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RawringKiwi

Space Gekko

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:56 am


Name: Maihue Tivona
Maihue: A genus of cactus. Tivona: Lover of nature, Hebrew origin.

Blood colour: green (#004523)

Gender: Female

Symbol: User Image

Personality: Maihue is a rather calm and quiet troll, but she can get out of hand when... Certain things are mentioned. Ya know, like buckets or feelings. Being able to relax at home is probably one of her ideas of true relaxation. She likes being able to have peace and quiet. Her idea of relaxing at home is being able to take care of her plants or cuddle with her lusus. Her plants are all over the place, whether they be hidden in sight like.. all over her hive or being hidden away in certain compartments in her hive. When she starts to take care of them, she makes sure no one is around to see it happening. She doesn't mind if her lusus sees her since, well, who is he going to tell, the floor? Her lusus is one of her closest companions and will often seek comfort in him.
When Maihue is in contact with other trolls, she is rather awkward and will always be seen blushing ever so slightly. The first few times she interacts, she will be shy but will willing talk. After awhile she opens up a little more and talks normally, and speaks more clearly. She will always have her arms crossed, though. Maybe if you get close enough to her she'll stop that...
Her love for nature isn't evident to anyone but to herself. She makes sure to keep it hidden, even though shes pretty paranoid about others guessing something about her compassion. She makes sure to keep as close to nature as possible, and that is why she lives on the outskirts of the lake so she can interact with a little more nature than she could in the city. She tells other she likes it out there because of how quiet it is. She isn't really lying when she says that so.. She doesn't mind.
One of the things Maihue is fascinated with is her violin. She finds it so fascinating, and she loves how small it is. She can bring it with her anywhere! She can be found playing it at night, when everything is silent. She loves being able to break the silence, and daydreams about other trolls wondering what "That beautiful sound is."
When Maihue gets out of her awkward stage after meeting a troll, she is rather happy and friendly. She'll smile (still blushing) and bring up questions about that trolls life. She is a rather curious troll and may get a little personal. When she does, she apologizes repeatedly. Why should she upset someone she barely knows? They could be friend material! She doesn't want to ruin that chance!
Her love of nature makes her uneasy. Loving something for her is complicated, and she feels it doesn't fit well with the society she lives in. She doesn't seem to understand that feeling this... feeling for nature is fine and no one really cares but herself. Her past has led her to believe that others will look at her in disgust and question why she loves something so stupid. When she was younger, an older angry troll killed a flower she was attempting to save and called it stupid and there was no reason to want to save it since it should just be rotting into the ground. Her insecurity tends to make her paranoid, and she doesn't want to feel judged for something she loves. She also doesn't want any weird looks.


Strengths: amiable - Even if she is randomly approached and becomes embarrassed, she'll still try to smile (awkwardly) and attempt conversing. Her manners are up to troll standard and she completely respects high-bloods. She'll try to present herself properly in front of them.
loyal - Since it is hard for her to get close to others, she is very loyal to those she is close to. She doesn't want to lose them or their trust, as she knows that trust is hard to gain/gain back.
responsive - Maihue is able to respond with a quick answer. She determines the possibilities and says what she thinks will work. She is a very quick thinker, and is good at calculations. She also is able to give good advice, but it is only to those she is comfortable with. When strangers are looking for advice, she stays quiet because she is afraid they will laugh at her.
independent - She is able to rely on herself for (almost) anything, and will only rely on others if she can't get out of the situation. She is usually get whatever she wants by herself, and if someone else helps her, she tries to give them something in return. Or pay them back in any way. She is extremely troubled if she has to request help from anyone.
Flaws: pertinacious - Once she has chosen her position on something, she will stick with it no matter what, even if she's wrong. She is the same with a goal and will not stop until it is completed, even if it is a bad decision. If you want to change her mind, you better be good at persuading. This often gets her in troubling situations.
embarrassed easily - The slightest thing will embarrass her and make her forget what she was doing. Randomly say hi to her? BAM, her face goes green and she has no idea what is going on. Don't even start with buckets. Her embarrassment causes her to become shy and meek. She becomes rather clumsy, even though she is usually stable and calm.
guarded - She isn't easy to open up. She keeps almost everything bottled up, and doesn't let others know what's going on. She is also very cautious around others, and doesn't fully trust anyone. When around others, she will keep her arms crossed, and will look very uncomfortable.
soft-hearted - Maihue has a secret. She absolutely loves nature. Wildlife, plants, you name it and she'll express her fondness for it. Secretly and secludedly. She is horribly terrified of revealing this secret, and tries to hide her love for nature as best as she can. She tries to be gentle with everything around her, often ending up with her being hurt. If confronted by a beast of some sort, she will not kill it, she just can't bring herself to. Step on a plant? WHAT IS THE WORLD COMING TO.

