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Alright, my plot ideas with lilly and loyal. Sorry this will be extremely long but please read it. Im no ordinary fan girl.

First of all, I would like it if you all at least would read lillys plot first. Ide hate explaining it all again but Ill mention a few points here.
Lillys mom died when she was young (if your a child stop reading)
Because her father was angry, he raped her not long after her mothers death.
yes her father is extremely violent/abusive and controling. he also posesses a gun.
Lilly goes to the cirque du gothiue in her free time but ehr father is not aware of it.
Lillys water controling powers are never used in public, her fathers rules.
Lilly has marks on her body brom being beaten and cut, but she coversr them up with her cloths until they heal.

ok so lets continue to the plot part.

The first one I have goes like this. Lilly goes to several shows in the cirque, but eventually gets pulled from the audience for one of their tricks. Axidently she uses her water controling power during it. No one notices much, cept a few of the cast, and of course Loyal. He takes her outside the preformance to see if he can hire her and see what she can do. She refuses and afrer much fuss, he sees some of the beatings on her body. They have a looooong talk but Lilly is afraid to go home alone, so Loyal walks home with her. She insists when their almost there that she can walk the rest of the way and does so, but he still follows her without her knowing. It is late, and when she gets home she recieves a horrible beating from ehr father. Loyal, who is outside the building, is trying to decide whether to break in or not. He does so, confronting her father, however not much is done. The next day Loyal gets worried about Lillys absence, because she always shows up to their shows, and then later realizes Lilly is up for adoption. What goes on past that is the possibility of him adopting her sence he can relate. This is the idea Im most fond of, but again, I have many so we can choose.

Second idea. Continuation of the first. Well go to the point to where loyal is outside her house hearing the beatings. This one takes a different turn. Loyal goes inside and confronts her father, how ever her father has a gun pointed at her, which of course turns to loyal. Now he cant just stand there and do nothing. After a long fuss and fight, ONE of them gets ahold of the gun and shoots her father. After that, Loyal takes her to his tent where they stay for a while. Eventually the law finds out about what happened, and it doesn't look good at Loyals case. For one, after staying at his, Most of lillys wounds had time to heal, showing no evedence that her father beat her. Another is that loyal breaks in. And tge third is he took her. So it looks like a break in, shooting, and kidnapping on his case, all to help Lilly. Im ok with this one bbut it could cause some post complications with his crew unless they walk around with strike signs. But it can get interesting.

The third is a continuation of the first, but lets start for when Lillys at the adoption agency. Before anyone can do much of anything, Lilly runs away at night. Of course several people fromt he agency go out looking for ehr at night, so by axident, she runs to where the cirque is, and runs right into loyals tent to hide. First he doesnt realize its ehr and is working so is like, WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT! (it be late) Then realizes its Lilly. After her taking about one minute to explain, she hides under Loyals desk. When one of the pople looking for her goes to his tent and asks is hes seen ehr, he says he doesnt. Because their out looking for ehr, Lilly is stuck in Loyals tent for the night, but being Lilly, insists on sleeping on the floor instead of taking Loyals bed. And no don't let your kinds wander farther on this. Lillys 15 thank you. This is just an idea.

The 4th is a different turn to the third. Here Loyal has talked to Lilly, but hasn't getten himself tjhat involved in her life. And didn't walk her home so hes unaware of the beatings. Lilly ends up in the adiotion agency and runs away into his tent, and of course hes pissed, but STILL pissed! Lilly trys to explain her situation, but Loyal has to hide her first from the people looking for ehr in his tent. When their finally out of the clear, she explains everything to him.


Now I have a fifth. Ill clap if youve read all this so far. You get a cookie. The fifth one is a differnt turn. Contuation of the fifth where Loyal is outside the house. He leaves without doing anything, so Lilly gets her beating. Later the next day she sits on a side of a bridge ready to fall off and ill herself. By a fluke thing, Loyal walks by and happens to see what shes about to do. His convincing fails as she tips to ehr doom, to the watters below, but in a last minute to save her life, he grabs her, on the edge, and tumbles to his doom with her. *their holdng onto eachother, because well, they just fell off a bridge, but they hit the water with loyal hitting it first, knocking him unconsious. Lilly still is, however, and because she controls water, she uses that to get them ashore and saves his life. Not sure where to go past with that one, but again its an idea.

Debating these really requires Loyals presence here, so I hope he gets online. XD Though, comments? I need one of these picked. Cause then well get something really random if we don't. XD

Uhm.. Well, you're actually not that different from a regular fan-girl. You did involve Loyal is every one of your ideas, after all.
And this is where we kind of go to the land of.. Mary Sues. If you don't know what one is, I'd rather not be the one to explain to you.

Of course Loyal can be the kind soul you portray him to be, and Loyal and Lilly can have intense and emotional moments together, but it's... kind of like you're trying to write a fan fiction with Lilly and Loyal pairing. ^^;;

D: I'm sorry... I'm trying to be constructive and nice. DX
I'm failing terribly, ain't I?

To be honest (And I hate to be the one to tell you this...well not really.) But I have seen many Fan girls who write fanfics of them and Loyal and I have seen the "Abusive Father" Story about 13 times. The other ones are like there person is found beat up on the street and loyal saves them or that story but backwards were they find Loyal beaten up and they save him. I am sorry if this sounds mean I am just trying to stop this guild from falling into a cliche.

Well, I do see what you mean here. I suppose I could change her up a bit but her background is pritty well set. Anyways, it's ovbious some changing needs to be done. This is only a few days work anyways.
If your wondering why I picked the 'abusive father' story, its caus I tend to do it a lot because I can relate.

Damn, I totally wanna write something like that out now. Maybe some attendee or employee of the Cirque...better if it was a former part of the show that he had to cut out last minute. (lol...cut out.) And now it's the skeleton in the closet for the rest of the troupe.

Anyone wanna help me fill out this idea? owo

Hm.. Sounds interesting. :3




Oh, by the by.. What happened to my post? XD

Haha.. I was wondering if Gaia was glitching again.
Don't worry. ^^