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Name: Layton Quince

Nickname: (Acquired through RP)

Age: 14

Birthday: December 11th

Sign: Sagittarius

Gemstone: Tourmaline

Blood Type: A -

Fav. Food: The pudding cups with the two colored pudding!

Hated Food: I w-will eat anything! E-except maybe meat, because I am a vegetarian. I mean if you wanted me to, I wouldn't mind I guess b-but it's s-... QQQQQQ

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:
Swimming: Originally, Layton was forced to try swimming (as in swim team) in middle school by her mother who claimed she had to do a sport to be healthy. Much to her surprise, Layton has actually made friends on her swim team and enjoys it quite a bit. She's not very good at it, nor is she the team leader, but she keeps coming back- so that much mean she likes it, right?

Plants: In back of their little two story house, Layton keeps her own personal garden. It just has some vegetables and tulips in it; simple things, really. She loves her little garden though, and babies it. She can even be seen talking to it sometimes. Keeping a garden is hard work though! Layton can constantly be seen running around town looking for new supplies and things for her little garden.

Photography: Rather, taking pictures of things at all times whenever possible. She doesn't even attempt to be professional in her work, she just loves taking pictures of anything and everything. Layton carries her camera as much as possible and whenever opportune. She takes it off for school and what not, but during her free time she tries to have it with her just as much as she has her cell phone. After all, moments are meant to be captured as well as remembered! Her camera is small, blue and digital. It only cost about $100, so it's no high-powered canon or anything.

Virtues:

Patient: Layton is the sort of person who finds watching paint dry entertaining. She can wait for ages for something, just due to pure desire to remain in the background. A lot of it comes from having to work with a very clingy mother, and a neurotic older brother. She doesn't mind slowing things down to work with people and objects in a very patient, caring manner.

Polite: Layton is just naturally a polite person. Obviously, she's not a perfect little angel- she gets mad and sad and insults others, but for the most part, she tries to be as nice as possible. It comes naturally as she's a soft-spoken person, but you won't often finding her badmouthing people or acting rudely or boisterously. This is one girl who always says her P's and Q's. She attempts to never curse (the very thought!), and always keeps to herself.

Sympathetic: It partially comes from having to deal with her neurotic older brother, but it also comes from how quiet she is. She's an observer, not a doer. As such, she will sypmathize with whatever problems you have. Scraped a knee? Oh you poor thing, let me get you a bandaid. Boyfriend dumped you? Tell me all about it. She's a very good listener, and is willing to help you with all of your problems!

Flaws:

Pushover: This is definitely Layton's achilles heel. She is the pushover of the century. If you ask her to do something, she will do it without question. Of course, if it's something she doesn't want to do, she will resist, but it will be a pretty pathetic resistance. She's very soft-spoken, and doesn't have much of an opinion to add to anything. She's a leaf on the wind, in every sense of the word. If she ever does take a stance on something, you can bet it's something she really cares about.

Shy: Layton is shy, but not antisocial. She really does want to make friends, and be a part of the gang, but she has a very hard time stepping out and actually doing any of the things she wants to, just because she's always second guessing herself. In this way, she's very insecure about herself, and is always trying to blend into the background because of it. Think of her as the shadow in the back of the classroom.

Overly Sensitive: Another problem Layton has is that she's extremely sensitive. She has no problem listening to your problem and helping you with your problems, but the moment she meets with her own bullies, she runs away crying. Even if you don't intend it to be mean, she thinks you're trying to be mean. A simple comment like "that shirt looks a little tight on you" will make her wear baggy clothing for the rest of the week.

JUST A HEADS UP: Having a "room of requirement" for a Knight wonder is not going to fly, unfortunately. Just like with senshi homeworlds, you should not be able to obtain an RP advantage from your Knight's post -- and with your current description someone could walk in there needing something that can wipe out Chaos instantly. Along with this a Wonder should be a finite place with a consistent description -- generally speaking, the same rules that apply to homeworlds also apply to a wonder, just on a smaller scale.

As an alternative, Peklo could be a hammerspace room that is much larger on the inside than should logically be possible based on how big it is from the outside. This way it can already be full of a variety of creature comforts instead of it needing to magically generate them on the whims of whoever goes in.


On magic:
Five minutes is way too long for channeled magic -- that would ICly be a whole battle! 20 or 30 seconds would be more appropriate for a camouflage spell.

You also need to be more specific about how many people she can hide. Are you saying herself AND someone else for Squire? Or just herself OR someone else? How many people can fit inside her cloak at the Knight stage?

Three's just fine!

Can people attack while under the cloak? Or does attacking break the spell? Would talking or making too much noise clue the enemy in on their location since it only camouflages them visually? If you can answer these things in your description you should be good to go. c: