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PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:41 am


So, i have decided to organize a poetry contest in this thread and i'm hoping to get a big response! gaia_diamond
(if the vice captain could make an announcement i'd be really thankful!)

The theme of the poem will be this quote : “You want me to act like we've never kissed, you want to forget; pretend we've never met , and I've tried and I've tried, but I haven't yet... You walk by, and I fall to pieces.”

Please don't copy phrases if it's not necessary. use your creativity and your imagination!
the person who writes the best poem will receive 50k. yum_strawberry
PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:46 am


poems must be your own creations
and you can post 3 poems maximum.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:46 am


i heard a noise from down the stairs
of clanking pans and earthly wares
i quickly rose from my bed
when conclusions started filling my head

armed with a bat so silent, stiff
ready to face the midnight thief
i went down, then leaned right
as i saw the kitchen light

i swiftly swung the door open
and found the culprit near the oven

it was skinny, hairless and awkward
with both its knees bent backward
veins ran along it's body like a drought
its faceless head had a carnivorous mouth

man or creature, it was hard to tell
it looked like it came from hell

i screamed, panicked, i threw the bat
when it sprinted forward like a cat
it's three pointed fingers grabbed my throat
i realized why this hotel is remote.



-The Guest-
by Jon Patrick Belmonte
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:30 am


Natrius 07
i heard a noise from down the stairs
of clanking pans and earthly wares
i quickly rose from my bed
when conclusions started filling my head

armed with a bat so silent, stiff
ready to face the midnight thief
i went down, then leaned right
as i saw the kitchen light

i swiftly swung the door open
and found the culprit near the oven

it was skinny, hairless and awkward
with both its knees bent backward
veins ran along it's body like a drought
its faceless head had a carnivorous mouth

man or creature, it was hard to tell
it looked like it came from hell

i screamed, panicked, i threw the bat
when it sprinted forward like a cat
it's three pointed fingers grabbed my throat
i realized why this hotel is remote.



-The Guest-
by Jon Patrick Belmonte
that's me :pizza


nice rhyme, but did you read the theme ? yum_strawberry

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 11:12 am


i dont understand the theme. do you have to use those lines within the poem??
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:38 pm


Starting my life with you,
Was one thing i thought i would do,
I totally trusted you,
I honestly loved you too,

But betrayl took over,
You ditched my dog Rover,
And thought you could get away with it,
You might have if a bit,
Of that sneaky, old clues,
Decided to hide away in the blues,

You kissed me,
You would say you love me, you see,
I sort of beleived it deep down in my heart,
Except for just one, little part.

The next day, you broke my heart,
You tore it to peices, you tore it apart,
I never thought that saying good bye,
Would make my heart die.

Walking right past me,
Like nothing ever mattered between you and me,
It killed me on the inside,
But i tried to push it aside,
I just coulnd't do it though,
But i still knew what we shared needed to go,

Your lips were soft,
But that doesn't matter anymoer,
Because what we had is gone,
FOREVER
I know you had forgotten,
Off to text,
And on to the next,
And you curled your lips in plead,
You now weren't in the lead.

You wanted me to forget and you said you cared,
I guard myself now, oh so scared,
Cause you lied already,
And any one who lies is steady,
You told be to forget it,
I sat there and thought to myself,
How can i forget when what we had was real,
Or so i thought it was.

I walked beside you in the halls,
But my heart drops, it falls,
I moan and groan,
Sadness spreads over my body,
I wish a rush of releif would though,
Because what you said we had was only, so-so,
And now that i see it know,
My heart still beats when i see you,
But its not because i still love you,
It's because i can't forget what we once had, but will never have again.


By: ameerahmx.

~Hope you like it!!! I tried so hard!!~

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:39 pm


If snow was a kiss
I'll make a blizzard.
If a raindrop was a hug
I'll send you the sea.
If you needed love
I'll give you me.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:50 pm


You said you love me. You lied.
What you took away. my pride.
Now you start to hide.
But deep inside you cry.
You know that it's hard
Really hard to deny.

