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 Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 10:06 pm
 Information Name: Celes Cearfrost
Actual Age: 250
Appearance Age: 20
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Lesbian [She can't tolerate most guys long enough to form an actual relationship with them.]
Personality: Celes is a rather quiet girl, preferring to take action rather than talk about taking action. She is quickly annoyed by people who do a lot of talking during a fight rather than just laying it on the line and kicking some a**, and will not hesitate to cut them off and cut them down. Going along with her quiet nature she can be quite shy around people, preferring to avoid new people unless absolutely necessary, though this trait is not evident in combat.
Bio: The birth of Celes came about akin to that of a Fullbringer. When her mother was early on in her pregnancy she was attacked by a hollow. Bitten and severely wounded she barely managed to kill the hollow before it killed her and her yet unknown to her child. Left in critical condition she was found by her husband and rushed to the Fourth Division where it took a great deal of care and skill to heal her wounds. It was also at this time that the woman was informed that she was pregnant, though she was assured that the hollow attack had not in any way harmed the child. However unknown to all involved, the great deal of healing required upon the woman had imprinted her Reiryoku within the child, causing the child to develop Reiatsu even within the womb.
Due to these developments the unborn child after only a month, harbored a vast Spiritual Pressure that began to cause a great deal of strain on the mother, even though it was in essence her own Spiritual Pressure. At only 3 months pregnant the woman was hospitalized for the remainder of the pregnancy. While in the hospital a special seal was placed on the woman’s stomach to limit her Childs Reiryoku. The seal worked for the next two months, however the childs Reiryoku developed just as rapidly as the small child did and soon the amount of Reiryoku the child harbored was above what the limiter could contain without being placed directly on the child. The woman managed to handle these developments for another two months before her body began to gave out, putting both her and her child in danger. Though two months early labor was induced and within a few hours the child was brought into the world. Though Celes was saved, her mother was not so lucky. Her mothers last words were a comment about her child. She said that her daughter was a being of great power, a Celestial. She died shortly after with Celes in her arms. In honor of her mothers last words the child was named Celes.
Over the next few months Celes developed more rapidly than a normal child would, both physically and mentally. By the ages of two she had the motor skills and mental skills of a child at least age ten. It was at this time that her Zanpakuto materialized itself. However the nurses who were raising her did not allow her to play with the sword. After a few more years she grew more, coming to appear age 6. It was at this point the nurses finally let her have her sword. Shortly after being given the sword she went into the Shinigami academy. By age 10 she was graduated from the academy and disappeared from Soul Society.
In her time away from Soul Society she subdued her Zanpakuto Spirit, achieving Shikai, mastering it and obtaining Bankai. However upon doing so her Zanpakuto spirit revealed to her that there was much more to it and that she had only scratched the surface of her true power. With this information she continued her training, focusing on unlocking her latent powers. After over 200 years of absence from the world of Shinigami she finally returned after mastering her powers.
Theme Song:
Division: None
Rank: None [Lt Commander Equivalent Power] Appearance Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 125 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Usual Clothing: See picture, Purple instead of red.
Reiatsu Color: 1st - Blue 2nd - Purple [Her own is actually white with golden tinges]
Zanpakutō Position: Worn on her left hip
Other Appearance:
Accessories: A silver necklace with a cross on it.
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 10:10 pm
Zanpakutō Name: Haka Korekuta [Grave Collector]
Shikai Haka Korekuta understands Celes' dislike for useless speech in combat and as such has adapted with her non-verbal call-outs for her attacks.
Release Command: Sodatsu [Grow] She can also release the sword with a simple whistle when her sword is sealed.
Physical Changes: Celes’ eyes become more predator like. Around her wrists she gains cuffs of pure white fur, she also gains similar bands of fur around her ankles and waist. A pair of silver bands form around the center of her upper arms. Her sword disperses into a cloud of dust that reforms into hundreds of razor sharp Snowflake like bones.
Shikai Special Ability:
Its primary ability is the ability to manipulate Calcium. The actual release of the sword turns the sealed Zanpakuto into pure Calcium dust that takes the form of hundreds of small snowflake shaped bones that Celes has control over. The Calcium Snowflakes do not innately float in the air, but rather hang close to the ground in a circle around Celes. Only when she wills them to do they move any higher into the air than a foot off the ground. The Snowflake Bones alone are able to cut through 80/100 Hierro with ease, cause damage to 90/100 Hierro and can be stopped by 100/100 Hierro. When they are used defensively they are equal to a 100/100 Hierro.
