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 Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 7:09 pm
If you need help with character development or want to give others ideas as to character development then please use this as a starting point. Hopefully this strengthens both writers as well as the guild community. Thank you.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:25 am
Elyarne I decided to show you the character you already saw, since she is the most developed of my characters, and you already saw some stuff about her. Hope you like her smile ideas and critisms are welcome. This is just summaries, it's not all fancified or anything ... (and yes, I know 'fancified' isn't a word, but I do love messing with the English language blaugh ) Name: Liahnia (lee-ar-nia[rushed, more of a 'nya' kind of sound]), (original name was Leah, but since the story is based in a whole fictional world I decided to take a leaf out of the old book and weird it up a bit) Nicknames: Liah or Li Age: about 11 (was 12 originally, but I decided to change this fact on a whim) Appearance: Liah is "The Girl in the Thornbush" (not sure if I'll actually do that to her in the storyline, but it's an idea). Same deal, crystal clear hair, moves around magically (slow, almost like under water), big sparkly green eyes (like emeralds held in front of the sun) that have a magical look to them. She's young, but her face show hints of beauty to come as she matures (she is unaware of this). Average height. She's very fit and acrobatic, for a child of her age (not so in the point in time "The Girl in the Thorn Bush' is based, where she is quite nearly starved, but that's a long way into her story). Personality: - likes to tease her (twin) brother Mac - quick to anger, quick to blame - naive (at this early point in time) - loyal to her friends, sticks by them - soft streak - sticks up for the weak or helpless, wants to help abandoned animals etc - fondness of climbing trees - used to magic in everyday life, but is nevertheless intrigued by it in it's many forms - curious - sometimes stubborn - brave Special abilities: Elemental powers over fire and air. I may change this later. She can create and guide plants and life whilst in cooperation with her brother. This is an unusual form of magic, and is not typically seen in normal human beings (in her world anyway, definetly not 'typically seen' in REAL normal human beings .... LOL!). Background and world: Her and her brother were found as babies in a believedly abandoned house, which had been mysteriously set aflame. They were raised in an orphanage by magical holy women called mages. At Applejewels Orphanage, there are two large very strange apple trees poking through a hole in the roof. The trunks intertwine, and the broad branches rapidly grow apples coloured silver and gold. They, of course, have the best taste imaginable. Her and her brother frequently climb these trees. The children sell the apples in the village, earning money so the church-run orphanage does not have to rely on tithes so much. Liah and her brother have magical origins, which I shall not currently explain, as I would like to string you along with something biggrin ... They are constantly harassed by an evil self-proclaimed goddess that is frequently using a currently limited influence to try and kill them. After being killed in previous lives, the children have in past been continuously reborn. Said goddess is currently trying to find a way to end their existences permanently. The children must set off on an adventure to learn about themselves and their history. Along the way this leads to a number of interesting encounters, and eventually an attempt to save their homeland Essensia from an invading army. So that's one of the two main characters, and some of the plot too. It is a fair bit to swallow ... It must be noted that most of this plot hasn't been put in writing, it's just my plan. In the pages I did write, they were only really just setting out on their adventure. Suggestions please? This is the character the story is originally based around, but since Mac is about an equal influence I might write some bits from his point of view as well. If I go all the way through with this, that is. It is a VERY big project ... So Liah is very developed. You have done a great job on her character. Since she is younger, your audience may want to know what is the average height of an 11 girl. Also, what differences are there in her appearance from when she is healthy to when she starving? Next as far as personality goes: she sounds so lovable! What effect does knowing how to use magic have on her? I just want to read the rest of story now! So anxious! Does she need her brother around to do some of her special abilities? You make take these questions and answer them, ponder them, ignore them whatever you would like. I really would like to see Mac's character. You are off to a wonderful start. Keep writing and we will be here every step of way if you need us! Seeing how the two interact together can help further ideas.
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 3:14 pm
ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever...
im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world.
Name: Edward White
Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18
Who He Is:
-the son of Snow White
-Prince
-he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian)
Personality:
-he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol)
-hes slow and shy
-fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth)
-cheerful and optimistic
-very observing and a quick learner
Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.)
