside as well as the outside, and now you and I, can see it for ourselves.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:35 pm



Entering for the Spooky Stallion


username: Duelist of Pokemon
Stallions name: Kaever
Temper: Distant

His story:
The fire gently flickered and danced across a smokey hide, letting the pictures of an untold tale shift upon his skin. They came to life with this first breath as those gathered around him watched and waited with baited breath. This newcomer...A surreal spirit that had not been seen for time beyond tale, had become a reality with a whispered invitation on the wind.

Now, the object of their focus stood with warmth shimmered in his golden eyes.

"Listen now, my friends. My children of the the mortal Earth." His voice was as soft and translucant as the mane that lifted in the falls' bitter breeze. "Can you hear those that drift between Our world and the Eternal Mist? The place where one comes when they breathe anew and to where they go when the heart ceases to drum?"

The group shifted and muttered nervously as the one before them smiled more.

"It is told, sung, and cursed of. The Gods do not allow these to wander to untamed and free. Confinded to the Eternal Mist, they drift day by day, night by night.

Their cries of fear go unnoticed by the living.
Their tears of lonliness go uncomforted by those who loved them in life.
Their hatered becomes undirected and as passionate as the unburned flame...."

He leaned closer, the flames reaching up to darken and carrass his face.

"Thus, that which waits beyong the Heart of Light, she who watches over the night-" He looked up towards the full moons' eye above them, several others joining his gaze before returning to the earth. "-The shadows of torment and chaos await with bloodstained claws. Those who live without the light....They speak of madness into the unsespecting. They whisper words of doubt and hurt, hardening the heart that no longer hears Her voice. Can no longer see Her light."

.....

"They now seek only to dominant. To destroy. To Possess." The stallion paused and shook his head in smypathy, for the barest moment allowing tears of hurt to brighten his saddened eyes. "The tainted dispise the Living of the Earth. They would have pierced the Veil that protects our home all at once, that is.....Had it not been for Her children."

A small colt snuggled beside his mother then piped up. "Children? You mean like me and my sisters?"

The stallion chuckled at the innocent question.
"Patience, young one." The mother gently nudged the young one into silence. Only when thus so did he take up the thread of tale again, shifting so a particular marking was visable upon his features. The fire that warmed them brought life upon the shadowed feline, allowing it to shift against the pale cradle of the night.

"It the Nights when Her eye is most open and the Nights in which she Sleeps, does the Veil thin itself the most. Chaos rises like the Serpent to strike the sleeping...Yet, from the crystals of her ribe do Her Children spring upon the Tainted."

"Taking the shape of those who traverse the night, of the swift and silent, of those who watch and wait with slit eyes of gold and coats of the darkest hour." He stepped back a bit as the fires burned lower. "Even unseen by those forgotten, They strike at times when those able to defend themselves cannot. With claws that pierce even strongest armor, fangs that shimmer in the light, under Her words do they take those who wander back to the Mist."

He paused, letting the story hang in the air.
Only after a moment did one speak.

"What happens to them?"

Stepping back more, the stallion chuckled and pawed at the ground. "Do I say? .........Unfortunately, that is not my tale to spin- Or...perhaps that tale is not yet complete?" He whickered and nodded at the disappointed voices. "Perhaps someday we may meet again. Perhaps I may have the ending you seek? Or is it a tale that should not be finished?"

He smiled and turned to walk away, pausing only to stare at the moon.

"She is the only one who knows."
PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 5:12 pm



Entering for the Frightening Female

username: Pollack
Mares name: Verene
Temper: Unnerving

Her story: One of her front hooves kicked roughly at the ground, sending a large dust cloud into the fire that lay in the middle of the circle of soquili. Not only did this dampen the glow of light that the fire gave, but it made seeing around the group hard. Perfect setting for her next tale, the tale that just happened to be formed from the markings painted on her fur. Lifting her head to get more volume in her speech she took in a deep breath and started.

