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Scyerline

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:07 pm


User ImageAMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Beatrix Monroe
Nicknames: Bea
Gender: female
Age: Around 16 or 17
Faction/Race Ghost / Lady in White (White Lady)

Personality:
Beatrix is a sassy ghost, freshly plucked by a reaper. Bea is very lively, despite being dead. Bea is a huge gossip gal, seeing that's her favorite pastime. If she hears any juicy news on the street or see two creatures macking, she can't wait to yap her jaw off to her friends (or anything that walks by for that matter!)

Bea can be quite childish. If things do go as expected, she'll stomp her feet, pout or just plain whine annoyingly about it. Possibly all three at the same time! She can be melodramatic depending on the situation and who it's happening to. If it's happening to someone she knows, she'll love to gossip about it, if it's happening to her, she'll throw a fit.

Bea has a keen sense of taste and enjoys baked goods. She loves cakes and breads especially! She enjoys showing her affection to friends through baking; however, everything has to be perfect! Everything has to be just right! If that cake does not have the right amount of sugar, or if a rose frosting is out of line, Bea becomes irate. She is likely to get angry at the smallest things, takes it very personally as if the cake messed up on purpose (even if it is an inanimate object). Bea has a tendency of never blaming herself, but everything else around her is at fault.

Though Bea likes to point the finger at someone (or something) she secretly yearns to be loved by others. Afraid of being alone, she clings to just about anyone, and stays by their side. To those she cares for, Bea is gentle and sweet. She will go out of her way to make sure her friends are happy or at least content. When Beatrix has grown attached to someone, she selfishly desires to keep them to herself. So, in result, Bea gets easily consumed by jealousy when she sees them mingling with others. At the times when she's distant from her friends, she tends to wallow in her self-pity of loneliness and rants to her pets. Though Bea does not remember anything in her previous life, she feels strong urges to find romance.

Likes: Gossiping, romance crap (novels, gestures, etc), socializing, baking, eating, being spoiled with affection/attention, pets.

Dislikes: Being left alone, sharing her friends with others she doesn't know, if plans go wrong, if she finds something imperfect/out of place.

How she gets along with others:
For the most part, she's fine/neutral with everyone at first. Except for reapers. She's not too fond of reapers and tends to be snippy with them.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
Beatrix enrolled into the Academy to make friends and please others. She is afraid of being alone, strives from her peers' approval, and seeks comfort in the presence of others. Not to mention the juicy gossip that could be around the Academy!

Natural Ability:
Blink: Though generally harmless, Bea she has the ability of invisibility like other ghosts. She also can seemingly 'fade and blink' across a wide space.

FEAR:
Drowning Horror: Bea musters her negative emotions and causes water to continuously flow out of every orifice of her head. If she is able to make contact with her target, she simulates an illusion of her target in the water. This can make Bea's victim feel a sensation of suffocation like they are drowning, paralyzing the target. Though it takes a lot of concentration, Bea’s FEAR ability can only last for a moment and be used once per battle.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Golden yellow eyes that turns white when she uses her FEAR ability.
Hair Colour/Style: Bea’s hair is a rich turquoise color, long, and thick that reaches the bottom of her buttocks. She has silky straight hair that appears wet but when she walks, her hair floats and gives an illusion of being underwater. (Does not have to be as dramatic as the ref below) Bea also has strips of seaweed weaved in her hair like tangles.
Skin Colour: Pearly white (pale) skin that has a very soft glow. Barnacle can be found on random spots of her body and face.
Clothing Style/Colours: Bea's not modest about her figure. She typically wears white clothing (dresses), with turquoise accents. The clothing can be as detailed or less detailed as the artist wants (artistic freedom). Most of her clothes are detailed with lacing and white pearls. She also loves wearing pearl or flower accessories (necklaces, earrings, bracelets. ankle bracelets, etc) She wears a skull pin on her outfit (can be a part of a choker, or pinned on her dress)
Extra: Bea, being a drowned victim, she always appears wet (Mostly hair and skin). She has a beauty mark on her right cheekbone, between her eyes, and on the left of her chin. Her lips are full and pouty. She also has a curvy body (average breasts, but larger hips)
References:

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Bea's Art Collection

Emblem Concept:
A white heart with a turquoise core. The heart is being constricted or wrapped around by water
User Image something like this?