-short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool)
-he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid
-hes tall and slender
-pale skin
-soft gray eyes
-moves gracefully
ya... that was hard... lol any ideas?
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 5:56 pm
hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? I am afraid that this may come across as overly harsh, but I think it's my responsibility as a fellow writer to point you here. Read it through carefully, take a very good look at your character and if he falls too close, change is good.
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:10 pm
hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? He does sound a little too perfect. Every character needs some flaws. The first thing we need to do is choose an age or make unknown throughout the story. Once that is done, his personality traits. You say he speaks with elegance, is he arrogant? That could be one of his flaws! Also olden day... maybe he's speaking old English, that needs to be defined. His appearance I see nothing wrong with except maybe what he's wearing... I'd like to know what he's wearing.
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 8:33 pm
Byakko Yasutsuki hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? I am afraid that this may come across as overly harsh, but I think it's my responsibility as a fellow writer to point you here. Read it through carefully, take a very good look at your character and if he falls too close, change is good. Ooh... Byakko a little harsh. Now when I was reviewing your character I was thinking that descriptively your character resembled more of an elf than a human. By elf I don't mean someone who bakes cookies and builds toys, I mean an elven warriors and cultures I have read and seen. Tell me what references are using for your character?
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Marcus Draconus Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:26 pm
Byakko Yasutsuki hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? I am afraid that this may come across as overly harsh, but I think it's my responsibility as a fellow writer to point you here. Read it through carefully, take a very good look at your character and if he falls too close, change is good. alrite thanks for the tips lol harsh is good =P i cant really get a read on my character to tell the truth... its my first time anyway
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:30 pm
geisha sayah hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? He does sound a little too perfect. Every character needs some flaws. The first thing we need to do is choose an age or make unknown throughout the story. Once that is done, his personality traits. You say he speaks with elegance, is he arrogant? That could be one of his flaws! Also olden day... maybe he's speaking old English, that needs to be defined. His appearance I see nothing wrong with except maybe what he's wearing... I'd like to know what he's wearing. ya need to put some clothes on him... as for flaws well i feel like it would give away the book if i told lol. but ya arrogant sounds good but hes also shy, slow, and clueless you know. he has to go and stay in the human world so his elegance and prince-likeness is a flaw? maybe? like not knowing what is edible, or what is right and wrong?
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:32 pm
Marcus Draconus Byakko Yasutsuki hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? I am afraid that this may come across as overly harsh, but I think it's my responsibility as a fellow writer to point you here. Read it through carefully, take a very good look at your character and if he falls too close, change is good. Ooh... Byakko a little harsh. Now when I was reviewing your character I was thinking that descriptively your character resembled more of an elf than a human. By elf I don't mean someone who bakes cookies and builds toys, I mean an elven warriors and cultures I have read and seen. Tell me what references are using for your character? references? well lets see... most of it i came up with on my own but he takes takes after chrono from 'chrono crusade'... that was who i was thinking of when i made him... was that bad?
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:42 pm
hippo-loves-me Marcus Draconus Byakko Yasutsuki hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? I am afraid that this may come across as overly harsh, but I think it's my responsibility as a fellow writer to point you here. Read it through carefully, take a very good look at your character and if he falls too close, change is good. Ooh... Byakko a little harsh. Now when I was reviewing your character I was thinking that descriptively your character resembled more of an elf than a human. By elf I don't mean someone who bakes cookies and builds toys, I mean an elven warriors and cultures I have read and seen. Tell me what references are using for your character? references? well lets see... most of it i came up with on my own but he takes takes after chrono from 'chrono crusade'... that was who i was thinking of when i made him... was that bad? No, not bad. But remember to use it as a "point" of reference and not to rely on the reference... not that you have or anything just something to keep in mind. As for the speech, are you thinking "olde" English? or Upper class sophistication? And about the hair, I'm guessing he has a layered thing going on here. I mean he has short hair but a long ponytail thing going on right?