"Everything seemed normal for the new family who was settling in after a long day of storing food for the winter. Suddenly a scream came from where the two fillies rested for the night, their protective father shot up and ran quickly over to them. "What is the matter!?" The father screamed, worry taking over his senses as he watched his two daughters huddle close together in fear of something. "Daddy...a spider! Look!" With his shoulders slumped the father craned his head down slowly to eye up the spider that had scared his girls so. It was not a harmless one, but one that would only attack when in danger. "My children, this spider shall not hurt you if you do not hurt it." He explained calmly, in hope of not only calming down the two fillies but allowing them to learn a good life lesson with nature. "No daddy, please kill it! We can't sleep knowing that a monster is near by." With a heavy sigh passing through his lips the father lifted a hoof and in a swift stomp did indeed kill the spider. His girls were too young to learn this lesson, that was clear to be seen, but he was also far too tired to deal with such drama of coaxing them into a calm state. It was easier to take care of the pest that was plaguing them. The fillies laid their heads back down, content that the monster was gone now and would not be killing them in their sleep anytime soon.

Or so they foolishly thought.

The next morning the family knew something was off, the sky why dark as night was still with not a single breeze. The family could only gaze around the meadow they stayed in by lifting their heads since the rest of their bodies were tied down with masses of sticky spider web. What they did notice in the moments they were allowed to stew with fear was all the animals and birds that normally this time of year would be scurrying to find enough food to last themselves through the harsh change of fruitful seasons were seemingly gone. The only sign of life around them was the sharp movements of hordes of spiders forming a circle around the family. Even if they had managed to get out of their sticky binds they were trapped, with no way of escape that did not involve plowing through the mobs of poisonous spiders.

And then a loud taunting, horse cackle rang throughout the meadow, it acted as a battle cry to the spiders who in a flash leaped in a flash upon the mother and two fillies. Each tiny spider weaved it's way between the sticky ropes piled on top of their bodies till they got to bare flesh. Once they got to their feeding grounds their long fangs sank through the female's skin with their toxic venom each spider played a part in slowly killing the three from the inside out by liquefying their organs and sucking them up as a meal.

The father had a much crueler fate to be had, no matter how hard he fought or scream nothing could be done from him having to watch his loved ones die in slow agony. Once his mate and daughters had finally perished all but one spider drew back from the scene, watching from the sidelines as the lone spider crawled up the stallion till it reached his nose. The same horse cackle once again rang throughout the air, but this time it was from the small spider. "Now you shall pay in death, now you who was so quick to kill shall be the monster in the night, scaring younglings under their parents. Forever you shall be reminded of your cold-blooded actions!"

With that the stallion started to change, his jaws snapping and forming into a heavy-set mouth of sharp shark like teeth. His skin started to slowly peel away from his bones in complex patterns of swirls which tiny baby spiders were forming and pooling out of at a consent, alarming rate. At the same time all skin from his legs in one swoop fell off right to the bone. His chest cracked and morphed till all of his ribs opened up to cause a large, bleeding gap to form from his lower chest to his belly. All of the stallion's organs but his broken heart tumbled onto the ground. For his heart would never allow him to let go and forget the ones he loved so dearly and fought to protect against bumps in the night, the same loved ones he had unknowingly murdered. He was now the monster, forever forced to walk this earth without his family, only the spiders that had caused his pain."


(I'm sorry if this went over the word limit, I tried to keep it short but I have no way of counting up the amount of words that are in my story since I use wordpad to write. sweatdrop )

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 8:05 pm



Entering for the Spooky Stallion


username: Kara Asumie
Stallions name: Daisaku ((Ghost Writing))
Temper: Cunning

His story:
On a cold dark night the wind howls as ghouls dance about the fire. Daisaku now had the prefect setting in telling his story. The reason this is his story is because he is the only one who was freed of the Feline Ghoul's Curse. His eyes look as if they were glowing in delight as he scans the area seeing all of the other Soquili who had gathered to listen to the tells. Clearing his throat before beginning to tell this dark tell of his coat.