The second and only other notable ability of the release is that it grants Celes a secondary Reiatsu. This pressure emanates from her body, more heavily focused around her hands and eyes. When releasing her spiritual pressure while in her released state her own, or rather her mothers, blue reiatsu emanates from all over her body while around her hands and eyes the purple reiatsu of her sword emanates. The Reiatsu that is released from the Zanpakuto gives the feeling of agony and despair and can cause wounds inflicted by the dust to feel far more painful than they really are. [Reiatsu +10, Hierro +10]
Attack command - Snapping the fingers on her right hand.
The primary method of attack for Haka Korekuta other than simply using the tiny Snowflake like bones. At Celes‘ command the snowflake shaped shards of bone dissimilate into dust and instantly reform into sharp crescent shaped blades of bone that form from the bottom up or top down, making a slashing like attack as they form. Celes can also force these blades forward at incredible speeds to attack. This technique increases the cutting power of the bones to being able to cut through 100/100 Hierro with relative ease, damaging 110/100 Hierro and being stopped by 120/100 Hierro.
Hone Tate [Bone Shield] - Attack Command - Snapping the fingers on her left hand.
The primary method of defense for Haka Korekuta other than simply using the tiny Snowflake like bones. At Celes‘ command the snowflake shaped shards of bone dissimilate into dust and instantly reform into a wall of bone. This wall can be formed anywhere around Celes almost instantly, even being used to form a shell around her. This technique increases the Hierro of the bone to 120/100 during its use.
Obtained?: Yes
Bankai
Extended Name: Yori Yume o Haka Shushu Akuryo [Demon of Twisted Dreams Grave Collector]
Physical Changes: The silver bands around her arms multiply to span over her entire upper arm, from elbow to shoulder, with 2 inches between each band, a silver chain that dangles slightly connects them together. She also gains three of these bands around her wrist, spaced one inch apart from one another with a chain connecting them on the back of her wrist that dangle down and rattles as she moves her hands, a band of elegant white fur wraps around the very top silver band on her wrist. Similar bands also form around her lower legs, starting at her ankles and spaced every inch and a half up to her knees, three thin silver bands run down the front of her leg connecting these bands together. The bottom band is covered by a band of elegant white fur. A much greater amount of the Snowflakes form, however they are crystal clear, being made from Carbon that is compressed into diamond shaped snowflakes.
Bankai Special Ability:
Its primary ability is the ability to manipulate Carbon. The snowflake blades from Shikai are all turned to carbon and greatly multiplied. The Carbon Snowflakes do not innately float in the air, but rather hang close to the ground in a circle around Celes. Only when she wills them to do they move any higher into the air than a foot off the ground. The Snowflake crystals alone are able to cut through 100/100 Hierro with ease, cause damage to 110/100 Hierro and can be stopped by 120/100 Hierro. When they are used defensively they are equal to a 120/100 Hierro.
The second and only other notable ability of the release is that it grants Celes a secondary Reiatsu. This pressure emanates from her body, more heavily focused around her hands and eyes. When releasing her spiritual pressure while in her released state her own, or rather her mothers, blue reiatsu emanates from all over her body while around her hands and eyes the purple reiatsu of her sword emanates. The Reiatsu that is released from the Zanpakuto gives the feeling of agony and despair and can cause wounds inflicted by the dust to feel far more painful than they really are.. [Reiatsu +10, Hierro +10, Resist Damage +10, Endurance +10]
Bankai Abilities:
Itami [Pain]
A passive ability of Yori Yume o Haka Shushu Akuryo. Through this ability any cuts inflicted by the dust, or any attack, inflicts phantom pain upon the victim in the area they are cut. The pain caused by the cuts is equal to someone with 150/100 Reiatsu bearing down the entirety of their Reiatsu on someone with 100/100 Reiatsu. Though it is only localized to the limb, or general area where the injury occurs.
Kessho-ha [Crystal Wave] - Attack command - Snapping the fingers on her right hand.