Weapon: Morning Star Flail the ball is a bit bigger than this one. She doesn't like to use it very often, but when she does she goes all out and will attempt to obliterate something. (Usually doesn't obliterate.)

Appearance: Maihue has a black shirt that goes beyond her belt loops on her pants. The sleeves stop at her elbows and the opening for the neck is square. Her symbol is in the middle of her shirt. She wears a grey/blue pair of jeans, and owns quite a few pairs of jeans ranging from black to just grey. Her shoes are slip-ons because seriously, she doesn't want to deal with tying them. They are the same color green as her blood. The bottom of her shoes are black. The long part of her hair goes down to the middle of her back. Then, as you go inwards, her hair gets shorter. Her bangs are... different. (Maihue: HEEYY) She has the long part of her bangs go a little past her shoulders and gets bigger as you go down. The bangs on her forehead have four parts. The two outer parts are longer and the two inner parts are shorter. She likes to wear green mascara and depending on the event/situation, will wear green eyeliner. Her horns have a curve, and then a sharp point on the end. (Sort of like a scorpion's tail.) User Image

Home: Maihue lives in a hive by the lakeside. She likes to be able to look out and see all the nature outside her hive. Her hive isn't anything special, just a normal as can be hive. Except, ya know. with nature taking over the outside, crawling up the sides and sometimes through the windows. She usually is able to keep them out though... Sometimes. Her hive is three stories, one being underground where her lusus can sleep out of her way. Her room is rather comforting, and she as a ton of fluffy things around so that she can hug them. She likes hugging. A couple of her rooms look empty, but they are definitely not. They are far from empty. There is a hidden button that Maihue can push to show all her plants. She locks these rooms before daylight hits, so that they can receive sunlight while she sleeps. They are tented windows, so the light isn't strong enough to hurt her precious plants.

Lusus: Her lusus is a giant porcupine. He is at least 2x bigger than Maihue. He is quite lazy during the day, and will lay around sleeping and will rarely do anything. During the night he likes to explore and sometimes climb to the top of the hive.. Maihue isn't quite sure why.. When Maihue sees her lusus about to fall asleep, she likes to try and "cuddle" with him by laying under him. He is a rather calm lusus, only getting vicious when aggravated. His quills are quite large, and may kill a troll if they hit in the right place.

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+ likes the violin
PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 7:25 pm


Reserved, just in case.

RawringKiwi

Space Gekko


melona-pan
Crew

Cute Cultist

PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 5:49 am


okays lets see o uo ;

I guess my most obvious question is, why hide her love of nature? I don't think anytroll would be persecuted for that, so I'm having issues drawing ties to why she would. :3 Is she just afraid of letting people in?

Also you say she's calm unless 'certain things' are mentioned. And that would be...? Things that embarrass her?

So once she warms up to a troll, she becomes inquisitive to the point of fearing offending someone. How does she react to the same thing? Will she open up easily once she has a friend, or?
PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:34 pm


Oh alright <3
i added why she doesn't feel safe to let her feelings for nature out under her personality, along with her "certain things". It is things that embarrass her. < u >;;
Yes, she feels her curiosity can get her in trouble with another troll. I don't quite understand what you mean by the "same thing". Do you mean if someone comes back in answering her, and goes too far like she would? At least, thats what i get from what you're saying.
She would feel flustered if someone asked a little personal question, and may not answer it depending on what it is. If it is something like why her hive is overrun by plants, she will be embarrassed and will try to make an excuse for it. If they go any father she will attempt to change the subject or start to yell and her face will become even greener. If it is something she doesn't expect, she will be surprised and slightly clueless on how to answer.
Um, i hope that helps D: if i understood your question wrong, i'm sorry ; u;