"This tale is one of ghouls, bones, and horror. So if your stomach is weak turn away now."
He warned first.

The flames sparked into the night sky. This is the trigger for him to start.

"It is said on the night of a full moon. Outside of the Big Oak Grove in the forest there are a pair of glowing yellow feline like eyes that float about. If you get close enough a black feline will form around the eyes. The sounds of bones cracking and breaking will be heard with howling screams.

If your eyes meet with the feline ghoul's eyes then it will be your end as a target mark will appear on your neck and your bones will start to crack as the next scream being heard will be your own.

The only way to break the curse of the feline ghoul in the forest outside of the Big Oak Grove is to find the bones of the victim before you and make a necklace of them. Then place them about your neck. After that match your voice with the howls of the wind.

If not then your bones will break and twist about inside of your body as the feline ghoul claws into your sides and stomach area. It is after your bones to reform it's own body so it can walk this world again."


The flames flicker again into the breeze as his ghost story ends and he steps away from the fire.

[[If I did this wrong.. Oh well I tried. I kept it short though.]]
PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 9:20 pm



Entering for the Frightening Female


username: Jynk
Mares name: Eidolon (a phantom; apparition)
Temper: Sanguinary

Her story: Eidolon moved through the crowd, jostling her way through to the inner circle surrounding the bonfire. She'd been listening to one storyteller after another. Always, always a happy story with a happy ending. Did no one believe in the thrill anymore? Of that prickly feeling of a good scary story? As the Story Leader called out for who wanted to go next, the mare shoulder-checked a young stallion aside and called out, "I'll go next!"

This is the story she told.


Mary was a good girl. They'd always told her so. She did what she was told and followed the rules. The one rule she'd always been sure to mind was the number one rule: Never venture beyond the village into the forest.

This was a logical rule, Mary thought. There were many dangers in the forest. Still, it was also intriguing and fascinating. And so, one night while the rest of the village slept, she crept out into the forest to see what there was to see.

Further and further into the deep forest, the young one traveled until she eventually came to a hut in the middle of the forest. Seeing no one was around and she was awfully tired, she decided to rest in the hut. Just until the owner came home.

Not long after she'd laid herself down and drifted to sleep. There came a scratch scratch scratch at the door of the hut. Mary lifted her head and stared at the door. Scratch scratch scratch. It was louder now.

Scratch scratch scratch. It was on the floor. Scratch scratch scratch. It was closer now.

SCRATCH. SCRATCH. SCRATCH.

The next morning, the villagers woke to the horror of their village covered in ribbons of flesh, strung up like holiday garlands. On top of the herd leader's hut was Mary's head with long scratches down her face, her eyes having bee clawed out. The villagers looked at one another, unable to comprehend what had happened to such a good girl.

And in the distance came the faintest sound. Scratch scratch scratch.


Grinning at the discomfort of the rest of the storytelling circle, Eidolon sauntered off into the night, her hooves making little scratching noises as she stepped.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2011 9:58 pm



Entering for the Frightening Female


username: Scaramouche Fandango
Mares name: Gloaming
Temper: Impish

Her story:

“Do you know why it is that spiders’ webs sparkle at dawn? Take a good look sometime. Even on mornings when there isn’t much in the way of dew, they sparkle. They always will, but it wasn’t always like that. Sit down for a spell, and I’ll tell you why.