What you felt with me.
It was real.
And that's still
the way you feel.
But you were hurt before.
So you threw away the key
After you closed your door.

You pretend to forget.
But i bet
You still remember it like it was yesterday.
I can't keep you out of my mind.
It's as if you have become
a part of me.

Everytime you walk by me..
I fall into pieces.
You stole my heart.
But you can keep it.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:54 pm


ameerahmx

lol nice poem
how long did it take you?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:24 pm


xoxoAsian
ameerahmx

lol nice poem
how long did it take you?

Like 10-15 minutes and THNX!!!!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:35 pm


Doorway To The Heart

For attractive lips, speak words of kindness.
For lovely eyes, seek out the good in people.
For a slim figure, share your food with the hungry.
For beautiful hair, let a child run her fingers through it once a day.
A girl isnt pretty for the clothes she wears,
Or the figure she carries,
Or her hair.
The beuty of a woman must be seen from in her eyes.
That is the doorway to her heart,
The place where love resides
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:54 pm


Last Time.

Over and over
And over again
You once said you loved me
Now you say only friends
All for no reason
All for no rhyme
All for the past several months of my time
You really convinced me
So ill give you some credit
It was a nice act you held up
Till for no reason you said ******** it
After everything ive told you
After all that we shared
After all the pain i went through
Trying not to be scared
And you would tell me to trust you
Kepy saying you loved me
I still remember the first time
That you ever told me
You made me feel so amazing
You made me feel like there was hope
You made me fall for you hard
And now im ready to choke
And my heart is broke
And my mind is ******** im ready to move forward
But something has left me stuck
I have no words to tell you
That can describe how i feel
But im so worn out from crying
About how i cant believe that its real
You were my one chance
You were my last lie
I gave up on people
And then you gave me a reason to try
You let me fall for you
And you say you fell for me too
But i really loved you and
I would never do this to you
Please, Tell me i ******** up
Tell me you cant deal with my s**t
No, you tell me you still care
And that theres no reason to quit
You say you have changed your perspective
Well, ******** you also changed mine
I thought that you were worth all my effort and time
And for once i felt special
For once i felt loved
For once i attempted to like
Knowing there was something i was apart of
You were the first for so many
Of things no one else can compare
You told me that when i came
I changed you for the better
It took you this ******** long
To come up with wanting to be solo
So dont ******** lie to me
When you have so much to show
What did i do wrong
Where did i not step lightly
Do you even feel anything anymore
Any love, even slightly
But this is the last time
Im not falling for bullshit anymore
Im not caring about people
Theres nothing that theyre good for
You kept feeding me false hopes
And false dreams to aspire
But as you melted away
My hopes just got higher
And i told you so many times
That i was done with the pain
I didnt want to be in this relationship
If it was just a game
You just dont understand
You just dont seem bother
You left me behind on a road
That just kept getting farther
And i hope that you read this
Because i think you should know
I never have done anything but love you
And now youre letting that go
You were my escape from my life
You were my light in the dark
You were the one who came when i was flickering
And you restarted my spark
I have never smiled more often in my life
Than the time i was with you
Now my smiles are faked
You didnt notice that, did you
Ive cried too long and too hard
For you and this pain
I wish i could feel this way again
But it wont be the same
This is the last time
I wont look for anymore signs
Im going to stay in my corner
Of a solitude of mine
And im going to mend my heart
While i let go of my mind
No longer will i love people
Because you were my last time.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 5:56 pm


Sowwyyyy that mine are kinda long redface
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:21 pm


Theme:
“You want me to act like we've never kissed, you want to forget; pretend we've never met , and I've tried and I've tried, but I haven't yet... You walk by, and I fall to pieces.”
My poem:
"i wish i could find the strength to forget, but i can get it to go away, only if i meet you again someday, i wish i may, i wish i wish i might, i wish we could meet tonight, some wishes i wish come true, but none will be fun with you."

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