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 Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:38 pm
i'm sad and depressed so i made this poem
I'M GOING INSAIN
i'm always in pain
why should even be here?
is there more to life than fear?
I'm going insain
i have been raped pysicaly and emotionaly
why must the world be condemed to hipocrisy
i'm going insain
i'm always in pain
there's noting but sadness in my brain
WE ARE ALL GOING INSAIN
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:34 pm
Im sorry mate, but please spell check.
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:19 pm
iLegoBlock Im sorry mate, but please spell check.
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:39 pm
ok whatever............................... sad
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Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:38 pm
*insane *nothing
Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:57 pm
finfageek *insane *nothing Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem. you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:59 pm
shadow_the_hedghog9756 finfageek *insane *nothing Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem. you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............ I'm sorry that happened to you :/
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:28 pm
finfageek shadow_the_hedghog9756 finfageek *insane *nothing Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem. you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............ I'm sorry that happened to you :/ it was awful
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:35 pm
Interesting poem, now that I know its origin.
Nonetheless, this is the Internet. Proper spelling [and grammar] are nearly essential in order for anyone to take you seriously. I'm not trying to pester you. Rather, I'm telling you why people are so irked by misspellings and syntactic errors.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:42 pm
shadow_the_hedghog9756 finfageek shadow_the_hedghog9756 finfageek *insane *nothing Sorry...I'm an English major xD But yeah. Interesting poem. you know that i made the poem out of truth? i actully was rapped and i am going insain............ I'm sorry that happened to you :/ it was awful Well I sure hope things are getting better for you.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:44 pm
lgtenos Interesting poem, now that I know its origin. Nonetheless, this is the Internet. Proper spelling [and grammar] are nearly essential in order for anyone to take you seriously. I'm not trying to pester you. Rather, I'm telling you why people are so irked by misspellings and syntactic errors. Agreed.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:48 pm
lgtenos Interesting poem, now that I know its origin. Nonetheless, this is the Internet. Proper spelling [and grammar] are nearly essential in order for anyone to take you seriously. I'm not trying to pester you. Rather, I'm telling you why people are so irked by misspellings and syntactic errors. if you were raped i'm sure you would make a few errors too stare
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:19 pm
I think poetry wasn't the best way to go.
If you are still really upset about this, then
you need to go talk to someone. Someone
that you can trust with your words and take
you seriously.
The internet. It's not the place to search
for sensitivity or compassion.
NOT that anyone here was being rude, but
you are obviously upset about them correcting
your grammar and spelling. So instead of displaying
your misfortunes in a place where spelling and
that sort of thing are required, you should probably
just go talk to a doctor.
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Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 11:00 pm
..s.k.i.t.t.l.e.s.. I think poetry wasn't the best way to go.
If you are still really upset about this, then
you need to go talk to someone. Someone
that you can trust with your words and take
you seriously.
The internet. It's not the place to search
for sensitivity or compassion.
NOT that anyone here was being rude, but
you are obviously upset about them correcting
your grammar and spelling. So instead of displaying
your misfortunes in a place where spelling and
that sort of thing are required, you should probably
just go talk to a doctor. Some winning advice.
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