Once there was a ghost. It doesn’t matter how she died; it was long, long ago, long enough that even she didn’t remember. She’d come to terms pretty quick with being dead; after all, it’s not like anybody’s ever gotten better after being dead. Yes, she was dead, stone dead for years, but that didn’t stop her from loving him. Oh no. She’d watched him and loved him all his life. The way she saw it, him being born on the spot where she’d fallen all those years ago made him special. She watched as he grew up into a handsome fella- a stallion brave and true. And so skilled with that horn of his! Yes, her unicorn prince was a handsome beast, and she was content to love him, hovering over him as he slept and kissing his eyelids. Some nights, he twitched and frowned, muttering in his sleep. On those nights, she left, saddened. But other nights, he whickered softly to himself and nuzzled deeper into his flanks, the muscles of his neck glimmering in the moonlight. On those nights, she stayed with him, dropped to her knees. The ghost was contented to be with her stallion by night, but she worried. It wasn’t that he would find a mare; no, she accepted this eventual reality. But she wanted so much for him to see her. Even if it was just once. She wanted him to see her as more than a shadow; to hear her as more than just the burbling of the brook or the breeze through the grass. This was her only wish, and the wishes of the dead are a powerful thing.

The shaman with the scarred face never told her his name, nor where he came from, nor how he knew of her plight. All he said was that he could make her dream come true, and when you’re desperate, you’re desperate. The worry had changed to a nagging ache in what used to be her heart, and she knew that eventually, the agony would drive her mad. She would dissolve into the ether, like so many other souls before and after her. Her love gave her something to hang onto, and she was grasping it by the roots. So when the shaman spoke, she listened. “Take me to your bones,” the shaman said, “and I’ll make it so that you can be with him forever. It might take some time, but eventually, he will come to you.” Stupefied, the ghost nodded, wondering how the human could see her. She assumed that he was just a gifted shaman, one who regularly did this. And what a kind shaman, too! He’d help her be with her love. She’d show him. So she took him to her bones in the spot where she’d first laid eyes on her beloved, and he dug them right out of the ground. They were old, stained sepia from years of dirt and channeled through by insects; but to those who deal in what’s left of the dead, bones are bones. The shaman soothed her with kind words, and as she slipped to do whatever it is that ghosts do during the day- don’t ask me, I’m just the storyteller- she failed to notice the wicked smile crack his face as he began to grind the bones into powder.

That night, she approached her stallion in his wakefulness, eager to finally have her recognition. “My love,” she called with the voice of the wind. “My dearest stallion! What…” But as she gazed into his eyes, the question died on her lips. He couldn’t see her.

He couldn’t see anything.

Something was desperately, desperately wrong. His eyes, once clear and sparkling, were fiery and mad. Something had changed within him. He was a beast now, in the process of becoming something much, much darker.

And she knew that to set his soul at rest, she had to kill him.

The ghost wanted his death to be swift. Painless, if possible. But her champion was now a monster, and she knew that a swift death would never come from a bear or a wolf. So she asked the rattlesnake to do it, but the rattlesnake knew that the sharpness of the cursed stallion’s hooves would sever his head. She asked the scorpion, but he knew that the stallion’s weight would crush him. So she asked the spider, and she understood. The black widow knew all too well what it was like, having to kill that which you loved most, and so she agreed to bite him as he slept.

The ghost spent one more night with him. Once again, she kissed his eyelids, but this time was rewarded with a showing of his sharp, sharp teeth and a growl, and she knew that there was no going back. She nodded at the spider, and the widow did her work.

It didn’t take long for the stallion’s ghost to rise from his body. For a moment, a brief, shining moment of joy, the ghost thought that all would be well. His reign of terror had ended, and they could be together. Forever.

Until she noticed his eyes.

They were clear. They were sparkling. And they were full of hatred, pointed right at her. And she knew. She knew then that this was all her fault. That many innocent creatures had died, including the stallion she loved, that this loss of life had been pointless, and that he was completely aware of this. And so she fled, dripping tears in her wake. She wanted to fade away, but the Powers saw fit to punish her by making her exist with him and his rage for the rest of eternity.

