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 Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 2:36 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:54 pm
 Unapproved.
It would be preferred if you used the skeleton we have provided, which is right here. It would also be nice if this was more detailed.
Please fix those errors and I'll come around again (:
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:20 am
The Resident Princess Unapproved.
It would be preferred if you used the skeleton we have provided, which is right here. It would also be nice if this was more detailed.
Please fix those errors and I'll come around again (: its been almost a month can i posy
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 12:32 pm
your profile still isn't in any of the formats provided, and it still needs to be a lot more detailed. until then, we can't approve this. sorry!
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:09 pm
((Pssssst. -Whispers.- Try copying and pasting this! Then, all you have to do is fill it out. I know it looks intimidating, but it really isn't =3)) ((Sorry mods... sweatdrop )) [imgright]Direct Link to Image Here[/imgright]
[b][size=24]ғ[/size]eel free to call me. . . [/b][size=9]
[ Your character's full name and whatever you want them to be called by other characters. ]
[/size][b][size=24]υ[/size]nless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .[/b][size=9]
[ Your character's gender here. ]
[/size][b][size=24]ч[/size]ou think I'm [i]what[/i] age? No, I'm. . [/b][size=9]
[ Your character's age ]
[/size][b]The [size=24]υ[/size]niverse welcomed me on. . .[/b][size=9]
[ Your character's birthday! You can remove this one if you wish to. ]
[/size][b][size=24]α[/size] lot of people say I'm. . . [/b][size=9]
[ Your character's personality. 3 sentence minimum. Include how they act when they're happy, sad, and angry. ]
[/size][b][size=24]c[/size]an you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . . [/b][size=9]
[ Your character's history. Saying "They don't know" or "Just ask her if you want to know" will NOT be accepted. Even if they don't know, you do. 4 sentence minimum. You must include why/how they're at Fuyu Academy now.]
[/size][b][size=24]α[/size]bilities? Yeah, I have . . .[/b][size=9]
[ Your character's "power". If they're human you can say so or remove this one. ]
[/size][b]I a[size=24]ם[/size]ore. . . [/b][size=9]
○ [likes, feel free to put more!]
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[/size][b][size=24]є[/size]very time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . . [/b][size=9]
○ [Dislikes, again, feel free to add more!]
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[/size][b][size=24]м[/size]y House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .[/b][size=9]
[b]House:[/b] [House, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
[b]Dorm:[/b] [Dorm Room, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
[b]Homeroom:[/b] [Let's say your character is given the chose of: Math / Science, Art / Music, World Studies / Magical Creatures, or Magics and Weaponry. Write whichever one they would chose. This will be used in a new feature to be added to Fuyu. ]
[/size][b][size=24]ч[/size]ou see, I'm controlled by . . .[/b]
[size=9][ Your username. ][/size]
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:51 pm
(Cant copy paste so I quoted you thanks.)
still cant do pics
ғeel free to call me. . .
Carissa O'donner
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
Female
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
17
α lot of people say I'm. . .
Always positive I wont let anything get me down. I will try to help as much as I can. I am vary secretive after many years of hiding the only time I'm real is in thunder storms.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
My home town was filled with people who had no soul. I went from grade 3 to grade 9 without one week of peace. I was to tall, to stupid, to clumsy, & to happy. The girls taunted me. The boys took advantage of me. After school I came home to a lazy aunt who treated me like a slave. My uncle would come home drunk and beat me sometimes worse. I finaly ran away at age 15 halfway through 9th grade. Thats how I got here in this great academy after a year or so of no home I found this school & they took me in. Since I moved here I have met so many wonderful people and was even bitten and turned into a werewolf by my boy friend(I guess you can call him that)!
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
I can control plants, I'm also a werewolf.
I aםore. . .
○little kids
○music
○flowers
○being alone
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○Mean people
○Fighting
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мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Catian
Dorm: Pumpkin
Homeroom: [Let's say your character is given the chose of: Math / Science, Art / Music, World Studies / Magical Creatures, or Magics and Weaponry. Write whichever one they would chose. This will be used in a new feature to be added to Fuyu. ]
чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
[ younga50 ]
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:02 pm
thank you very much!
your character is approved and has been sorted into catian! please be patient while we construct a dorm for her. in the mean time, feel free to start posting!
also, thank you, wolfbain, for clarifying for younga. :3
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:41 pm
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- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
cяєωKatrina now has a dorm!
Catian House, Pumpkin Dorm
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 5:59 pm
 ғeel free to call me. . .
Kyle Freewind
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
19
α lot of people say I'm. . .
I have no reason for what i act like other than growing up on my own. I am rather stern and have no mercy for anyone else. . rarely ever smile or laugh so good luck seeing me happy. I strongly believe the wife in a family should bend at her husband will, so I am dominant.
care to hear my story?
I lived in the basement of the O'Donner's house from when I was young and growing. I've actually always been a vampire, so I guess you can call me a pure blood. On Carissa's 13th birthday her dad promised my mom that we were to be wed in order to save the girl from a different fate to come. I watched her grow up that year and I would talk to her on the sidewalk. It was almost as if she hated me already. One night when she was fourteen, and I was sixteen, I stopped by to say hello and give her flowers, but she was bleeding I couldn't help myself and I bit her. Instantly she raised her hand and slapped me as hard as she could. I was shocked and mad, quickly I grabbed her wrist and pinned her to the wall but I pushed my anger away and made her forget the incident, quickly leaving. The next day I stopped by and her dad said she had ran away. I began searching for her, this search lead me to a school that I knew I could use to make myself stronger. I was ready to catch her and punish her from running away from me. She was going to learn not to disobey her husband.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
vampire speed, strength, and can hypnotize those I drink blood from, but it mainly works on Carissa.
I aםore. . .
○ Carissa O'Donner
○ being in control
○ the dark
○ blood
єveryone of these drive me mad. . .
○ Other men
○ flowers
○ werewolves
○ cats
○ dogs
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Wyvern
Dorm: [Dorm Room, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
Homeroom: magic. (Doesn't really matter)
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . Notte Stella
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:23 pm
Before I go on and approve this character, just a few things need improvement.
Personality wise, please include more. What makes him upset? Why does he never smile? Why so unhappy? What causes his belief in dominance?
History wise, how did he become a vampire? Why did Carissa's father arrange the marriage?
Power wise, the hypnotism comes with restrictions. You have to ask users before you hypnotize their characters and it's preferable if you set limits to it. I.E : Lasts two minutes.
He needs a homeroom.
That's all.
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:56 pm
Nipples of Poseidon Before I go on and approve this character, just a few things need improvement.
Personality wise, please include more. What makes him upset? Why does he never smile? Why so unhappy? What causes his belief in dominance?
History wise, how did he become a vampire? Why did Carissa's father arrange the marriage?
Power wise, the hypnotism comes with restrictions. You have to ask users before you hypnotize their characters and it's preferable if you set limits to it. I.E : Lasts two minutes.
He needs a homeroom.
That's all. Ok I've fixed it to the extent I could without stating to many things twice as for how he became a vampire it is obviously stated he has always been, he is pure blood, born that way. I hope that has answered everything.
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 8:43 pm
Approved.
Sorted to Wyvern, please wait patiently for a dorm.
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Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:05 pm
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cяєω So sorry for the delay!
Kyle now has a dorm!
Wyvern House, Brass Dorm
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