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 11:08 pm
Marcus Draconus hippo-loves-me Marcus Draconus Byakko Yasutsuki hippo-loves-me ok ill give this a shot since ive been working on this forever... im writing a book on fairy tails having a world and some of the have to go to the human world in search of a guardian.... (if that makes sense) anyway heres one of my characters that visits the human world. Name: Edward White Age: ummm..... think ima go with 17 or 18 Who He Is: -the son of Snow White -Prince -he is a guardian apprentice to another of my characters (she is a guardian and goes on the mission to find the new guardian) Personality: -he speaks with elegance and more olden-day...ish. (i dont know how to explain lol) -hes slow and shy -fascinated by his new surroundings (the human world... aka earth) -cheerful and optimistic -very observing and a quick learner Appearance: (well since his last name is 'white' i thought i wouldnt give him too much color.) -short White hair, except he has long hair (down to the lower back) in the back which his teacher braids for him. (because she thought it would be cool) -he wears a treasured blue ribbon at the tip of his braid -hes tall and slender -pale skin -soft gray eyes -moves gracefully ya... that was hard... lol any ideas? I am afraid that this may come across as overly harsh, but I think it's my responsibility as a fellow writer to point you here. Read it through carefully, take a very good look at your character and if he falls too close, change is good. Ooh... Byakko a little harsh. Now when I was reviewing your character I was thinking that descriptively your character resembled more of an elf than a human. By elf I don't mean someone who bakes cookies and builds toys, I mean an elven warriors and cultures I have read and seen. Tell me what references are using for your character? references? well lets see... most of it i came up with on my own but he takes takes after chrono from 'chrono crusade'... that was who i was thinking of when i made him... was that bad? No, not bad. But remember to use it as a "point" of reference and not to rely on the reference... not that you have or anything just something to keep in mind. As for the speech, are you thinking "olde" English? or Upper class sophistication? And about the hair, I'm guessing he has a layered thing going on here. I mean he has short hair but a long ponytail thing going on right? layered....? YES thats the word im looking for! lol. and olde English thats right too.... ya im a little slow at things so sorry if the explanation didnt turn out right. its actually a really good story... its just, as you can see, explanations are not really my forte
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:55 pm
Name: Kelly du Willington
Age: 15 (but looks 10)
Race: New world vampire
Gender: Female
Likes/Dislikes:
Likes:
-Reading
-Writing
-Blood
-Fashion
-Dolls
-Etc.
Dislikes:
-Sunlight
-Seeing death around her that isn't caused by her
-Ugly things
-Criminals
Parents/Siblings/etc.:
Parents:
-Mom: Sarah (Deceased)
-Father: David (Not known if hes alive or dead)
-Brother: Toby (Deceased)
Master: Alexander du Lac
Biography: Kelly was born in New Orleans on a farm plantation by her two parents Sarah and David, and she had a little brother named Toby who unfortunately died as a toddler from falling down stairs and breaking his neck. Her mother and father worked, her mom worked on the farm with her help, and her father worked in a factory. During her days Kelly had made friends with Morgan and they hung out. When she became 10 her mom had died from a deadly illness while her father was on a trip, it is unknown if hes dead or alive to this day. A man by the name of Alexander, a vampire in his late 20's found her crying and brought her to a hotel, turning her into a vampire and then bringing her to his mansion by horse carriage. They have been with each other since.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:49 pm
MadHatter230 Name: Kelly du Willington Age: 15 (but looks 10) Race: New world vampire Gender: Female Likes/Dislikes: Likes: -Reading -Writing -Blood -Fashion -Dolls -Etc. Dislikes: -Sunlight -Seeing death around her that isn't caused by her -Ugly things -Criminals Parents/Siblings/etc.: Parents: -Mom: Sarah (Deceased) -Father: David (Not known if hes alive or dead) -Brother: Toby (Deceased) Master: Alexander du Lac Biography: Kelly was born in New Orleans on a farm plantation by her two parents Sarah and David, and she had a little brother named Toby who unfortunately died as a toddler from falling down stairs and breaking his neck. Her mother and father worked, her mom worked on the farm with her help, and her father worked in a factory. During her days Kelly had made friends with Morgan and they hung out. When she became 10 her mom had died from a deadly illness while her father was on a trip, it is unknown if hes dead or alive to this day. A man by the name of Alexander, a vampire in his late 20's found her crying and brought her to a hotel, turning her into a vampire and then bringing her to his mansion by horse carriage. They have been with each other since. You should definitely think about giving her a birth date. You know something like July 15, 1940. Also at what age did she turn into a vampire. Is it an older brother/younger sister between Kelly and Alexander, or Love-sick lolita girl and no nonsense cool guy? Lets see define what you believe to be a New World Vampire. If she looks ten but is actually 15 does that mean she's going to look the same age for the rest of her life?