We’ve mostly stopped listening to ghosts now- even the spider can’t see her anymore. But on still nights, when you hear eerie wailing from nowhere? So does the spider. She still feels guilty about the whole thing, guilty enough to collect the ghost’s tears and set them out for the sunrise to take. It’s the hope of the spider that maybe, just maybe, if the ghost can’t leave this realm… at least a little bit of her sadness can."

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 12:44 am



Entering for the Frightening Female


Username: Kyaishi
Mare's Name: Nikora
Temper: Mischievious

Her Story: Yellow eyes watched as the young foals and adults alike gathered around the clearing's center, a small smile creeping onto her maw as she settled herself amidst them. It had been quite some time since she had told this particular story, and her companions had always known her penchant for... embellishing. This was an opportunity that didn't arise often, and the full moon's brightness overhead only served to create the perfect atmosphere to spin her tale.

"Once upon a time, a young mare, beloved by her parents and the elders of her herd, sought a young stallion to return her affections. Plain and ordinary but for her bright eyes and pretty smile, the stallion of her choice turned away from her, and the young mare despaired.

'If only I had beauty,' the mare bemoaned her fate, venturing further into the forest to avoid facing her stallion's lack of interest in her. She had been warned to keep away from the forest, but her need for solitude outweighed her caution, though her foolishness would eventually come to haunt her.

'And if you had beauty?' a voice rang out from the darkness, startling the young mare out of her wits. 'What price would you pay for such a gift?' A small spider appeared then, dangling on an intricately woven web beside a small cave.

The mare paused, considering, before she looked at the spider resolutely. 'Anything.' Her stance was sure, her tone leaving no room for argument. 'I would give anything for his attentions.'

The spider stared for a moment, then spoke in the lowest tones, drifting back towards the center of her web. 'Then state your desire, and my master will offer you a trade.'

Disbelieving, the mare regarded the spider with suspicion, weighing her desire to be noticed by her stallion with her caution, and the eerie crypticness of the spider's offer. Still, whether it proved to have merit or not, the mare was willing to try.

'Give me a mane that gleams in the starlight, so that I may catch his eye.'

The spider appeared to think about this for a moment before disappearing into the darkness of the forest, reappearing only when the young mare began to wonder if she intended to return at all. The eerie silence stretched on, the spider's many eyes trained intently upon the mare before she spoke again, her words cryptic and vague.

'My master will give you your mane of starlight, but he requires the use of your strong bones in return.'

'My bones?' the mare asked warily, eying the spider in confusion. 'Your master has work for me?' The spider did not answer, but the mare, in her naivety, innocence and desperation for her young stallion's affections, agreed. If all that was required of her was hard work, the price seemed more than fair.

'Look to the forest in three days' time,' the spider said quietly after the arrangement was made. 'My master will collect his payment then.'

And so the mare returned to her herd with a mane of gleaming beauty, her beaming smile and bright eyes putting the stars to shame in their brilliance. Still, though, the stallion of her affections did not pay her any mind. Crushed, the young mare returned home, teary-eyed, with the intention of visiting the spider's home again the following day.

When she awoke, she found blood on her ivory hooves.

Alarmed, but not deterred, the mare ventured back to the spider's lair, lowering her head as the spider came into view.

'Give me a tail of the finest silk, so that I may capture his affection.'

Again, the spider appeared to contemplate her request before disappearing into the darkness once more, emerging a fair time later with mandibles clicking as she regarded the young mare.

'My master will grant you your tail of silk, but he requires the use of your pretty face in return.'

And again, the mare was lost in confusion to the request, but eager for her stallion's attentions, so she blindly agreed.

'Look to the forest in two days' time. My master will collect his payment then.'

And so the mare returned to her herd with her newly shining tail of silk and mane of gleaming starlight, seeking out the stallion she had chosen. Her beauty drew the attention of several suitors, but her eyes were only for the stallion of her choice. Still, he paid her no attention, though the mare despaired to find him followed by other mares.

