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PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:56 pm


Name: Izu Break

Pic: User Image

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Birthday: Jul 15

Relationship: It's complicated

squad: 6

rank: Lt.

personality: Very loyal. Does what she is told to do, but only if Kage tells her to do it. Very protective of Kage.

history: She was rescued by Kage when she was a young girl and they had been best friends since.

Sealed Zanpaktou: katana

Zanpaktou`s name: Okotte Boshi-ya

Zanpaktou`s spirit: User Image

Kido

Hado: Gaki Reko, Shougekihou

Bakudo: Kyokko, Sajo Sabaku

Healing Kido: Iyashi no te

Shikai


Pic of Shikai Weapon: User Image

Shikai name: Okotte Boshi-ya

Shikai Release command: Come and play Okotte Boshi-ya

Shikai Attack one: Invisible Black; The weapons disappear then reappear behind the opponent leaving many slashes on the opponent.

Shikai Attack two: Disapearing Strike; The weapons disappear then reappear in the opponents body.

Shikai Attack three: Shadow Strike; Black blades of energy shoot out of the blades.

Bankai


Pic of Bankai Weapon: User Image

Bankai name: Okotte Boshi-ya Kage

Bankai Release command: Okotte Boshi-ya Kage Destroy all enemies

Bankai Attack one: Time Destroyer; The Bankai freezes time allowing the swordsman or swords woman to attack as much as they want.

Bankai Attack two: The End; The bankai swords take the from of a giant top hat, sitting a top a giant red eyeball, wich is covered by a giant black cape, and a necklace with a skull and a pocket watch attached to it. When the eye opens it is able to destroy anything made of spiritual energy.

Inner world: It looks like the inside of a child's toy box was was dumped everywhere and left floating over a lake of water where there is almost no light.

Other: She carries the swords of the ones she has defeated and never leaves Kage's side unless he tells her too. If her glasses leave her fave in a fight she is known to turn crazy and into an unstoppable force. She won't stop attacking until opponent is dead, then she returns to her normal happy self.

Theme song: Smile Avril Lavigne
PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 2:09 pm


Ok it seems good just one thing. For your shikai and bankai attacks we need a description on it. Like what exactly what do they do?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 2:10 pm


Oh ok I'll fix it.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:57 am


Alright jsut few more things you need to fix starting with the shikai attacks.


Shikai Attack one: Invisible Black; The weapons disappear then reappear behind the opponent leaving many slashes on the opponent.

Good attack but it makes it sound like an auto hit try adding somthing like if it hits it will leave many slashes.


Shikai Attack two: Disapearing Strike; The weapons disappear then reappear in the opponents body.

Once again another auto hit. This pretty much leaves no chance of dodging for your opponent. The way to edit this one is that you do a random number from 1-100 if its even it hits if its odd it misses. And also how long must you wait before you use it again.

Shikai Attack three: Shadow Strike; Black blades of energy shoot out of the blades.

Ok as for this one it just needs a limit like how many blades of energy can you shoot out at one time and how long must you wait before you can do it again.

Bankai Attack one: Time Destroyer; The Bankai freezes time allowing the swordsman or swords woman to attack as much as they want.

Ok same thing with this one just needs a limit. Like how long dose it last? How long do you have to wait before you can use it again?

Bankai Attack two: The End; The bankai swords take the from of a giant top hat, sitting a top a giant red eyeball, wich is covered by a giant black cape, and a necklace with a skull and a pocket watch attached to it. When the eye opens it is able to destroy anything made of spiritual energy.

Great sounding attack just needs a limit to it. How long do you have to wait to use it again?

((Also Lts cant have both bankai so you will need to cross one out until and if she gets captain.))

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 9:10 pm


actually bonkai is possible for lts and third seats but only for a short period and only once in a great while since their bodies arent able to handle the reshi of bonkai yet...so she could have bonkai but only for 10 minutes and all the attacks are weak. but after the ten minutes she is extremely exausted for at least 20 minutes.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:51 am


Baine Oritaga
actually bonkai is possible for lts and third seats but only for a short period and only once in a great while since their bodies arent able to handle the reshi of bonkai yet...so she could have bonkai but only for 10 minutes and all the attacks are weak. but after the ten minutes she is extremely exausted for at least 20 minutes.


Yes it is possible but only their first bankai attack not the second.

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