Once she has a friend, she will slowly start to open up to them. It may be a small opening, depending on how they react around her. Like if they're friendly, and they don't ask things like "why do you act like that?" she'll open up even more. Actually, the more friendly and open they are, the more she'll tend to open up. You would be able to see signs, like her only blushing because she's smiling or laughing so much, her arms aren't crossed, and she doesn't look like she is in the most uncomfortable position ever.
All in all, it depends on what level of friendship they are at. If it's a occasional hanging out thing, she'll smile more, and will open her arms a little more often. If it is coming to her for problems, or vice versa, she will open up a ton. If it's telling each other secrets.. I think that would be the most she'd ever open up. ...So... No, she doesn't open up easily. She sort of analyzes a troll before she feels she can truly start to open. But it will happen if they do hang out a lot.

RawringKiwi

Space Gekko


matisha

Business Vampire

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 7:26 am


CRIT TIME!!

Ok just a few bits i thought i would point out for you!!!

Personality
I can see she is a shy, socially awkward but kind and caring troll, love that she gets embarrassed by things and the bits about her asking something personal because she isn't use to talking to other trolls (and knowing the boundaries) work really well. There will be some fun conversations with her!

But still, why doesnt she want other trolls to see her caring for her plants? I know you said that you have filled out this section more but I am still left questioning why? Did something bad happen to her plants in a previous time? Do things she care about get taken away? I still think this section needs more info sine its such a big part of her life. I can understand her love for nature, that doesnt need more explanation because some people (or trolls) just love things for no reason, it is just the whole secret part of it. Is she scared someone will come destroy it? Has she seen it happen before?

Strengths

responsive - Not that i dont think this is a good strength it just clashes slightly with her shy personality. Maybe change this so she only opens up with good advice to very close friends? Especially since she is so guarded, what if someone makes fun of her advice? Being so shy I can't imagine her giving out advice right away even to those that ask! Confident people who feel they know what they are going on about usually give advice right away (even when not asked!)

Overall Summary

A lovely troll that would make a nice, unique change to the troll community with lots of fun embarrassing conversations to have. She still needs work but your not far off from getting approved! <3
PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 9:14 pm


I finally got around to fixing this orz

OK
so i added more to it, and what happened in the past. I also added a bit more to her responsive part, please tell me if there needs to be more!
Thank you Mati ; u; <33

RawringKiwi

Space Gekko


amicableAggressor
Vice Captain

Versatile Vermin

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:50 am


this should be the last crit needed, and is just to sort out a few teeensy things!


stringed device - trolls know what musical instruments are X)

some of the wording could be put a little better, this is optional of course
'She also is able to give good advice, but it is only to those she is comfortable with. When people are looking for advice, she stays quiet because she is afraid they will laugh at her. ' (when people could be changed to when strangers or when people she doesn't know)

i'm not sure how her horns would 'stab' her, as if they're not actually poking into her face, then they wouldn't be able to in any situation (horns are pretty solid, they don't move)

having a home by the lakeside is considered to be bordering the forest, so .... yes that's allowed? if she built her house where the treeline is closer to the shore, it would probably be as close as a lawnring distance away from her front door.

if you can look at this stuff sometime today, quote me here (don't bother to resubmit her) and i'll give you a stamp smile
PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:27 pm


amicableAggressor
this should be the last crit needed, and is just to sort out a few teeensy things!


stringed device - trolls know what musical instruments are X)

some of the wording could be put a little better, this is optional of course
'She also is able to give good advice, but it is only to those she is comfortable with. When people are looking for advice, she stays quiet because she is afraid they will laugh at her. ' (when people could be changed to when strangers or when people she doesn't know)

i'm not sure how her horns would 'stab' her, as if they're not actually poking into her face, then they wouldn't be able to in any situation (horns are pretty solid, they don't move)

having a home by the lakeside is considered to be bordering the forest, so .... yes that's allowed? if she built her house where the treeline is closer to the shore, it would probably be as close as a lawnring distance away from her front door.

if you can look at this stuff sometime today, quote me here (don't bother to resubmit her) and i'll give you a stamp smile

ok, i put violin, changed the wording to strangers, and took away the stabbing~ thank youuu * u* <333

RawringKiwi

Space Gekko


amicableAggressor
Vice Captain

Versatile Vermin

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 8:13 pm


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