The primary method of attack for Yori Yume o Haka Shushu Akuryo other than simply using the tiny Snowflake like diamonds. At Celes‘ command the snowflake shaped shards of diamond dissimilate into dust and instantly reform into sharp crescent shaped blades of diamond that form from the bottom up or top down, making a slashing like attack as they form. Celes can also force these blades forward at incredible speeds to attack. This technique increases the cutting power of the crystals to being able to cut through 120/100 Hierro with relative ease, damaging 130/100 Hierro and being stopped by 140/100 Hierro.
Kessho Tate [Crystal Shield] - Attack Command - Snapping the fingers on her left hand.
The primary method of defense for Yori Yume o Haka Shushu Akuryo other than simply using the tiny Snowflake like crystals. At Celes‘ command the snowflake shaped shards of bone dissimilate into dust and instantly reform into a wall of diamond. This wall can be formed anywhere around Celes almost instantly, even being used to form a shell around her. This technique increases the Hierro of the crystal to 140/100 during its use.
Kessho Sutoraiki [Crystal Strike] - Attack Command - Celes whistles to initiate the attack
When Celes whistles, instantly causing the crystal shards around her to break down and form into a rapidly growing pillar that is aimed to hit its target. The pillar is about 2 ft in diameter and hits with enough force to cause both external and internal trauma to someone with 140/100 Hierro.
Obtained?: Yes
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 10:14 pm
Powers and Abilities Multiple Spiritual Presences
Celes actually has three separate Spiritual Presences, one is her own, one belongs to her mother which was imprinted upon her within the womb and the third is that of her Zanpakuto. Under normal circumstances she gives the feeling of two people inhabiting the exact same space, however when using her Shikai or Bankai she gives the feeling of three people inhabiting the exact same space.
Dual-Type Reiatsu
Celes' own Reiatsu is actually next to nothing and completely unnoticeable. The reiatsu that she emits is actually that of her mother that was imprinted upon her while in the womb. Due to the imprinting upon her, her own reiatsu was suppressed while her mothers grew. Her secondary Reiatsu is actually a reiatsu that belongs to her sword that when released she is able to emit through her hands and eyes. [Base Reiatsu +10]
Telekinesis
Celes has an advanced Telekinesis thanks to the Hollow DNA that is partially infused within her body and from her Zanpakuto. This Telekinesis allows her to more finely control her Released states, as well as use other random objects for attack. Through her telekinesis she is able to lift up to 200lbs, but beyond that it is highly draining for her. Outside of her sword release the Hollow DNA only really allows her to return her sword to her, no matter the distance, or to lift very small objects that are close to her.
Advanced Regeneration
Celes, having Hollow DNA partially infused in her from the attack upon her mother when she was still in the womb has a heightened recovery rate compared to other Shinigami. When she is using her Shikai she can heal minor wounds almost instantly, when doing so a white smoke rolls off the wound almost as if the area is burning due to the heightened cellular activity. When in Bankai she can heal minor to moderate wounds almost instantly and lessen the severity of more serious wounds. When in her Shikai or Bankai she can mend her own broken bones almost instantly and with ease through her ability to manipulate Calcium, however this drains her more than healing external wounds.
Enhanced Durability
Celes has a heightened Durability granted thanks to her multiple Spiritual Presences. Tapping into them she is able to sustain more damage than a normal Shinigami while also healing a great deal faster than most Shinigami.
Heightened Endurance
Due to the small amount of Hollow DNA that Celes gained when her mother was attacked she has a higher endurance when fighting than most other shinigami. She is literally capable of fighting for hours on end, even when sustaining injuries. Though the higher degree of injury can decrease her ability to hold out in a fight.