Disheartened, she returned home with the intention to pay another visit to the spider in the morning.

When she awoke, there was dirt and grime upon her face, and though disturbed, the mare dismissed it as she ventured to the spider's home once again for another request.

'Give me a patterned coat of delicate design, so that I may outshine his other suitors.'

And again, the spider appeared to contemplate her words, vanishing into the darkness once more before reappearing some time later.

'My master will give you your patterned coat, but he requires the use of your tender heart in return.'

Confused by the request, but beyond desperation at this point, the mare agreed without question.

'Look to the forest in one day's time. My master will collect his payment then.'

When the mare returned to her herd once more, she was overjoyed to find that her newly-acquired beauty had finally captured her stallion's attention, and basked in the glow of his interest for the first time. When he asked her to join him for a night's walk, she all but leapt to his side in excitement.

The following morning, her lover's dead body lay beside her slumbering form.

Leaping to her feet in terror, the mare was horrified to find his blood on her coat, staining the bright red into a deep crimson. At the sound of her cry, the other members of the herd came running, but stopped at the sight of her bloodstained coat.

Panicked, the mare fled for her life, away from their accusing eyes, and tore into the forest, all the way back to the spider's lair. Tearful, inconsolable, she begged the spider for her master's help once again.

'But you have no more to give,' said the spider, watching the hysterical mare with a cool indifference. 'My master has come to collect his payment.'

And in the darkness behind the spider, a glowing grin, full of sharp teeth and gleaming yellow eyes filled their vision before the young mare's scream broke through the oppressive silence."


(Words: 1,095 XD; sorry!)

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:10 am



Entering for the Spooky Stallion


username: HarukaHaru
Stallions name: Dante
Temper: inspirational

His story:
Everyone gathered around the campfire to hear the best tale of them all, Dante's tale about death and someplace dark. Every Halloween, his tale made others shiver with fear and shriek from panic. Dante grinned mischievously at his guests for the evening, and once everyone quieted, he decided to begin.

"It was a night where the moon was red, the shadows from the trees stretched farther than before. This is the night that the spirit world connects with our world. Shrieks, moans and screams can be heard as others enter our realm. It is best that every living thing stay out of the way of the spirits. You walk through the eerie woods to go to your home but pause in fright when you hear a scream that is not entirely human."

Dante paused the story to look around at his guests, the look on their faces just screamed to him that they wanted to know more. He smiled to himself this time and took a deep breath before he continued.

"You hurriedly run to safety only to find a rather large black cat peering at you with his glowing yellow eyes. The cat stalks towards you letting out these horrible, blood curdling screams. You try and move to run away but seem to be frozen in place. As the cat gets closer, you notice the ground beneath you starting to rip and tear open. Panic seizes you, you call out for help but hear nothing in return except the cat screaming."

A few of the guests got really close to each other as if it were happening to them and that being close would save your soul. He snickered to himself at the idea of it all but figured he should wrap things up before it gets to the point where he has to be an escort.

"You hear strange laughter coming up from under your body, the ground opens up completely and you fall through. Blue, white and black mist seem to surround you, the mist seems to be protecting you as the evil spirits try and attack you. Before long though, you find yourself floating in air with the mist as the black cat from before appears before you and grows even bigger.
The mist seems to vanish and you urge it to come back, nothing happens and you look at the cat only to find that it is coming closer. You close your eyes and try to wake but you hear more screams and know your still there.
"What do you want?" You call out, thinking you could offer up something in return for your freedom. The cat just smiles at you and before you can blink, the cat has knocked you over on the ground and is holding you down with its massive paw. You are helpless and can't fight against the cat as it leans down and bites into your neck, blood gushes out of you and pools around you. The cat removes its paw and shrinks back to normal only to lap at your blood as the life slowly drains from your body."

Dante moved away from the campfire, a smile on his face because he knew that his guests would be rather paranoid if they ever saw a cat of any kind.
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