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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:41 am
So, i have decided to organize a poetry contest in this thread and i'm hoping to get a big response! gaia_diamond (if the vice captain could make an announcement i'd be really thankful!)
The theme of the poem will be this quote : “You want me to act like we've never kissed, you want to forget; pretend we've never met , and I've tried and I've tried, but I haven't yet... You walk by, and I fall to pieces.”
Please don't copy phrases if it's not necessary. use your creativity and your imagination! the person who writes the best poem will receive 50k. yum_strawberry
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:46 am
poems must be your own creations and you can post 3 poems maximum. heart
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twinkle caramel candy Crew
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:46 am
i heard a noise from down the stairs of clanking pans and earthly wares i quickly rose from my bed when conclusions started filling my head
armed with a bat so silent, stiff ready to face the midnight thief i went down, then leaned right as i saw the kitchen light
i swiftly swung the door open and found the culprit near the oven
it was skinny, hairless and awkward with both its knees bent backward veins ran along it's body like a drought its faceless head had a carnivorous mouth
man or creature, it was hard to tell it looked like it came from hell
i screamed, panicked, i threw the bat when it sprinted forward like a cat it's three pointed fingers grabbed my throat i realized why this hotel is remote. -The Guest-by Jon Patrick Belmontethat's me :pizza
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:30 am
Natrius 07 i heard a noise from down the stairs of clanking pans and earthly wares i quickly rose from my bed when conclusions started filling my head
armed with a bat so silent, stiff ready to face the midnight thief i went down, then leaned right as i saw the kitchen light
i swiftly swung the door open and found the culprit near the oven
it was skinny, hairless and awkward with both its knees bent backward veins ran along it's body like a drought its faceless head had a carnivorous mouth
man or creature, it was hard to tell it looked like it came from hell
i screamed, panicked, i threw the bat when it sprinted forward like a cat it's three pointed fingers grabbed my throat i realized why this hotel is remote. -The Guest-by Jon Patrick Belmontethat's me :pizza nice rhyme, but did you read the theme ? yum_strawberry
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 11:12 am
i dont understand the theme. do you have to use those lines within the poem??
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:38 pm
Starting my life with you, Was one thing i thought i would do, I totally trusted you, I honestly loved you too,
But betrayl took over, You ditched my dog Rover, And thought you could get away with it, You might have if a bit, Of that sneaky, old clues, Decided to hide away in the blues,
You kissed me, You would say you love me, you see, I sort of beleived it deep down in my heart, Except for just one, little part.
The next day, you broke my heart, You tore it to peices, you tore it apart, I never thought that saying good bye, Would make my heart die.
Walking right past me, Like nothing ever mattered between you and me, It killed me on the inside, But i tried to push it aside, I just coulnd't do it though, But i still knew what we shared needed to go,
Your lips were soft, But that doesn't matter anymoer, Because what we had is gone, FOREVER I know you had forgotten, Off to text, And on to the next, And you curled your lips in plead, You now weren't in the lead.
You wanted me to forget and you said you cared, I guard myself now, oh so scared, Cause you lied already, And any one who lies is steady, You told be to forget it, I sat there and thought to myself, How can i forget when what we had was real, Or so i thought it was.
I walked beside you in the halls, But my heart drops, it falls, I moan and groan, Sadness spreads over my body, I wish a rush of releif would though, Because what you said we had was only, so-so, And now that i see it know, My heart still beats when i see you, But its not because i still love you, It's because i can't forget what we once had, but will never have again.
By: ameerahmx.
~Hope you like it!!! I tried so hard!!~
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:39 pm
If snow was a kiss I'll make a blizzard. If a raindrop was a hug I'll send you the sea. If you needed love I'll give you me.
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:50 pm
You said you love me. You lied. What you took away. my pride. Now you start to hide. But deep inside you cry. You know that it's hard Really hard to deny.
What you felt with me. It was real. And that's still the way you feel. But you were hurt before. So you threw away the key After you closed your door.
You pretend to forget. But i bet You still remember it like it was yesterday. I can't keep you out of my mind. It's as if you have become a part of me.
Everytime you walk by me.. I fall into pieces. You stole my heart. But you can keep it.
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:54 pm
lol nice poem how long did it take you?
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:24 pm
xoxoAsian lol nice poem how long did it take you? Like 10-15 minutes and THNX!!!!
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:35 pm
Doorway To The Heart
For attractive lips, speak words of kindness. For lovely eyes, seek out the good in people. For a slim figure, share your food with the hungry. For beautiful hair, let a child run her fingers through it once a day. A girl isnt pretty for the clothes she wears, Or the figure she carries, Or her hair. The beuty of a woman must be seen from in her eyes. That is the doorway to her heart, The place where love resides
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:54 pm
Last Time.
Over and over And over again You once said you loved me Now you say only friends All for no reason All for no rhyme All for the past several months of my time You really convinced me So ill give you some credit It was a nice act you held up Till for no reason you said ******** it After everything ive told you After all that we shared After all the pain i went through Trying not to be scared And you would tell me to trust you Kepy saying you loved me I still remember the first time That you ever told me You made me feel so amazing You made me feel like there was hope You made me fall for you hard And now im ready to choke And my heart is broke And my mind is ******** im ready to move forward But something has left me stuck I have no words to tell you That can describe how i feel But im so worn out from crying About how i cant believe that its real You were my one chance You were my last lie I gave up on people And then you gave me a reason to try You let me fall for you And you say you fell for me too But i really loved you and I would never do this to you Please, Tell me i ******** up Tell me you cant deal with my s**t No, you tell me you still care And that theres no reason to quit You say you have changed your perspective Well, ******** you also changed mine I thought that you were worth all my effort and time And for once i felt special For once i felt loved For once i attempted to like Knowing there was something i was apart of You were the first for so many Of things no one else can compare You told me that when i came I changed you for the better It took you this ******** long To come up with wanting to be solo So dont ******** lie to me When you have so much to show What did i do wrong Where did i not step lightly Do you even feel anything anymore Any love, even slightly But this is the last time Im not falling for bullshit anymore Im not caring about people Theres nothing that theyre good for You kept feeding me false hopes And false dreams to aspire But as you melted away My hopes just got higher And i told you so many times That i was done with the pain I didnt want to be in this relationship If it was just a game You just dont understand You just dont seem bother You left me behind on a road That just kept getting farther And i hope that you read this Because i think you should know I never have done anything but love you And now youre letting that go You were my escape from my life You were my light in the dark You were the one who came when i was flickering And you restarted my spark I have never smiled more often in my life Than the time i was with you Now my smiles are faked You didnt notice that, did you Ive cried too long and too hard For you and this pain I wish i could feel this way again But it wont be the same This is the last time I wont look for anymore signs Im going to stay in my corner Of a solitude of mine And im going to mend my heart While i let go of my mind No longer will i love people Because you were my last time.
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:56 pm
Sowwyyyy that mine are kinda long redface
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:21 pm
Theme: “You want me to act like we've never kissed, you want to forget; pretend we've never met , and I've tried and I've tried, but I haven't yet... You walk by, and I fall to pieces.” My poem: "i wish i could find the strength to forget, but i can get it to go away, only if i meet you again someday, i wish i may, i wish i wish i might, i wish we could meet tonight, some wishes i wish come true, but none will be fun with you."
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