Unique Abilities Kinetic Fracture
An ability Celes possesses that stems from her Telekinetic nature. Celes is able to reinforce her techniques with Telekinetic energy thereby slightly increasing their strength. When reinforcing attacks it allows them to cut through 10 points higher of Hierro and when reinforcing defense it adds 10 points of Hierro. Miscellaneous Information Likes: Milk, Intelligent People, Good Conversation
Dislikes: Not having Milk, Idiotic People, Pointless Conversation, Opponents who Monologue
Fears: An enemy not shutting up and driving her crazy
Trivia: Her last name actually was inspired by a town near where I live called Cearfoss. Shinigami Point System Point System Zanjutsu
Zanpakutō - 110
Swordsmanship - 0
Kidō
Knowledge - 110
Skill - 120
Agility
Combat
Hakuda - 0
Resist Damage - 130
Physical Strength
Strength - 0
Endurance - 130
Reiryoku
Reiatsu - 130
Hierro - 130
Total Points ~ 1120
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:09 pm
First, with that picture, I'm not really sure how she can be shorter than Senka, but look taller than her. o.e She's also three pounds heavier, which is also kinda weird. I just want to start out by saying that I don't particularly like the whole two stages concept. It's like a four stage Zanpakuto, the Bankai 2 conceivably rivaling the CC power. Furthermore, the Carbon manipulation should be stuck in the Bankai stage, not the Shikai stage. If you ask me, I'd rather you just made it calcium in Shikai, carbon in Bankai, and then... figure something else out with the Hollow. ._. Then again, I forget the correlation between calcium and carbon. Shikai
Shasen: Stuff like "vast" and "massive" are best kept in Bankai where things are supposed to be big. Also, the omnidirectional-ness of the attack is a lot for a simple Shikai move. If it was like Senbonzakura and only used the calcium dust, then it might be okay, but it doesn't. Furthermore, the instant-death inhalation is, well... pretty much over powered.
Bon no Bun'ya: Again, massive for Shikai is no bueno.
Shikai 2
Shasen: Same as above.
Tanso no Komoku: Massive-ness
Bankai 1 & 2
Gensui no kogeki
Get rid of the one in Bankai 2... That's a lot. >.< And that's without me reading the sword stuff.
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 3:33 pm
Picture was mainly for the outfit lol
But I think I'ma make her older, taller and a little heavier.
The connection between them is the presence in the human body.
Carbon is 18% and Calcium is 1.5%
I guess I could go with Phosphorus, making it less offensive, as is how the theme of the Hollow is supposed to be...lol
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 3:44 pm
Attacks fixed. Devising something for her hollow now.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 6:36 pm
First off, addressing the 'Dante's isn't gonna like this one!' gonk
I'm a bit doubtful of the biography, but then again if Toshiro was able to induce near hypothermia even as a Rukongai child I suppose Celes' extraordinary reiatsu development isn't so far-fetched.
Shikai Special Ability:
A +20 in reiatsu from a passive Shikai bonus seems a bit too much. Perhaps tone it down to +10?
And just to verify, the Shikai can only control its own calcium/bone, right? The ability does not allow her to manipulate others' bone, correct?
Also, having two reiatsu outputs won't double her reiatsu. The only thing that will stack is the added side-effects... I hope.
Shikai:
Just wondering if Bone Field will cause noticeable fractures in the ground while traveling towards the target.
Stage 2 Shikai Special Ability:
Again, also wondering what the extent of Carbon manipulation is.
Also, +20 Hierro is a bit excessive in Shikai, +10 ought to be enough.
Stage 2 Shikai:
No problem with Burst... wait, she's a Vizard? o.o
Bankai Special Ability:
+40 reiatsu is a bit massive. If she had 190 reiatsu, assuming her raw reiatsu score is maxed out, then she could death glare everyone-- probably even Yuki-- into submission.
And... that's all I think.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 6:57 pm
+40 to anything is a lot, really. Take Zenos, Yuki, and Senka for example. In total, they get +40, +60, and +30 respectively by their full releases. Of course, Yuki only gets that extra +20 because of Shunko adding PS in Bankai.
Come to think of it, this one would have +110 by Bankai #2. The only conceivable way I'd be comfortable with a Zan that increases beyond the +30-40 range is if it was like Koudo's and did nothing but augment power.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:35 am
Anna, Well half of the stat increase are from her Hollow side, I can tone down the increases from her actual Shikai and Bankai if that would make you more comfortable, I mean Dan already wants them toned down...lol
Dan, I can tone it down to 10.
Shikai can only manipulate the calcium that it generates, not the calcium in another persons bones.
and No it does not double her Reiatsu, simply adds the side-effects.
Bone Field can cause fractures if that is preferable. lol
The manipulation of Carbon is the same, just what the sword generates, though Taigaa wanted Carbon in the Bankai so its not under Shikai stage 2 now.
I can tone the Hierro down to +10.
I only aimed for her to have 100 base Reiatsu and hierro. Which just puts her at 140 in Bankai. Would you like it better if I knocked 10 points off of it? :3
I'll take care of fixes when I get home tonight...if I don't go out partying! :3
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:28 am
I actually have a few problems with it... One, the reiatsu is sort of a copy of Tetsu's. I know that may just sound nit-picky of me, but I just want to make sure I'm not being ripped off. xp No offense.
