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 Posted: Mon May 16, 2011 7:00 pm
A young adult lives the life of a criminal life of breaking laws and messing with cops, a young female rebel wants to life the same life. With her real mother in the hospital and her foster parents getting on her nervous, she sets out to learn to ways of living on the streets from the man who saves her life from a gang fight. Now with a new friend, the boy learns about the girl's past with her real mother as the girl learns about the boy's dark past of being a ex-gangsta Character Profile Name: Jack Markison Aka Ghost Age: 17 Bio: Ran away from his parents ate the age of 10. Ran with a gang of ex-criminals and traitors of the state. Had to prove his worth by setting a police car on fire. They stole what they wanted and beat the ones who tried to derank them. They mostly caused distruction of public property along with police assaults and gang wars. At the Age of 16, Every member of the gang split when the CIA got involved in the cases. Now 17 years old, Jack lives the ultimate life in an abandon school. He learned to survive from the training he received in his ex-gang days. Picture: Character Picture
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 1:38 pm
Character Profile! Name:Ashley Michelle Bey Age:16 Bio: When Ash was born, she was the angel given to her parents. As she grew up, she started to see her mother and father fall apart. At night when she was supposed to be sleeping, she heard screaming. A few times, she got up to see what it was, and saw her father hitting her mother. Once, she got caught, and her father hit her too. Her father threatened her to never say anything, or he'd make her regret it big time. Soon, bruises began to appear on Ash in places that weren't able to be hidden, and the social services were called. Ash was taken away and put in a foster home. Soon after, she was adopted by two of the nicest people ever, or so she thought. Her mother was always nagging, which made her father always yell. It was seriously getting annoying. Ash had then heard that her mother was in the hospital under serious conditions. Her father was in jail, and Ash was getting sick of her foster parents. She began to stay out of the house for as long as she could, and wanted to become invovled with gangs. It would just be her thing. Picture: 
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 7:14 am
The sound of glass being busted out of windows could be heard from an old abandon school. It echoed in the middle of the night along with the dogs barking at the slightest sound. Heaving the wooden bat with all of his might, Jack whacked window after window to let the cool night air in the hallways of the school. Beside him, was his only companion. A 2 year puppy he found on the streets. A white husky named Angel. Angel sat on the other side of the hallway from her master watching him break windows.Jack smiled as the bits of glass made a beautiful display of glitter as it reflected in the full moon.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 1:32 pm
Ash was sitting on the edge of her bed, dressed in skinny jeans, a tshirt, and converse. She had been watching the clock, and wanted to see how long her parents were going to argue this time. It was killing Ash slowly, and tonight, she wasn't in a mood to hear it. She went over to her door and checked the lock. Then, she went to the window and opened it up. Ash then climbed out the window, and jumped down. It wasn't high at all from her bedroom. Ash began running off. She had her phone in her pocket, so she wouldn't be completely lost. She didn't know where she was to go at this time of night, but she had to get away to somewhere.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 5:57 pm
*Jack loved how the school had some many interesting things in it. The school was abandoned due to condemned environment but it wasn't long before homeless people moved it. It took 2 years to get police involved in performing a sweep of the area to kick all the homeless people out. But now it was completely empty. Jack sat down by Angel breathing heavily from his game he made. Angel climbed in his lap and sat there looking at the windows. "What do you think girl? Does that cool air feel better now that we have our own air conditioning?", he said petting the puppy. Angel responded with a bark and cuddled close to Jack.*
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 8:26 pm
Ash was walking, going on an endless walk. She was looking around, being a bit paranoid. She didn't feel safe, but she wasn't going back home. It wasn't a home anymore, it was just a house with people in it. Ash continued walking, as she passed a park. She looked around, but no sign of anyone. Along the way, she found an alley way, and began walking through it to get to the other side faster. It was really dark and silent to her, until she heard a voice. Hey there pretty lady. Where you heading off to? The voice said to her. She ignored and just kept walking. Hey! Didn't you hear him ask you a question? Another male's voice asked, closer now. Before she knew it, there was a really tight grip on her arm. She let out a really high pitched scream before her mouth was covered. She struggled, but there was no way of her getting out of the guy's grip. What are you doing? Another voice chimed in, let her go! She heard the voices begin to argue, but no faces could be seen. Soon enough, there was hitting and no way out.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 8:36 pm
((UM is that my character who said "let her go?" Its hard to figure out what to type when i dunno what's going on with unknown characters. If youw ant you can post again and finish that scene.))
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2011 3:35 pm
((I was actually following the plot you put had in the beginning. It said that your character saves mine from a fight. I had it so the gang members are arguing over it))
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2011 4:13 pm
((Ok Gotcha))
*Hearing a scream not too far, Jack run out of the school. He knew there were dangerous gangs still around the nieghborhood, but he never got to actually see any of them. His attention was focused on the scream. Angel followed behind him as he grabbed a wooden staff he found in the building in the janitor's closet. It was the only thing he could find but he was quite skilled in self defense. As he ran, he woucl hear two guys talking about a girl. As he came to Maple street, he turned the corner and saw one guy holding the girl's arm. "HEY!!! What do you think you're doing? Let go of her!!!!", He shouted as Angel growled and barked at the two guys from a distance with her master by her side. Jack held the staff behind his back ready to strike if things got ugly*
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2011 5:05 pm
Ash was getting annoyed with the arguing, but was still really scared. She kept her mouth shut, until she heard another male voice. The two guys arguing stopped and began to laugh. Ha, you hear this? What makes you think you can tell me what to do? The man said, grabbing Ash's arm tighter.Ash let out a little yelp, as it began to hurt now.
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2011 5:50 pm
*Jack took a step closer* "Trust me. If you would you would have s**t your pants by now.', He said watching any signs of movement or hostile intentions. Angel took a step forad growling at the two guys.*
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 9:15 am
Ash had now been hoping he'd let go. His grip had been tightening and hurt really bad. IF i were you, I'd go before this girl get's hurt more. He said, pulling out a knife he always carried with him. He held it up to her throat, and Ash began to panick.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 1:06 pm
*Jack quickly rush in and jabbed the end of the staff in the man's face, hitting him in the eye. With the man taken back, Jack pulled the girl away from the man's grip where Angel ran over and guarded her. As the man stumbled back, Jack swung the staff behind his back to his left hand with such force as he hit the man behind hit right leg, fracturing the back of his ankle injuring his leg. As the man stumbled, his partner grabbed Jack from behind. With the staff in his hand, jack slammed the end of the pole on the man's foot cause him to let go. As Jack spun to face him, he swung the staff hitting the man's left rib cage then repeated the process on the right hitting the man 3 times on each side of his rib cage. Then with a final blow, Jakc whacked the man in the stomach as hard as he could causing the man to lose his breath of a few seconds. With his parnter taken out of the fight, Jack walked over to the man with the knife. Taking the knife and looking over it, he smiled. "Thanks for the gift.", he said in the most cold hearted voice anyone could hear. With the knife in its sheath on his belt, he looked over at the girl. "Are you ok, miss?", he asked.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 6:49 pm
Ash had been taken away from the guy, and she instantly fell to the ground on her knees. She saw the dog guarding her, but she was really afraid to really acknowledge much. Ash was in tears now, and watched the mystery man come to her rescue. Before she knew it, she was being asked a question. "I-I'm f-fine." She said, still shaken up a bit.
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 7:23 pm
"Is there a place you want to go? Maybe a relative who lives around here?", he asked. Angel saw her tears and began to lick Ash's tears away trying to comfort the girl. As Jack began to walk over to her, he sensed something was wrong with the girl other than just being attacked by two guys*
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