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:53 pm
Marcus Draconus MadHatter230 Name: Kelly du Willington Age: 15 (but looks 10) Race: New world vampire Gender: Female Likes/Dislikes: Likes: -Reading -Writing -Blood -Fashion -Dolls -Etc. Dislikes: -Sunlight -Seeing death around her that isn't caused by her -Ugly things -Criminals Parents/Siblings/etc.: Parents: -Mom: Sarah (Deceased) -Father: David (Not known if hes alive or dead) -Brother: Toby (Deceased) Master: Alexander du Lac Biography: Kelly was born in New Orleans on a farm plantation by her two parents Sarah and David, and she had a little brother named Toby who unfortunately died as a toddler from falling down stairs and breaking his neck. Her mother and father worked, her mom worked on the farm with her help, and her father worked in a factory. During her days Kelly had made friends with Morgan and they hung out. When she became 10 her mom had died from a deadly illness while her father was on a trip, it is unknown if hes dead or alive to this day. A man by the name of Alexander, a vampire in his late 20's found her crying and brought her to a hotel, turning her into a vampire and then bringing her to his mansion by horse carriage. They have been with each other since. You should definitely think about giving her a birth date. You know something like July 15, 1940. Also at what age did she turn into a vampire. Is it an older brother/younger sister between Kelly and Alexander, or Love-sick lolita girl and no nonsense cool guy? Lets see define what you believe to be a New World Vampire. If she looks ten but is actually 15 does that mean she's going to look the same age for the rest of her life? I'll probably give her a birthdate, and she was turned into a vampire when she was 10, and its a father/daughter between Kelly and Alexander. And she will look the same age as when she was turned for the rest of her life.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:20 pm
MadHatter230 Marcus Draconus MadHatter230 Name: Kelly du Willington Age: 15 (but looks 10) Race: New world vampire Gender: Female Likes/Dislikes: Likes: -Reading -Writing -Blood -Fashion -Dolls -Etc. Dislikes: -Sunlight -Seeing death around her that isn't caused by her -Ugly things -Criminals Parents/Siblings/etc.: Parents: -Mom: Sarah (Deceased) -Father: David (Not known if hes alive or dead) -Brother: Toby (Deceased) Master: Alexander du Lac Biography: Kelly was born in New Orleans on a farm plantation by her two parents Sarah and David, and she had a little brother named Toby who unfortunately died as a toddler from falling down stairs and breaking his neck. Her mother and father worked, her mom worked on the farm with her help, and her father worked in a factory. During her days Kelly had made friends with Morgan and they hung out. When she became 10 her mom had died from a deadly illness while her father was on a trip, it is unknown if hes dead or alive to this day. A man by the name of Alexander, a vampire in his late 20's found her crying and brought her to a hotel, turning her into a vampire and then bringing her to his mansion by horse carriage. They have been with each other since. You should definitely think about giving her a birth date. You know something like July 15, 1940. Also at what age did she turn into a vampire. Is it an older brother/younger sister between Kelly and Alexander, or Love-sick lolita girl and no nonsense cool guy? Lets see define what you believe to be a New World Vampire. If she looks ten but is actually 15 does that mean she's going to look the same age for the rest of her life? I'll probably give her a birthdate, and she was turned into a vampire when she was 10, and its a father/daughter between Kelly and Alexander. And she will look the same age as when she was turned for the rest of her life. Okay so a father/daughter feel, 10 year old looking vampire. Now then, more things to think about. What outfit does she usually where?(example: She has a cloak she likes to wear because it reminds her of Alexander. Its blood red with Alexanders family crest, etc.) What's her personality? Favorite color? Ambition? What is she after in this new world? Is she only following orders or does she have that ability to take her own actions?
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