Next, I don't like the fact that her Zanpakuto's Shikai can cause actual harm with its reiatsu... I have never liked that fact of any Reiatsu; it makes it too God-modded and being able to hurt lower leveled RPCs with ease -- seeming unfair to me.
So I'm guessing Celes must down the milk like crazy. xd
I also have a problem with Bon no Bun'ya [Bone Field], since that is another moved 'copied' from Tetsunosuke's repertoire of techniques; Call of the Dead. While I'm not exactly anger, I am upset that no one else has bothered to point this out thus far.
I am also a little worried about your Zanpakuto having it's own pool of Reiryoku to draw upon; while we have never stated how much a Shinigami, Vizard, Hollow, Arrancar, etc has or how much they can use, it's also just been a mutual understanding that after a few post, our RPCs start getting tired from the obvious use of techniques, and use of Reiryoku. I'm just afraid that you might RP Celes in a superior demeanor where she won't be fatigued as quickly as the other RPC she may be up against. I know Zanpakuto's have their own Reiatsu, but it's never been written, or even shown that Shinigami use Reiyoku from their Zanpakuto. Unless I'm misunderstanding something... and if so, I'm sorry.
Besides the alike skills of Tetsu's and Celes' Zanpakutos, and Hone o Korekuta having its own Reiryoku pool, I don't see too much wrong with it; mostly everything has been pointed out by everyone else.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 3:19 pm
[R]eflections Dan, I can tone it down to 10.
Shikai can only manipulate the calcium that it generates, not the calcium in another persons bones.
and No it does not double her Reiatsu, simply adds the side-effects.
Bone Field can cause fractures if that is preferable. lol
The manipulation of Carbon is the same, just what the sword generates, though Taigaa wanted Carbon in the Bankai so its not under Shikai stage 2 now.
I can tone the Hierro down to +10.
I only aimed for her to have 100 base Reiatsu and hierro. Which just puts her at 140 in Bankai. Would you like it better if I knocked 10 points off of it? :3
I'll take care of fixes when I get home tonight...if I don't go out partying! :3
Yes that would be preferable. 3nodding Ah... well as long as the limitation is clear. 3nodding biggrin Nah, 130-140 total Reiatsu is fine by me. 3nodding dramallama Anyway when the changes consider this profile Dante approved. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 1:59 pm
Kenny, xD I'm so sorry. In all honesty I've not really read completely through Tetsu's profile. Haha, probably bad for me to be saying....but its true.
I'll alter the attack so that it is not a copy.
Also, I may have stated that it can do that in Shikai, but the only time it actually does it is with her one Bankai attack. However, I was leaning along the lines of rather than the whole "Phantom Pain" think, instead the release of her Reiryoku would cause wounds to accelerate towards degrading. However I think I may just change the nature of the Reiryoku.
I'm considering making some changes to the profile, with all comments in mind and a few preferences of my own. x3
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 12:59 am
Okay my changes are made.
Blame Taigaa for my idea change.
lol
Going to alter some abilities and such, but the Zan is finalized and ready to be looked at again.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:09 am
I still don't like that the Zanpakutō itself grants 100 extra points to her stats, which is 100 points tacked onto the ones she should be getting in order to use these sword techniques. As I said before, I'm not comfortable with such a large increase on top of the Captain's exceed, on top of the Zanpakutō's abilities.
Even Hei, who has two Zanpakutō, only has a momentary increase of +30 (Hohō) all together. I just think it's too much; augmentation Zanpakutō of that caliber shouldn't have really any abilities at all. I think that if you want to keep this second stage stuff, the total increase should be reduced to 40. Actually, that's really all a Zanpakutō should grant anyway...
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:39 pm
You're comparing her to shinigami, never once to a Vizard, or at least not mentioning their Vizard abilities when using them as an example. I've stated at least once that she is a Vizard and it is also stated in 3 of her "Stage 2" attacks. She is just a very unique Vizard who can hide her status as one due to the way her powers manifest. I am in a second going to cut her Bankai bonus back to +40 and cut her "Mask" bonus back to +40 and place a limitation on it, which is a Lieutenant Equivalent Vizard level, B rank. Though a limitation different from regular Vizard, but still something to regulate her Vizard power somewhat. If that isn't better....well then I don't know.
Sorry if this sounds pissy or anything, I don't mean it to.
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