Pets:
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. xxxxGurgles
xx Bea's beloved pet. Gurgles is a lazy oil spirit who loves to eat dew drops
x xand lounge about on Bea's furniture, even though he's not supposed to
x xbe on there. Leaving oil trails as he moves around her dorm room, Gurgles
x xalways makes a mess for Bea to clean up. He's not much of a cuddly
x xpet, but he loves being talked to everyday.







User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.xxxxYves (pronounced: iv or eve)
xx Bea's best friend. Quiet yet affectionate, Yves is always by Bea's side.
x xHe typically stays in Bea's dorm room, and spends his time watching
x xGurgles while she is away, keeping him from destroying Bea's stuff.
x x Yves always jumps in bed with Bea at night as she snuggles him to sleep.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 2:50 pm


I don't really have any crit, but have to say, I love her and her fear ability. * v * <33

Personally, I'd love to hear more about why she was drowned. Mostly because I'm just a curious/nosy person, heh heh~ 8D


OnionGrump


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Scyerline

Shameless Gawker

PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 3:23 pm


I wasn't sure if I was supposed to add that if she didn't remember her past life, haha but okay!

Beatrix's History/Previous Life

Beatrix had an older, less attractive sister, Roxanne, in her past life. They were only one year apart and were very close when they were young.
As years went on, and a young gentleman appeared in their lives. Both girls were yearning for the same handsome and charming young man. Bea and her sister began arguing over him. Their relationship with each other was ripped apart from competition.
Roxanne was too shy to confess how she felt, but Bea was bold enough to confront him. The young man expressed his mutual feelings to Bea. She was delighted and received her first kiss. Roxanne saw the two of them together and had grown madly jealous. One day, a letter was delivered to their home. Beatrix opened the letter.

Dear sweet Beatrix,
I have something very important to tell you.
Please meet me at the beach at sun down.

Your Beloved


Beatrix soon rushed to the beach. However, when she arrived, she only saw Roxanne waiting for her by the water. Roxanne lured Bea to the water and murdered her.

Of course, Bea doesn't remember any of this when she was picked up by a reaper
PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:24 pm


First name changed from Vivian to Beatrix

Scyerline

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Beejoux

Crew

Wrathful Demigod

PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:49 pm


So much win! I love the concept, and Bea gets +10 cool points for being a ghost.

She seems a sweet little thing, though If I were you I might expand a bit on her personality. Adding a bit more detail to her virtues and flaws. =3

I really like her fear, it's unique and creative, but how will it improve and change through out her schooling?

Character design = Bad a**.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:02 pm


ooooh! ok, i'll expand on those. thanks a lot bee <33

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Scyerline

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 10:56 pm


Added more to her personality and her FEAR ability
PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:07 pm


Expanded bits look awesome!

I am now endeared to the little gossip queen.

Well done Scybby!


Beejoux

Crew

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Huni Pi

Questionable Garbage

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:46 am


NGL, the moment I saw White Lady my first thought went to the one from Balete Drive because I used to live in that area XDDDD so looks really badass heart
PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:27 pm


shes so pretty! i love her design man <3333
/worst crit ever i know

chiickadee

Princess Hoarder


Mkvc

PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 3:09 pm


I don't have much to say in the way of criticism but I really like her personality! Her flaws add a lot of color to her and I think she'd be interesting to RP with. C: <3 The design you made for her is really pretty (yay gingers) and I like her Fear a lot ~ !

-shakes fist at Roxanne-
PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 4:13 pm


thank you so much <3

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demon_pachabel

Beloved Werewolf

PostPosted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 12:50 am





I HAVE TO LEAVE THIS HERE. JUST SAYING.



I think her personality is very solid, but not so solid that if you were to RP her you'd get 'stuck' (AKA you haven't made her so concrete you can't wiggle room her into being reasonably playable for you). The natural ability and the FEAR are also very workable within the shop setting. (: <3
PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:49 pm


thank you so much pach <33


added minipets

Scyerline

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Scyerline

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 1:25 pm


added likes and dislikes, a couple more refs, and changed her appearance info
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