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Pure T0rture

Colorful Fairy

PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:49 pm


I’ve been feeling a bit upset lately because no one -online or otherwise- seems interested or even impressed by my writing. normally whenever i write something people's eyes bulge out in surprise and they say it’s amazing... but nowadays when i ask people to read my work they just glance at me and say "ehhhh..... no"

I’ve always been told I’m an amazing writer so this is extremely depressing for me. And i wonder often what I’m doing wrong... emo

So as my title states: I’d really appreciate it if people would read a few of my written items and give me a bit of constructive criticism. I’ll take whatever ya throw at me, minus people just blatantly insulting my work. But please; I’m in a sad state right now because of this so try not to be too mean.

All the things are on my Deviant Art but instead of making you fish through the DA profile topic; I’ll post links here.

NoT mY fAuLt

Death Diaries Prologue

Death Diaries: pt 1

Death Diaries: pt2

Bellum Adversus Tenebrae

{on a side note: the ones that are marked "Death Diaries" are rather old and my writing has changed. but i still would like the constructive criticism anyways}
 
PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:18 am


kats_demonic_resistance
minus people just blatantly insulting my work.

But That Is Criticism My Love ^^

I Was Reading The First One And It Started Out Great, Except You Lost Me At "Adult Demon"
I Skiped The "Death Diaries" Since They Sound To Depresing And Went Straight To "Bellum Adversus Tenebrae" That One Was Really Good I Actually Recomended It To One Of My Friends Who Needed A Bit Of Inspiration On Drawing
So You See I Say You Are A good Writer I Would Say You Have A chance Of Making It Big, But, If You Keep Writing About "Adult Demons" This Is One Reader Your Never Goin To Have ^^

Infamous Jaime Acid


Pure T0rture

Colorful Fairy

PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 9:28 am


Infamous Jaime Acid
kats_demonic_resistance
minus people just blatantly insulting my work.

But That Is Criticism My Love ^^

I Was Reading The First One And It Started Out Great, Except You Lost Me At "Adult Demon"
I Skiped The "Death Diaries" Since They Sound To Depresing And Went Straight To "Bellum Adversus Tenebrae" That One Was Really Good I Actually Recomended It To One Of My Friends Who Needed A Bit Of Inspiration On Drawing
So You See I Say You Are A good Writer I Would Say You Have A chance Of Making It Big, But, If You Keep Writing About "Adult Demons" This Is One Reader Your Never Goin To Have ^^

very true, that is criticism. however, its not the constructive kind that i want.

i have a habit of writong about demons. sweatdrop so perhaps my writing isn't for you... ah well. to each their own.
but anyways, thank you for that. it helps to know i haven't gone into a slump of sorts. i hope that your friend gets insipired-by my work or not- 'cause i know how it feels to have nthing to draw about and it sucks.
i don't always write of demons; but a lot of my work is slightly depressing or dark; and it typically has something to do with demons, vampires, grim reapers, and other creatures of the underworld.
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